nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
I feel so happy/sorry for them at the same time 
Pac Story: Magic Under New York Bridge
- Thread starter MacsLovlyAngl
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LHM I was nearly to bed, then actually turned my computer back on and came back to re-post this because I wanted to flag my edit of it.
I didn't mean my original post to sound so flippant.
I didn't know how to put my response into words, and I should have just said so. You really had me feeling a whole mixed bag of emotions reading this one, and I wasn't up to articulating them very well.
It was very very intense, and with some elements of darkness and edginess in there which I guess I wasn't expecting, especially after D.D.'s introduction.
I know what Natty means, sorry & happy at the same time.
It was all very very intense, and yet also very very tender at the end too.
As I said, a whole mixed bag of emotions reading this one. Well done though, very well done. Thanks for continuing on writing this, especially when you have so many other things on the go.
PS will check out the new vid soon.
G'nite
I didn't mean my original post to sound so flippant.
I didn't know how to put my response into words, and I should have just said so. You really had me feeling a whole mixed bag of emotions reading this one, and I wasn't up to articulating them very well.
It was very very intense, and with some elements of darkness and edginess in there which I guess I wasn't expecting, especially after D.D.'s introduction.
I know what Natty means, sorry & happy at the same time.
It was all very very intense, and yet also very very tender at the end too.
As I said, a whole mixed bag of emotions reading this one. Well done though, very well done. Thanks for continuing on writing this, especially when you have so many other things on the go.
PS will check out the new vid soon.
G'nite
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Why did you change your earlier post?
It actually made my day this morning. I was howling at your comments.
Anyways.... I will try and squeeze in a post tomorrow, this is my last day of work, and then I'm off for four.
It actually made my day this morning. I was howling at your comments.
Anyways.... I will try and squeeze in a post tomorrow, this is my last day of work, and then I'm off for four.
i dunno, I was generally being very silly yesterday, my day off, and i was worried maybe i just got too carried away. :lol:
but here,
(and I do like shower scenes... :lol
but here,
I absolutely stand by the damage my keyboard suffers at your work mind you, no worries about that. I may have to invoice you soon...
(and I do like shower scenes... :lol
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
hey guys check out the vid I did for this fic on youtube its called 'CSI NY- Pac'
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
I did, it's awesome. I left a note for you.
Two weeks Later...."The Little Chapel Wedding"
"Are you ready Mac, for your big step", asked Danny. "Of course I'm ready, it's not as if, I haven't been here before". "I know", said Danny. At that moment Flack walked in. "Hey man, who's walking your wife to be down the aisle"? asked Flack. "Sid", her parents can't get here in time", said Mac. "Wow, lucky Sid". "Okay than Mac, let's get you up to the Chapel", said Flack. As they headed to the Chapel, the girls were giggling away in the next room. "Look at you Pey", said Stella. "You look like a Princess". She did too. Her gown was made from the finest silk, that poured down her body like water, with a small 2 foot train, and a halo beaded headband with baby's breath.
After Stella and Lindsay had her gown complete, Sid walked in dressed in his tux. "Well, well, don't you look handsome", said Stella. "I know, you can call me the Sid Man today", he winked. "Are you ready Peyton, Mac's waiting"? "I'm ready", said Peyton, as she took Sid's arm. With the music softly playing, Stella and Lindsay walked down the aisle first, and then you could hear the song, "Here comes the Bride". Mac stared in awe, at his loely Peyton, she looked like an Angel from Heaven, and he could just see the outline of her tummy taking shape with their child.
As they got to the front of the aisle, Sid kissed her cheek and passed her off to Mac. Taking her by the hand, he walked her to the Alter. "So beautiful, he whispered". Peyton turned with tears in her eyes and smiled. When they got to the Alter, the priest asked...."Who gives this woman away"? "I do" , said Sid proudly. Turning to face the Priest again, they each said their vows, and then the Priest stopped the ceremony and informed the audience, that Peyton and Mac each had something to say to the other.
"Mac, you may start", said the Priest. Turning to face Peyton, he said.....
