CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspects

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Hehehe I am on coffee, sugar and junk food lol. Anyway update soon your so mean, I mean I go to sobeys and see what I come back to. Your evil how dare you aggggggg the suspense is killing me here. Love the content can't wait for more lol.
 
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wouuu, H have feelings, wiiii! :lol: why some of girls have all fun *look at JC* :p :D
i Hope this relationship will not turns out like funeral or wedding :p or even worse : wedding turns out like funeral :lol:
Katie and Speed, what can i say.. life full of action! :lol:
 
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Hi everyboby I'm back :)
I had a lot of reading and omg horatio have feeling with JC I'm so jealous !!! :p
And katie and speed had them baby stole, accident... they are so unlucky...
 
Re: CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspect

Welcome back carole! I hope you had a good time away from TalkCSI. - And I'll be adding you to the story soon. :)

Jaci, I'm not evil I just have a twisted sense of humor that always seems to put our favorite pair in peril. :D

LtKitty, funeral? Wedding? Whoa I don't think I'm going that far yet. :p ...But of course I tend to borrow ideas that you guys randomly throw out, so it might happen. *X-Files music starts to play*

I'll be putting up another chapter soon.

EDIT: And here is the chapter. Enjoy!

How Do I Speak To You

Garage, next morning

Delko: *clicks on flashlight*

Jody: Have you found anything?

Delko: ...I just started.

Jody: Check out the bumper damage.

Delko: *looks down* They were hit by a black vehicle, probably a truck.

Jody: Why would two vehicles be going after them at the same time?

Delko: Maybe they're a team.

Jody: A bump and run team? It doesn't make sense, what would be the motivation?

Delko: *opens trunk* ...*shines flashlight* I'd say that's motivation.

Jody: *walks around vehicle* ...Drugs.

Delko: Looks like about a hundred kilos of cocaine, don't you think?

Jody: Why would they have cocaine in their trunk?

Delko: I don't know, but I have a way to find out.

Jody: How?

Delko: ...Asking the owners of the vehcile.

Jody: They could lie.

Delko: Yeah or they could tell the truth. *walks away*

Jody: Alright then.

Katie's house

Delko: *walks in* Hey you guys are back already?

Speed: Yeah.

Delko: Where's Katie?

Speed: Upstairs, why?

Delko: I just need to talk to her.

Speed: Talk to me.

Delko: Uh...Okay. Well I was examining the car.

Speed: Yeah.

Delko: And I found...Cocaine in the trunk.

Speed: ..*blank stare*

Delko: Do you know anything about it?

Speed: No.

Delko: Are you sure?

Speed: I have no idea where the cocaine came from. I don't own the car.

Delko: Are you saying Katie knows?

Speed: I'm not saying anything.

Delko: You know, it probably wouldn't be best to protect her.

Speed: I'm not protecting anyone.

Delko: I could take her in and interrogate her.

Speed: *walks closer* You think she's buying drugs?

Delko: Uh...I don't know that for sure. Maybe she's selling them.

Speed: *frowns*

Delko: Or, or she could be holding them for a friend, or they were planted by someone else, or they fell from the sky.

Speed: And you're going to do everything in your power to prove that right?

Delko: Well I don't know. I mean, there was a hundred kilos in there. I'm pretty sure she's not using but she could be selling.

Speed: Why would she do that?

Delko: I don't know, you still have your pretty house right?

Speed: ....

Delko: What?

Speed: Did you analyze the drugs?

Delko: Not yet.

Speed: Okay this might link back to Miami.

Delko: What are you talking about?

Speed: Valdez was in our lab.

Delko: Yeah, so?

Speed: So while we were busy shooting five other guys, he was nowhere to be seen.

Delko: ...Yeah.

Speed: Where do you think he was?

Delko: ...Uh, the evidence locker was open when we were processing but we thought that's because one of us shot the lock. There was a bullet hole in it.

Speed: *nods*

Delko: Oh crap. Horatio's going to kill me.

