Pac Story: Magic Under New York Bridge

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But please keep posting your comments, as I love reading them.

Thanks, ttyas, LMH :)
 
OK LMH, no worries :D Glad to hear you're still updating, and I'm happy to keep writing what will now seem like cryptic snarky comments here. Should be fun whether one knows what they refer to or not.... :lol:

;) ;) ;)
 
OK ~ *re-enters from FF site* ~~ *Stops, takes up specific spot down stage centre, clears throat, and says, in a horribly done australian accent*

"...not the baby, nooooooooooo..." :p :p

~ so would that be foreshadowing? or just suspenseful torture...?

~ my next thought was, mmm dessert... (er, inspired by strawberries and cream and the like? :p )

How would I sum this up appropriately :devil:...? All you can eat buffet? One free drink? Three ride tickets on nearest amusement ride too, on a um, "package" deal? :lol: lord but you killed me with Peyton's "oh yeah!!" (with two exclamation points I observed) ...heheeheeeeee :lol:

~ then of course you throw in a little tender moment at the end too. (brings to mind "A little piece of me, a little piece of you" - that's a song, I believe, yes?) Very sweet and true.

Well, whichever they're getting a piece of, tender or sultry, or both, keep up the story you, thanks for writing when you can, lots of fun, enjoying muchly ;) Here, have a random cheeky emoticon.
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(PS nice avatar ;))
 
Thanks for the feedback guys, I love it. The new chapter has been uploaded. Enjoy. :lol: :lol: :lol:

I love this, being able to write, how I like. :lol: :lol:
 
Wonderful update L, happy to see the baby's gonna be all right. You got me a bit worried there :p Can't wait for another update.
 
^ agree :)

Hmm, another craving for a big Mac? They never go out anymore, eh? Can't say as I blame them for eating in... (er... well, i guess it was an open buffet right?)

The visual of Mac sprinting across the parking lot with Peyton to get home for lunch just killed me. You've got me ruining keyboards at work now LMH... :lol:

Pouty Mac. Delicious. ;)
 
The visual of Mac sprinting across the parking lot with Peyton to get home for lunch just killed me. You've got me ruining keyboards at work now LMH...
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:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: *SORRY* :lol:

You think that's bad, I was eating spaghetti when I read your post, and spit it out on my keyboard. :lol: :lol:

You made my Fugging day, because it was aweful. Thanks El :D
 
~~RE: CHPT 3~~ angels we have heard on high...

*enters with small harmonica*
*takes up usual spot down stage centre, and blows the note of a-major *
*ahem* "laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...."
*puts hand to ear to listen to echo and reverb of a chorus of heavenly voices as they join in singing...*

:lol: wow LMH, I think you're enjoying not having any censors around aren't you? :lol: I know I am... :p

Okay okay, first thing, between chpts 2 and 3 I'm now wondering if Mac ever put Peyton down at all, and didn't just drive home with her on his lap (oh not like that you gutter people...)
Next I'm seeing Mac lift her out of the car, but then he has to stand there (big mac and little mac both, or perhaps big mac and bigger mac, I should say) while Lindsay and Danny suddenly and disconcertingly appear and chat idly about anonymous films? - LMH you're cruel!! Oh the excruitiating torture!!!
...and then he has to run up a flight of stairs???!!! I'm not freakin' surprised he kicked the door in (LMAO!!!:lol:) heeheeheeeeee, the man has stamina I'll give him that...

the rest of course was extremely poetic and sweet and soul tugging just reading that bit, (and, happily, censor-free :p - did I mention you seem to be revelling in that somewhat? ;) :D )

very nice update.

Yep. *puts harmonica away* I thought I heard something today...

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You think that's bad, I was eating spaghetti when I read your post, and spit it out on my keyboard. You made my Fugging day, because it was awful. Thanks El...
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*winks* happy to oblige. always a treat to know I inspire projectile pasta spewing in friends... and hey, you started it you know... :lol:
 
*That I am, it's wonderful*

Okay okay, first thing, between chpts 2 and 3 I'm now wondering if Mac ever put Peyton down at all, and didn't just drive home with her on his lap (oh not like that you gutter people...)
Next I'm seeing Mac lift her out of the car, but then he has to stand there (big mac and little mac both, or perhaps big mac and bigger mac, I should say) while Lindsay and Danny suddenly and disconcertingly appear and chat idly about anonymous films? - LMH you're cruel!! Oh the excruitiating torture!!!
...and then he has to run up a flight of stairs???!!! I'm not freakin' surprised he kicked the door in (LMAO!!!) heeheeheeeeee, the man has stamina I'll give him that...
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*Me cruel.....Nah!! *

As for Stamina, yeah, he needs alot of that, and besides with a body like that, one would never get tired. The man is so amazingly sexy.**


*winks* happy to oblige. always a treat to know I inspire projectile pasta spewing in friends... and hey, you started it you know...
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*Christ my sides are still sore from laughing at todays comments*
 
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