CSI:Miami Road Trip: Seven Years of Bad Luck & Counting

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Oooo, the everglades...Geez, Lana is a bit of a loose cannon ;) I kinda half expected Speedy to shoot Colin, but now I feel kinda sorry for him...poor guy. But then again, he did torture Lori...so now I don't know who to feel about him. Hmmm.

Carly: Australians have big appetites.

Jess: Yeah I can tell. You're like...Like....

Carly: If you say Dingo, I'll hurt you.
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Hee. Dingoes are so cute!...granted they're viscious, but they're so cute!

Oh man, that entire chapter with the mood swings (haha, mood mooooooo :lol:) was hilarious...
Carly: *crying* I just feel so alone, and so sad, and so alone, and so sad, and alone, and sad, and it's making me feel so ALONE! *falls to the floor, crying*

Speed: *looks around*

Carly: And...And...And...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! *starts kicking and screaming*

Speed: And you're how old?

Carly: FOUR YEARS YOUNGER THAN YOU!
Speed: Uh...

Carly: *stands, shoves Speed against wall* YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IT'S LIKE TO FEEL LIKE YOU'RE CONSTANTLY BLOATED!

Speed: Um yeah because you have little people inside of you.

Carly: MY FEET ARE SWOLLEN AND MY BOOBS ARE BIGGER! I'M GOING TO GET STUCK IN A FENCE! I DON'T WANT TO BE JESS!

Speed: *blank stare*
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Awww, poor Jess. And poor me by the sounds of it...yikes.
Carly: *sigh* Good brother. *strokes Speed's chest* You're my favorite brother.
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Ok...that sounded really creepy. Good thing he's not actually my brother or it would be wrong on so many different levels :lol:
Carly: *starts to cry* I need a hug from a Speedle. EVERYONE WHO IS A SPEEDLE LIFT YOUR HAND!

Katie: ...*lifts hand*

Speed: ...*lifts hand*

Carly: *hugs Katie* TIM GET OVER HERE TOO!

Speed: *walks over, sits down*

Carly: *hugs Speed* Ah, my Speedles.
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AWWW, 'my Speedles' thats so cute!!!! Hee. It's like drunk Katie, but it's Hormonal Carly :lol:

and that thing with Uno was weird, because everytime me and my friends are at someones house, I always try to get them to play Uno, but no-one likes it...

and oh! I want a title too! well, I sorta have one because I'm the only Aussie and there are so many Australian cliches to go with that...Dingoes, Vegemite, Koalas, Emus...ah, the cliches :lol:

please update soon
 
Wow Geni your fingers must of been on fire LOL, wow so many updates so much to take in and with all that happened. Jess knowing things about the nuerotoxin that was taken and poor Lori and Eric being taken because of her knowledge. Hahaha and Carly and her eating all the hotdogs cause she was so hungry and worrying about getting her boobs stuck in something again cause they have gotten bigger and her mood swings now those are hilarious. *sigh* ....*tries to take a breath of air* Okay I think those rips I cracked last time just got reinjured *runs off to mom to be taped up again* GEEZ NOW HOW DO... oops caps lock ... I explain this at school LOL. Anyway great work and I can't wait for more!!!
 
I should have more this afternoon. :D

Whew, my fingers were on fire. That's where boredom and an overactive imagination get you these days. :p Anyway, thanks for the wonderful reviews!
 
Whew, my fingers were on fire. That's where boredom and an overactive imagination get you these days. Anyway, thanks for the wonderful reviews!
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Okay so now put your fingers under cold water and write a sequel , NOW :lol: Just kidding , i can't wait to read more and it looks like i'm not the only one ;)
 
Delko: *lifts Speed's sleeves* ...You're high.
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And he's back on the drugs! This is not good!
Delko: *rubs head* If your gun aim was as good as your shoe aim, you'd never get shot.
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Oh, poor Delko's getting pelted with shoes! *hugs* He's right though! *hides*
Katie: *narrows eyes* You know we can always go to my hometown and you can meet my family.

Speed: *blank stare* ...Find a marker, find a marker.
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What is it with guys and meeting the in-laws? Sheesh!
Horatio: How about this. Speed, get the tire from the roof. Calleigh, hold the tire iron. I'll see if I can flag down some help. *walks away*
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I'm getting a strage sense of Deja Vu! RT 1 god that was a really long time ago.
Horatio is seen on the floor, in pool of blood. Delko is tied up and is lying on the floor, gagged
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OH MY GOD! NO! THIS IS SO NOT GOOD!
Speed: The Everglades.
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It's always the everglades! Oh! I can't wait to see what happens next!
 
