CSI: DuCaine

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by EmeraldEyes06, Dec 22, 2006.

  1. athens

    athens Coroner

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    That was really nice :)!!Can you two imagine that?,but of course you can! :lol: :rolleyes:

    Happy birthday Emer !! :D :D
     
  2. EyeHeartH

    EyeHeartH CSI Level One

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    Aww...too cute!!! Reminds me of 'Nerd H' :)

    I know I'm very late, but happy birthday Emer!!!
     
  3. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    *squees* I likey Hey why have them wait for home, the hummer's a perfect place to steam up <ggl>


    Naughty girl. *Poke-a-hontis*

    beautiful job Em. Post more soon. Only I'd love to see one in the at a S&M crime scene :devil: :devil:, a real steamy one (Rrated). Like I did with M/S from NY

    See how excited I get with that idea, I can't make sense :lol: :lol: :lol:
     
  4. EmeraldEyes06

    EmeraldEyes06 Lab Technician

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    Hi guys!! :)

    @ luvingmyHoratio: I would love to do that!! It would be a bit of a while down the road, but I'm going to start working on that! Thanks for the idea!!

    Here's a scene that may be all cheesy and OOC, but I had to do it!! :p Everyone remembers Emily Procter dancing around in a white bath-robe to 'Blame it on the Bossanova' in her role of Ainsley Hayes in 'The West Wing'. Well, what if Calleigh started dancing about(not in a bath-robe) to this famous track, and someone walked in? What would be their reactions?
    No copright infringement intended with the dialogue from 'The West Wing', I am borrowing the scenario for a short time, and will make no profit from it. Except comments and kind words from all my readers!! :lol: I hope you like, and there's another missing scene coming up soon!!


    Fade in:
    [INT - CRIMELAB - EVENING]


    Fade in:
    (Shot of Horatio coming out of his office.

    He walks down the corridor.

    He sees Eric.)

    HORATIO: Eric!


    Cut to:
    (Eric turning and seeing Horatio.)

    ERIC: Hey H. Heading home?

    HORATIO: Mmhmm, it's been a long day...

    ERIC: Me and Ryan are heading out for a few drinks, wann acome?

    (Horatio smiles, dipping his head.)

    HORATIO: I'll have to take a rain-check, Eric. I'm just looking for
    Calleigh...

    ERIC: I'll check Ballistics if you awnt...

    HORATIO: Thanks, Eric. Shoot!

    (He turns back to his office.)

    HORATIO: Forgot something... Catch you up in a few.

    ERIC: Okay.

    (Eric turns and walks down the corridor.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Calleigh from behind, her amrs in the air.)

    CALLEIGH: 'Blame it on the bossa nova with its magic spell...'

    (She starts swaying left and right.)

    CALLEIGH: 'Blame it on the bossa nova that he did so well...'


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Eric coming in the door.

    He looks at Calleigh with a look of disbelief.)

    ERIC: Calleigh?


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh turning around and seeing him.

    She smiles and keeps on dancing.)

    CALLEIGH: 'Oh, it all began with just one little dance
    But then it ended up a big romance...'

    ERIC: Uhh... where do I begin?

    CALLEIGH: Today was such a long day, and we finally caught Ricky Hargreaves,
    so I'm cutting loose.

    ERIC: Well, good for you. I'm just wondering if you wanna come out for drinks with
    us?

    CALLEIGH: (circling her hips) Do you think I should change my clothes?

    (She moves her hands in a flamenco-like way.)

    ERIC: Why are you moving like that?

    CALLEIGH: I'm blamin' it on the bossa nova...

    (Eric chuckles.)

    ERIC: Okay...

    (Calleigh turns from him, picking up a file folder.)

    CALLEIGH: I know what you're thinking... you've never seen me this way, but I'm letting
    you know... I am not all stiff and tense like you think I am...

    ERIC: Uhh, is that your report?

    CALLEIGH: It's the report that will put Hargreaves away for life...

    ERIC: Listen, Cal, I just wanna tell you that...

    CALLEIGH: Oh, dance Eric!

    (She dances in front of him.)


    Cut to:
    (Front shot as she dances away from Eric, her back turned.

    The door is seen over Eric's shoulder.)

