britfan
Pathologist
Re: Grissom&Sara#21 - Cuz Dating Secretly is SO Much Coo
First of all - CM, please don't bury me in the desert. I don't like sand. Secondly, I don't think I'd fit in the box - I'm nearly 6ft tall and Sarah - my charming accent can get me out of anything!! And oi, NO! Keep your hand off my fannypack!
Now, a little question for you. I've just watched ABRTI pt2. How jealous was Sara with Sophia? She must have been seeing Griss by then - especially judging his look. First time I saw it I thought he was exasperated with Sara's intervention, but then I read it as guilty, especially when he asked her to go up an alley with him (aye aye!) He was all charm, trying to get back into her good books. While she was trying to be all cool with him - I'm looking for a bullet so there but I;ll come down an alley with you.
Anyhoo, to answer the poll, If Sara's brother turned up it would be cliched if she bumped into him because he was a suspect. That's crowbarring him in for creating a character's sake. If he could be skillfully written in - perhaps on holiday in Vegas with friends, staying at a hotel she was investigating at... that's a more plausible reason to introduce him. (That's not skillfully written by the way!)
Would Griss go all caveman or back away for her to deal with it? That would tell us a lot about the state of their relationship, wouldn't it?
First of all - CM, please don't bury me in the desert. I don't like sand. Secondly, I don't think I'd fit in the box - I'm nearly 6ft tall and Sarah - my charming accent can get me out of anything!! And oi, NO! Keep your hand off my fannypack!
Now, a little question for you. I've just watched ABRTI pt2. How jealous was Sara with Sophia? She must have been seeing Griss by then - especially judging his look. First time I saw it I thought he was exasperated with Sara's intervention, but then I read it as guilty, especially when he asked her to go up an alley with him (aye aye!) He was all charm, trying to get back into her good books. While she was trying to be all cool with him - I'm looking for a bullet so there but I;ll come down an alley with you.
Anyhoo, to answer the poll, If Sara's brother turned up it would be cliched if she bumped into him because he was a suspect. That's crowbarring him in for creating a character's sake. If he could be skillfully written in - perhaps on holiday in Vegas with friends, staying at a hotel she was investigating at... that's a more plausible reason to introduce him. (That's not skillfully written by the way!)
Would Griss go all caveman or back away for her to deal with it? That would tell us a lot about the state of their relationship, wouldn't it?