CSI:Miami Road Trip: Seven Years of Bad Luck & Counting

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Huh..well...that was one interesting conversation. See Speed doesn't need to talk because I can talk enough for the both of us. But of course I'm sure after awhile he would start to get annoyed. And its true, I admit it I am a pasty white american. I should try a tanning bed...huh..anyways! I think my favorite part of my ramblings was the whole fruit loop bird part. lol. Update soon please.
 
:lol: I love Katie ramblings. They're so awesome and so..Random. :D

Tugging At My Hair, Trying To Keep My Cool

Lab, next day

Delko: Now can we go into the Hummerhome?

Calleigh: I'm not Horatio. Go talk to him.

Delko: But he'll just get back and walk away.

Calleigh: No he won't.

Delko: You're second in charge. Can I ask you?

Calleigh: You already did.

Delko: And?

Calleigh: And I told you we aren't leaving yet.

Delko: *snaps* I knew it.

Calleigh: What, did you think 'we're not leaving' was code for 'pack your things'?

Delko: ...Maybe.

Halls

Yelina: Horatio, I was trying to find you.

Horatio: You got any information?

Yelina: I spoke personally to the officer who recieved the leaked information. He said it was definitely an American.

Horatio: Alright, did he give you a description?

Yelina: Tall, dark haired, five o'clock shadow.

Horatio: Well we know of one American who fits the bill don't we?

Yelina: He told me he coerced Mara into giving him the information.

Horatio: Yes but remember he's had to learn to manipulate to get what he wants. Mara didn't have anything to do with it.

Yelina: You think he's the leak.

Horatio: I think he wanted to come home.

Yelina: Where is he now?

Horatio: He said he was going out for lunch.

Yelina: *nods*

McDonalds

Lori: *looking down at register* Can I get the next person in line please!

Speed: *walks up* What's the manager doing at a till?

Lori: Short staffed. What's your order?

Speed: I don't want to buy anything.

Lori: *lifts head* ...

Speed: Well you've certainly aged better than I have.

Lori: Bobby!

Bobby: Yeah boss?

Lori: Take this till.

Bobby: But I'm cooking the Nuggets.

Lori: Get away from the Nuggets and help the customers.

Bobby: Fine.

Lori: *takes off apron, walks out from behind counter*

Outside

Speed: You're probably angry at me, right?

Lori: Cautious, is the term I use.

Speed: I'm sorry I lied.

Lori: You had to do what you thought was right.

Speed: *nods*

Lori: You look good.

Speed: So do you.

Lori: ...

Speed: ...

Lori: ...Well, now that you've made your appearance, I have to get back to work.

Speed: Lori...

Lori: What.

Speed: *hugs Lori*

Lori: *closes eyes*

Speed: I love you.

Lori: *sigh*

Speed: *lets go* You should get back to work.

Lori: *nods*

Speed: *stares at Lori*

Lori: See you later.

Speed: ...

Lori: *walks back into building*

Speed: *frowns*


TBC..................
 
Awww poor Delko just wants to go on a road trip. lol. And awwwww you know how much I love the father daughter moments. Teehee. But oh man that bobby kid needs to step away from the Mcnuggets I don't care if he's eating them or just cooking them that's not healthy. lol. Update soon please.
 
:lol: Hey now, even if they're not healthy, they're still cheap and YUMMY. :p

Okay so that's just my preference.

Left To Cry

McDonalds

Lori: *punching numbers in the till*

Woman: Okay so I'll take two double cheeseburgers.

Lori: Is that everything for you today?

Woman: No girl, I'm not finished. Okay so two double cheeseburgers and three large fries.

Lori: Alright so that's four double cheeseburgers and three l-

Woman: No, I said two.

Lori: You said two, and then you said two again.

Woman: I was repeating my order.

Lori: Sorry.

Woman: Boy the service these days. Okay so two double cheeseburgers and three large fries. I want two extra large fries with that, and four Pepsis.

Lori: I'm sorry we don't sell Pepsi here.

Woman: What kind of voodoo screwed up store is this?

Lori: We sell coke, ma'am.

Woman: Coke? You think I want to buy coke? Is this a sting?

Lori: *mumbles* It should be.

Woman: What did you say girl?

Lori: I said I'm sorry.

Woman: Anyway, so four cokes then.

Lori: Okay so that's two double cheesburgers, five large fries, and four cokes.

