Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by EmeraldEyes06, Dec 22, 2006.
so where'd H go? I'm confused
Hey great Emerald! But I want H to be on the bed with her too! :devil: :devil: :devil:
Love your writing as always.
Thanks guys for the feedback!!
To answer you, Mel, H was part of Cal's fantasy, she was dreaming of him, and when the phone rang, she 'woke up' as it were. Hope that cleared up the confusion, I didn't want to give anything away!!
I'm working on another scenario during this week, but I have a seven page essay due next Monday, and as much as I'd prefer to write about our H/C, school calls!!
Another update soon.
:lol: hahahaha that was soooo much better than the scene outa TWW... hahaha... ooohhhh i'm deffinantly in for the Hummer scene!!! lol PM it to me! hahaha loved it!
OMG!!! LOL hahahaha *laugh turns evil* hehehe :devil: that was good!!! lol i can hear the Hummer squeeking from over here in Australia!!! lol :lol:
OMG... that was just way too sweet... ooohhhh would like to read the scene that you left out!!
CalleighCaine07 aka Horsie Girl
Thanks CalleighCaine07!! Just a little reminder: try to post just once, because the moderators get a bit tetchy about people posting short messages more than once. Just add more content to your posts and you're good to go! Will get the PM to you as soon as poss.
I loved it. I always knew Jake would be that kind of guy, he looks like a liar and a cheat. Cal needs to catch him soon. Can I check out the missing scene too?
Ok i'll remember that EmeraldEyes06... ummm can you please pm me the missing scene from the last story plze???
I sooooooooooo hop that Calleigh catches Jake cheating... i could only imagine what she'd do to him *taps Calleigh on the shoulder and hints towards her gun locker* :devil: hahaha, i dunno why she even bothered to get back with him after he broke her heart once, and nearly got her killed???
She really has some serious issuses... but thats why we all love her... she's almost like Pandora's Box, y'all never know what's going on in her mind and y'all never know what's gonna come out!
... well i'm going to go and keep working on Chapter 12 of my story, The Miami Dade Sniper... its on my fanfiction.net profile if y'all wanna have a squizz...
Hi! *big wave* School has been keeping me, and I have some really big exams coming up, so sorry for not posting! Anyway, here is a scene that I wrote while I was inspired bu the 'Death Pool 100' ending. I loved how H and Cal intereacted in that final scene, so sweet! However, CSI: Miami got a lot of flack for making the team walk into the sunset lke that, soo... I decided to do a little rewrite with some comedy, team comraderie, and of course, DUCAINE ROMANCE!!
While I realise that they would NEVER do this on the show, I just had to do this, and they may be a little OOC, but it's all in good fun!! Also, there's a little reference to an old discussion in the DC/Horatio thread pertaining to Horatio's S4 persona, so if anyone remembers, have a good laugh at the joke!! :lol:
Hope you all enjoy this after waiting so long. *slaps hand for being bad* Read and review!!
[EXT. - BEACH - EVENING]
*Continuing from ending of 'Death Pool 100'.
CALLEIGH: I guess somebody will always think it's
easy to make a hundred.
HORATIO: Well... we know better, don't we?
(They all laugh.)
(Calleigh putting on her sunglasses, standing beside
Eric and Ryan nudge each other.
Horatio looks at Calleigh with mild reproach.
She smiles widely.)
ALEXX: You know, guys... I can't remember the last
timewe were all together like this.
ERIC: Yeah, and not in the lay-out room discussing a
RYAN: (looking at them all) I miss times like these...
when we can just be friends.
(Calleigh slips off her sunglasses, nodding slowly.)
CALLEIGH: You're right... we may be colleagues,
we may be a team, but above that we're friends, and
I for one am not passing up the chance to hang out with
(They all smile.
Horatio looks at each of them.)
HORATIO: Then what are we waitng for? Come on...
(He starts walking to the Hummers.
The others stay standing.)
(Horatio turning back.)
HORATIO: Come on!
(The team blink at him.)
ERIC: Okay, who are you and what have you done
(Horatio smiles, dipping his head, stepping back to
HORATIO: To tell you the truth... I'm Horatio's evil
twin brother, Hector Caine...
(The others all gasp and gape.
Horatio's mouth twitches, and he chuckles merrily.)
HORATIO: No, I'm not. I'm just taking this rare
opportunity to spend time with the friends that I care
about, and just have fun together. Is that strange?
