Pac Story: Magic Under New York Bridge

yaaaaay pac updates!! (already read'em both :devil:)

lovely lovely lovely fun and :devil: stuff LMH! :lol:
the intrigue, the suspense, the shower... how can you go wrong with that? :lol:
 
:lol: as promised im here :devil: and boy am i happy to be here
:devil: *clears throat*

well you know i know that we all know we liked it :devil: bring the hawtness on!
 
When they got back to Mac's, he was still wound up tight. "Come on Mac, you need to calm down". "Listen Peyton, don't tell me to calm down, someone just tried to kill me". "I know that Mac, but can you seriously do anything about it tonight"? Looking into Peyton's eyes, he knew she was right. Still not being able to relax, Peyton took his hand and walked him over to the couch, sat him down, and started to massage his shoulder and neck. "Mmmm", "Oh that's wonderful sweetheart", said Mac. "I bet love, you are so tense, and tight", said Peyton as she began to eroticly move herself against his back turning him on.

"Peyton, you are being a very naughty girl". "Mmmhhmmm", so strong and muscled, your body is like iron and heat, melting my hands". "Hisss", said Mac, as Peyton stroked her hands down his tight stomach to his waist. Not being able to withstand her torture, he grabbed her hands and flipped her over his shoulder. As she landed across his lap, he spanked her bum. "Bad girl Peyton, you need a spank". "Oww!!! "You bloody bugger". "Shh", said Mac, as he caressed where he had spanked.

Sitting up Peyton, positioned herself, on his lap, facing him. "Mmm", "what is that I feel Mac Taylor, how many times, have I told you not to keep a loaded gun", purred Peyton. "Kiss me , before I melt, said MAc with passion. "I'm not in the mood to play fire the pistol tonight", yawned Mac. Giving Mac a kiss, Peyton got up and helped Mac to his feet. "You are tired tonight". "Do you feel okay"? "Yeah"! "Just a little tired". Peyton hoped to hell, that Mac wasn't coming down with something.

Later that evening Peyton heard wretching coming from the bathroom. "Mac, are you okay"? "I can't stop throwing up". "I think I've got food poisoning". "Let's get you to the Hospital then". Once Peyton had Mac in the car, they pulled out. As they neared the edge of the ravine, someone rammed the car. "What the hell was that"? asked Mac. "Someone is tailing us Mac". Mac could see nothing in the dark. "He must have his lights off, give me your cell". "It's at home, I left it on the table". "Damn it Peyton, switch me sides quick". As they traded sides, Mac got rammed again. "Who the hell is this guy"?


After a few more blocks, Mac was able to loose him. "Christ sakes, this is insane". "I need to find this guy now". "Listen Mac, you are almost green, let's get you checked first, and then we'll stop by the station on the way home". When they pulled into the Hospital, Mac took extra care, watching every corner and darkened area of the parking lot. Once they were inside, Peyton's friend was on, and Mac was seen right away. "Hi Lisa, I think Mac has food poisoning, can we get a room". "Sure Peyton, this way". With Mac settled in a bed, Peyton went to call Danny and Flack.


Once Danny and Flack arrived, she felt better. "Thanks for coming guys, this is twice tonight, we've been ran off the road and followed", said Peyton. "Okay Mac, who did you piss off this time"? laughed Danny. "Listen Messer, there is nothing funny about this, someon is playing a dangerous game, and I want him caught". "Sure, we'll get right on it".


TBC

*Did I tell you what I did tonight. I posted the PM in here by accident. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Lucky for me, I caught it :eek: :eek: :eek:

"God I'm must be tired" :p :p :p
 
After the doctor informed Mac he did indeed have food poisoning, Peyton ran into the washroom and threw up. "Sweetheart, are you okay". "You didn't have the seafood last night, why are you being sick"? "I'm not sure Mac, I'm really dizzy and lightheaded too". "Hmmm", said the doctor. "Have a sit down over here Peyton, and I'll have the nurse, do some bloodwork, just to be sure, other food at that Bistro isn't contaminated". Once the nurse took some blood, Peyton waited in Mac's arms. "I love you Mac", said Peyton. "I love you too love, it will be okay", said Mac ,as he kissed her head.


A short time later the nurse came in a smile on her face. "Well, by that smile, I take it it was good news"? asked Peyton. "That it was, you and Mac, are going to have a baby", Congratulations". Mac looked stunned, Peyton looked amazed. "Are you serious, I'm having a baby", cried Peyton.
"That you are, I've scheduled an appointment for you, with a top line OBGYN, he'll see you tuesday". "Mac, did you hear that, you and I are having a baby". "I think I need to sit down", said Mac. Poor Mac, he just wasn't sure what to say. He knew he loved Peyton with his whole heart and soul, but a baby"? Mac just didn't think, he was ready for that.