Woman: Oh do you have those McMuffins?

Lori: We only sell them in the morning.

Woman: Why?

Lori: This is supper time.

Woman: Girl I know what time it is. I want a McMuffin.

Lori: I'm sorry we only sell them in the morning.

Woman: Make me one now.

Lori: Ma'am, we can't start making them now.

Woman: Why is some kind of retro lightening bolt gonna come down and strike ya?

Lori: No, bu-

Woman: Then make me my damn McMuffin, girl.

Lori: *frowns* I'm sorry we don't make them until the morning.

Woman: Pfft, cancel my order. I don't want to buy here. *leaves*

Teen: *walks up* Hey.

Lori: *sigh* Hey.

Teen: Can I get two coffees please?

Lori: Sure. Two coffees, is that all?

Teen: ...*leans closer to the counter* You guys don't sell cigarettes here do you?

Lori: Ew no. Get out of here.

Teen: Fine. *leaves*

Man: *walks up*

Lori: Can I take your order sir?

Man: GIVE ME TWO SECONDS! GEEZ I JUST GOT HERE!

Lori: I'm sorry.

Man: I want a big bacon classic with large fries. And I want it biggie sized.

Lori: Sir, that's Wendy's.

Man: *narrows eyes* I want my meal BIGGIE SIZED.

Lori: Sir you want to go down the street. This is McDonalds.

Man: Pfft, terrible service. *walks away*

Lori: Next.

Woman: Hey I was next.

Kid: Bite me lady, I was in line for ten minutes.

Man: Fast food my ass! Where's my Nuggets!

Kid: Where's my crispy chicken sandwhich?

Woman: I want my fries!

Man: You missed my order.

Lori: ...*stares at crowd of people*

People: *screaming left and right*

Lori: ...Excuse me. *leaves*

Back room

Lori: *takes off apron, sits in chair*

Bobby: *walks in* Hey boss, there's a large angry crowd of people out there.

Lori: I know.

Bobby: Are you okay?

Lori: I just need to take a breather.

Bobby: ...You just had one two hours ago.

Lori: Well I need another one.

Bobby: Oh...

Lori: *banging head on table* I. Hate. This. Job.

Bobby: Well Lori you hang in there. You gotta stay strong for the McDonalds corp.

Lori: *lifts head*

Bobby: What?

Lori: *starts to cry*

Bobby: ...Oh...Crying woman...Awkward.

Lori: *crying*

Bobby: *pats Lori's back* Just stay strong Lor.

Lori: I'm trying.

Bobby: One time I got a customer who was telling me how his wife fell off a cliff and rolled all the way down.

Lori: Why are you telling me this?

Bobby: It cheered me up.

Lori: ...Well thanks for your twisted views on humor but that's not going to help.

Bobby: I think that guy was a bartender too. He said he told the story to this guy he met who missed his wife. The guy was plastered, and I mean WHACKED OUT of his mind. Apparently he was singing the 'Cops' theme.

Lori: So?

Bobby: Well, the bartender dude was telling me that even though this guy didn't think he could go on, he still made it to the front door. He said most people would have passed out.

Lori: Maybe he could hold his liquor.

Bobby: If the drunk cop could make it, so can you Lori.

Lori: ...You never said he was a cop.

Bobby: Well apparently he was. The bartender told me he kept screaming "Katie!" all dramatic-like.

Lori: ...

Bobby: What?

Lori: *starts to laugh*

Bobby: What did I say?

Lori: Thanks that cheered me up.

Bobby: Awesome. So you going back into the crowd?

Lori: No. I'm going home.

Bobby: Already?

Lori: Yeah. *stands* You know...That guy the bartender was talking about.

Bobby: Yeah.

Lori: ....*laughs* Nevermind. *leaves*

Bobby: ...Okay.

TBC.................
 
Hahaha oh man as I was reading that I was like "Hey didn't that bartenders wife do that?" and then I read on and found out that it was. Teehee. Awww I remember Drunk Speed he was....emotional. lol. But aww poor lori I give her props for working at a fast food place and keeping her temper in check. Update soon please.
 
:lol: Ah man I remember that chapter. Those were the days I tell ya.

Feel Invisible To You

Layout room, next day

Horatio: Alright people, let's get started.

Katie: ...On what?

Speed: *points to map* This group got away.

Katie: ...Are you saying that to me, or Horatio?