CALLEIGH: No... no, it's not. I feel the same way,
(She starts walking to the Hummers as well.
She taps Horatio on the shoulder.)
CALLEIGH: Last one there's a rotten egg!
(She takes off, laughing.)
HORAITO: Hey! No headstarts!
(He runs after her.
Alexx looks at the boys, before shrugging and running
ALEXX: What the hell... hey guys, wait up!
RYAN: Pinch me, 'cos I must be dreaming.
(Eric stares after the others, raising his hand to pinch
RYAN: Ow! Not so hard!
ERIC: I've never seen them smile so much... it's great!
(He faces Ryan.)
ERIC: Hey, Wolfe? You know what you are?
ERIC: A rotten egg! See ya!
(He takes off, leaving Ryan standing there.)
RYAN: No fair! Get back there!
(Ryan following the others.
Calleigh shrieks, Alexx laughs, and Eric heckles Ryan.)
Short-time jump to:
(Team sitting around the Hummers.)
(Shot of Eric, Ryan and Horatio at Horatio's Hummer.
Ryan is sitting on the hood, Horatio leans against the
driver's door, and Eric leans against the front bumper.)
(Shot of Calleigh and Alexx at Eric's Hummer.
Calleigh sits on the hood, and Alexx stands to her right.)
(Shots of everyone talking and laughing.
There is music playing in the background.)
(Shot of Horatio looking over to the girls.)
(Slow-motion shot of Calleigh smiling and laughing.)
Cut back to:
(Calleigh frowning slightly, listening to the music.
Her eyes widen.)
CALLEIGH: Oh my God!
(She jumps down from the Hummer, running to the
radioin Eric's Hummer.)
CALLEIGH: I love this song!
(She turns up the radio, and starts dancing.
Alexx laughs, clapping her hands.
Ryan, Eric and Horatio stare bewildered.
Calleigh dances in front of the Hummer, Alexx joining
Eric and Ryan look at each other, shrug and join in.
Horatio laughs, shaking his head.
He crosses his arms, and watches.)
(Wide shot as the four dance together.)
ALEXX: I haven't danced in ages!
(Eric and Ryan dance beside Calleigh, a look in their
RYAN AND ERIC: Calleigh sandwich!
(They trap Calleigh between them.
Calleigh shrieks with laughter.)
CALLEIGH: Aaahh, guys!! I'm not the meat in your
(She struggles, still laughing.
Eric and Ryan dance around her.)
RYAN: Woah, here we go! Circle of love!
ERIC: Circle of love, baby!
(Calleigh covers her face with her hands, her shoulders
shaking with mirth.)
CALLEIGH: Oh my Lord!
(Eric and Ryan grin widely, looking over at Horatio who's
ERIC: Yo, H! Join the party!
RYAN: Come on, Horatio! It'll be fun!
(Horatio shakes his head, smiling.)
HORATIO: I'm okay, guys. You have fun, okay?
(Calleigh pushes her way out of the 'circle of love'.
Alexx dances with the boys.)
(Calleigh walking towards Horatio, her face set.)
(Horatio looking up and seeing her.)
(Front shot of Calleigh as she stops in front of him, her
left hand on her hip.
She gives him a small smile.)
(Horatio tilting his head at Calleigh raising an eyebrow.
In the background, the opening of Eric Prydz's 'Call On Me'
(Wide shot as Calleigh starts dancing, swaying her hips from
side to side.)
(Horatio's eyes widening.)
Call on me
Call on me
Call on me
Call on me
(I'm the same boy I used to be)
(Calleigh twirling in front of him, moving towards him.
CALLEIGH: (singing) Dance together, me and H...
Call on me, call on me...
(She moves to his left.
Horatio watches in amusement, ducking his head.)
CALLEIGH: Oh, dance with me, Horatio.
HORATIO: Umm... as much as I'd love to...
(He raises his head to look at her.)
HORATIO: I'm not much of a dancer...
CALLEIGH: Yeah, right. You have natural grace... and
you won't know if you don't try.
HORATIO: (smiling) Why, thank you, but I...
CALLEIGH: No 'buts' about it, you're dancing with me,
now come on!
(She takes his hands, pulling him towards the others.
Horatio splutters a string of protests.
Calleigh laughs, gently nudging him unto the middle of
A circle forms.
The others clap and cheer, while Horatio stands looking
ERIC: Come on, H!
RYAN: Feel the groove!
