Pac Story: Magic Under New York Bridge

*tries to pace fic reading...*
(hmmm, to read it now?? or save it for later???)
Nope, can't do it!!! (runs off to FF upon notice of new chpt 4)

Re-emerges a moment later, and re-visits Aussie accent -

"CRIKEY!!!" :lol:

um, LMH?? ...those angels are gonna go union on you soon, they say they're working constantly and are getting a little hoarse; they just don't have the endurance to keep up with Mac and Peyton's er, appetites... :lol:

Welllllllllll, I was gonna save this for tommorrow, but I just couldn't stop myself. So here it is, Re: Pac NY Bridge, Chpt 4. *tucks pencil behind ear, and unfolds a tattered paper*

*ahem* "Ooooooooooooooooh,
"Reading Mac/Pey fics throws one deep down in da gutter,
Broaches parts and subjects I'd not whisper to my mother;
My soul's so far gone it's impossible to be saved,
My mind's permanently guttered and conclusively depraved..."

"Mind you, that's just the way I am, there's no known cause or reason,
Although it may be partly due to the looooooong off-season..."

"Don't read ficcies while you eat, you're just asking for trouble,
No don't you dare go near 'em, with a cup of double double,
(er, that's coffee, for you non-canucks ;))
Yes, dessert is always tasty, but in ways you never thought,
And lord it seems they have it regardless *what* time's on the clock..."

"No matter the occasion, they'll go for the strawberries,
they have to, that's all that's left, lord knows there's ...er, um ...no more 'cherries'..."

:devil: :p :p :p :p :devil:

couldn't resist. I dunno how you do it LMH, ever prolific and gutterly inspired...

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As for Stamina, yeah, he needs alot of that, and besides with a body like that, one would never get tired. The man is so amazingly sexy.
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Well, I'd never get tired of a body like that, and he'd certainly need stamina... *happily drifts for a moment pondering all the reasons he would need stamina...* :devil:

What??? Oh, sorry, yeah I guess that belongs in a different thread, um - hey!! *sprinklers erupt* awwwwww s***, how *many* times have I set those off this week...
 
"Reading Mac/Pey fics throws one deep down in da gutter,
Broaches parts and subjects I'd not whisper to my mother;
My soul's so far gone it's impossible to be saved,
My mind's permanently guttered and conclusively depraved..."
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It really does send you deep in to the gutter....not as if that's a bad thing though! :devil: :devil:

I make sure that I DON'T eat/drink while reading fics now... I think that would be number 1 in the Fic readers guide to safely reading fics!! :lol: :lol:
 
I make sure that I DON'T eat/drink while reading fics now... I think that would be number 1 in the Fic readers guide to safely reading fics!!
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*Natty, I think I've learned that lesson too* lol



*ahem* "Ooooooooooooooooh,
"Reading Mac/Pey fics throws one deep down in da gutter,
Broaches parts and subjects I'd not whisper to my mother;
My soul's so far gone it's impossible to be saved,
My mind's permanently guttered and conclusively depraved..."

"Mind you, that's just the way I am, there's no known cause or reason,
Although it may be partly due to the looooooong off-season..."

"Don't read ficcies while you eat, you're just asking for trouble,
No don't you dare go near 'em, with a cup of double double,
(er, that's coffee, for you non-canucks )
Yes, dessert is always tasty, but in ways you never thought,
And lord it seems they have it regardless *what* time's on the clock..."

"No matter the occasion, they'll go for the strawberries,
they have to, that's all that's left, lord knows there's ...er, um ...no more 'cherries'..."
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*Don't worry El, the gutter is such a wonderful place to be* , *And my gutter soul was beyond saving years ago*lol , And how do I do it, or come up with it, that's the easy part. Mac just makes my mind go naughty and erotic and kinky. Ever since Mel told me that our Macky is packing at least nine ***lol**


*Just think of all the comments I have to look forward to, over the next few chapters.* :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
 
Worry??? Nooooooo Worries!!!!! :lol: oh hon, trust me, I've resided in various gutters for the better part of my life now, I'm *quite* happy here. Truly, it really IS the way I am :lol: (or have none of you figured that out yet...? :D)

Inspiration? yep, I know, I really do - Mac effortlessly inspires serious gutter thought trends in all of us.

Just wanted to let yas know I'll be on a more sporadic e-thether or the next few days or so, on a working vacation so to speak. I'll definitely try to keep checking in to catch up on my reading, just can't predict how regularly I'll get to indulge yet. I'll snark in my comments whenever I can, fer sure.

Keep it all going, I'm looking forward to it. Well, I would be looking if I could see over the lip of my gutter.

OK off to sleep. Travel in 2.5 hours now. *sigh* Some people say sleep is over-rated.

They're all bastards.
 
Great chap LMH. Just celebrated a reeeeaaaaaaal roamantic aniversary. Waking up and reading you fic makes me want to do that all over again. Thanks a lot girly!

Another wonderfull update LHM. Poor Peyton, glad to see she and the baby will be all right. Wonder what you come up with next.
 
Great chap LMH. Just celebrated a reeeeaaaaaaal roamantic aniversary. Waking up and reading you fic makes me want to do that all over again. Thanks a lot girly!
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*You're very welcome, I'm glad I could help* LOL

And as for doing it all over again, Lucky Girl you are :devil: :devil:, I could only wish......LOLOLOLOL :) :) :) :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:


Okay's guys I've sent you the new update, there will be another one shortly.