Horatio: You have any contact with this group?

Speed: Yeah I killed one of their officers.

Horatio: Okay. Did any of them talk to you is what I want to know.

Speed: Well they said a few things to me of which would be inapropriate to repeat.

Horatio: This group, Megan found out, is heading for Miami in two weeks.

Speed: We should stop them before they even get on a plane. They won't just get Miami.

Horatio: Is that what they said?

Speed: They didn't have to say anything, I saw their maps.

Horatio: How did you get in?

Speed: You mean before the Columbian military blew the hell out of their outposts?

Horatio: That would be a good place to start, yes.

Speed: I was able to get in through this entry. *tilts head* Well, what's left of it.

Horatio: And what did you see?

Speed: A map of North America. There were red pins going all the way up to Canada. Those were the kill zones.

Horatio: Anything else?

Speed: Yellow pins. Those seemed to my recollection to be safe havens.

Horatio: For the group.

Speed: Yeah it's a damn shame they were the ones who got away too, because they were the most organized. Beautiful women in that group too.

Katie: *narrows eyes*

Horatio: Okay, we'll keep tabs on them. Do you remember where their first hit was?

Speed: Miami.

Horatio: Okay. I have to go check some things with Yelina, I'll be back. *leaves*

Speed: *reading map*

Katie: *crosses arms*

Speed: *highlighting areas*

Katie: *taps foot*

Speed: *drawing lines*

Katie: *angry sigh*

Speed: *writing things down*

Katie: Lori told me you went to see her.

Speed: *erasing lines*

Katie: ...Did you go deaf in Columbia?

Speed: *looking at map*

Katie: Great, I'm married to a mute.

Speed: *writes things down*

Katie: ...

Speed: *writing*

Katie: At least say something....Please.

Speed: You're in my light.

Katie: *frowns*

Speed: *grabs highligher*

Katie: *takes map, rips it up*

Speed: *looks up at Katie*

Katie: *staring at Speed*

Speed: *kneels, picking up map pieces*

Katie: I'm sorry.

Speed: *stands*

Katie: I'll...Buy you a new map or something.

Speed: *puts map on table*

Horatio: *walks in* Hey...What happened to the map?

Speed: It was my fault.

Horatio: Anyway, Yelina spoke to the coast guard. They're setting up checkpoints tomorrow. I'm going to go see if I can get a new map. *leaves*

Katie: It's times like these I wish we were fighting. At least there was some sort of a two-way conversation.

Speed: *throws map away*

Katie: ...

Speed: ...

Katie: I don't even know what to say.

Speed: Now you know how I feel.

Katie: ...Why?

Speed: Over the past month, I had been thinking of what I was going to say to you when I got back. I had this scenario running through my mind all the time. And then I actually got back, I couldn't even say I loved you. And I wanted to, so many times after I got back. I just wanted to hold you.

Katie: ...What's stopping you?

Speed: *hugs Katie*

Katie: *hugs Speed*

Speed: *clears throat* You have no idea how much I love you.

Katie: Well if the fact that you're squeezing the living daylights out of me is any indication...

Speed: *laughs*

Katie: Please come home.

Speed: *nods* Okay.

TBC.................
 
AWWWW! That is so sweet! :D Awww, yay, Speedy's ok. And Lori is so cute, with her job...woah, Lori is 18? She's older than me aswell :lol: Thats so weird...and I remember that bartender story. Ah, that was hilarious. And geez, Bobby needs to stay away from the McNuggets...I agree with Katie, I'd be going for the burgers and fries, not the nuggets...

Awwww, that last chapter was so cute! please update soon
 
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW How adorable is that? I'm glad Speed finally said something, and now we know the reason behind him not talking at all. That was SO cute how he said that about the whole scenario thing and all that! Tatie is so adorable.....I love it! You're doing an amazing job Geni, update soon, and Merry Christmas!
 
Ohhhhh I ripped up the map. I'm glad he didn't get all creeper on me. lol. But awwww that chapter was very cute. He had a whole scenrio and everything. lol. Well I'm sure if I was off in another country I'd have a scenerio too. Update soon please.
 
Man somehow I can just picture Katie ripping up the map and huffin' and puffin' and Speed just...Staring at her like "what did you just do?" :lol: ...Good times.

Belongs?

Katie's house, 6 pm

Katie: Alright, because it's your first day back here, I decided to make things look a little more WILD.

