CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspects

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Stiff Upper Lip

Hospital, 9 am

Speed: *walks in*

Katie: *sits up* OH MY GOD!

Speed: ...What?

Katie: What are you doing!

Speed: ...Standing in the room.

Katie: *points* What is that!

Speed: *looks down* ...Clothes. *looks at Katie* It's kind of the law.

Katie: IT'S WHITE!

Speed: *lifts brow*

Katie: ...Are you kidding me?

Speed: You need to get out of here.

Katie: I know it.

Speed: *walks over* The doctor says if you can walk, then you can leave.

Katie: I can walk. *gets ouf of bed, falls*

Speed: *looks down*

Katie: ...Thank you for catching me my one and only very supportive husband.

Speed: *picks Katie up* Can you stand?

Katie: Of course I can stand. I'm standing right now.

Speed: I'm going to let go of you.

Katie: Go ahead. Make my day.

Speed: Fine. *lets go*

Katie: HA! I'm standing.

Speed: *shakes head*

Katie: *looks at door* LORI!

Lori: *waves*

Katie: Come here you!

Lori: *runs over* MOMMA!

Katie: Hey! *hugs Lori* Oof you're so big now.

Speed: *watches*

Katie: *picks up Lori* Were you good?

Lori: *nods*

Katie: Good. *sigh* Look at what daddy's wearing. How come you didn't help him?

Lori: *giggles*

Speed: Funny.

Katie: *sigh* ..Tim.

Speed: What?

Katie: Have you heard of hair gel?

Speed: Maybe you should be worrying about yourself, and not how I look.

Katie: *frowns*

Speed: What?

Katie: YOU SHAVED!

Speed: Good lord. *grabs Lori* Get dressed.

Katie: It's not fair. I could cry right now.

Lori: *touches Speed's face* HEE!

Katie: Oh pfft yeah she likes it.

Speed: *narrows eyes*

Katie: Alright fine, I'm getting dressed.

Speed: I'll see you in a few minutes.

Katie: Fine, but when you get back here you had better be wearing something black.

Speed: Nice try. *leaves*

Katie: Ah man.

TBC...........
 
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Hahaha, I love how are first actual conversation is about how Speed looks. lol. See men go to hell with there appearnce if there isn't a girl around lol.

Katie: I can walk. *gets ouf of bed, falls*

Speed: *looks down*

Katie: ...Thank you for catching me my one and only very supportive husband.
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HEHE. Awww. That made me laugh and say aww at the same time. lol.

Katie: Good. *sigh* Look at what daddy's wearing. How come you didn't help him?

Lori: *giggles*

Speed: Funny.

Katie: *sigh* ..Tim.

Speed: What?

Katie: Have you heard of hair gel?
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Yes, long live the spikey hair!

Katie: YOU SHAVED!

Speed: Good lord. *grabs Lori* Get dressed.
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*Gasp* Oh no he didn't! That should be a sin. Seriously! Great update Geni!
 
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Maybe it's a good thing you're back in the land of the living then. ;)

Never Over

Hospital, halls

Katie: Okay so anything interesting happen while I was out?

Speed: Not really. The girls got Lori hooked on Cheez-its, but they don't know that I know.

Katie: Fun times.

Lori: DADDA! *reaches out*

Speed: *picks up Lori* We're heading back to Miami.

Katie: Don't tell me we have a case.

Speed: Not that I know of.

Katie: Good because I don't really want to think. So if we're working or having a good time with everyone, what happens to Lori?

Speed: Well we might have to either get her a babysitter, take her with us, or just not go anymore.

Katie: No. No no no. I am going to have fun if it kills me.

Speed: I'm not sure she would benefit from seeing you drunk.

Katie: Well that's why you stay with her in the Hummerhome, and I go have a good time.

Speed: I don't think so.

Katie: Why not?

Speed: She's yours.

Katie: Uh yeah and she's also yours.

Speed: She came out of you.

Katie: She wouldn't have if you didn't help along the way there mister Miami.

Speed: Then we won't go with them anymore.

Katie: Okay seriously, is the while shirt going to your head? ...THAT'S NOT EVEN A DRESS SHIRT! WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH YOU!

Speed: Will you stop yelling, this is a hospital.

Katie: That's it, when we get to the Hummerhome I'm dressing you. OKAY YOU'RE NOT EVEN WEARING JEANS!

Speed: *angry sigh*

Katie: Sorry. But if we're going to be back in Miami, you are wearing the dress shirts and jeans.

Speed: I'm not allowed to wear jeans at work.

Katie: You are now bucko. And just for the record, just because you're a dad, doesn't mean you have to dress like a garbage man.

Speed: I'm not.

Katie: Hey Lori, is he a garbage man?

Lori: *shakes head*

Katie: Even she's against me.

Lori: CSI!