GO GENI! You were on fire last night! Man, I'm glad that Colin let Lori and Delko go, but now Lori is gone, and it's all my fault! *cries* Awww, Eric is so adorable though, gotta love him. And I knew that the Lana girl was bad from the moment I read her name. But man, all that toxin stuff has got my eyes crossed Geni lol, you must get an A in chemestry! lol. Oh my gosh I hope they find Lori for both Speed and my sake lol. I don't want to have to be killed lol. But anyway, great job, can't wait for more!

:lol: Jess you make me laugh.
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*Brushes off shoulders* My job here is done :D
 
Oh, geni I don't even know where to start honestly.

First I heared a noise and for once it wasn't the wubba monster or Delko it was actual bad guys! Go me! lol. And aww Timmy got knocked out and Lori's being held at gun point and Delko got kidnapped and Jess is...doing stuff. lol. I read all these updates this morning and it made me late. lol. But eh who cares about that. lol. Can't wait for more Geni!
 
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Okay so now put your fingers under cold water and write a sequel , NOW Just kidding , i can't wait to read more and it looks like i'm not the only one
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:lol: Just your luck, my fingers are freezing. :p

Carly you will get a title..Hmm..*thinks of Australian cliches*

Hearing The Angel's Voices

The Everglades

Lana: Come on. *grabs Lori*

Lori: Let me go!

Lana: Shut up!

Lori: No!

Lana: *puts gun to Lori's head* Alright, you can die right now.

Lori: Fine. Kill me because I'm not helping you.

Lana: Not yet. *drags Lori*

Large warehouse

Lana: Antonio.

Antonio: Jessica tried calling me again.

Lana: I hope you didn't answer.

Antonio: No. We've led them into the trap perfectly.

Lori: What trap?

Lana: Oh you didn't know? I'm the head of the Ángeles oscuros.

Lori: What?

Lana: Who do you think could have stolen the neurotoxin my dear.

Lori: *looks around*

Lana: And now we need to test it on a subject.

Antonio: *grabs Lori*

Lori: *screams*

Antonio: *grabs needle*

Lana: By tomorrow, we'll have it all in gaseous form. Then my plan will be complete.

Lori: Why are you doing this?

Lana: Just because I can.

Antonio: *grabs Lori's arm*

Lori: *kicks Antonio*

Antonio: AH! *falls backward*

Lana: Guards!

Men: *run over*

Lori: *runs*

Lana: *points gun at Lori, pulls trigger*

BOOM, BOOM, BOOM

Lori: *ducks, runs*

Lana: GET HER!

Men: *run*

Lori: *runs outside*

Outside, near bushes and water

Lori: *running*

Men: *running*

Man1: *grabs Lori*

Lori: *screams*

Man2: *punches Lori in the face*

Lori: *falls*

Man3: *kicks Lori*

Lori: *groans*

Man1: *pulls out gun*

Sirens are heard in the distance

Man1: *points gun at Lori*

Speed: HEY!

Man1: *looks up*

Speed: *pulls trigger*

BOOM, BOOM

Man1: *falls, dies*

Other men run away

Speed: *runs over* Lori, Lori can you hear me?

Lori: *holding face*

Speed: Lori, look at me.

Lori: *passes out*

Click is heard

Speed: *stares at ground*

Antonio: *has gun to Speed's head* Get up slowly.

Speed: *stands*

Antonio: Turn around.

Speed: *turns to face Antonio*

Antonio: You ready to die for her?

Speed: *frowns*

Antonio: Move out of the way.

Speed: You're going to have to shoot me.

Antonio: Alright.

Colin: *runs up, injects Antonio with neurotoxin*

Antonio: AH! *stumbles to the ground, convulses, dies*

Speed: *looks at Colin*

Colin: *looks at Speed*

Speed: Thanks.

Colin: No problem.

Speed: Does my boss have the place surrounded?

Colin: Lana just shot herself in the head.

Speed: *nods*

Colin: Is she okay?

Speed: I think so.

Colin: *walks away*

Lori: *holding head, sits up* Ow.

Speed: *kneels* Lori, are you alright?

Lori: Ow.

Speed: *hugs Lori*

Lori: Oof.

TBC...............
 
Oh thank the good RT lord they found her, now Tim won't beat me up haha. Damn, that girl was a BEEATCH hahaha. I'm glad she committed suicide, and GO COLIN! WOOOO He sure does know how to handle a needle lol. Wow, I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work Geni!
 
Awww how cute was that ending. Colin helped Timmy aww *sniff* And heck yes go Lori for being all kick ass. I'm sorry but I loved that kid. Loved her when she was little and I love how she's all stubborn and sarcastic and awesome now. lol. Update soon please!
 
Colin: Lana just shot herself in the head.
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Coward. OH GOD! Suspenseful much?!?! I was on the edge of my seat, going 'OMG! Geni wouldn't actually kill of Lori! She's the only Speedle child to make it this far!' Okay, must remember to breathe! Good job Geni, you are my HERO!
 
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