Pac Story: Magic Under New York Bridge

I was just reading your other fic which left me a emotional reck (I get to involved with your fics- but is that really a bad thing) and then I went to FF and the love and passion left me in tatters!

The only thing I forgot to do was- not drink while reading your pac fic! You need some sort of warning at the top of the page for us lot to remember to: put down drinks, food etc

OK i'm loving this fic!

PS I have introduce the ice cube cravings in my fic!
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**I'm sorry I keep making you guys cry, that's not my intention**Yeah Right** :lol: :lol: :lol:

**Sorry about all the keyboards, but mine take a beating too** :p :p :p

**Ice Cubes, I'm so honored you used my craving, I had with my child** :D :D
 
That was so sweet Luving (I'm gonna call ya that from now). Mac's a great daddy. I'm also glad you put a little D/L in your fanfic. The way you wire is, Mac's like a father to Danny. Touching! *Oh were's my Kleenex when I need them?*. Wish I had some kiddies running around.
 
chpts 10 + 11

awwwww, L - M - H...

"lookie da wee widdle macster... lookie - ...er, ...oh hi... um, didn't hear you come in..."

*straightens up*

What.


:lol: so very sweet, enchanted and pouty and playful, very happy to see there's a flip side to the coin of bad events previously suffered, and happy to see there's an heir to the sexy sinister pouty good looks... and yeah, they really are adorable parents too.

- and my god, but is everyone in ficcie land just procreating like a buncha widdle wabbits or what :lol: these things do tend to happen :lol: the good will out, and life marches merrily on.

*sigh* my heart is melting, (and so are my teeth, it's all so sweet...) but I'm a sucker and I luv it (*shhhhhh*) so keep it up :)

Absolutely Loverly. :D
 
I loved those chapters! :)

I was sitting at my PC.... I wrote the next Chapter for my fic...I decided to go and reand your Pac fic before I da the PM....bad choice... I'm in a really sweet mood now!....not in a naughty PM mood!!

Like El said my heart is melting!

Macster is going to be a 'stud' be time he goes collage :lol:
 
~ Chpt. 12 ~

Oh from a mile away LMH - - YOU DID NOOOOOOOT just do that ... er, did you...?

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:



...remind me never to eat at your house...



"How much do you think Lindsay seen?" .........asked a naked Mac...
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badaboom!


"you don't want to scare the baby do you?" laughed Peyton hysterically.
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um, I think they're repeatedly displaying a certain knack for scaring their co-workers...



* KA-ching * ( er, chalk up another one, fer f***'s sakes. sigh. )

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**Cancels above comment, due to coming back with pure clean mind**

* KA-ching * ( er, chalk up another one, fer f***'s sakes. sigh. )
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**Not again El.......This has to stop, you need to learn how to swallow your drinks first before reading my fics***, or move them away from the keyboard. No spitting drinks allowed :lol: :lol: :lol:

**See my mind is now clean, and away from Gutterville** :D
 
^ Well geez now LMH, I feel pressure to try and clean up my act now...


so LMH says to me: "This has to stop... you need to learn how to..."

okay okay alright, fine then, I should really just leave it at that, wouldn't want to mar any squeaky young minds...

I'm off to find some mental astringent, suitable for cleaning all the way into dark corners and recesses of my gutter... *sigh* what a futile exercise this is gonna prove to be, but I'll give it a shot...

Hmmm. I think I'll hafta try restraint, tact, revision, mild censorship and an attempt at adherence to certain standards...

Well I can try can't I? :lol: sheesh. C'mon... stop laughing...
 
so LMH says to me: "This has to stop..."

okay okay alright, fine then, I should really just leave it at that, wouldn't want to mar any squeaky young minds...
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No, no, no :lol: :lol:.....This has to stop is for the Keyboards you keep ruining, I'm telling you to stop drinking, not stop commenting. I love your comments....God , everything is coming out wrong tonight... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Oh well, I'm gonna stick to writing, and away from trying to funny :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

BTW....I have to work tomorrow, if I have time, I'll post.

See ya....Happy reading :D
 
^ C'mon, I know whatcha meant LMH ;) nothing came out wrong...

I actually just reconsidered that one comment; while it was perhaps just cryptic enough, it maybe mighta been pushing things a bit for this forum's er...decorum. :D

While its no one's business, I'll only say that all my techniques are mighty fine... ;):devil: ...aaaaand we'll leave it at that. :p


No spitting drinks allowed...
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I think chpt 12 saw my computer subject to an inverted nasal enema. Amazing the velocity that's possible. Painfully clean as a whistle, unlike my mind.