ALEXX: Shake it if you got it!
CALLEIGH: Go, Horatio!
(Horatio covers his face with his left hand, chuckling despite
HORATIO: I'm glad there's no one else here, because I'm
about to make a fool of myself.
ALL: Shut up and dance!
He looks at them all, before he starts dancing.
Alexx and Calleigh cheer and clap.
The boys whistle.)
ALL: Go, H! Go, H! Go, H!
ERIC: You're good, amn!
RYAN: Yeah! Who would've thought?
CALLEIGH: I did!!
ALEXX: You're on fire!!
CALLEIGH: Hot stuff...
(Horatio smiles, his confidence growing.
He dances with the girls, spinning Alexx and dipping Calleigh.
The girls squeal.)
(Eric and Ryan dancing.)
BOTH: And bring out the camera phones!!
(Horatio looking up as he dips Calleigh again.
He whips her up again, her hair flying over her face and into
Their faces are inches apart.
He looks at Eric and Ryan.)
HORATIO: Hey! Either of you even think of taking a picture,
you will suffer the consequences.
(He spins Calleigh and heads over to the guys.
Calleigh catches hold of Alexx.)
ALEXX: You okay, girl?
CALLEIGH: Yeah... I'm better than okay.
Cue music of:
(John Mayer's 'Waiting on the World to Change'.)
(Horatio dancing with the guys.)
HORATIO: You know, I'm more of a waltzing man...
RYAN: Really? You've got rhythm...
ERIC: Hey guys, who am I?
(He does a spin, and does the moonwalk across the sand.)
RYAN: Uhh, Eric Delko imitating Michael Jackson badly?
(Eric shoots him a withering look.
Horatio laughs, and does a spin himself, really getting into
(Shot of Calleigh looking over, a smile on her face.)
(Calleigh taking out her cellphone.)
(Calleigh putting her finger to her lips at Alexx, saying 'Ssshh!'
She starts creeping towards the guys.)
(Horatio still dancing, saying 'Yeah!' at various intervals.)
(Calleigh flipping her phone open.)
Cut back to:
(The guys still dancing.)
(Calleigh holding the phone up, making slashing signs
across her throat to Eric and Ryan when they see her.)
CALLEIGH: Hey, Horatio!
(Horatio turning around.)
(There is a sound of a shutter closing.
CALLEIGH: I got ya! I caught you rotten!
(She laughs pressing 'Save'.)
Cut back to:
(He steps towards her.)
HORATIO: Hand it over.
HORATIO: Calleigh... I'm not playing games...
CALLEIGH: If you want it, you're gonna have to catch me!
(She takes off down the beach, giggling madly.)
HORATIO: Calleigh! Get back here!
(He runs after her.)
CALLEIGH: I'm gonna put this up on the lab's blog! 'Come
andsee Horatio Caine caught off guard!'
HORATIO: You wouldn't!
CALLEIGH: Smile! You're on Candid Camera!
(Horatio growls, speeding up a little.
He catches her up.)
(Close-up of Horatio as he makes a lunge for her.)
(Slow motion shot as Calleigh looks back, her expression
from amusement to 'uh-oh' in seconds.)
(Wide shot as Horatio grabs Calleigh, and they tumble to
(Side shot as Horatio pins down a struggling Calleigh.
Horaito tries to take the phone off her, but she keeps
HORATIO: Hold still, you littel minx...
CALLEIGH: Oh, I'm a minx now?
(Horatio casts her a weary glance.
He gives a sigh.)
HORATIO: Look, all I want is that picture and I'm happy.
CALLEIGH: And I'll send it to you... along with the 30
people in my contacts!
Horatio makes another grab for the phone.
Calleigh rolls over, holding it out of his reach.
She shakes her finger at him.)
CALLEIGH: Uh uh uh! No grabbing!
HORATIO: Cal, you're pushing me...
CALLEIGH: Listen, can we talk later? The others are
waiting, and we're supposed to be having fun.
(Horatio sighs theatrically, dragging a hand down his face.)
HORATIO: Oh-kay... but don't you dare send it!.
CALLEIGH: Would I do that to you? Maybe...
(She grins, climbing off him.
She watches him get up, and they walk back to the others.)
CALLEIGH: Oh, I got sand in my pants...
(Horatio casts her a look.)
HORATIO: (laughingly) That's more than I needed to
(He wipes sand off his own pants.
Calleigh reaches up and rubs Horatio's hair quickly.)