Speed: ...There's branches all over the house.

Katie: Exactly.

Speed: There weren't branches everywhere where I was staying.

Katie: What was there?

Speed: Wood...A bed...A sink.

Katie: Just...One bed?

Speed: Yeah.

Katie: But weren't there two of you?

Speed: Mara slept on the bed.

Katie: Oh so it's Mara now.

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: I was kidding. Lighten up.

Speed: I slept on the floor she slept on the bed.

Katie: Did she make any advances?

Speed: *stares blankly*

Katie: God you're so tense. *punches Speed* Don't you ever smile?

Speed: *looks down at arm*

Katie: ...You're not going to punch me back, right?

Speed: No.

Katie: *sigh* Good.

Speed: ...Is that a stuffed monkey?

Katie: I wanted to get a real one but apparently they're 'illegal' whatever that means.

Speed: *shakes head*

Katie: What is your problem? You're like a statue.

Air conditioning turns on

Speed: *flinches*

Katie: ....That was the air conditioner. It makes noise.

Speed: *looking around*

Katie: Man you need to relax.

Speed: I am relaxed.

Katie: No you're not you're...Well that's not what I would call relaxed.

Speed: Sorry.

Katie: ...You want something to eat?

Speed: Like what?

Katie: I have some roast in the fridge from last night.

Speed: You don't need to waste food on me.

Katie: ...Tim it's not a waste.

Speed: *nods*

Katie: Carly's coming over with Caitlin.

Speed: *lifts brow*

Katie: ...Her little girl...

Speed: *blank stare*

Katie: It's a human being. You know, with skin and hair and eyes...

Speed: I know what a person is.

Katie: Well you looked a little lost.

Speed: I forgot she had one of those.

Katie: One of those...You mean kids?

Speed: Yeah.

Katie: *sigh* Am I going to have to re-train you? Because it took you forever just to warm up to Lori.

Speed: It did not.

Katie: You wouldn't even hold her.

Speed: I didn't want to drop her.

Katie: It's impossible to drop a baby unless you physically let go. It's not like they're a cat that can wiggle away and scratch your face.

Speed: *frowns*

Doorbell rings

Katie: *runs over to door* SHE'S HERE WITH A LITTLE CUTIE BABY! *opens door*

Carly: Yeah because I didn't hear that at all.

Katie: Aw, look at little Caitlin. What a cutie. I want one.

Carly: Honey I think you've had enough.

Katie: Has she said her first word yet? Has she? Has she? Has she?

Carly: I think it was something along the lines of 'hi'.

Katie: AW! *squeals*

Carly: *puts Caitlin down*

Caitlin: *hides behind Carly*

Katie: AW! Don't worry I don't bite. I really don't. The only thing I eat is food and the ocassional hang nail.

Caitlin: *hides further behind Carly*

Carly: She's really shy.

Katie: AW! Look at her cute big blue eyes and her cute blonde hair and her cute little pink dress and her cute little shoes and her cute little cheeks and OH SHE'S SO CUTE!

Carly: And scared of you.

Katie: Nonsense. Kids love me.

Carly: *grabs Caitlin's hand* Come on honey.

Caitlin: MUM!

Carly: What?

Caitlin: *points to shoes*

Carly: *sigh* Alright we'll take your shoes off.

Caitlin: *sits on the floor* GO!

Carly: So I see Speed's here.

Katie: Yeah most of him is here. His normal self seems to be MIA.

Carly: *laughs* You scare him with twigs or something?

Katie: Branches.

Carly: Should have known. *pulls off Caitlin's shoes* Come on Cait, let's go have some supper.

Caitlin: OKIE! *stands*

Living room

Carly: Okay sit here.

Caitlin: *sits in chair*

Katie: You want some roast? I have more in the freezer.

Carly: Didn't you already cook roast yesterday?

Katie: I'm big on roast.

Speed: *shakes head*

Carly: Cait, stay in the chair.

Caitlin: NO.

Carly: *angry sigh* She's been doing this all week. Everytime we tell her to stay somewhere, she runs off to play.

Katie: She's a kid.

Carly: Ugh, Cait stay in the chair.

Caitlin: NO!

Carly: Stay.

Caitlin: *sticks tongue out*

Speed: HEY.

Caitlin: *stares at Speed, wide-eyed*

Speed: Better.