Oh well, I'm gonna stick to writing, and away from trying to funny :lol:
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:lol: awwwwwww, don't stay away from anything, write and comment what you please, do you not realize that whatever you write, be it stories or comments, often gives *me* stuff to comment on? Don't start telling yourself what to write and what not to write now...


God , everything is coming out wrong tonight... :lol:
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:lol: Nah, I always know what you mean, no matter how it comes out. I'm supremely clever that way you know. It's just that I luuuuv to poke at things, especially those phrased in a way that just beg and lend themselves to be poked. Often what comes out "wrong" is soooo much fun and wide open to do that with. What's that song? Sometimes something so wrong can be so right??? :lol: Give me an inch (or nine) and I'll run a few miles...


I'm telling you to stop drinking...
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*sigh* you and everyone else...


I'm telling you to stop drinking, not stop commenting.
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I don't think you can stop me, they go hand in hand...

:lol: *kidding, kidding, not drunk, kidding* ...er, I'm too poor to sustain a habit... :lol:


I'm telling you to stop drinking, not stop commenting. I love your comments.
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I'm absurdly pleased you like my comments, it makes me happy to know I'm not just amusing myself... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

*sigh* must be off to work. Always a treat. ;) :D
 
^ C'mon, I know whatcha meant LMH nothing came out wrong...
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**Good to know :)

Okay Chapter 13 is up, and you will notice a little pray song in there, it was one I made for my son and daughter, I thought it would be nice to add it.

So enjoy, a little sweetness, and alot of looooooove today.


Off to the zoo, the animals call :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
 
Great update Luving.

Poor Lindsay walking into them, should have been Danny. What a reaction would that be! My inside scenario is making overtime here.

Little Macster a stud at college? Makes me think of what Danny and Lindsey are expecting. I see a link here?

Off to Natty's update now. O boy, first I'm in one place, now I'm hopping all over the threads. I've gotta get out of these slipper.
 
Luckily I put down my drink before I began to read chapter 12! Lindsay's face would have been apicture! I loved it when a naked Mac asked,"How much do you think Lindsay seen?" That'll keep me laughing for the rest of the day!
 
Chapt. 13! Not a lucky number? Christ! You got my attention Luving. Somebody has to work overtime here. And it's not gonna be me! Thanks for sharing.
 
Chapt. 13! Not a lucky number? Christ! You got my attention Luving. Somebody has to work overtime here. And it's not gonna be me! Thanks for sharing.
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**Good for you, you go home and get him Jools, ATTACK :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:


And don't forget to check your story, you kiss Mac tonight. :devil: :devil:


***Pac has been updated again***
 
CHPT 13 --

Well, this will be a somewhat more musical response tonight. I heard more angels were singing again (I do really hope you went thru the union this time LMH... :p)

~ First bit with Macster ~ an old traditional lullabye

"Dreams to sell, fine dreams to sell, Angus is here with dreams to sell.
Hush now my baby, and sleep without fear, Dream Angus will bring you a dream, my dear.
Can you not hush your weepin'? All the wee lambs are sleepin'...
Birdies are nestlin', nestlin' together, Dream Angus is hurtlin' over the heather.
Hear the curlew cryin’, faintly the echoes dyin’,
Even the birdies are cuddled up sleepin, But my bonnie bairn lies weepin’ and greetin’...
Sweet the skylark sings his song, heralding in the bright new dawn,
Wee lambs, they huddle and shuffle together, along with their ewes in the heather.
Dreams to sell, fine dreams to sell, Angus is here with dreams to sell,
Hush now my babe and sleep without fear, Dream Angus has brought you a dream my dear..."

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I probably messed up the words a bit, but its one with a long family history, and now used with all friends/family new additions. Seems to work somehow.
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But Onwards.

Second bit...

you will be numb and unable to form a coherent thought.
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That's what the ficcie waiver should say...

Silken Ribbons, baby oil, and bound at the ankles too? For Payback? If that's Karma, life is very good... I mean, six times? Six?? And a Mackie blanket? Um, yeah, sleep sweet alright... aaaand, there's your tugging ending again LMH, "bound together in their love."

So brings me to my song choice for that one: Otis Redding, Chained and Bound. Pretty self explanatory... Not as poetic perhaps, but his poetry's in the music, not the words.

Aaaaand I see from LMH that a chpt 14 is ready? LMH I'm gonna need to take a short breather here. *looks at clock* And of course it's after midnight. Nah, I don't need sleep do I? But I really do need a glass of juice or something, so I'll be back for chpt 14 when it's safe...
 
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