"My sweetest Peyton, I never thought I could love again". "When Claire died, I thought I had died with her". "But you showed me that I could love again, and laugh again and even feel happy again, and for that I thank you". "And now from this day forward, I will embrace you, love you, protect you, comfort you, pamper you, and make everyday of our future a memorable one".
Everyone started crying, never had they heard Mac, say anything so beautiful as he had to Peyton.
With Mac's words complete, it was Peyton's turn.
"My warm and loving Mac, I never had anyone love me, the way you have. You have become my Guarding Angel, and my white knight". "Knowing you are now my husband, and father of our child, I can also promise you only happy times, loving timres, warmth, love, pleasure, honesty, truth and joy, throughout the rest of our lives".
With Peyton's words complete, the Priest asked them, to please face the front. Looking at Mac he said....."Mac , repeat after me...
"I Mac Taylor, take thee Peyton, to be lawful wedded wife, to love honor, charrish and care for in sickness and in health until death do us part".
With Mac's words complete, the Priest turned to Peyton and said......"Peyton repeat after me". Once she had repeated her vows, the Priest said to Mac..."With this ring, I thee wed".
"Peyton, with this ring, I thee wed", said Mac.
"Peyton, repeat the same phrase for Mac.
"Mac, with this ring, I thee wed".
"by the power invested in me and by this Chapel, I now pronounce you Mr&Mrs.Mac Taylor". "You may kiss your bride".
Turning to face Peyton, Mac took his fingers under her chin, tilted up her head, said he loved her and kissed her with passion on the lips.
"I love you Peyton Taylor".
"I love you too, Mac Taylor".
Walking back down the aisle, they were now Mr&Mrs. Mac Taylor.
TBC
Two weeks Later...."The Little Chapel Wedding"
"Are you ready Mac, for your big step", asked Danny. "Of course I'm ready, it's not as if, I haven't been here before". "I know", said Danny. At that moment Flack walked in. "Hey man, who's walking your wife to be down the aisle"? asked Flack. "Sid", her parents can't get here in time", said Mac. "Wow, lucky Sid". "Okay than Mac, let's get you up to the Chapel", said Flack. As they headed to the Chapel, the girls were giggling away in the next room. "Look at you Pey", said Stella. "You look like a Princess". She did too. Her gown was made from the finest silk, that poured down her body like water, with a small 2 foot train, and a halo beaded headband with baby's breath.
After Stella and Lindsay had her gown complete, Sid walked in dressed in his tux. "Well, well, don't you look handsome", said Stella. "I know, you can call me the Sid Man today", he winked. "Are you ready Peyton, Mac's waiting"? "I'm ready", said Peyton, as she took Sid's arm. With the music softly playing, Stella and Lindsay walked down the aisle first, and then you could hear the song, "Here comes the Bride". Mac stared in awe, at his loely Peyton, she looked like an Angel from Heaven, and he could just see the outline of her tummy taking shape with their child.
As they got to the front of the aisle, Sid kissed her cheek and passed her off to Mac. Taking her by the hand, he walked her to the Alter. "So beautiful, he whispered". Peyton turned with tears in her eyes and smiled. When they got to the Alter, the priest asked...."Who gives this woman away"? "I do" , said Sid proudly. Turning to face the Priest again, they each said their vows, and then the Priest stopped the ceremony and informed the audience, that Peyton and Mac each had something to say to the other.
"Mac, you may start", said the Priest. Turning to face Peyton, he said.....
"My sweetest Peyton, I never thought I could love again". "When Claire died, I thought I had died with her". "But you showed me that I could love again, and laugh again and even feel happy again, and for that I thank you". "And now from this day forward, I will embrace you, love you, protect you, comfort you, pamper you, and make everyday of our future a memorable one".
Everyone started crying, never had they heard Mac, say anything so beautiful as he had to Peyton.
With Mac's words complete, it was Peyton's turn.
"My warm and loving Mac, I never had anyone love me, the way you have. You have become my Guarding Angel, and my white knight". "Knowing you are now my husband, and father of our child, I can also promise you only happy times, loving timres, warmth, love, pleasure, honesty, truth and joy, throughout the rest of our lives".