CALLEGH: You've got sand in your hair.
(Horatio tries to get away, but Calleigh still brushes sand
HORATIO: Who are you, my mother? Ow! Cal!
CALLEIGH: I will be if you quit fussin'! Hold still!
(Eric, Ryan and Alexx looking over at them.)
(Calleigh still at Horatio's hair, hanging on his arm as he
tries to pry himself away.)
Cut back to:
(The guys all laughing.)
Short-time jump to:
(The team sitting around the Hummers again.)
ERIC: I'd better get going, the clubs are calling.
RYAN: Right behind you.
ALEXX: Gotta make my kids some dinner.
(Wide shot as they all look at each other.)
RYAN: Hey, guys? I had a great time here.
ERIC: Me too. We ought to do this more often.
HORATIO: And we will. This job can get demanding,
but we will always have support, friends and the chance
to hang out like this again.
ALEXX: It's a date!
(They all laugh.)
(Alexx waving goodbye as she drives away.)
(Eric and Ryan getting in Eric's Hummer.)
ERIC: Hey, Cal! Need a ride?
CALLEIGH: I'm okay, Eric. Thanks. I'm going to stay
here a bit longer.
(Eric and Ryan sharing a look, before waving and drving
She goes over to the Hummer, climbing up to sit on the
(Close-up of Calleigh as she inhales slowly, her eyes
CALLEIGH: The ocean sounds lovely...
(Camera pans to Horatio standing at the right side of the
Hummer, looking out to sea.)
HORATIO: Yes... it's very peaceful. It always soothes me.
CALLEIGH: You come out here a lot?
HORATIO: Mmhmm... to think, to contemplate, to
(Calleigh turning to look at him.)
CALLEIGH: (smiling) It's nice to have your own secret place...
(Horatio looking at her.)
HORATIO: It is...
(Wide shot of them both.
Calleigh looks down, patting the hood next to her.)
CALLEIGH: You want to sit here?
(Horatio tilting his head.)
CALLEIGH: We have the little matter of a photo to talk
(She holds up the phone, waving it back and forth teasingly.
Horatio smiles, shaking his head.
He climbs up beside her, crossing his arms.)
HORATIO: So what do you propose we do?
CALLEIGH: All depends... how badly don't you want this
photo to see the light of day?
HORATIO: Enough to trade my badge.
CALLEIGH: That is a lot.
(She dips her head lightly.)
CALLEIGH: Alright, H. I'm willing to give you the phone so
you can delete the picture... but first, you must do something
(Horaito gives a short laugh.)
HORATIO: You, Ms. Duquesne, are hardly in a position to
CALLEIGH: As a matter of fact, Mr. Caine, I am... I'm
holding the phone, and you're not.
(Horatio gives her a weary look.)
HORATIO: point taken.
(He sihgs, looking up to the sky.)
HORATIO: What is it you want?
CALLEIGH: Okay, Lieutenant... you want this phone so
badly? Well, if you want it...
(She leans into him a little.)
CALLEIGH: You gotta kiss me.
(Horatio's eyes snapping open.
He looks at Calleigh incredulously.)
CALLEIGH: You heard me...
(She raises her eyebrows slightly.)
(Wide shot as Horatio turns his head again.)
HORATIO: Umm, uhh... Cal, you've put me in an
(Calleigh looking him over.)
CALLEIGH: Doesn't look awkward to me...
(Horaito staring at her.)
HORATIO: Calleigh, what you're asking of me, I...
CALLEIGH: Just one kiss, Horatio, and you get the picture.
HORATIO: If only it were...
CALLEIGH: It's just a kiss. What's it going to hurt?
HORATIO: Cal, I... there are many other men who should
be kissing you, let alone me...
CALLEIGH: I don't care about other men, I care about you.
And if you give me what I want, I'll give you what you want.
HORATIO: And you're sure?
CALLEIGH: I'm certain... no one's around, it's just you
(Calleigh putting her hand on his arm.
Horatio takes a calming breath.)
HORATIO: Okay... *to himself* Here goes...
(Front shot as they face other.
Horatio is looking down, and Calleigh is smiling widely.)
CALLEIGH: Horatio... you're going to have to look at me,
HORATIO: That would make things easier.
Horaito raises his head to meet her eyes.
A beat as they regard each other.
They burst out laughing.)
HORATIO: What are we, teenagers?
CALLEIGH: No, just two very nervous people!
