Great, chapter.
One thing that caught my eye though is Calleigh's name. Her last name is spelled 'Duquesne', but that's alright. You've done a great job introducing the Miami CSIs, and the descriptions were great to visualize. One thing I would suggest, if you wanted to keep character continuity with the Miami CSIs, is watch a couple of episodes before you write a chapter. It's always great to review how they react to situations, and how they interact with each other. Other than that, you're doing a superb job!
One thing that caught my eye though is Calleigh's name. Her last name is spelled 'Duquesne', but that's alright. You've done a great job introducing the Miami CSIs, and the descriptions were great to visualize. One thing I would suggest, if you wanted to keep character continuity with the Miami CSIs, is watch a couple of episodes before you write a chapter. It's always great to review how they react to situations, and how they interact with each other. Other than that, you're doing a superb job!