Delayed Inffinity

Ok heres the next chapter! This is where the twist starts! Dont worry it doesnt last for long! I hope yall enjoy! I couldnt think of Natalia's moms name so I just made one up!

Chapter 8

"Baby, its ok." Her mom said as she wrapped Natalia in a tight hug.

"You're just having morning sickness right now." Her mom said as she rubbed Natalias back.

"Yea well it sucks." Natalia said as she let out a little laugh.

"Does Eric know?"

"Um..." Natalia said as she looked away.

"He doesn't know?

"No..." Natalia said as her eyes started watering up.

"You have to tell him."

"Well when I first found out that I was pregnant, I mentioned what he thought about having a family and he said he would like to have one one day but not now."

"Well now will have to be that one day." Her mom said as she wiped away the tears that fell down.

Natalia and her mom heard someone walking upstairs and quickly dried there tears.

"Hey my parents are here so we're gonna eat." Eric said walking to the bathroom.

"Ok we'll be down there in a bit." Natalia said trying to put the best smile on her face.

"Ok." Eric said smiling back at her and kissing her on her head before leaving.

"You have to tell him Nat." Her mom said as she left the room to go meet Erics parents.

"Yea I know. Natalia said lightly outloud.

"Hi, I'm Liz, Natalias mom." She said as she shook Erics parents hands

"Where's Natalia?" Eric asked her mom.

"She's coming."

Just as her mom said that Natalia walked downstairs in a green tubetop and white shorts.

"Wow." Eric said under his breath as he just stared at her.

"Hi, I'm Natalia." She said as she hugged his mom and dad.

As everyone made their way to the table for lunch.

"You look absolutely beautiful." Eric said as he wrapped his arms around her lower part of her waist and walked over to the table with her.

"Thank you." Natalia said as she sat down in the chair.

After they ate dinner and the families left.

"Hey Eric?" Natalia said as she hopped in bed.

"Yea baby?" Eric said as he took his shirt off and hopped in bed.

"Can we talk?"

"Yea sure." Eric said as he pulled her closer to kiss her but she pulled away.

"Ok, what do you want to talk about?" Eric said giving her his full attention.

"Um....you know how when I asked you what you thought about having a family....? She said looking deep into his eyes.

"Yea...?" Eric said as he looked at her with a confused look.

"Well, its coming sooner than what you think."

"What are you talking about?" Eric said as he scooted away from her.

"I'm pregnant Eric."

"Good one Nat. Really." Eric said as he chuckled and layed down and pulled the covers over his legs.

"Eric, I'm serious."

"What?" Eric said as he sat back up in bed.

"You heard me. We're having a baby." Natalia could feel the tears start to well up in her eyes.

"Um...I can't stay here tonight." Eric said as he got up and gathered his stuff and started to leave.

"Eric, please." Natalia said as she got out of bed and ran after him to his car.

"I know we can make this work." She said as she stood at his car door with him hoping he would come back inside and they could talk to eachother about it.

"Natalia, I'm sorry but this is not how I planned my life just yet." Eric said as he opened his car door.

"Well, Eric its not how I planned mine either but its here and this is how its gonna be." She screamed as she let the tears fall freely.

"I mean Eric do you seriously think I wanted this too?" She said as she threw her hands in the air.

"Well I'm sorry but I just can't do it." Eric said as he shut his door and started to back out of her driveway."

"Eric please..." Natalia screamed as she ran down her driveway trying to catch his car, tears streaming down her face.

As Eric pulled out of the driveway, rain started falling down. He then put the car in drive but stopped for a second to look at her one more time. It killed him to do this to her but it wasnt how he had planned his life out. He then drove away and Natalia was left standing alone in her driveway in the rain.

Let me know what yall think! :)
 
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Eric, you're a moron. :lol: Go back to her you big dodo. :lol:

Great update. didn't expect Eric to react like that.
 
Eric you idiot, you absolute :censored: TURN THE CAR AROUND!!!:scream:

Once again this was a fablous update though now I'm mad at Eric and I need to give Nat a hug. Very nice twist though! Can't wat to see what's next!
 
Here's an update! I really loved writing this chapter! Well when it comes to Eric and Natalia! It was hard to write the other parts! Anyway you'll know what part I'm talkin bout! Hope ya'll enjoy!

Chapter 9

As those 2 months of free time did not last, Eric and Natalia both returned to work, Natalias stomach had gotten bigger over the months. And Eric had been dating someone new for a few months.

"Eric!" Calleigh said as she walked in the fingerprints room.

"Hey!" Eric said looking up and smiling.

"Have you gotten anything on the fingerprints?" Calleigh said as she walked up beside Eric.

"Um...codis should tell us any minute."

"So how bout dinner tonight?" Calleigh asked looking up to him with a smile on her face.

"What about dinner tonight" Eric said as he put his arm around her waist.

"I was thinking Italian."

"Sounds good to me."