    CALLEIGH: 'And we're gonna raise a family...'

    (Horatio walks in, blinking at the music.

    Eric turns and sees him, his eys widening.

    He lowers his head, trying not to laugh.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Calleigh turning around.

    She sees Horatio.)

    CALLEIGH: Aaahhh!!!

    (She throws the report in the air, pages falling around her.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Horatio looking at her.)

    HORATIO: Hey there...


    Cut back to:
    (Calleigh standing still.)

    CALLEIGH: Umm, Horatio...


    Cut back to:
    (Horatio looking around.)

    HORATIO: I never even knew we had a night-club in here.


    Cut back to:
    (Calleigh switching off the CD player.)

    CALLEIGH: Oh my God!

    ERIC: Uhh... I found her.


    Cut to:
    (Horatio ducking his head, smiling.

    He steps towards Eric.)

    HORATIO: Listen, Eric, why don't you and Ryan go ahead and order the
    first round. I just have to talk to Calleigh about the case.

    (Eric looks at Calleigh.)

    ERIC: Alright, but...

    HORATIO: We won't be long.

    (Eric nods.)

    ERIC: Okay... uhh, hey Cal?

    (He looks back at her.)

    ERIC: Nice moves, by the way.

    HORATIO: Eric...


    Cut to:
    (Eric moving towards the door.)


    Cut to:
    (Side shot as Horatio steps towards Calleigh.)


    Cut to:
    (Eric at the door.

    He starts singing and dancing.)

    ERIC: 'I'm on tonight,
    You know my hips don't lie,
    And I'm starting to feel you, boy...'

    HORATIO: (o.s and firm) Eric...

    ERIC: Okay, I'm gone.

    (Eric leaves.)


    Cut to:
    (Horatio shaking his head.

    He turns back to Calleigh.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Calleigh covering her face with her left hand.)

    CALLEIGH: I am so sorry... I was just...

    (She pauses, kneeling down to pick up her report pages.)

    CALLEIGH: I was just so relieved we got him... it's taken us so long... the look
    on his face was worth it all...

    (Horatio kneels down in front of erh.

    Calleigh looks up at him.

    A beat.

    She picks up another page.)

    CALLEIGH: I felt so liberated... I just felt like singing, dancing...

    (Horatio picks up a page, handing it to her.

    She smiles, taking it from him.)

    CALLEIGH: I understand that it was highly unprofessional... the lab is no place
    for dancing...

    (She stands, putting the pages in the folder.)

    CALLEIGH: I just brought my CD player in because music helps me work... and
    I've been so stressed lately...

    (She has her back to him.

    Horatio moves towards her.

    Calleigh turns to him as she speaks.)

    CALLEIGH: I promise you it'll never happen again, and I'll think twice before I...

    (She faces him, and is silenced by his index finger on her lips.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of her blinking quickly, her eyes flitting back and forth over his face.)


    Cut to:
    (Horatio smiling.)

    HORATIO: Calleigh... it's alright.

    (He removes his finger.

    Calleigh starts to protest.)

    CALLEIGH: Horatio, I...

    (He puts a hand on her shoulder.)

    HORATIO: I'm telling you, Calleigh... it's alright.

    (Calleigh closes her mouth.)


    Cut to:
    (Side shot of Horatio facing Calleigh.)

    HORATIO: You know, I haven't heard that song in years. Brings back memories.

    CALLEIGH: Really?

    HORATIO: Mmhmm... now...

    (He puts his hands on her shoulders, not breaking eye contact.)

    HORATIO: I want you to stand right there... perfect.

    CALLEIGH: Horatio...

    HORATIO: Trust me... just stay right there...

    (He gives her a smile, and moves off-screen.

    Calleigh shakes her head, throwing her hands up.)

    CALLEIGH: What exactly are you trying to do?


    Cut to:
    (Horatio at the CD player.)

    CALLEIGH: (o.s) We shouls get going, the boys'll be waiting.

    (Horatio presses play.)


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh blinking as the music starts

    She turns around, looking confused.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Horatio with his back turned, his finger tapping on the desk.

    At the drum beat, he turns towards her.)

    HORATIO: 'I was at a dance when he caught my eye...'