Katie: You know, you amaze me.

Speed: Why?

Katie: Your voice puts our kids to sleep but scares the living bajeebers out of other kids.

Speed: It's a talent I guess.

Katie: I'll go cook a roast.

Speed: *sits*

Carly: *sits* So how are you?

Speed: Fine.

Carly: How long have you been in Miami?

Speed: A while.

Carly: Sounds interesting.

Speed: Yeah.

Carly: You sure know how to light up a room with conversation don't you?

Speed: Sorry.

Caitlin: *hugs Carly's arm, whispers* Mum.

Carly: Must be great to be back.

Speed: You could say that.

Caitlin: *tugs on Carly's sleeve* Mum.

Carly: So you've been back to the lab already?

Speed: A few times.

Caitlin: *tugs Carly's sleeve* Mum.

Carly: *sigh* What.

Caitlin: *whispers*

Carly: ...

Speed: What.

Carly: She says you look like her daddy.

Speed: *frowns*

Caitlin: *staring at Speed*

Carly: Cait, he's your daddy's brother.

Caitlin: Oh...

Carly: I swear she's more curious about everything than...Curious George?

Speed: Don't worry she'll be ignoring you and slamming doors in no time.

Carly: Funny.

Katie: I CAN'T FIND THE ROAST!

Carly: So order a pizza.

Katie: ...I never thought of that.

TBC..............
 
Oh Rt Katie cracks me up. But seriously putting branches in the house? What is wrong with me? And hey if Ross can have a pet monkey then so can I. lol. Awww little Caitlin is so cute and teehee she reminded me of Lori there for a minute when she wouldn't stay on the couch. Teehe. But whats up with me and roast? I'd choose pizza anyday. lol. Update soon please.
 
Awwwww! Caitlin is so cute! Haha, she is so Australian...she says 'mum' instead of 'mom' :lol: She reminds me of Lori when she was small...all cute and curious and staring at Speed. Geez, when I said that she said that Speed looks like her daddy, I thought "Uh oh, what did I do?!"...until I realised that it was because Speedy and Joshie are brothers *smacks self on head* and geez Katie, stop scaring my kid :p but it was just so gosh darn cute!

Ah, don't worry Katie, I'd probably choose pizza aswell :p

please update soon
 
:lol: Carly you crack me up. You should be the mascot of this thread or something. You and Katie. You can wear the giant R and Katie and wear the giant T, and you can jump up and down on spot and cheer or something. :p

When You Turn Around Can You Recognize My Face

Katie's house, 8 pm

Carly: Cait, eat your food.

Caitlin: I'm done.

Carly: You're not done. You have the crust to eat.

Caitlin: *shakes head*

Carly: Cait, eat the crust. You're not getting desert if you don't.

Caitlin: *shakes head*

Speed: *sigh* I can't take it anymore. *sits beside Caitlin*

Carly: You're not going to yell at her are you?

Speed: *grabs pizza from box, turns it around* You don't like crust?

Caitlin: *shakes head*

Speed: *eats crust* Mmmm. See? It's good.

Caitlin: *covers mouth, shakes head*

Speed: It's actually better than the pizza. You mean you haven't even had the best part of the pizza?

Caitlin: *stares at Speed*

Speed: Alright here. *breaks off piece of crust* Try a bit. If you don't like it, that's fine.

Caitlin: *grabs crust*

Speed: Go ahead.

Caitlin: *eats crust*

Speed: Good?

Caitlin: *smiles*

Speed: *smirks* Good girl.

Katie: Now THAT is hot.

Speed/Carly: *look at Katie*

Katie: Uh...The pizza box. Very hot. Burned my hands.

Carly: Well, Cait you have to go wash up so we can go home. Okay?

Caitlin: *nods* Okie mum.

Carly: *grabs Caitlin's hand* Come on, go upstairs.

Cait, Carly leave

Katie: *grinning*

Speed: *frowns* What.

Katie: *giggling*

Speed: Oh geez.

Katie: *squeals*

Speed: *grabs pizza box* You going to help clean or stand there squealing?

Katie: TEEHEE!

Speed: What did you expect me to do? Grab the kid and shake her until she ate the crust?

Katie: TEEHEE!

Speed: *gives box to Katie* Take this.

Katie: TEEHEE! OH! OH!

Speed: What.

Katie: TEEHEE!