"Ok. Ill see you at 7." Calleigh said as codis found someone.

"Will do." Eric said as he walked out to tell Horatio what he had.

Natalia was in the DNA room when Ryan walked in.

"So, how are you doing?" Ryan said as he walked in.

"Good." Natalia said as she lifted her head off the table.

"You don't look to good." Ryan said as he walked over to her.

"Yea, well, I have the worst headache, I got a ticket this morning for speeding, and I still havent found anything from this blood yet." Natalia said as she felt like she was gonna cry.

"You know what?"

"What?" Natalia said as she rolled her eyes and looked back up.

"Why don't you go to the breakroom and take a break and just rest for a little while, Ill take care of everything here."

"Are you sure?"

"Yea, go ahead." Ryan said moving his hands with the leaving motion.

"Ok, thanks Ryan." Natalia said as she smiled the best smile that she could.

"Welcome."

Natalia walked into the breakroom, went over to the couch, closed her eyes and fell asleep. Eric walked into the breakroom and found Natalia sleeping on the couch and just watched her sleep. Natalia woke up and saw Eric staring at her.

"Eric?" Natalia said as she sat up on the couch.

"Oh, sorry, I didn't mean to wake you up." Eric said as he started to turn around.

"No it's fine. I needed to get up anyway and get back to work." She said as she stood up and walked towards him.

Eric could feel himself starting to get weak in the knees as she walked closer.

"You look good." Eric said as he smiled to her.

"Ha, yea thanks. I just feel like a whale." She said laughing.

Eric about died when he heard her laugh. He loved her laugh and missed it so bad.

"Well, I think you look good."

"Well, thanks." Natalia said as she placed her hands on her hips and smiled.

"Um...do you, um...know what it is?" Eric said as he stepped closer to her.

"Its a girl." Natalia smiled up at Eric.

"Really?" Eric said smiling.

"Yea, would you like to feel her?" Natalia said as she took his hand.

"Yea." Eric said as he let her take his hand and place it on her stomach.

"Wow. I can feel her moving." Eric said as his smile that was on his face got bigger.

"Yea, she's been moving alot here lately." Natalia said as she started laughing.

"Really?" Eric said as he moved behind her and place both hands on her stomach.

"Yea." Natalia said as she rested her head on his chest and let out a sigh.

"Nat?"

"Yea?" Natalia said as she turned around to face him.

"I'm sorry."

"Its ok Eric. Don't worry about it."

"I know it's just..."
Natalia placed her pointer finger on his lips to stop him from talking.

"Eric please. Dont worry about it. Ill be fine." Natalia said as she turned around to walk away but felt a hand on her arm pull her back.

"What Eric?" Natalia said as she turned back around.

"You might be fine...." He said as he pulled her closer to him.

"But I wont be." He said as he leaned down to kiss her.

"Eric..." Natalia said as they separated.

"Shh..." Eric said as he pulled her in for another kiss.

He quickly found himself wrapping his arms around her waist and pulling her to the couch. Natalia found herself reaching for his neck as he pulled her back onto the couch. He had been wanting this for so long and now the time had finally come. She was back in his arms and he was happy again.

"Am I interrupting something?" An all to familiar voice said.

Natalia quickly jumped off Eric and turned around to reveal one of her best friends....Calleigh.

Let me know what you think.
 
Ahhhh!! I love it!! It was sweet that Ryan took over Natalia's work for her and yes I can see which parts you had a hard time writing and I don't blame you. I love the fact that Eric was excited about Nat having a baby girl, and got happy when he felt the baby move.

I can't wait for the next update!! Keep up the great work!!
 
Aw, Ryan. :adore: What a sweetie-pie. :D


Love the chapter. I'm on the fence about whether or not Natalia should just take Eric back, no questions asked though. And the fact that he started dating Natalia's friend is kind of another betrayal in of itself. :lol: What is wrong with that boy? :lol:

Great chapter though. :) Loved how he got excited when she told him it was a girl.
 
Crap. I really hated this ship because it was really unrealistic, and now I'm uscked in to this fic. Anyway, GIVE ME THE NEXT CHAPTER AND NO ONE GETS HURT!!!!!

(jk)


(maybe)
 
Here's an update! :) Hope ya'll enjoy!

Chapter 10

"Eric?" Calleigh said with a confused look on her face.

"Hey, Calleigh." Eric said jumping up and scratching the back of his head.

"Um...I think we need to talk." Calleigh said as she walked out of the room.

Eric looked back at Natalia who got up and started to walk out of the room.

"Natalia, wait..." Eric said as he reached for her arm.

"What Eric?" Natalia said as tears were falling from her eyes.

"Please don't leave me."

"You know Eric, if I recall, I said the same thing to you about 8 months ago." She said as she cocked her head to the side and looked him in the eye.

Eric stood there in shock taking in every word she had said and thought about what happened that night.

"Im so sorry Nat. Really I am. It was just all shock to me then." Eric said as he was trying to hold back the tears.