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh covering her mouth, doubled over in laughter.

    She straightens up, smiling widely.

    Horatio stands, 'lookin' sad and shy'.

    Calleigh laughs.)

    We began to dance, swayin' to and fro

    (Horatio sways left and right.

    Calleigh covers her eyes, still laughing, singing along still.

    Horatio moves in front of her, leaning down to look at her.

    Calleigh opens her eyes.)

    HORATIO: 'Blame it on the bossa nova...'

    (Calleigh laughs.

    Horatio moves around her, touching her shoulder and her face briefly.

    Calleigh follows him with her eyes, dipping her head demurely.)

    HORATIO: 'Oh, it all began with just one little dance
    But then it ended up a big romance
    Blame it on the bossa nova...'

    (He takes her hand.)

    'The dance of love...' May I have this dance?

    (He kisses her hand.

    Calleigh outs her hand to her face with shyness.)

    CALLEIGH: Why of course, dear sir, I'd be delighted.

    (Horatio grins, twirling her several times.)

    CALLEIGH: (giggling) Horatio!

    (He takes her in a waltz hold.)

    HORATIO: Yes?

    (Calleigh looks down, then up again.)

    CALLEIGH: Nothin'... dance with me, Handsome.

    (During the instrumental, they sway left and right, moving around the work-table.

    Horatio's hand is in the small of Calleigh's back.

    Calleigh's hand rests on Hoarios' shoulder.

    Shot of their hands intertwined.)

    CALLEIGH: 'Now I'm glad to say I'm his bride to be
    And we're gonna raise...'

    (She outs her arms around his neck, pulling him closer.)

    CALLEIGH: 'A family..'

    (Horatio puts his arms around her, gazing at her.

    A beat as the music keeps playing.)


    Cut to:
    (Close-up as they stare at each other, still moving to the music.

    Calleigh pulls away, dancing around him, beckoning him to follow her

    Horatio grabs her hand, pulling her back to him.

    Calleigh hugs him tight.)


    (Now was it the moon?)
    No, no, the bossa nova
    (Or the stars above?)
    No, no, the bossa nova
    (Now was it the tune? )
    Yeah, yeah, the bossa nova
    (The dance of love)




    (They remain embraced until the song ends.)

    CALLEIGH: Horatio... Horatio, the music's stopped.

    HORATIO: I know... just savouring the moment.

    CALLEIGH: Oh, Horatio...

    (Silence.

    They pull apart.

    Calleigh curtseys.)

    CALLEIGH: Thank you for the wonderful dance, Horatio.

    (Horatio bows.)

    HORATIO: Not at all, Calleigh. It was my pleasure...

    (He ducks his head.)

    HORATIO: Umm... can I count on another dance later?

    (Calleigh smiles, layingn her hand on his shoulder.)

    CALLEIGH: Of course... anything for my favourite partner...

    (She winks at him.

    Horatio chuckles.)

    HORATIO: Want to go?

    CALLEIGH: Mmhmm...

    (Horatio offers her his arm.

    Calleigh links him, and they leave the ballistics lab.)


    Fade in:
    (Shot of Horatio and Calleigh from behind.

    They walk down the corridor.

    Dialogue continues from this view.)

    CALLEIGH: I had no idea you could move like that... you've got rhythm...

    HORATIO: I just followed the rhythm of the night... and the beat of your heart so
    close to mine...

    CALLEIGH: Aww, Horatio... you're so sweet.

    HORATIO: You're pretty sweet too... I could eat you up...

    CALLEIGH: (mock shock) Horatio!

    (They laugh.

    Calleigh lays her head on Horatio's shoulder.

    They disappear through the doors.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Horatio and Calleigh walking through the parking-lot.

    Horatio suddenly takes Calleigh's hand and spins her around.

    Calleigh laughs, throwing her arms around his neck.

    They hug.)


    Cut to:
    (Close-up as they look at each other.

    Horatio runs the back of his fingers across Calleigh's cheek.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Calleigh's fingers tightening on Horatio's jacket.)


    Cut to:
    (Close-up as they kiss.

    Horatio runs his fingers thorugh Calleigh's hair, and Calleigh holds onto his neck
    for dear life.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Calleigh's left leg bending up.)