Speed: *walks into kitchen*

Katie: *follows* TEEHEE!

Speed: Stop it.

Katie: TEEHEE!

Speed: Stop.

Katie: TEEHEE!

Speed: I will make you stop.

Katie: How?

Speed: *narrows eyes*

Katie: TEEHEE! TEEHEE! *jumping up and down*

Speed: *puts pizza box in garbage* I don't even want to know what you're thinking.

Katie: That's okay I'll keep it to myself. *closes eyes*

Speed: Whatever you say. *puts dishes into sink*

Katie: ....*starts giggling*

Speed: What now.

Katie: Sorry I have a very vivid imagination.

Speed: I don't want to know.

Carly: *walks downstairs* Cait's ready to go.

Katie: YAY! I mean, well the fact that she's ready. Not that she's leaving. Because she's a guest and guests are always allowed to stay here because our house is REALLY big and empty and well I've been here alone for almost two years and man it makes you GO INSANE and haha that's okay though because well now it feels a little more full because well you and Cait are here a-

Speed: *covers Katie's mouth* Enough.

Katie: *mumbling*

Speed: *rolls eyes*

Carly: Thanks for having us over. Cait, say goodbye.

Caitlin: *waves shyly*

Katie: *waves super fast*

Speed: *winks*

Caitlin: *giggles*

Carly: Alright let's go.

Carly, Caitlin leave

Katie: *runs around the room* YOU'RE BACK! YOU'RE BACK! YOU'RE BACK! YOU'RE BACK! YOU'RE BACK! YOU ARE SO BACK!

Speed: You okay?

Katie: *jumping up and down on spot*

Speed: ...You're going to put a hole in the floor.

Katie: TEEHEE! *runs over, jumps on Speed*

Speed: AH! *falls backward*

Speed/Katie fall

Speed: Oof!

Katie: *giggling*

Speed: You are insane.

Katie: *hugging Speed* Ah you're home.

Speed: You want to get off of me?

Katie: Not really.

Speed: Katie...

Katie: Ah fine. *stands*

Speed: *stands*

Katie: TEEHEE.

Speed: Knock it off.

Katie: Fine.

Speed: Thank you.

Katie: ...*jumps on Speed's back*

Speed: AH! KATIE!

Katie: TEEHEE!

Speed: *throws Katie onto the floor*

Katie: OW! Hehe that was fun. DO IT AGAIN!

Speed: I just threw you onto the floor.

Katie: And it was fun. HA! *stands*

Speed: *shakes head*

Katie: *pushes Speed into wall*

Speed: What is your problem?

Katie: I wasn't really active when you were gone. This is my exercise.

Speed: *grabs Katie*

Katie: *screams*

Speed: *smirks*

Katie: *grinning*

Lori: *walks in* Hey, I picked up your mail and WOW am I interrupting something?

Katie: *clears throat* Not at all.

Speed: *crosses arms*

Lori: Well...Anyway, I got your mail.

Katie: Thanks. *grabs bills*

Lori: I'm going to head back to my place in a few minutes, I just wanted to ask if you were going to help me paint my apartment.

Katie: Sure, no problem.

Lori: Tim, you're welcome to help too.

Speed: *lifts brows* ...I probably have to work this weekend.

Lori: *smiles* Okay no problem. See you guys later. *leaves*

Katie: *opens mail*

Speed: ...Tim huh.

Katie: Oh stop it.

Speed: Stop what?

Katie: So she doesn't call you 'daddy' anymore. Big deal.

Speed: Yeah but Tim? It's so...Informal.

Katie: You told her that she could call you that.

Speed: Yeah but I didn't think she would actually listen. She was 14 when I told her that.

Katie: If you have a problem with it, just tell her.

Speed: I don't have a problem with it.

Katie: *nods*

Speed: ...Why does it look like I have a problem with it?

Katie: *touches Speed's chest* Let it go honey. *walks away*

Speed: I don't have a problem with it!

TBC..............


So Much For My Happy Ending

9 am, Next day, Dade Mutual Bank

Jess: Seriously, did you have to take out money this early? We have to get to a scene.

Colton: It'll only take a minute.

Jess: *sigh* Use the ATM like everyone else.

Colton: I don't want to use the ATM. It always eats my card.

Jess: So don't use a card.

Colton: How do you expect me to use an ATM then?

Jess: ...I suppose that's why we're in the bank huh.