"Mac, are you going to be alright", asked Peyton who was quickly coming to the conclusion that Mac didn't want to have a baby. Looking up into her eyes, Mac could see the fear she was carrying, and in that second, he knew, he only wanted her happiness. Getting up, he put his fingers under her chin, raised her head and said....."Peyton, will you marry me"? Tears pooled in her eyes, as she said....."Yes Mac, I'll marry you". Pulling her into his arms, he kissed her with passion and with love.


When they got home, Mac made Peyton put her feet up. "I should be looking after you Mac, you are the one that is sick". "Don't worry about me, I'll be fine", said Mac as the phone rang. "Hello", said Mac. "Hey Mac, it's Danny, just wanted to let you know, we found no trace on your car". "Okay, thanks Danny, I'll be down shortly". "Listen love, when I leave, I want you to lock the door and not let anyone in". "I promise Mac, I'm just going to have a sleep". "Okay, I'll see you later", said Mac as he kissed her and left.


Once Mac got to the station, he headed to his office. As he arrived Danny and Flack were waiting for him. "Hey Mac, I see you got down here safely", said Flack. "Listen, I want you to go and check on Peyton in about a half hour". "Just make sure, she is okay, and not to upset, she's pregnant and I don't want anything happening to my child, or my wife to be". Danny and Flack stood in shock. "Excuse me"!!! "Your wife to be"? asked Danny. "That's right Danny, I've asked Peyton to marry me". "Well I'll be damed", said Flack, and a child too". "You have been busy Mac, haven't you"? "Just check on her in a half hour", said Mac, as he left the room.
 
oh my, a brood of Macky-Packettes??? (well, given all the um, shooting, they've undertaken lately, I suppose it was bound to happen...)

Way to pack all that into one chapter LMH!! Rock on! :lol: and yes, fun way to stun your friends and co-workers... :lol:

Given all the vids we've seen recently there's some really lovely visuals of that little chin lift he does...

* aawwwwwwwwwwww *

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LMH I just got your, uh, medical PM :devil: ~ and I say again:

rock on! :lol: and yes, fun way to stun your friends and co-workers... :lol:
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:lol: you cheeky sod!! :lol: :devil: luv it!! :lol:

PS.(re: shooting...: hmmm, how about a drive-by? :devil::lol: end edit)
 
Ermm by the looks os Elwoods reply I need to go and read that PM :devil:

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I loved the ending at least I was wasn't drinking at the time :lol:
 
loved the ending at least I was wasn't drinking at the time
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Aww, come on Natty, you know I love it when you spill your drink :lol: :lol: It let's me know I did my story correctly :lol: :lol:




Danny and Flack, were still having trouble believing MacTaylor was going to be a father. "Did you ever think...." "Don't even say it Flack, because no I didn't, now let's go check on Peyton", said Danny. As they arrived at Mac's home they noticed two things. One the door was ajar, and there was blooddrops on the floor. "Christ Danny", call Mac. When Mac arrived he yelled Peyton's name, "where is she Don"? "I'm not sure Mac, we found the ajar, and blooddrops on the floor". "Danny is running it over at the Lab, as we speak". "Peyton"! Yelled Mac again. Searching throughout his apartment, he found a note attached to the bathroom mirror. It read......"Taylor, I have your doctor friend, if you want to see her alive again, you'll come to the NY bridge at three am, alone". "If anyone is with you your doctor friend dies". "P.S. She's a pretty little thing, isn't she"?


"God, he has her", "he has Peyton". "Don't worry Mac, we'll find her", said Flack. While Lindsey and Stella processed the scene, Flack tried to keep Mac calm. "This can't be happening, I haven't even started my life with her yet". "Listen Mac, we'll find her, trust me". "I hope you're right Don, not only for her and the baby's sake, but for my sanity also, I can't go through 9/11 all over again". After Flack left Mac to his thoughts, Stella walked over and sat beside him. "How ya doing Mac", asked Stella, keeping her emotions in check. "I need to find her Stel, quickly". "She's pregnant with my child". "What", said Stella. "Our you telling me the famous Mac Taylor, is going to be a dad"? "yeah Stel, imagine that". "Don't worry Mac, she'll be okay".


A short time later Danny came back and informed Mac the blood belonged to a small time crook named "Dick Diddler". "Excuse me, laughed Stella, what was that name"? "Dick Diddler", said Danny again still not getting it. Stella, Flack and Lindsay were in stitches, even Mac had a smirk.
"What the hell is so funny, we need to move on this", yelled Danny getting pissed. "It's the name Danny", said Stella. "Think about it...."Dick Diddler". It took all of three seconds for Danny to finally catch on. "Oh for christ sakes", he laughed. "Alright guys, what else did you find out Danny"? asked Mac. "It seems our Judge, was the one who put the dick man in jail". "But it also shows you were the one that arrested him". "Must have been about 7 years back, you caught him trying to rob a small time convience store". Mac was trying to remember, but had no luck. "Anyways Mac, this guy has chemical embalance". "He's been seeing a shrink, Dr.Greg Hobbs".
"Well let's go pay Dr.Hobbs a visit".