    Cut to:
    (Wide shot as they kiss.)


    Cut to:
    (Close-up as they pull away.

    A beat.

    Horatio smiles, motioning to the Hummer.

    Calleigh smiles, nodding.)


    Cut to:
    (Wide shot of the Hummer as they get in.

    Horatio leans over and kisses Calleigh.

    Calleigh kisses Horatio back.

    They share a long look.)


    Cut to:
    (Hummer pulling away.

    Camera pans up to the sky.)

    TO BE CONTINUED???

    Might continue this as a PM involving the Hummer, as Mel suggested... they never get to the bar... :devil:
     
  5. athens

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    That was really nice and sweet!!Nice image you got there!.. :)
     
  6. Bullet_Girl

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    ooooh....EMER! :devil: *runs to Emer and huggles her and covers her with mad kisses*that sopng just took over the places of BOTH "Suicide Girl" by Eskimo Joe and "Shine" by Vanessa Amorosi as my favorite songs! :D *hums with pure delight* I know where I can watch that scene of TWW where Ainsley dances to that song, I'm gonna go watch it now....for the first time! *shock horror!* :eek: :lol: :p

    And, if you're gonna do the whole PM thingy, you can count me in :devil:
     
  7. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    oooh nice :) Lovely visuals :)
     
  8. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Ohh! So not fair Em, I'm dying for me to be Calleigh.
    damn, that's my man". :devil: :devil: :lol:
     
  9. xxcalleighxx

    xxcalleighxx Dead on Arrival

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    if your doing the whole PM thing you can count e in! muah ha ha hahaaaaa....*evil Moment* any way! i love that click, i was on hysterics on the floor when i watched it on TWW! but that! that tops it off|! much better than TWW! love it
     
  10. EmeraldEyes06

    EmeraldEyes06 Lab Technician

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    Hi everyone!! :)

    I'm so sorry I haven't updated in a while, school is really riding me! :p Here is something special for being so patient.

    This is a 'missing scene' from 'Hurricane Anthony'. I always wondered if Calleigh ever saw Horatio's cut from that day? And if she did, how would she react? So many questions answered in this scene!! One significant and sweet part was inspired by a scene from HCrazy's wonderful H/C fanfic, just to give her credit for the great interaction! :) Lyrics are copyright of Lifehouse, no infringement intended.

    Enjoy everyone!! And I will have the PM scene ready by the end of the week, and another update aswell. The week after, however, will be without updates as I have exams, but I'll be free for the whole Summer to write more for all you great DuCaine fans!! :D Loads to look forward to!! :)


    Fade into:
    [INT. - CALLEIGH'S HOUSE - NIGHT]

    Cut to:
    (Calleigh sitting on the sofa, dressed in a bath-robe
    sipping a glass of wine.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of wine-bottle on the table, three-quarters full.

    Camera pans to the second empty glass on the table.)


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh closing her eyes, leaning her head back.

    She runs her finger absently around the rim of her glass.)


    Cut to:
    (Wide shot of Calleigh.

    There is a knock on the door.

    Calleigh jumps, giving a short laugh.

    She gets up, combing her hair with her fingers, tightening the
    belt on her robe.)


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh walking to the door.)


    Cut to:
    (Side shot as she opens the door.

    The door hides the visitor.

    Calleigh smiles, dipping her head.)

    CALLEIGH: I was beginning to think you weren't coming.

    (A chuckle is heard off-screen.

    Calleigh raises her head.)

    GUEST: Would I ever pass up the opportunity to spend time with
    you?

    (A hand cups her cheek.

    Calleigh tilts her head, closing her eyes.)

    CALLEIGH: You've been so busy... then you wanted to help her...
    your heart was in the right place.

    GUEST: It was... but right here...

    (Calleigh steps back, her fingers gripping his hand.

    Horatio steps in the door, turning to close it behind him.)

    HORATIO: This feels too... my heart belongs here...


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh smiling, stepping towards him.

    They hug.)

    CALLEIGH: Mmm, Horatio...


    Cut to:
    (Side shot of Calleigh turning her face in to Horatio's shoulder.)

    CALLEIGH: How are you?

    (Horatio rubs her back up and down.