"I am too Eric." Natalia said as she pulled her arm out of his hand and left.

A few moments later Eric met Calleigh out in the parking lot to talk to him.

"What was that all about?" Calleigh said practically screaming at him.

"I dont know Calleigh, Im sorry."

"Eric you know what?"

"What?"

"I can see that this is not gonna work out. Go back to her. You love her. Not me. And she loves you too. When you kiss me, I know you're thinkin of her. I can see it in your eyes. Eric, you'll always be a friend to me. So go." Calleigh said as she toned her voice down and put a smile on her face.

"You really mean that?"

"Yes, Eric."

"Thanks Calleigh." He said as he kissed her cheek.

"You're welcome."

Eric raced to Natalias house before she could get home. He put rose petals from the front door all the way up to her bedroom. He lit candles along the outside of the rose petals all the way up to her room and had them on her nightstand and on the mantel of her fireplace in her room. He wrote a letter that said "I will love you till the 12th rose dies." At the very bottom in small, light hand writing he put.."If you looking for the 12th rose, look behind you." And laid the 11 real colored roses on the letter right as he heard the front door open. He went and hid in her bathroom with the lights off.

Natalia stopped dead in her tracks when she saw the rose petals and candles lit. As she followed them up to her room and opened the door she saw the letter on her bed and went over to read it. As she counted the roses she only counted 11. She looked back at the letter and saw at the very bottom where it said "If you're looking for the 12th rose, look behind you." As she turned around she jumped lightly as Eric was right behind her holding the 12th rose. Natalia smiled up at him.

"Im guessing thats the 12th rose?" Natalia said as she pointed to the red rose.

"Yes it is." Eric said as he handed her the rose and she smelled it.

"It's fake!" She said as she laughed.

"I will love you till the last rose dies." He said as he pulled her closer to him.

Natalia looked deep into his eyes and knew he meant it and with that she knew she could never be with anyone else.

"I love you." She said as she hugged him.

"I love you too." He said as he lifted her head and kissed her lips tenderly.

"I can feel the baby kicking." Eric said as he separated from her and placed his hand on her stomach.

"She always kicked whenever you were close." Natalia said as she place her hand over Erics.

"You mean like, she knew I was her dad?"

"Yea."

Eric lifted Natalias shirt up and kissed her bare skin on her stomach.

"I love you, baby girl." He said as he saw the footprint roll across the Natalias stomach and rubbed his hand across her stomach with the babys foot.

Natalia was lost for words. As Eric stood back up he saw that she was ready to cry.

"Baby, dont cry." Eric said as he enveloped her into her a hug.

"I can't help it. Its this freaking pregnancy." She said as she laughed.

Eric laughed along with her before taking her to the bed and tucking her in.

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The next day

Eric was at work while Natalia was at the house spending the day with Marisol.

"So Eric, when's this baby coming?" Ryan asked as they headed to a crime scene.

"Soon Ryan, Soon."

"You ready?" Ryan said looking at him.

"Are you ever ready for a baby?"

"Well, I was just wondering. You look like you're ready."

"Thanks Ryan." Eric said as he laughed.

"You're welcome man." Ryan said as he place a hand on Erics back and patted it.

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At Natalias house

"So you ready to have this baby?" Marisol said as she sat down on the couch with Natalia.

"I guess I'm gonna have to be." Natalia said as she laughed.

"Well I think you and Eric will be the best parents ever."

"Thanks." Natalia said.

Suddenly she felt this sharp pain and screamed.

"Omg." Natalia screamed as her breathing got heavy.

"What is it?" Marisol said as she jumped up.

"I, I think I'm in labor." Natalia said as she held her stomach.

"What do I do, what do I do?" Marisol said as she started jumping up and down.

"Call..." As Natalia takes deep breaths.

"Eric." She said as she started breathing again.

"Ok." Marisol said as she dialed Erics number.

Let me know what yall think!
 
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'Atta girl, Nat, make him crawl. :lol:

Loved the thing with the 12 roses. :D

Oh Marisol's alive in this fic. cool. :) I liked her jumping up and down going "what do I do? what do I do?" :guffaw:
 
'Atta girl, Nat, make him crawl. :lol:

Loved the thing with the 12 roses. :D

Oh Marisol's alive in this fic. cool. :) I liked her jumping up and down going "what do I do? what do I do?" :guffaw:
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I agree with everything that GNRF has said especially the part about Marisol. Keep up the great work! I can't wait for the update! I wonder what they are going to name their baby girl?
 
Ok, so this last chapter drew me back in :lol: I was feeling the need to choke Eric in those few chapters, but ok, he's redeemed with all the '12 roses' stuff :p

Ya know, I just got done watching 'Gone with the Wind' so I had to laugh with the Marisol scene cause I immediatly imagined her as Prissy screaming "I don' know nuthin' bout birthin' babies!" :guffaw:
 
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