With Peyton's words complete, the Priest asked them, to please face the front. Looking at Mac he said....."Mac , repeat after me...
"I Mac Taylor, take thee Peyton, to be lawful wedded wife, to love honor, charrish and care for in sickness and in health until death do us part".
With Mac's words complete, the Priest turned to Peyton and said......"Peyton repeat after me". Once she had repeated her vows, the Priest said to Mac..."With this ring, I thee wed".
"Peyton, with this ring, I thee wed", said Mac.
"Peyton, repeat the same phrase for Mac.
"Mac, with this ring, I thee wed".
"by the power invested in me and by this Chapel, I now pronounce you Mr&Mrs.Mac Taylor". "You may kiss your bride".
Turning to face Peyton, Mac took his fingers under her chin, tilted up her head, said he loved her and kissed her with passion on the lips.
"I love you Peyton Taylor".
"I love you too, Mac Taylor".
Walking back down the aisle, they were now Mr&Mrs. Mac Taylor.
TBC
(El turns, hiding with her back to everyone, a muted dicreet ~ completely ~ deniable *sniff* might be heard...)
*hem* .... *aaaaaa-hem* clears throat.
Fine. What. I'm fine. (pockets kleenex) Allergies.
F*** Off, the lot of you.
:lol::lol::lol::lol:
* awwwwwhawhawhawwwwwwwww, LMH...*
*snif* damn you... *snif*
*stomps off, muttering, denying everything*
:lol: :lol: :lol:
*hem* .... *aaaaaa-hem* clears throat.
Fine. What. I'm fine. (pockets kleenex) Allergies.
F*** Off, the lot of you.
:lol::lol::lol::lol:
* awwwwwhawhawhawwwwwwwww, LMH...*
*snif* damn you... *snif*
*stomps off, muttering, denying everything*
:lol: :lol: :lol:
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Same over her.... I have allergies honest *sniff*
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Okay El, Kleenex may be needed.
Both Mac and Peyton, decided not to go on a Honeymoon. They were happy just spending time, in each others arms. "Are you happy love"? asked Mac. "Very, It's wonderful being Mrs.Taylor", said Peyton. "Good, said Mac, as he picked his lovely wife up and took her to their bedroom. Laying her atop the silken sheets, he just admired her beautiful body, in that silken white gown. "You are so perfect sweetheart". "I need to love you". With a tear in Peyton's eye, Mac's whisper caress, moved it's way up her thigh's, causing her to turn her head into the pillow. "Look at me Peyton", said MAc, "I want to see your expressions of heat across your lovely face, as i caress and stroke you". As Mac slithered up her gown, from her legs, he could see her eyes glass over, and her body buck against the sheets. "Easy love", said Mac.
After releasing her from her dress, he explored her all over her body, as she mewed and purred. Deeper and deeper, he took her beyond the relm of reality. "Please Mac, I need you to love me now", cried Peyton. Bracing himself over her body, he placed his thighs against hers, and before taking her into heaven, he said...."Look at me love", I want you to whisper your love to me, when I enter you, I need to hear it love, I need the words". As Mac pushed forth, Peyton said, "I love you Mac, forever and alway's I'll love only you". Getting lost in the realm of enchantment, they bothed cried their release, into each others souls.
A short time later, Mac asked Peyton, if she was hungry. After Peyton confessed that she was, Mac called an Oriental Restaurant and ordered in Chinese, for their meal. Once they had finished their meal, Mac asked his lovely wife, what she would like to do now.
"Hmm!!! "Make love again". "You my love, are turning into a naughty little minx". "That's the way you like it Mac, all wet and purring". As Mac laid down beside her, he rested the palm of his hand against her tummy and made little sweetheart hearts, where their baby was sleeping. "I can't wait love, our first baby". "THis is something, only you and I will share, something I never got to share with.....remembering this was his wedding night, and knowing he shouldn't talk about his deceased wife, he stopped himself cold.
"It's okay to talk about her Mac, she's a part of your life, whether she died or not, she's still part of you". Mac couldn't believe how blessed he was, to have met and married Peyton. He knew in his heart, she was one special lady.