Speed: Those other guys were the distraction. He stole the drugs and now he's framing us.

Delko: But why would he do that? I thought he was working with Gravano.

Speed: Yeah I bet that's what the argument was about.

Delko: The drugs.

Speed: It was the failsafe if Louis couldn't get to us.

Delko: So now Valdez is doing what he wants. Except he's in jail.

Speed: Yeah but the guys who hit us aren't.

Delko: *cell phone rings* Hold on. *opens phone* Yeah, Eric Delko....Really...Alright thanks. *closes phone* PD just found one of the vehicles off an access road with a guy in it. He was shot in the head.

Speed: I guess his partner didn't want him around anymore.

Delko: I have to go check it out, I'll keep you posted.

Speed: No way. I'm going with you.

Delko: You can't, you're not a cop.

Speed: *tilts head* Once a cop, always a cop right?

Delko: *smirks* Okay come on. I brought a Hummer.

Speed: *takes keys* I'm driving.

Delko: Who said you get to drive?

Speed: Seniority. *leaves*

Delko: ...Ah man.

TBC........
 
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Okay realatively calmer today lol. Wow nice speed pulling the senority thing again lol. Can't wait for more please update soon!
 
Re: CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspect

Calm, cool and collected is always good. :) - Although being hyper and completely nuts is sometimes a healthy thing right?

And yes, Speed pulling seniority. He always seems to do that, but that's because it's my fic and I can do what I want. :p ...I seem to be slightly biased in this thread. :lol:

And I'm glad you love the story!

Waiting By The Palm Trees

Access road

Delko: *gets out of Hummer* Black SUV.

Speed: *points* Dead guy.

Delko: Glove up.

Speed: Already ahead of you.

Delko: *opens SUV door* Well, this seems pretty cut and dry.

Coroner: Gunshot wound to the head, instantly fatal. I found something in his pocket.

Speed: *grabs paper* It's a liscence plate number.

Delko: Yours?

Speed: Yeah.

Coroner: His ID says Ken Fuentes.

Patrol cop: *walks over* I ran the registration. It belongs to Fuentes here. He just got out of prison three months ago.

Delko: So he's a felon.

Patrol Cop: Yeah apparently he came up to California last month.

Delko: What? What do you mean came up here?

Patrol Cop: He served in Florida for a drug charge.

Speed: *looks around inside vehicle*

Delko: You see something?

Speed: It's what I don't see.

Delko: What do you mean?

Speed: This guy was hired by Valdez to run us off the road, and there's no money?

Delko: Maybe the drugs were his payment.

Speed: It couldn't have been because then the cops wouldn't find it on us.

Delko: So he has no cash, and no drugs. Maybe his partner took the money.

Speed: Well when we find him, we can ask him.

Delko: This guy just doesn't quit. How many times is he going to try and get you?

Speed: He wasn't trying to get me, he was trying to get money and drugs. He probably didn't care who he had to kill to get it.

Truck drives up

Delko: Uh...Speed?

Speed: What?

Delko: You have a gun?

Speed: No.

Delko: *get out gun*

Window rolls down, someone shoots at the vehicle. Speed ducks, Delko shoots gun, truck drives away

Delko: *runs over* Are you okay?

Speed: *frowns* I hate California.

Delko: Well California seems to hate cops.

Cop car drives off in pursuit of the truck

Speed: That was the second guy.

Delko: Do they ever give up?

Speed: If I get shot at one more time...

Delko: Alright calm down, we have a scene to process.

Speed: No, you have a scene to process. I'm going to go see Valdez.

Delko: Why?

Speed: Keep processing. *gets in Hummer, drives off*

Delko: ...I'll...Be here then.

Prison

Speed: *walks into interview room*

Valdez: *laughs* I was sure those guys would have killed you by now.

Speed: *rolls up sleeves* Yeah me too. It's a shame criminals happen to be stupid.

Valdez: I heard one of my guys was killed. I guess you can never be too careful who you pick.

Speed: Yeah and your second guy got away.