    His cheek rests on top of her head.)

    HORATIO: I'm fine, thank you... really good. And you?

    (Calleigh smiles.)

    CALLEIGH: I'm much better now.


    Cut to:
    (Wide shot as they pull away.

    Horatio gazes at Calleigh, leaning in slowly.

    Calleigh turns her head, smiling as Horatio kisses her cheek several
    times.

    She faces him again, running a hand through his tousled hair.)

    CALLEIGH: You look tired. Come on...

    (She takes his hands, and steps back into the living-room.

    Horatio dips his head, letting Calleigh pull him towards the sofa.)


    Cut to:
    (Side shot as Calleigh puts her hands on his shoulders, gently pushing him
    down to sit on the sofa.)


    Cut to:
    (Front shot of Horatio.

    He turns his head watching Calleigh move to sit behind him)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Calleigh putting her hands on Horatio's shoulders, giving him a
    massage.

    Horatio leans his head back, sighing gently.)


    Cut to:
    (Front shot of Calleigh rubbing Horatio's shoulders.)

    CALLEIGH: How's your nephew?

    HORATIO: He's doing good... he got an A in his Chemistry exam...

    CALLEIGH: Good for him... brains like his uncle...

    (Horatio chuckles.)

    HORATIO: Hmmm... he's a grat kid....

    (A beat.)

    HORATIO: Yelina's proud of him...


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh lowering her eyes, resting her forehead against his left shoulder.)


    Cut to:
    (Horatio looking over his shoulder.

    His hand moves to cover hers.)

    HORATIO: She's a brave woman... I care for her... she's my family, but
    you're the only one for me. The only one who can ever complete me...


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh rasing her head, meeting his eyes.

    She smiles.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of their hands as Calleigh squeezes Horatio's fingers.)


    Cut to:
    (Side shot as Horatio faces Calleigh, raising her hand to his mouth, kissing
    her hand.)


    Cut to:
    (Close-up of Calleigh's smile.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Horatio leaning over Calleigh's hand.)


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh frowning.

    She raises her hand to Horatio's forehead, lightly touching the healing cut.)


    Cut to:
    (Horatio closing his eyes.)

    CALLEIGH: Does it hurt?

    HORATIO: Mmm... a little...


    Cut to:
    (Calleigh tilting her head, her other hand coming up to cup his cheek.)


    Cut to:
    (Horatio opeing his eyes, looking at her questioningly.)

    CALLEIGH: Come here...


    Cut to:
    (Shot of Calleigh from behind as she tugs Horatio closer to her.

    She kisses his forehead.

    Horatio blinks, his eyes wide.

    He exhales gently, leaning against her.

    Calleigh stokes his cheek.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of her fingers gripping and releasing his hair.)


    Cut to:
    (Horatio's hand stroking Calleigh's forearm up and down.)


    Cut to:
    (Wide shot as Calleigh kisses Horatio's forehead over and over,
    kneeling in front of him.)


    Cut to:
    (Close-up of Calleigh as she pulls away.

    She strokes a lock of Horatio's fringe.

    Horatio stares at her quietly.)

    CALLEIGH|: Better?

    HORATIO: (smiling) Hmmm... yes...

    CALLEIGH: Good...

    (A beat.)

    HORATIO: I... I missed you...

    CALLEIGH: And I missed you too...


    Cut to:
    (Shot as they smile at each other.)


    Cut to:
    (Horatio ducking his head.)

    HORATIO: Umm... I'm still a bit sore...

    CALLEIGH Where?

    (She looks him over.

    Horatio smiles.

    He points to his forehead.)

    HORATIO: Here...

    (Calleigh kisses his forehead.

    Horatio points to his cheek.)

    HORATIO: Here...

    (Calleigh kisses his cheek, starting to giggle.

    Horatio points to his mouth.)

    HORATIO: And right here...

    CALLEIGH: I see... let me make it all better...


    Cut to:
    (Side shot as they kiss.

    Calleigh moves to sit in Horatio's lap.

    Horatio pulls back, looking up into her face.

    Calleigh strokes his hair.)

    CALLEIGH: It's just you and me, Handsome. No one else.

    HORATIO: Yes... you and me.. forever, sweetheart.