Bending his head, he talked to his unborn child. "hey there, little one, this your daddy speaking to you". "I love you and I'm waiting excitedly for your arrival". "Daddy and mommy will take such good care of you and spoil you to no end". Peyton couldn't help but giggle. "I believe you will Mac, he/she will definetly be spoiled". Kissing her tummy one more time, he kissed a path up Peyton's arms, to her neck, to her ear, until he caressed her lips with his heated tongue. "Love me Mac", whispered Peyton against his lips. Pulling her into his embrace, he rolled her on top, and told her....."Take me into heaven Peyton, float me out of this Universe, until only you and I exsist".
Both Mac and Peyton, decided not to go on a Honeymoon. They were happy just spending time, in each others arms. "Are you happy love"? asked Mac. "Very, It's wonderful being Mrs.Taylor", said Peyton. "Good, said Mac, as he picked his lovely wife up and took her to their bedroom. Laying her atop the silken sheets, he just admired her beautiful body, in that silken white gown. "You are so perfect sweetheart". "I need to love you". With a tear in Peyton's eye, Mac's whisper caress, moved it's way up her thigh's, causing her to turn her head into the pillow. "Look at me Peyton", said MAc, "I want to see your expressions of heat across your lovely face, as i caress and stroke you". As Mac slithered up her gown, from her legs, he could see her eyes glass over, and her body buck against the sheets. "Easy love", said Mac.
After releasing her from her dress, he explored her all over her body, as she mewed and purred. Deeper and deeper, he took her beyond the relm of reality. "Please Mac, I need you to love me now", cried Peyton. Bracing himself over her body, he placed his thighs against hers, and before taking her into heaven, he said...."Look at me love", I want you to whisper your love to me, when I enter you, I need to hear it love, I need the words". As Mac pushed forth, Peyton said, "I love you Mac, forever and alway's I'll love only you". Getting lost in the realm of enchantment, they bothed cried their release, into each others souls.
A short time later, Mac asked Peyton, if she was hungry. After Peyton confessed that she was, Mac called an Oriental Restaurant and ordered in Chinese, for their meal. Once they had finished their meal, Mac asked his lovely wife, what she would like to do now.
"Hmm!!! "Make love again". "You my love, are turning into a naughty little minx". "That's the way you like it Mac, all wet and purring". As Mac laid down beside her, he rested the palm of his hand against her tummy and made little sweetheart hearts, where their baby was sleeping. "I can't wait love, our first baby". "THis is something, only you and I will share, something I never got to share with.....remembering this was his wedding night, and knowing he shouldn't talk about his deceased wife, he stopped himself cold.
"It's okay to talk about her Mac, she's a part of your life, whether she died or not, she's still part of you". Mac couldn't believe how blessed he was, to have met and married Peyton. He knew in his heart, she was one special lady.
Bending his head, he talked to his unborn child. "hey there, little one, this your daddy speaking to you". "I love you and I'm waiting excitedly for your arrival". "Daddy and mommy will take such good care of you and spoil you to no end". Peyton couldn't help but giggle. "I believe you will Mac, he/she will definetly be spoiled". Kissing her tummy one more time, he kissed a path up Peyton's arms, to her neck, to her ear, until he caressed her lips with his heated tongue. "Love me Mac", whispered Peyton against his lips. Pulling her into his embrace, he rolled her on top, and told her....."Take me into heaven Peyton, float me out of this Universe, until only you and I exsist".
um, just for the record --> that "awwwwwwwhawhawhawwwwww" was meant to be a multi-syllabic version of "awwww" for extra special "profoundly deeply romantically adorable" emphasis, not bawling. :lol: guess that wasn't clear... I'm far too constrained to let out anything more than what I can pretend never happened, like a deniable sniff. I admit I'll need at least one kleenex, but I doubt I'd ever let myself get to the point of taking the whole box (at least in public :lol
~ So, very sweet, soulful, and also exceptionally um, heated.... wow. nearly felt compelled to check this wasn't my in-box...