Valdez: Well maybe he's the smarter one.

Speed: Where's he going?

Valdez: I'm not going to tell you that man.

Speed: Really. *pushes table into Valdez*

Valdez: Hey man! That's police brutality!

Speed: Where's he going!

Valdez: How should I know!

Speed: *pushes table*

Valdez: ALRIGHT ALRIGHT! He's going to your place!

Speed: *let's go of table* Why?

Valdez: His instructions were to take either one of you out so he's going to finish the job. That's plan B.

Speed: Plan B?

Valdez: I guess the drug plant didn't work. He's going to kill your pretty wife.

Speed: Why can't you leave us alone?

Valdez: Your dad caused a lot of trouble up in New York. Louis wanted to get you back for leaking to the cops and I wanted money.

Speed: I didn't leak anything.

Valdez: That's not my problem anymore.

Speed: You hired a hit on an innocent woman so guess what, it is your problem.

Valdez: Why aren't you running to her rescue?

Speed: Believe me, she can take care of herself. You should see her after a double shift at the lab.

Valdez: Speaking of that lab, it was surprisingly easy to get those drugs.

Speed: Good for you.

Valdez: I learned from the best. Granted, it was in a different country but uh...She was still the best.

Speed: What are you talking about?

Valdez: Who do you think let me in the lab?

Speed: You tell me.

Valdez: I'm finished talking.

Speed: Fine. See you around. *leaves*

Katie's house

Speed: *runs in* Katie? Katie!

Katie: *walks downstairs* Hey, you're back.

Speed: Did a guy drive over here?

Katie: Yeah he's upstairs.

Speed: What?

Katie: He put a nasty bullet hole in the wall though. I worked long and hard for this house.

Speed: I bought the house.

Katie: Well I shot him.

Speed: Is he dead?

Katie: Yeah. The cops are on the way here, apparently they were pursuing him.

Speed: *hugs Katie*

Katie: Um ow. You didn't think I'd move back here and not buy a gun did you?

Speed: *lets go*

Katie: See? I'm not that pathetic.

Speed: I didn't say you were.

Baby starts to cry

Katie: *walks into kitchen* We really need to get better locks on the doors.

Speed: *sigh*

TBC........
 
Re: CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspect

Thanks geni I can't wait to come and join the team!!!!! :) ;)

As always great update (with less action lol) and upddate soon please...
 
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LOL Great chapter superb as always .... can't wait for more you are my hero Geni!!!!!!
 
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carole said
Thanks geni I can't wait to come and join the team!!!!!

You'll be added very soon, because the team is going back on the road. And Speed/Katie will be joining them, so everyone will be together. Now, it's going to be less serious and more...The way it was before. :lol: I think we've had enough drama for this week. - I'm turning into such a drama whore. :p

And Carly, you're going to be having a personal storyline so YAY the spotlight will be on you. And Jaci, the Horatio/JC storyline will continue, but not for a teeny bit. For now it'll be inklings and hints. - If you know what I mean.

Next stop: Germany.
 
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you are sooo cool Geni thanks for the update, looking forward to more. :D

*giving Geni a hug*
 
Re: CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspect

I'm glad you're looking forward to the next chapters. :)

*hugs back* :D
 
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thank you
lol I think you're right for the drama!! we had enough for this week :)
And yeahi they are going to be less serious I'm sure it's going to be REALY funny (even if it's always like that ;) )
update *3 clap* update *3 clap* update *3 clap* update *3 clap*
lol
 
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Valdez: I learned from the best. Granted, it was in a different country but uh...She was still the best

OH oh oh oh! My CSi sense is tingling! lol. Great chapters Geni! Just what I needed when I come home from school. Teehee. But oh man shooting at Speed unarmed is totally unfair! And this is all getting very very very interesting. Update soon please!
 
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Oooo, I wonder who let Valdez into the lab...and yeah, if Speed gets shot one more time
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and Oooo, a personal storyline eh? I wonder what it will be *thinks*

please update soon
 
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