    (Calleigh smiles.

    Cue music of 'You and Me.

    Camera pans in on Horatio and Calleigh holding each other,
    looking into each other's eyes

    Horatio moves his hand over Calleigh's hip.

    Calleigh runs' her fingers through his hair.

    They lean their foreheads together.)


    What day is it
    And in what month
    This clock never seemed so alive
    I can't keep up and I can't back down
    I've been losing so much time



    Cut to:
    (Close-up as Horatio opens his eyes to look at Calleigh.

    She stares back.

    She hugs him slowly.

    Horatio puts his arms around her, hugging her back.)


    'Cause it's you and me and all of the people
    With nothing to do, nothing to lose
    And it's you and me and all of the people and
    I don't know why I can't keep my eyes off of you



    (Calleigh pulls back and kisses him.

    Horatio puts his hands behind her head, leaning her back
    on the sofa.)


    All of the things that I want to say
    Just aren't coming out right
    I'm tripping on words, you got my head spinning
    I don't know where to go from here



    Cut to:
    (Close-up of their kiss.

    Horatio runs his fingers through her hair.

    Calleigh grips Horatio's shirt.

    Horatio pulls back, his hands cradling her head, still breathing
    qucikly.

    Calleigh gazes at him, her lips parted.)



    'Cause it's you and me and all of the people
    With nothing to do, nothing to prove



    (Calleigh rolls him over, leaning over him.

    Horatio rubs her back, leaning up to kiss her.

    Calleigh giggles, pulling back.

    They look at each other.)



    And it's you and me and all of the people and
    I don't know why I can't keep my eyes off you



    (Calleigh gets up off Horatio.

    He watches her as she spins arpound once, piling her hair on top
    of her head.

    She winks at him.

    Horatio tilts his head with a smile.)



    Something about you now
    I can't quite figure out



    (She walks towards him, holding out her hands.

    He takes her hands and she pulls him up.)



    Everything she does is beautiful
    Everything she does is right



    (Calleigh stands in front of Horatio.

    She puts his arms around her waist, and she puts her arms
    around his neck.

    They sway left and right, their bodies inches apart.)


    'Cause it's you and me and all of the people
    With nothing to do, nothing to lose



    (Calleigh stretches up, rubbing her nose against Horatio's.

    He laughs, and she smiles widely.

    Horatio lifts her into his arms, spinning her around.

    Calleigh screams with laughter.)


    And it's you and me and all of the people and
    I don't know why I can't keep my eyes off of
    You and me and all of the people
    With nothing to do, nothing to prove



    (He kisses her.

    Calleigh kisses him back, her hands gripping his shirt.

    Horatio moves to the stairs, holding her tight.

    Calleigh's hands are in his hair.

    They disappear into Calleigh's room.)


    And it's you and me and all of the people and
    I don't know why I can't keep my eyes off of you



    Fade into:
    (Shot of curtains billowing in the breeze.

    Camera pans to the bed.

    Horatio and Calleigh lay sleeping.)


    Cut to:
    (Shot of their hands intertwined.

    Calleigh squeezes Horatio's hand.

    He squeezes back.)


    Cut to:
    (Horatio and Calleigh smiling in their sleep.)


    What day is it
    And in what month
    This clock never seemed so alive



    (FADE TO BLACK.)


    Thanks again everyone! You guys rock! :)
     
  11. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    great Em, very nice, and very sweet. I hope you post more soon.

    Fav part.

    Calleigh moves to sit in Horatio's lap.

    Horatio pulls back, looking up into her face.

    Calleigh strokes his hair.)

    CALLEIGH: It's just you and me, Handsome. No one else.

    HORATIO: Yes... you and me.. forever, sweetheart.
     
  12. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    awwww so cute :) and good luck btw!
     
  13. athens

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    Really sweet and nice!!& good luck with your exams also!
     
  14. Bullet_Girl

    Bullet_Girl Coroner

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    Emer.... *huggles* I love that so much! :D makes me wish I could write like that! I'm like one kiss and then cut to the next morning or just after.. :devil: :lol:

    Keep up the great work girl! :D
     
  15. patluver144

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    very nice guys but how do ya post a fanfic here like start one? :confused:
     

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