CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspects

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  1. speedmonkey2

    speedmonkey2 Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Aww poor Timmy can't sleep, Jess used small and hummerhome in the same sentence and and and Speed was all worried about Carly because she was gone for so long. Poor Speedy he's all alone now, well he still has Carly but still...ok i'm like extremely tired and I can't word what I want to say right now. So i'm sorry. lol. Update soon please!
     
  2. Wyoming

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    HAHAHA OMG that was too funny, I almost fell off of my chair with that one. Hahaha it jiggles. And I've gotta tell ya, that that jiggly.....whatever is pretty hot lol Unfortunatly his brain is jiggly too.....or maybe mushy is more the word lol

    Awwwww Speed's getting all protective now. He doesn't want one of his friends (or maybe more?) to get hurt. How sweet. You're doing a great job of having Speed cope with it the way he is Geni.....woot! 550 pages HOLY CRAP that's a big accomplishment Geni, give yourself a pat on the back! lol :lol:
     
  3. Anni Grey

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    Oh gosh, such wonderful updates! I'm glad we all got Trevor!! And you are right, Geni, I am grieving in my own little way.

    I like how Carly and Speed are being all vigliante! It seems that they are doing some bonding as well. I just want to get Ramirez!!! Speed isn't going to stop until that man is dead. I can't wait, I'm as giddy as a school girl!!!

    Oh, and I like how I'm trying not to have alcohol, but driving everyone nuts with the caffine high!! I also thought Horatio was funny when he was chiding me about my mouth, oh and me talking about Delko and his ah, um...muscle hahahahahah, I thought I was going to laugh myself to death!

    Fantastic update, Geni!!!
     
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    Those were great updates Geni I hope you have more for us.

    I hope Speed doesn't do anything stupid, Katie wouldn't have wanted their daughter to grow up without a father as well as a mother. I think at the moment Speed is just acting out some of his anger but is going about it the wrong way. I miss Katie. :(
     
  5. Finch

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    Well, this thread is winding down so I'll post one last chapter on here. - Perhaps two if the time and postage permits. Thank you all for reading, and for those who haven't had the chance to post a review before the eventual locking of this thread, come join us in the next one! - And don't worry about catching up. Take your time.

    Anni, I'm happy you liked the chapters! Hee! Carly and Speed sure do seem to be getting a long nicely. Well, they are bonding at least.

    calleighspeedle, you're right. Speed is acting out his anger/sadness. - We'll see where that leads.

    Choking In Dispair

    2 am, Motel Room

    Speed: *walks in, closes door*

    Carly: *jumps* Whoa.

    Speed: Sorry, did I wake you?

    Carly: It's okay don't worry about it. Where did you run off to?

    Speed: I just rode around.

    Carly: I hope it helped.

    Speed: *sits in chair* Not really.

    Carly: *sits up* I'm sorry.

    Speed: Yeah well, you can't do anything about it.

    Carly: You want a beer?

    Speed: No.

    Carly: ...Sleep medication?

    Speed: *stares at Carly*

    Carly: ...It was a joke.

    Speed: I know.

    Carly: So what's the big deal? You don't crack a smile anymore?

    Speed: I don't really feel up to that.

    Carly: Aw. *walks over, sits in chair* That's alright you don't have to pretend to be happy if you aren't.

    Speed: Thank you.

    Carly: *smiles*

    Speed: *stares at Carly*

    Carly: Uh...We should both get some rest.

    Speed: Yeah.

    Carly: You can have the bed.

    Speed: No, you can.

    Carly: Are you sure?

    Speed: Yeah.

    Carly: Thanks. *walks over to bed, get under the covers*

    Speed: *turns off light*

    Carly: *stares at the ceiling* ....Are you asleep yet?

    Speed: It's been two seconds.

    Carly: I know, but...Well nevermind.

    Speed: What?

    Carly: Well now I feel bad. You have to sit in the chair all night and I'm in this semi-comfortable bed.

    Speed: Don't feel bad. I'm fine.

    Carly: Well hot guys shouldn't sit alone in a chair.

    Speed: *blinks* ...Okay.

    Carly: Sorry, I tend to be weird when I'm tired.

    Speed: Well at least you say what you're thinking.

    Carly: Why...You don't?

    Speed: I think if I did, I'd get in trouble more often than I do.

    Carly: You're always saying what you think.

    Speed: Not all the time.

    Carly: ...What are you thinking right now?

    Speed: Oh, we don't need to go down that route.

    Carly: Were you thinking about Katie?

    Speed: ...I think it's safe to say I wasn't.

    Carly: Oh...

    Speed: Ramirez. I was thinking about Ramirez.

    Carly: Really.

    Speed: Yeah.

    Carly: Alright well...You keep thinking about him then.

    Speed: I will.

    Carly: Good.

    Speed: Good.

    TBC.............
     
  6. Trevor

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    What a powerful Road Trip, I can't wait for the next one. And when I say "Road Trip" I mean the whole thread. So many things happened in such a short span of time: 1 month. I can't wait to see what happens next thread!
     
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    AWWWWWWW! Speed and I are going to go all vigilante on Ramirez...I hope we get him ;)

    :eek: IT WAS TREVOR!...and Ramirez...awww, poor Speedy :(

    Well, Speed and I certainly seem to be bonding nicely ;) TEEHEE! and awww, Speed is all protective of me :D

    and did I mention that I LOVE DUCATIS! :D hehe, espscially yellow ones ;) :D

    well, I love forward to the opening of the next thread...I will see you there, please update soon
     
  8. Rebecca_V

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    I just have one request. Please take them to Juarez Mexico. It the border town to El Paso Texas. Lots of possibilities there. High crime and lots of drugs are down there. Perfect for Rameriz.

    Over the summer I had the pleasure of accompining a CSI supervisor for the day in Juarez. It was very very interesting and eye opening. Lots of murders down there for sure. Lots of work for the CSI's there. It is nothing like the show down there. They have very little technology and their network well it SUCKS!. I dream someday of sponsering international something involving helping them update their computer system, network and technology. I really gotta master Spanish too.

    Oh..I think you wanted to lock this thread. Sorry so long

    Rebecca
     
  9. Finch

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    Thanks for the info about Juarez. I've added it into the next thread. :)

    And don't worry, you can still post until the thread cap which is 1000 posts. ;) - If one of the moderators of this thread could lock it as soon as possible, it would be greatly appreciated. (Of course you don't need me to tell you how to do your jobs. :p)

    Link to the new thread here.
     
  10. CSI_in_training

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    HELL YES YOU'RE GOING DOWN!
    WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU GOING GIRL?
    GO SPEED!!!!
    YOU! STOP PEOKING MY DELKO!!! *giggles uncontrollably* sorry, I'm weird.
    under different circumstances that would be...never mind I don't know what I was going to say...

    I went and saw [qi]The Covenent[/i] and one of the lead guys was driving a ducati and I was like OMG IT'S SPEEDS BIKE! And my mom replied with SHUT UP!
    OMG KATIE'S DEAD *cries hysterically* I feel really really sad now...*hugs katie* we're gonna miss you so much! Don't leave us in real life, cause that would be too sad!
     
  11. calleighspeedle

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    I miss Katie too she was a little crazy from time to time but I loved her.

    r.i.p Katie we all miss you
     
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