CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspects

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*overdramatic gasP* Geni you and your little...cliffhanger thingers! And seriously it is one thing right after another with us. lol.

Katie: You think I'll go to jail for this?

Speed: Not helping.

Katie: I'm just thinking ahead.

Leave it to me to hold a gun to my husband's head and wonder if i'll go to jail afterwords. lol. But oh man now I'm all excited and...I say "Guesstimate" all the time! lol. Oh man I'm like going crazy here! You gotta update soon.
 
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:lol: Isn't this story fun? :p

I'm Stuck Here Waiting...Me And The Rest Of The Family Here

Room

Katie: ...Oh my God.

Speed: *opens eyes* ...Did you just kill him?

Katie: I think I did.

Speed: *stands up* Three shots? I think you got him.

Katie: No one messes with me when I have a gun. What a moron.

Speed: *dials phone*

Katie: What are you doing?

Speed: Calling 911.

Katie: Oh right...Dead body and everything. How are we going to explain this?

Speed: Don't worry about it.

20 minutes later

Paramedics wheel out Gravano, other paramedics take Lori to look over her

Horatio: *walks in* Whoa...I'd say you two had enough of him.

Katie: Can I shoot his corpse a few more times?

Horatio: No.

Katie: Dang. And where are they taking my baby? EXCUSE ME!

Horatio: They're just making sure she's okay.

Katie: Oh...Good.

Horatio: Okay I'm going to be right out here.

Katie: *sigh*

Speed: Thank you for not killing me.

Katie: No problem. *holds Speed's hand*

Speed: *kisses Katie's forehead*

Katie: Can we go home yet?

Speed: In a few minutes. Or have you forgotten about our kid already?

Katie: Where is she? I want her back. *runs off* WHERE IS SHE!

Horatio: *walks over* You want to process the scene?

Speed: No, I want to go home.

Horatio: Where's Katie?

Speed: She's somewhere out there harrassing people.

Horatio: Well you'd better go get her.

Speed: Did you get Valdez?

Horatio: Just before I got the callout to here.

Speed: Good.

Horatio: Eric and I are heading back to Miami tomorrow. Are you staying here or going back?

Katie: *runs over* HE'S NOT GOING ANYWHERE! *grabs Speed* We're going home.

Speed: Slow down.

Katie: You...Do want to stay right?

Speed: No.

Katie: WHAT!

Speed: ...I'm kidding.

Katie: Don't do that.

Speed: Come on, let's go.

Katie: *pushes Speed* AFTER YOU!

Speed: *laughs*

Katie: Geez, live up to your name and get out of here faster.

Speed: Bye H.

Horatio: Likewise.

TBC.........
 
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Aww! YAY! Speedy's not dead and the bad guys are gone now so maybe JUST maybe we can be a happy family for once. Pfft yeah right like that's going to happen. lol.

Katie: Geez, live up to your name and get out of here faster.

haha, Geni you always have one line in an update that just gets me. And I can't stop laughing for like ever. lol. Great job!
 
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geeez Katie almost shot Speed...I knew she'd come through in the end! and thank god she finally got him and I love this quote:


Katie: ...Oh my God.

Speed: *opens eyes* ...Did you just kill him?

Katie: I think I did.

Speed: *stands up* Three shots? I think you got him.

Katie: No one messes with me when I have a gun. What a moron.


great update Geni I love this story it gets better everyday keep up the great work :D
 
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Awww poor lori, god what great updates geni! Can't wait for more! *runs in cirlces* think i am a little hyper
 
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woah! I think I gasped out loud about 10 times while reading those updates...Louis is such a jerk! good thing Katie shot him then ;) and little Lori is ok...thats good

and Katie can't seem to have a real relationship can she? there was Speed, then Speed again, then Adam, then Speed, then Speed again, then a random lab tech, then Speed again, then James (then Speed again)...I think the only one out of all those people who didn't hurt her in some way was the random lab tech :lol:

please update soon
 
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that was so awsome Geni! ! :eek: like old Mafia movies! everything is black & white....everyone have this suspisious look you know -_- :lol:

Horatio: Good job.

Speed: Thanks.

Horatio: *closes door*

Speed: *nods* Now I've got you, you son of a bitch. *walks away*

in this part i thought maybe Speed is talking about H! :lol: but noup my bad :p

anyway that was cool Geni ! *thumbs up* how you can expect critic about something like THAT!? :D
 
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Oo, And I forgot to say something...after reading the part when we all got drunk, I had a weird dream last night. I dreamt that I was at school with my brother, but for some reason there was only us and the teachers there, and I was obviously drunk and throwing bottles of water on my brother, then I followed him into the science and maths staffroom and I was denying that I was drunk and I threw out my arm and said "Fine. Test me" and my year co-ordinator said "Okay we will, get the blood test" And I just screamed "BLOOD TEST? OH NO YOU DON'T" and ran out of the room screaming.

Okay, yes I know that was really random, I just thought it was funny :lol:
 
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carlz31 said
and Katie can't seem to have a real relationship can she? there was Speed, then Speed again, then Adam, then Speed, then Speed again, then a random lab tech, then Speed again, then James (then Speed again)...I think the only one out of all those people who didn't hurt her in some way was the random lab tech

:lol: :lol: Excellent observation. Poor Katie, she just doesn't have luck with men does she? ...Maybe she likes the dangerous...Abusive guys. :p

And I just screamed "BLOOD TEST? OH NO YOU DON'T" and ran out of the room screaming.