Speed: *stops walking*

Katie: ...Okay that was cool.

Hummerhome

Carly: KATIE! *hugs Katie*

Katie: Ow.

Jess: KATIE! *hugs Katie*

Katie: Ah!

JC: KATIE! *hugs Katie*

Katie: Wow so many people, so little time.

Horatio: *turns key* We have to head out of here.

Delko: YAY! We're going back to Miami!

Katie: *sits on couch*

Lori: *sits on Katie's lap* Momma better!

Katie: HECK YES! Tim, for the love of God just p-

Speed: I know, I know. *leaves*

Katie: Thank you. Geez.

Carly: Okay I have to tell you. Lori is the cutest kid EVER!

Katie: Aw.

Delko: I wanted to hug her everytime she did something.

Katie: YAY! And by the way, no more Cheez-its.

Carly: ...

Delko: ...

Katie: Tim told me.

Delko: How did he know?

Katie: I don't know.

Lori: CHEEZ-ITS!

Katie: No.

Lori: *sigh*

Katie: Okay fine.

Carly: *hands over Cheez-its*

Lori: HEE! *digs in bag*

Katie: Man I can't say no to her.

Lori: *munches on Cheez-its*

Katie: *hugs Lori* Man I could just squeeze her.

Delko: I hope she never grows up.

Katie: Me too.

Speed: *walks over, sits* Happy.

Katie: ...It's brown.

Speed: Close enough.

Katie: Uh...WHERE IS THE SPIKEY HAIR!

Speed: *rolls eyes*

Katie: Seriously.

Speed: *yanks hair up* Happy?

Katie: Yes.

Lori: *gives Cheez-it to Speed*

Speed: ...I thought she wasn't allowed to have any.

Katie: I um...Sort of let her.

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: What? She's cute.

Speed: Yeah I know that. It's her weapon of choice.

Katie: She's just a little kid, let her have what she wants.

Speed: So if she wants a car, are you going to just buy one for her?

Katie: ...No.

Speed: Exactly.

Katie: They're just Cheez-its. It's not a car.

Lori: *looks at Speed*

Speed: ...*sigh* Fine.

Lori: *smiles*

Katie: HA! We win.

TBC........
 
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Haha, Geni you crack me up.

Speed: I'm not sure she would benefit from seeing you drunk.
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Yeah, I'm not so sure that she should see that either. lol.

Katie: Well that's why you stay with her in the Hummerhome, and I go have a good time.

Speed: I don't think so.

Katie: Why not?

Speed: She's yours.

Katie: Uh yeah and she's also yours.

Speed: She came out of you.

Katie: She wouldn't have if you didn't help along the way there mister Miami.
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Teehee, Mr. Miami I missed that. lol. And its true I didn't do it all by myself.

Lori: *sits on Katie's lap* Momma better!

Katie: HECK YES! Tim, for the love of God just p-

Speed: I know, I know. *leaves*
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I love how I won't his clothes situation go.

Speed: *walks over, sits* Happy.

Katie: ...It's brown.

Speed: Close enough.

Katie: Uh...WHERE IS THE SPIKEY HAIR!

Speed: *rolls eyes*

Katie: Seriously.

Speed: *yanks hair up* Happy?

Katie: Yes.
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Teehee, he gives in so easily. But of course I probably wouldn't have let it go until he gave in and changed.

Katie: What? She's cute.

Speed: Yeah I know that. It's her weapon of choice.
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That is so true. lol.

Great update Geni. Were all back together again. Lori's obsessed with Cheez its. Speed has the spikey hair and a dress shirt on and I'm not dead. The world is good. Update soon please!
 
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AHHHH Black dress shirts! *faints*

haha wow Geni, you've been busy with the updates....then again I slept in until 1:30 so that was a pretty big time span but yay! Katie's back! haha And awwwwww, Lori's so cute! So now we're all heading back to Miami huh? I wonder if you guys will pick up a case there....But then again Katie wants to have fun so we'll let the senior CSI's handle the case and we can go get drunk hahaha. Great updates Geni, I love waking up to them!
 
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You know what I find ironically hilarious? I hate writing fics. I like reading them. :lol: Now I officially have no idea what I'm doing. :p (Just kiddin' around) ...But seriously, I like reading fics more than writing them. Not that I don't like writing this one, because I do. Erm...Sorry if that didn't make any sense. I've had too much pepsi. :rolleyes:

On A Tangent

Hummerhome, noon

Hummerhome stops

Calleigh: Why did we stop?

Horatio: Well I would go THROUGH the traffic jam, but I'd end up killing a lot of people.

Delko: Maybe someone got a flat tire. Just go around.

Horatio: Looks like there's a bus up there.

Delko: So there's an animal on the road, and the Japanese tourists are taking pictures. Go around.

Horatio: *turns around*

Delko: ...Sorry.