Colton: Yeah.

Jess: I like what you've done to your hair.

Colton: ...

Jess: I'm making small talk.

Colton: ...Thanks then...I guess.

Jess: *smiles* You know who you remind me of?

Colton: Who.

Jess: A little bit of Colin Farrel and Jensen Ackles.

Colton: Uh...I don't look like them at all.

Jess: IT WAS A COMPLIMENT! Why can't you take a compliment!

Colton: Because I can't take lies as a compliment.

Jess: Oh good Lord.

Teller: Sir, can I help you?

Colton: Yes. I need to withdraw some money.

Teller: Can I have your account number please?

Colton: 889.

Teller: ...Are you sure?

Colton: Yeah. Is there a problem?

Teller: No. I was just asking if you were sure.

Guys storm in

Guy1: EVERYONE ON THE FLOOR!

Guy2: *shoots the ceiling*

People scream

Colton: *ducks*

Jess: *hides behind counter corner*

Guy1: *shooting the ceiling* WHOO! Come on boys, it's pay day!

Colton: *pulls out gun*

Jess: What are you doing?

Colton: I'm going to take him out.

Jess: There are like five of them and one of you are you insane?

Colton: Miami Dade Police! *points gun at guy*

Guy1: *points gun at Colton* Oh look at the little copper. How cute. You think you're going to save all these people with one little gun?

Jess: Colton, get back here.

Guy2: *grabs Jess*

Jess: *screams*

Colton: Let her go.

Guy1: *grabs little kid* You gotta pick, man. Either the kid dies or your partner dies.

Colton: It doesn't work that way.

Guy1: Unfortunately, you're not exactly in a position to be making the rules.

Colton: No one needs to get hurt. They'll get the money for you and you can leave.

Guy1: You think I'm here for the money? *laughs*

Jess: Colton!

Guy1: She's pretty.

Colton: *frowns* Let the kid go, and let Jess go.

Guy1: Jess huh? Hey man grab her wallet.

Guy2: *grabs Jess' wallet*

Guy1: What's the address?

Guy2: A place on the water near the edge of town.

Guy1: Well, now that I have Jess' address, I might be able to kill her after all.

Colton: You don't need to kill anyone. We want to help you get what you want.

Guy1: You don't know what I want.

Colton: Well besides money, we can get you anything.

Guy1: I want you to pick.

Colton: *lifts brow*

Guy1: Either the little kid, or your pretty cop friend.

Colton: ...

Guy1: Tick tock my man.

Colton: ...*looks at kid*

Kid: *crying*

Colton: *looks at Jess*

Jess: *staring at Colton*

Colton: ...If I pick, will you leave?

Jess: WHAT!

Guy1: Absolutely.

Colton: ...Shoot me.

Guy1: *laughs* He's funny.

Guy2: *laughing*

Guy1: What a heroic guy. Kind of reminds me of that guy in that movie with those people.

Guy2: ...Titanic?

Guy1: *looks at guy2* Does it look like I watch Chick Flicks?

Guy2: *shrugs* Hey man I liked Titanic.

Guy1: Time's up. *shoots kid*

Kid dies

Colton: *pulls trigger*

Guy1/2: *run off*

Other guys follow, sirens are heard in the distance

Colton: *runs over to kid*

Jess: Is the kid alive?

Colton: *shakes head*

Jess: ...

Horatio: *walks in* Guys? You okay?

Jess: ...

Colton: ...

Horatio: It's over.

Colton: Yeah it certainly is. *walks away*

Jess: He saved me.

Horatio: Let's get you back to the lab, Jess.

Jess: ...He used to be a criminal...And he saved me.

Horatio: Some people can change.

Jess: He was just...Such a cop, you know?

Horatio: *smirks* Let's get you somewhere safe.

Interview room

Tripp: What the hell were you doing in there? You could have gotten more people killed.

Colton: These guys rushed in with guns and we're cops. What did you expect us to do?

Tripp: It's not about what you should have done because you're a cop. You got someone killed because you used poor judgement badge or not.

Colton: I didn't have a choice!

Tripp: You get a good look at the guys or not?

Colton: No I didn't They had masks.

Tripp: So we have nothing because you went gung-ho in there and decided to be a hero.

Colton: Hey more people could have gotten hurt if I did NOTHING!

Tripp: You should have done nothing!