(They stop laughing after a minute.)
(Calleigh's eyes blinking slowly.)
(Close-up of Horatio's eyes.)
(Calleigh taking a huge breath, and closing her eyes.)
(Horatio staring at her, licking his lips slowly.)
(His hand raising up to take her chin gently.
He leans forward and kisses her.)
(Close-up of the kiss, panning to Calleigh.)
(Close-up of Horatio still holding her chin.)
(Wide shot if them both.)
(Close-up as Horatio pulls away.)
(Close-up of Calleigh, her eyes still closed, her lips slightly
A beat, and her eyes flutter open.)
(Horatio looking at her.)
(Calleigh smiling widely.
She gives a shy laugh, and turns to pick up phone.)
(Shot of her hand passing it to Horatio.
Horatio stops her, his hand on hers.)
HORATIO: Wait, Calleigh... I... I don't I think that right...
(Calleigh, staring at hm, confused.)
CALLEIGH: But I thought it was per...
(Horatio silences her with his index finger.)
HORATIO: Please... can I try again?
(His hand squeezing hers.)
(Calleigh blinking, her breathing hitching.)
CALLEIGH: (slightly breathless) Umm... okay.
His left hand cups her cheek.)
(Calleigh leaning into his palm, her eyes closing.
She exhales slowly, her lips parting.)
(Wide shot as Horatio leans towards Calleigh again.)
(Close-up of the kiss, backdropped by the setting sun.
Camera pans from Horatio to Calleigh as the kiss turns
Calleigh wraps her arms around Horatio's neck to hold
Horatio's hands are in Calleigh's hair.)
(Side shot as Calleigh leans back against the windscreen,
taking Horatio with her.)
(Wide shot as Horatio leans over Calleigh, still kissing her
(Calleigh's fingers still holding the phone, now forgotten.
Camera pans up their bodies to close-up of the kiss as
Horatio breaks it.
Calleigh's eyes are still closed, her breathing heavy.
Horatio kisses her gently, his arms cradling her gently.)
(Close-up of Calleigh's opening.
Horatio and Calleigh share a long look.)
CALLEIGH: (breathy) That... was perfect.
(Horatio gives her a soft smile, leaning his forehead against
HORATIO: I always prefer to do things right, and never by
(Calleigh smiles, giving a laugh.)
CALLEIGH: So I see.
CALLEIGH: I suppose you want the phone now?
HORATIO: What phone?
(They look at each other again.
Horatio starts kissing her again, moving down to her neck.)
CALLEIGH: Ohh... ahh, Horatio... we have to, ahh, stop
(Horatio pauses, raising his head.)
(Close-up of Horatio, as he cradles Calleigh's head in his
He moves inches from her lips, speaking in a husky whisper.)
HORATIO: Do you really want me to stop?
(Calleigh's hands grips Horatio's jacket, her eyes closing.)
CALLEIGH: (whispering) No... I... I want this, more than
anything, Horatio. But I want this to be more than just a
bargain for a candid photo... this is real to me.
HORATIO: I know, sweetheart. It feels so real to me...
I've wanted this for a long time, Calleigh.
(He whispers in her ear.)
HORATIO: Ever since the day I met you.
CALLEIGH: Oh, Horatio...
(She lifts his head and kisses him furiously.
Their combined moans grow louder.)
HORATIO: (breathlessly) Want to take this inside?
(Side shot as Horatio gets off Calleigh, and climbs down off
(Shot as he takes Calleigh's hands, helping her down.)
(Side shot as they look at each other.
Horatio brushes Calleigh's fringe slowly.
Calleigh takes hold of his fingers, kissing his hand.
She pulls him towards the door of the Hummer, turning back
to kiss him briefly.
As she tries to pull away, Horatio kisses her back, harder this
(Close-up as Horatio backs Calleigh up against the side of the
Hummer, his fingers tangled in her ponytail.)
(Calleigh leaning her head back, smiling against his mouth.)
(Her hand moving down the door to grasp the handle, opening
(Side shot of them as the kiss is broken.
Close-up as their eyes meet.)
(Shot of Calleigh as she looks into the Hummer, then back at
(Horatio's eyes flicking to the interior, then back at Calleigh
(Wide shot as Horatio runs his hands down Calleigh's arms,
moving around her waist, hugging her to him.)
(Calleigh hugging him back.
She pulls away after a moment, turning to step inside the
Hummer,glancing back at Horatio.)