Horatio: *puts on shades* I'm going to go check it out. *leaves*

Calleigh: *leaves*

Delko: Great, that means I have to go too. *leaves*

Speed: *gets up*

Katie: Where are you going?

Speed: I'm bored.

Katie: What if you die?

Speed: I'm not going to die. *leaves*

Katie: Great, he's dead.

Carly: If he dies I get his badge!

Down the highway, near bus

Horatio: *looks up* Doesn't look like there's any damage.

Delko: So why are they just sitting here?

Calleigh: Maybe the engine broke down.

Speed: *looks around*

Horatio: *walks forward*

Delko: The windows are tinted.

Calleigh: *laughs* Yeah it's a bus Eric.

Speed: *tilts head*

Calleigh: You see something?

Speed: You hear that?

Calleigh: ...Crying?

Delko: There's probably children on the bus, it's common.

Speed: *looks up*

Horatio: *goes up to knock on door*

Speed: H.

Horatio: *looks at Speed*

Speed: *shakes head*

Delko: What do you see?

Speed: *takes out gun*

Delko: Great, we're doomed. He sees something.

Horatio: *takes out gun, knocks on door*

Man: *opens door*

Horatio: *pointing gun at guy* Good afternoon.

Man: *takes out gun*

Horatio: Do you really want to find out which one of us is faster?

Man: This bus is going down to Miami.

Horatio: Tell me why you're going down there partner.

Man: *frowns*

Horatio: Mhm, I can see by the orange jump suit under your clothes, that you're an inmate.

Man: You don't need to cause no trouble.

Horatio: How about you let these people go.

Man: No can do Moses, I have a schedule to keep.

Horatio: Alright. How about my team and I check out these people, and then we'll let you go.

Man: No way. You're a cop.

Horatio: Is there any more of you here?

Man: No.

Horatio: Lying wouldn't be a good thing right now.

Man: I got two other guys with me.

Horatio: Are they in the back?

Man: Why don't you go find out.

Horatio: Thank you. *walks on bus*

Calleigh: *walks up*

Man: *smiles* No one said you had a pretty lady cop with you.

Calleigh: Quiet.

Man: Ooh feisty.

Speed: *walks up, looks around*

People on bus, staring at them

Delko: Oh boy.

Five men walk out of the back with tech 9s

Horatio: *lifts gun*

Guy1: GET ON THE GROUND!

Horatio: ...Guys...

Guy2: DROP THE GUNS!

Horatio: *nods*

Calleigh, Speed, and Eric drop guns

Horatio: Get on the floor.

CSIs kneel on the floor

Delko: Thanks H, this was the best idea you've ever had.

Calleigh: Shut up Eric.

Guy3: You, what's your name.

Delko: Eric.

Guy3: And you! What's yours.

Speed: Bite me.

Guy3: *points gun in Speed's face* Alright looks like you want to die first.

Speed: You could always die instead.

Guy3: *cocks gun*

Speed: *stares at gun*

Delko: *whispers* Yeah way to go Speed, that was smart.

Calleigh: Don't kill him!

Guy3: And why not?

Calleigh: He...Uh...

Speed: *frowns*

Calleigh: He has a little girl.

Guy3: Does he. Well then. *nods*

Two guys leave

Guy3: This bus ride is going to be more fun than I imagined.

Speed: What are they doing?

Guy3: They're going to bring your 'little girl' here so she can watch you die.

Horatio: You don't need to do this.

Guy3: When we get this bus back up and running, you're all coming with us. Got it?

Guys walk in with Lori

Guy2: There was people in that giant...Bus thing.

Guy3: Did they put up a fight?

Guy1: Are you kidding? The guns shut them up. I had to smack the mother though.

Speed: *looks up*

Horatio: ...Speed, stay put.

Guy3: *grabs Lori* She's cute.

Lori: *giggles*

Guy3: Well guys, welcome to your worst nightmare.

TBC.........
 
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haha whoa, I just yelled really REALLY loud! lol.

Delko: Thanks H, this was the best idea you've ever had.
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Yeah, seriously H man I don't think it can get any better! lol


Guy1: Are you kidding? The guns shut them up. I had to smack the mother though.

Speed: *looks up*

Horatio: ...Speed, stay put.
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Ohhhhhh....don't make Speed angry. You won't like it when he's angry. And...wow I just got that from the Hulk. lol. And whoa I come out of a coma, my daughter gets taken from me, my husband gets a gun pointed at him and I get smacked across the face. I am so loving this day. lol. I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh and that guy calling Horatio "Moses" was just hilarious. Update soon please!
 