:lol: I think I might just have to add that into the Road Trip. I hope you don't mind. :p :D (Hilarious dream by the way)

CSI_Trainee said
Awww poor lori, god what great updates geni! Can't wait for more! *runs in cirlces* think i am a little hyper

Aw, don't hurt yourself Jaci. :p I'm glad you liked the updates! :D

LtKitty said

in this part i thought maybe Speed is talking about H! but noup my bad

Funny how this story leaves everything open to interpretation. :lol: But you're right, he was talking about Louis, not about Horatio. :D

And did I hear someone say 'black and white'? :devil: (Don't ask :lol: )

*sigh* Carly, I'm still thinking about your drunken dream. It's hilarious and completely random! See how this story changes lives? :lol: ...I need to put snippets of that in the story, with your permission of course. :D

*walks away innocently*
 
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Of course, go for your life :lol: I thought it was hilarious too...I told some of my friends at school today, and they all thought it was hilarious too...especially the part about the blood test because they know how much needles freak me out..
I could give you a more detailed description of it if you want, I mean, as much as I can remember.

and when I read 'black and white' the movie was my first thought too :lol: yay for Black and White! :D
 
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*scribbles down some of the dream* Oh I have what I need. I'll improvise the rest. ;)

Black and White? :devil: ...*sigh* It's a long and sad story, really. It's made me the resident pervert in here. :rolleyes: ...*a hush falls over the crowd* ...SO Road Trip huh? :lol:
 
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Well I wouldn't want you to miss the next dose! ;)

I've been trying to think of something to write all morning, and all of last night. This is where being the only author for this story isn't very handy. :lol: ...I shall think of something and it shall be great.

This Time I Won't Run Away

Miami, Next day

Horatio: ...What happened to my lab?

Delko: Wasn't Calleigh in charge?

Horatio: No I left JC in charge.

Delko: You did?

Horatio: *looks around* Where are they? What did they do to my lab?

Delko: It looks like they ran a lawn mower through here.

JC: *runs up* HEY! Look that way for about two hours okay?

Horatio: *places hands on hips* What happened.

JC: Well...We kind of needed a pickmeup since you were all gone and everything.

Horatio: And?

JC: And we had a party.

Horatio: Who had a party?

JC: Uh...Carly had a party.

Horatio: And you...Had nothing to do with it.

JC: Well Anni had the alcohol and Carly had...The jackhammer.

Delko: Where did she get a jackhammer?

JC: She found it.

Delko: MY DIVE GEAR! IT'S EVERYWHERE! *runs away*

Horatio: *narrows eyes*

JC: ...Haha...Be gentle.

Horatio: Where's Carly?

JC: She's...Somewhere.

Horatio: Somewhere.

JC: Somewhere like...The Trace Lab.

Horatio: Come on.

JC: Where?

Horatio: We're going to visit the Trace Lab.

JC: Why?

Horatio: Let's go.

JC: AH man.

California

Katie: *rolls over* Are you going to work?

Speed: Work?

Katie: Yeah...A job.

Speed: Don't you have a job?

Katie: I...Should probably go in.

Speed: Whatever happened to James anyway?

Katie: He must have gotten out right?

Speed: You would think.

Katie: Well I have to drop in and get some files, you want to drive me?

Speed: You drive.

Katie: Yeah but not very well.

Speed: *sigh* I don't really want to see or talk to him.

Katie: You don't have to. Now get out of bed. *pushes Speed*

Speed: Alright, I'm going.

Ad Agency

Katie: *walks in* Oh James, you look...Like crap.

James: *points* You.

Katie: It's not my fault you couldn't kill me.

James: You know about that?

Katie: Yeah kind of. Do you want this twizzler?

James: No.

Speed: *walks in*

James: Oh no, not you again.

Speed: Yeah me again. How tragic.

Katie: If you two are going to fight, go outside. I don't want to get James' blood spatter on my desk.

James: What? Why won't his blood spatter get anywhere?

Speed: Because the chances are if you and I get into a brawl, I won't bleed.

James: Why not?

Speed: *frowns* You won't get a punch in. *crosses arms*

James: ...Katie?

Katie: Don't anger the beast.

James: I wasn't.

Katie: Good. I got the file, let's go.

James: *laughs* Wait a second, you're together? That's stupid. You told me how much he hurt you.

Katie: No...I don't ever remember having that conversation with you.

James: He's scared you into silence. I should call the cops.

Speed: *smirks* He's going to call the cops?

Katie: Oh he's going to call the cops.

Speed: We love the cops.

Katie: I love the cops.

James: You're both crazy. I don't know, maybe I'm crazy. Maybe we're ALL crazy.

Katie: ...Try not to think to hard okay? You might get a nosebleed. *walks out*

James: Wha?

Speed: See you around. *leaves*

James: *mumbles* Yeah...Whatever. *kicks garbage can*

TBC........
 
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Speed: *smirks* He's going to call the cops?

Katie: Oh he's going to call the cops.

Speed: We love the cops.

Katie: I love the cops.

Why did that remind me of legal?

Ryan: He's got an alibi
Calleigh: We love alibi's
...or something like that. I dunno its s3 I try to block it out. lol.

But ohhhhh no. Carly took a jackhammer to the lab. And seriously where does Anni keep getting this alochol from? I want some. lol. ok not really but still. lol. great update. I loved the whole being mean to James type thing going on. lol.
 
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