~ Tracing sweetheart hearts was a definite melt moment, i'll give ya that, but I do hafta say that I kinda needed a head-tilt pause moment to try and reconcile Mac with those words he spoke to the baby. No wonder peyton giggled :lol: definitely a side to mac most wouldn't picture...
~~> very very sweet LMH, a lovely, intimate, deeply profound, very well written, very romantic, enchanted, and sensual wedding night .....with... chinese food... :lol:
...again with the chinese food. :lol: what is it about the chinese food? mind you, if i got what they seem to get every time they order in, i'd be on it every day... (er, so to speak...)
~ So, very sweet, soulful, and also exceptionally um, heated.... wow. nearly felt compelled to check this wasn't my in-box...
~ Tracing sweetheart hearts was a definite melt moment, i'll give ya that, but I do hafta say that I kinda needed a head-tilt pause moment to try and reconcile Mac with those words he spoke to the baby. No wonder peyton giggled :lol: definitely a side to mac most wouldn't picture...
~~> very very sweet LMH, a lovely, intimate, deeply profound, very well written, very romantic, enchanted, and sensual wedding night .....with... chinese food... :lol:
...again with the chinese food. :lol: what is it about the chinese food? mind you, if i got what they seem to get every time they order in, i'd be on it every day... (er, so to speak...)
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
I love it LMH, it was full of passion, love... I can't really thik of one word to describe it
MarineGirl#1
CSI Level Three
Wow LMH, I just read your update. It's fab. Wish I were .... but then again I'm not. Duh ...
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
4 months later.....
With four and a half more months, before the babies arrival, Peyton and Mac, were deciding how to handle the Nursery. "I really think, we need pastel colors Mac, babies like pastels". "How do you know what they like, this is your first time to you know". "I know that Mac, but if you had of let us find out, our childs sex, we wouldn't be going through this right now". "But there's no fun in knowing early". "I want to be surprised", said Mac, as he kissed her pouty mouth. Looking into her husbands eyes, Peyton could see nothing, but love, for this child. "Okay, how about we leave the nursery till the baby is born, he'll be with us in our room anyways for the first few months", said Peyton. Giving his wife, one of his famous smiles, he kissed her pretty mouth. "Thank-you love". "You're welcome, now come on, I'm hungry, and need to eat", said Peyton.
When they got downstairs, Peyton headed for the bag of Chip's Ahoy Cookies. "Oh no you don't love, you've eaten almost the whole bag". "You are going to have some lunch first". "Come on Mac, the baby wants a cookie, and you wouldn't want to deny your child now, would you"? "Nice try Peyton, you can have all the cookies you want after your healthy lunch". Pouting, Peyton went and sat down. When Mac turned around with the soup and grilled cheese, he seen her pouting, and gave in. "Fine, one cookie now, nd then all you want after your lunch". Giving Mac, that longing look of thank-you, she bit into the cookie and sighed...."Mmmm", My mouth just had an orgasm", she smiled. Watching his wife, Mac was begining to get turned on. "Damn you Peyton, why do you do this to me"? Licking her lips and fingers, while starring at Mac, drove him to the brink....."Forget lunch", said Mac, as he walked over, and picked Peyton up, carrying her to bed.
"Why do you always turn me into a beast love"? asked Mac with heated passion. "I'm not sure, panted Peyton, as Mac kissed her senseless. Laying her upon the sheets, he kissed and caressed her satin skin. "Mac"........." she hissed. "I know love, I feel it too". "God it's like being lost in heaven, and never wanting to return". "I love it when you're poetic Mac, it drives me insanely mad", purred Peyton. As Mac went deeper down Peyton's tummy, he felt her gooseflesh, building with each kiss from the tip of his tongue. "Love me Mac, please, love me now". Bringing himself up, he braced himself on his arms, and looked into her eyes, as he said...."I don't want to hurt you love, If it starts to feel uncomfortable, let me know and I'll stop". With passion and love across her face, Peyton said...."You could never hurt me, and I need you to love me, I need to feel your warmth, your soul, your world collide with mine". "And you call me poetic", smiled Mac.