Horatio: *places hands on hips* Gentlemen, let's calm down for a minute. Colton, I want you to tell me what happened.

Colton: Jess and I were at the bank when these guys stormed in with guns. They were shooting the ceiling and I thought they might hurt someone.

Tripp: You THOUGHT? You're as bad as Delko.

Horatio: Frank, we're not discussing Eric right now so let's stay with the current situation.

Colton: They gave me a choice to pick the kid or Jess. I told them to shoot me but the guy went for the kid instead.

Horatio: Did you fire your weapon is what I want to know.

Colton: I did. I missed.

Horatio: Frank, go ahead.

Tripp: There was a string of robberies in the Miami area and we were close to catching these guys until you pulled a John Wayne on them and now they're in the wind. You could have cost us the entire case.

Colton: With all due respect I wasn't thinking about your case, I was thinking about the lives of innocent people.

Tripp: More people could die because of this. You ever think of that?

Colton: That's the chance I took. An officer could have died today.

Tripp: Better her than more people.

Colton: *glares*

Horatio: Okay guys, we're going to clear this up. Colton, take a walk.

Colton: Sure. *leaves*

Horatio: Frank, can we still get them.

Tripp: I don't see how. Mister cop wannabe put the entire case in jeopardy.

Horatio: You telling me you wouldn't have done the same?

Tripp: It doesn't matter what I would have done. This case could be blown to hell because he opened his big mouth. I just hope your team is as good as you say they are. *leaves*

Horatio: Me too Frank....Me too.

Halls

Calleigh: *smiles* Hey Colton, what's up?

Colton: I don't really have time to talk right now.

Calleigh: What's wrong?

Colton: Nothing. *walks away*

Calleigh: ...Okay.

Lounge

Jess: I'm still scared. I mean, those guys know where I live.

Anni: Honey, they're not going to come looking for you. They're much more interested in money.

Jess: What if they come back?

Anni: Then you have a whole bunch of friends who are going to back you up.

Jess: *nods*

Anni: Where's Colton?

Jess: I don't know.

Anni: I heard he jeopardized a case.

Jess: Really.

Anni: Yeah and if he hadn't said anything, all those hostages would have died.

Jess: Yeah.

Megan: *walks in* Jessica, I need to speak with you.

Jess: ...Why?

Megan: Officer involved shooting requires that I ask you a few questions. Stetler's with Colton now.

Jess: It wasn't his fault.

Megan: We're going to determine that. Come along.

Jess: *looks at Anni*

Anni: It's okay hun, I'll be here when you get back.

Jess: Alright. *leaves*

TBC...................
 
Jess: *sigh* Use the ATM like everyone else.

Colton: I don't want to use the ATM. It always eats my card.
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HA My mom uses that on me all the time. I always ask her why she doesn't use the ATM and she makes the excuse that it eats her card. hahaha loved that line though.

Horatio: *walks in* Guys? You okay?
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Uhm, okay, as soon as I read that line, the first word that popped into my mind was GOD hahaha is that bad? lol

Oh man, usually I like Frank, but in this chapter, he is just such an ass! I mean, sure, maybe Colton did interrupt in an investigation, but 1. He didn't know that and 2. He was trying to save the lives of the people in the bank.

Colton: That's the chance I took. An officer could have died today.

Tripp: Better her than more people.
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Uhm, REMIND ME TO SLAP HIM hahaha. Aww but Colton was sweet trying to protect all the people at the bank, and God is right, people do change. Yes, I am referring to Horatio as God from now on :p.

Whoa, those dudes have my adress........I wonder if that will be a problem in the future. But uh oh, Calleigh and Colton, looks like we're feelin some majior guilt here. Don't blame him. He's been put in a situation and he reacted, like any cop would, and now both of us are being investigated for it. Poor guy doesn't deserve it though, it's bad enough that a little boy died on him, and they're just making it worse by flaming him about it.........what morons lol. But oh boy, IAB, that should be a trip. Great job Geni, so much drama! Update soon please :D
 
Holy jeepers. Poor Colton and Jess and ohhh, Geni you capture Frank so well. Awwww that was very honorable of Colton to tell the guy to shoot him instead.

But awwww The Teehing Machine RETURNS! Teehee! lol. Dang it seriously everytime me and Speed start something someone always interrupts us. Oh well I guess it wasn't the right time. lol. Lori has her own place now? Wow time flies. Update soon please.
 
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