When they arrived at Hobbs office, they found him dead. "Jesus, this guy is becoming a serial now", said Danny. "I think, we need to find Peyton fast", whispered Mac. "What time do you have to meet him"? asked Stella. "Three in the morning", said Mac. "Well then, we should set something up". "NO", said Mac. "He said to come alone, so I'm going alone", said Mac, as he walked out. "Listen guys, we need to protect Mac", said Stella. "I know, what are you thinking Stella"? "Come on, I'll tell you on the way". Meanwhile, Mac decided to get their early, so he had time to set a few things up. Once he had everything he needed in place, he hid, just under the tailend of the bridge and waited.
 
Well now. I wonder what triggered Dick Diddler to turn from a small time crook to a serial killer? He got teased one too many times about his name...? I can just picture him being pulled over for speeding or something and having to hand over his driver's license... :lol:

*cue dramatic tv organ music*

I wanna know what Peyton did to him to make him bleed all over the floor... and is this a cyclical thing, going back to the bridge...?

:lol: Yer killin me here LMH... :lol:
 
Dick Diddler :lol: :lol: :lol: I'm in one of those moods to just laugh :lol: :lol: :lol: I think I had to little sleep last night :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: I love that name!

PS Do you think I put in enough :lol:s??
 
"Come on, move you ass, you damn bitch, how dare you fu**ing stab me with a kitchen knife, I should fu**ing kill you, and be done with it". Mac could hear him dragging Peyton across the bridge, and as much as he wanted to kill him, he knew he had to wait, until he was sure Peyton and his child, would be safe. "Now you don't move bitch, I just need to grab this rope". As he leaned over the side to tie the rope, Mac came up behind him and gripped his neck like a vice. "One move and I'll rip your damn head off", said Mac. Taking him down, he cuffed him just as Stella, Danny and Flack showed up. "Christ Mac, let him go, he's turning blue, go check on Peyton", said Flack.


Once they convinced Mac, to let him go, he walked over to Peyton, picked her up in his arms, and carried her to the car, once inside he said nothing, he just held her in his arms and cried. "Mac"! "It's okay Mac, please stop crying", cried Peyton. "I should have never left you, I should have stayed with you". "Shh"!!! Please Mac, just take me home and love me, wrap me in your arms and love me". Putting her in the seat beside him, he buckled her in and took her home. When they got there, she was sound asleep. So as Mac went to pick her up ,she screamed .... ."Noooooooo", nooooooo", nooooooo". "Wake up Peyton, it's okay love, I have you". Wrapping her arms around him tight, she kept telling him to love her, this made Mac, wonder what the bastard had done to her. "Peyton, did he touch you sexually"? "Answer me love, did he"? "He tried Mac, but I faught him, then I stabbed him with the kitchen knife, just love me Mac please".


Knowing now what Peyton needed to forget, he kissed her roughly on the lips, grinding his tongue into her mouth, as she purred and pulled his hair. Tossing her on the bed, he tore at her shirt and jeans, stipping her down. Then he seen it, the huge massive finger bruise, on her inner left thigh. "Aww love, look at you", said Mac. Getting up he walked into the washroom, got some cold water and a cloth, as he compressed it to her leg, she screamed. "I'm sorry love, said Mac tearing up again. "God Peyton, I could kill him". Knowing Mac was on the edge of loosing it, Peyton reached up, grabbed him and pulled him on top of her, without giving him a chance to say anything more, she shoved her tongue down his throat. Mac couldn't help, but embrace his rage on her, and taking her like a beast, he loved her so brutally, she passed out. Regaining his thoughts, Mac realized what he had done, feeling damn guilty, he tried to leave the bed, but as he moved, Peyton grabbed him and said...... "You're not going anywhere Mac Taylor". "You're going to love again, and again until I forget".


It must have been three hours later Mac finally loved Peyton to sleep. Getting up, he looked in the mirror at the scratches all over his neck, shoulders, back, and butt. "Christ, and I thought I was the animal", said Mac. Turning on the shower, he stepped inside and allowed the hot water, to ease his pain. With his head bent down in the flow, he felt soft strokes across his scratches. "I'm sorry Mac, I never meant to mark you like that". Turning to face Peyton he said....."It's okay sweetheart, you needed to release". "As did you Mac, and thank-you for loving me". Taking her chin, in his hand, he said...."You never need to thank me Peyton, I love you, and you will soon be my wife". "Soon"? "Why do we have too wait"? :"Why don't we just have a little Chapel wedding, with our friends"? "Are you sure Peyton"? "I'm positive Mac, you are all I need". Lowering his mouth to hers as the water ran between them, he made love to her for the 6th time that night.


TBC
 
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