(Horatio wathcing her for a moment, before he follows her.)
(Wide shot of the Hummer as they both disappear inside, the
door closing with a *snap*.
There is the sound of waves crashing on the beach, and a lone
seagull calls for a brief moment.)
(Interior of Hummer.
Horatio is kneeling in the back, close to the front seats, facing
He slowly faces Calleigh, his eyes intense.)
(Calleigh watching him from the opposite end, her breathing
She presses her lips together, looking down slowly.
Her hands reach up to her hair as she begins to undo her
(Horatio watching her, slowly moving towards her.)
(Calleigh letting her hair down, shaking her head a little, the
waves falling around her face.
She looks up to see Horatio infront of her, looking at her
(Side shot as Horatio raises his hand to smooth across
Calleigh's hair, letting it run through his fingers.)
(Calleigh smiling, biting her lip.)
(Horatio smiling, his other hand now intwined in her hair.
He brings her face up to meet his.
Calleigh can't look away.
Horatio moves just a whisper from Calleigh's lips.
Calleigh's eyes are heavy, and she exhales slowly, moving closer
Horatio brushes her cheeks with his thumbs, before he leans in
and kisses her softly.)
(Calleigh's eyes fluttering closed at the first contact.)
(Side shot of the kiss.
Calleigh's arms reach up to pull Horatio closer.)
(Wide shot as Horatio leans Calleigh back, moving to lay her on
the floor of the Hummer.)
(Calleigh looking up at Horatio under lidded eyes.)
(Horatio looking at her intently.
Camera pans downwards to Horatio's hands undoing the buttons
of Calleigh's jacket.
As he opens it out, his hands move against her stomach in a light
(Calleigh shutting her eyes, her mouth open in a half-moan.)
(Horatio leaning over Calleigh as he takes off ehr jacket, pulling
back to look in her eyes.
His fingers twirl a lock of her hair slowly.)
HORATIO: Still think you don't look good in all-black?
(Calleigh smiles sassily.)
CALLEIGH: You still beg to differ?
(Horatio smiles softly.)
(Calleigh's hands creeping up Horatio's chest, tugging at the lapels
of his jacket, slowly helping him out of it.
Their combined breathing grows louder.
They start kissing again, arms around each other tight.
Horatio kisses Calleigh's neck.)
CALLEIGH: Ohh, Horatio... mmm...
(After a moment, Horaito raises his head to rest his forehead
CALLEIGH: Why didn't we do this a long time ago, Handsome?
HORATIO: I don't know, sweetheart. I suppose we'll never
(He cups her face in his hands.)
HORATIO: All that matters is that we're here now... you are
everything to me, Calleigh. You've always meant the world to
(He whispers his next words close to her mouth.)
HORATIO: I never stopped loving you.
CALLEIGH: Horatio... I feel the same. About you, about us.
I trust you with my life, and I love you with all my heart.
(She kisses him lightly.)
CALLEIGH: I always have...
(She kisses him again.)
CALLEIGH: And I always will.
(She kisses him longer this time, tugging on his bottom lip.)
HORATIO: Calleigh... ahh, I...
(He is silenced as Calleigh pulls him back to her.)
(Wide shot as the kiss turns passionate.)
(Horatio taking Calleigh's hands and pinning them on either side
of her head.)
CALLEIGH: (between kisses) Take... me... now... Horatio...
HORATIO: Yes... yes... ohh, Calleigh...
(Their hands gripping each other.)
Fade out to:
(Waves crashing on the beach, the sun slowly setting.)
(Interior of Hummer.
Calleigh and Horatio lay together, Calleigh asleep on Horatio's
Camera pans up to Horatio caressing Calleigh's hair as she
He looks down.)
(Calleigh smiling in her sleep, cuddling closer.)
(Horatio taking her hand and kissing her fingers.
He lays his head back with a contented sigh, his smile wide and
His eyes slowly close, and he falls asleep.)
(Final shot of them both.)
(FADE TO BLACK.)
Soooooooooooooo Awesome, Em!!! Just loved it... If the Hummer's rockin', don't come a knockin'... :lol: You're a fantastic writer and I can't wait to read the next installment!!! ***Big Angel Hugs***
*squees and dances for joy* yay it's good to see you again...come back soon!
Great job Emer, it's wonderful to see you updating again. I always loved your style, and I can picture "H" dancing.
Great job again Emer
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