Hurry home El .....I need my snark fix, I'm dying over here, gimme, gimme, LOLOL
 
I read the update early this morning. Mind me to wait untill after work!!!! You're such a naugthy girl.
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Everyone keeps telling me that, but I'm a good girl. It's Macky that makes me feel so naughty :devil: :devil: :devil:

I'm really glad you are all enjoying the story, and the FB back makes this writer extremely happy. :D :D
 
** SNORT !!! ** ..."good girl" my *arse* LMH... :lol: :lol: :lol: uh huh, sure.

I'll have to save reading those chpts for when I get back tomorrow. It just wouldn't do to be horking stuff onto other people's computer peripherals now would it??? That sort of thing's just not on, you know. I'd like to be invited back someday.

Looking forward to catching up on Pac ficcie, lemme tell ya.. :D I miss dishing out snark as well as reading the catalyst for it. :p

I've been working very hard and playing very very hard ~ (heeheehee, ah hooooo, haa, yesh, fun - sometimes good things happen to bad people, what can I say... ;) :devil:) ~ so when I do get home, I'll need a rest, and a little light reading to chill out too... *mental note - do not bring anything organic near the computer at that time*

I'm nearing the end of one contract, and the next one promises to give me a little more free time, so I'm also looking forward and hoping to be able to return to some ideas I have for my own ficcie, and mebbe some vids too, then I can get some expert opinions/fb from yas. Well, in a week or two. Never seems to end.

In the meantime, Snark will be back on the airwaves tomorrow night... :p :p :p Talk to yas soon!! :D
 
** SNORT !!! ** ..."good girl" my *arse* LMH... uh huh, sure.
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**I am a Good Girl** :devil: :devil:



Looking forward to catching up on Pac ficcie, lemme tell ya.. I miss dishing out snark as well as reading the catalyst for it.
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**Yah, hurry, it's about time you get back** :lol: :lol: :lol:


And where are my comments from my Jools? It echo's in here!!!

It seems Natty has disappeared too.

Anyways, Chap 9 is up. And as I can see, most of you have me in your alerts on FF.Net.
 
Well, here's the short version of snark anyhoo... :D I had a lot of material to indulge in. :p

CHPT. 5 :)
"Once the room was quiet, Mac climbed into bed beside Peyton, took her in his arms and whispered his love to her and their baby, all night long." Awwwww. You're getting quite adept at these tugging endings aren't you? Lovely.


CHPT. 6 :p
A distinct and recurring connection with food and sex for these two. Talk about being hungry for each other. There weren't even any cookies or chinese food in this chpt either!! Nice um, bedside manner though :lol::devil: very hands on, attention to detail...


CHPT. 7 :devil: :devil:(nominated for sprinkler prize of these 5 chpts.)
Back to pouty and provocative are we? "Bigger every time?" Talk about a big Mac, she sure has a way of, um, supersizing him. Jeans and no shorts!? Wooot. and some Nipply stuff going on too eh? *keeps reading* ...And well now!! that was a very hawt chapter there LMH! Holy smokin' samosas, chicky!!! :lol: Luuuuuved naughty peyton and that shackled mac, what can I say... And then, there you go again with the endings: "wrapped her up in his love." Tender and sweet.


CHPT. 8 ;)
Icecream for breakfast? Chocolate sauce and shower scenes? Sweet luving words? You can't go wrong with any of that now really, can you ? That sure would be a nice way to start the day...


CHPT. 9 :D
Well, holy freaking s*** LMH. The poor woman fer chrissakes!!! Mac only gets food poisoning - she gets assaulted, kidnapped, a difficult pregnancy, appendicitis, and now stabbed? Anytime she gets left alone? WTF!!! Good lord. At least there were no hammers. Give the woman a break will ya? Mind you, she's had some pretty good chapters of luvin, so there's been some good times too... A preemie!! I do love that the wee bairn has Mac's pout. That's too freakin adorable and funny... :lol: Niiiiiice.


Well, that was loads of fun to read all at once!!! :p :p I think it may now be safe to pour myself a drink... I read it just in time too. FF was being finicky tonight. It won't let me back on. I think you melted my web connection here LMH...

Now I must sleep, my usual 2.5 hours of faux-rest, my contracts aren't completed just yet. But a fantabulous night cap of a story LMH! thankees girl ;) hee hee hee

*aaahh* nice to be back home in the gutter again. *wink*
 
Oh 2 chappies in one day. You're spoiling us LMH.
Those were sooo wonderfull. My tears kept rolling, I'm all out of Kleenex now. :lol: :lol: And Mac taking singing to little Mackie. :devil: My heart melted. Thanks for your beautiful update. ;)
 
It seems Natty has disappeared too
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I did not dissapear!! I was just having problems with FF....I promise!:) Oh I was reading Harry Potter (for the second time)!!

I was just reading your other fic which left me a emotional reck (I get to involved with your fics- but is that really a bad thing) and then I went to FF and the love and passion left me in tatters!

The only thing I forgot to do was- not drink while reading your pac fic! You need some sort of warning at the top of the page for us lot to remember to: put down drinks, food etc

OK i'm loving this fic!

PS I have introduce the ice cube cravings :) in my fic!
 
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