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OMG NO H AND AND AND SPEED AND CALLIEGH AND ... ERIC I GUESS LOL OMG NO THIS CAN'T HAPPEN PLEASE TELL ME WE WILL COME TO THE RESCUE I AM GONNA GO KAMI KAZI FOR FUDGE SAKES OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG AHHHHH CAN'T BREATH H!!! NO WE MUST COME TO THE RESCUE!!!! *deep sigh* okay i think i can breath now
 
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OMG what with the world!! Why are they always bad guys out there :p
It was a great update Geni . And update soon please.
 
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Imagine that just getting out of the hospital, getting smacked by some lunitic, having your daughter taken away from you and Speed has a gun pointed at his face. Can I just say something Geni you certainly know how to keep the suspense up in this story! :)

thanks for the updates, hope there are more soon. :D
 
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what the... :p don't touch kiddo, only over my .. my .. very alive body! :lol:
i should be better go sleep but i can't, i wanna know! :D
aah, school can wait! :devil: *takes popcorn*
 
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Breathe Jaci, breathe. :lol:

And the drama just doesn't stop with these guys. I guess we can call this thread 'action-packed' now. ;)

And thanks calleighspeedle. :D :D

And yes, the RT trumps school. :p

Goin' Out On The Last Stand

Bus

Guy3: Take the hostages, and put them on that..Hummer bus thing. Leave the rest of these guys here.

Guy1: Come on.

People get up, walks off bus

Horatio: You're letting them go.

Guy3: We don't need that many dead people on the bus. Blood tends to smell if it's sitting in the sun.

Horatio: No one needs to die.

Guy3: They teach you that in the academy?

Horatio: They told us we could kill the bad guys.

Guy3: How heroic.

Lori: Where's momma.

Guy3: You're not going to ever see her again.

Lori: *rubs eye* I want momma.

Guy3: Kids just don't understand things these days.

Horatio: Let her go.

Guy3: Don't you tell me what to do red.

Horatio: My name isn't red.

Guy3: *points gun at Horatio* You want to go too?

Lori: *starts to cry*

Guy3: SHUT UP KID!

Lori: *crying, reaches out* Daddy!

Speed: *stares at Lori*

Lori: *starts to scream*

Guy3: SHUT UP! *slaps Lori*

Lori: *screams* DADDY!

Speed: *frowns* You son of a b-

Horatio: *warning tone* Speed...

Lori: *crying*

Guy3: QUIET!

Lori: *bites guy*

Guy3: OW! *cocks gun*

Speed: *stands up*

Guy3: *points gun at Speed* One move and you're dead.

Speed: *stops*

Lori: *snifs*

Horatio: Speed, sit down.

Speed: *glares*

Horatio: ...Speed. Sit down.

Speed: *staring at guy* I can't do that.

Guy3: Why don't you listen to your boss.

Speed: If you hurt her, I'll kill you.

Guy3: Yeah? You and what gun?

Speed: I don't need a gun to kill you.

Guy3: Gee, I'm shaking in my boots.

Speed: I'm only going to warn you once.

Guy3: You kill me, they shoot you.

Speed: *smirks* You picked the wrong kid to take hostage.

Guy3: Did I.

Delko: *lifts hand* I KNOW THIS ONE!

Calleigh: Shh, Eric.

Delko: Sorry.

Guy3: You know, I got a kid. He's seven.

Speed: Congratultions.

Guy3: I'd probably fight to the death for him too.

Speed: Wonderful. Give me my daughter or my foot is going to be so far up your ass, you won't be able to sit down for the rest of your life.

Guy3: *nods* Alright.

Speed: *grabs Lori*

Lori holds onto Speed's neck

Guy3: We're leaving in ten minutes. Get comfortable. *walks away*

Speed: *sits down*

Lori: *hugs Speed*

Delko: I've got to hand it to you, you've got some guts.

Speed: *frowns*

Horatio: Let's find a way out of here.

TBC.........
 
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OMG AT LEAST SPEED GOT POOR LORI BACK BUT WHAT ARE THEY GONNA DO WITH THE REST OF US AND THE EVER SO WONDERFUL HUMMER HOME WHO WILL RESCUE US OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I CAN'T BELEIVE THIS WHY GENI WHY???? CAN'T BREATH GOING NUMB FALLING OFF CHAIR *oooff* THAT HURT *sigh* okay i have to get ready for work lol.
 
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Awwwwwwwww! Speed fighting for his little Lori awww! How cute!

Guy3: SHUT UP! *slaps Lori*

Lori: *screams* DADDY!

Speed: *frowns* You son of a b-
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Dang it! He never gets to swear!

Speed: *smirks* You picked the wrong kid to take hostage.

Guy3: Did I.

Delko: *lifts hand* I KNOW THIS ONE!
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Oh man gotta love Delko and his moments to say things. lol. But ohhhhh that guy slapped Lori and and and she bit him! Heck yes! Update soon please!!!
 
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Speed is fighting for his little girl good for him!!! I hope he kicks the bad guys ass!!!!!!!!!
 
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