As he passionately kissed her, he entered her slowly and beautifully. "God love, you feel so good". "I know what you mean, now move please, I'm needing more of your love". After Peyton said that, Mac had no trouble keeping up with his lovely wife, and when they were both saturated and drained, they fell asleep in each others embrace.
With four and a half more months, before the babies arrival, Peyton and Mac, were deciding how to handle the Nursery. "I really think, we need pastel colors Mac, babies like pastels". "How do you know what they like, this is your first time to you know". "I know that Mac, but if you had of let us find out, our childs sex, we wouldn't be going through this right now". "But there's no fun in knowing early". "I want to be surprised", said Mac, as he kissed her pouty mouth. Looking into her husbands eyes, Peyton could see nothing, but love, for this child. "Okay, how about we leave the nursery till the baby is born, he'll be with us in our room anyways for the first few months", said Peyton. Giving his wife, one of his famous smiles, he kissed her pretty mouth. "Thank-you love". "You're welcome, now come on, I'm hungry, and need to eat", said Peyton.
When they got downstairs, Peyton headed for the bag of Chip's Ahoy Cookies. "Oh no you don't love, you've eaten almost the whole bag". "You are going to have some lunch first". "Come on Mac, the baby wants a cookie, and you wouldn't want to deny your child now, would you"? "Nice try Peyton, you can have all the cookies you want after your healthy lunch". Pouting, Peyton went and sat down. When Mac turned around with the soup and grilled cheese, he seen her pouting, and gave in. "Fine, one cookie now, nd then all you want after your lunch". Giving Mac, that longing look of thank-you, she bit into the cookie and sighed...."Mmmm", My mouth just had an orgasm", she smiled. Watching his wife, Mac was begining to get turned on. "Damn you Peyton, why do you do this to me"? Licking her lips and fingers, while starring at Mac, drove him to the brink....."Forget lunch", said Mac, as he walked over, and picked Peyton up, carrying her to bed.
"Why do you always turn me into a beast love"? asked Mac with heated passion. "I'm not sure, panted Peyton, as Mac kissed her senseless. Laying her upon the sheets, he kissed and caressed her satin skin. "Mac"........." she hissed. "I know love, I feel it too". "God it's like being lost in heaven, and never wanting to return". "I love it when you're poetic Mac, it drives me insanely mad", purred Peyton. As Mac went deeper down Peyton's tummy, he felt her gooseflesh, building with each kiss from the tip of his tongue. "Love me Mac, please, love me now". Bringing himself up, he braced himself on his arms, and looked into her eyes, as he said...."I don't want to hurt you love, If it starts to feel uncomfortable, let me know and I'll stop". With passion and love across her face, Peyton said...."You could never hurt me, and I need you to love me, I need to feel your warmth, your soul, your world collide with mine". "And you call me poetic", smiled Mac.
As he passionately kissed her, he entered her slowly and beautifully. "God love, you feel so good". "I know what you mean, now move please, I'm needing more of your love". After Peyton said that, Mac had no trouble keeping up with his lovely wife, and when they were both saturated and drained, they fell asleep in each others embrace.
4 months? :lol: time sure does fly when you're having fun... :devil: :devil:
hmmm, summary,
paragraoh 1 ~ pregnant, pastels
paragraph 2 ~ pouty, provocative
paragraph 3 ~ panting, purring, poetic
paragraph 4 ~ passionate
overall? very Pleasing LMH!
honestly, favourite two words though? "Insanely Mad " :lol: yep, can't blame a girl for that... :lol:
very sweet and serenly written! (er, makes me want a cookie...)
hmmm, summary,
paragraoh 1 ~ pregnant, pastels
paragraph 2 ~ pouty, provocative
paragraph 3 ~ panting, purring, poetic
paragraph 4 ~ passionate
overall? very Pleasing LMH!
honestly, favourite two words though? "Insanely Mad " :lol: yep, can't blame a girl for that... :lol:
very sweet and serenly written! (er, makes me want a cookie...
)
MarineGirl#1
CSI Level Three
Squee ... *blows out candles next to pc*, that was sssooo romantic and it's only morning yet.