Thanks for reading the story and for the feed back. Glad you enjoyed it. It's wonderful see a new face.
I've read this whole thread in just a couple of days (cause I'm kinda new to the board LOL). I got confused a few times though, but then saw your explanation about writing several fics and getting the kids confused. However, I'm still wondering what happened to Madison. Didn't Stella and Mac have a daughter named Madison after the twins? Then Stella had an etopic pregnancy, but then she was pregnant again and I thought she said it was boy, but then they ended up having a girl named Caroline. But before the fic went ten years in the future, wasn't Stella pregnant again (after Caroline)? She was supposed to be pregnant when Frankie's brother broke in and tried to kill her, right? I think I might have somehow missed some of the story or something. Did anything ever happen with that crazy doctor that was stalking Hawkes' fiancee/wife? Or was he just not able to do anything because of the posted officers and did he just go away? What happened with Hawkes' wife's second pregnancy (the one she wanted to abort)? And wasn't Jennifer pregnant too? At the end of the "the team moves to Miami" part, the only mentioned Flack, Jennifer and Marie. Did Jenn lose the baby? Oh, and what happened to the puppy? After the ten years passed, only King and Kong were mentioned. The last mention of the puppy was after Caroline's death and Mac put the puppy in bed with Mackenzie. Sorry that I'm so confused. It's probably cause I haven't gotten much sleep lately due to backaches and stupid allergies/sinuses. Anyway, I loved the fic. Even the sad parts. I'm sad that Lindsay's gone, but the idea of a Danny/Natalia pairing sounds promising. They could be called Danalia or no... Nanny! ROTFL! j/k. I love the idea of NY/Miami teamup (now if only we could have all three shows' characters together for a movie, that would be awesome! even if its a two hour tv movie.) Is Ryan still single in your fic? I kind of half-expected the show to hook up Ryan with Valera, but so far it hasn't happened. Anyway, good fic! I can't wait to find out what Mac and Stella will have this time.
Yeah...this was one of several stories I did. And most times I confussed myself. Yes I forgot several of the story lines, mixed up pregnancy's, names children etc. This was the second crossover I did. The first one was Miami/NY Crossover which continued into the Taylor/Caine Clan. I'll try and pull that one up for you. I had like four stories going at one time. IT was very confusing. Even to me. That's why I closed them all with endings. But then I was asked to start Smex story again. I'm not sure how it will go. But we'll see. Thanks for the honesty. And the feedback. It helps alot.
Oh, okay. I just wanted to make sure I didn't miss anything. I can be somewhat of a space-cadet, so it wouldn't have been much of a surprise if I had missed something by accident LOL. I really love your story though. I stayed up till like 6am Saturday morning reading it. LOL! I only ended up getting 4 hrs of sleep Saturday cause I had to get up at 10 LOL. It was like a good book I just couldn't put down. Oh, I also wanted to add that I found it amusing how when the team would see a certain type of murder and automatically they'd know it was going to end up being a serial killer case. They must be psychic or have just done the job so long that they can predit those sort of things. But, I liked how they knew that. No criminal has a prayer with those guys on the case LOL. And the part where Horatio came to NY and to Mac and Stella's and saved the day, I actually found myself saying outloud: "Yay, Horatio!" That dude is like a superhero, I swear. LOL!
yeah..that's my mind going into overtime.:lol: I have some great Smacked FanFic up at FF.Net. Just click on my profile. It's much better, in grammar and spelling thanks to my new Beta. Have a look they are really good. There are even some Fantasy/Horror:thumbsup:
Sorry about the double post Sissi. I couldn't fit it all in my last post. The Docks When Danny and Ryan arrived at the docks it had gotten dark. "How the hell are we supposed to find anything in the dark?" "We'll have to use our lights Ryan. Let's see if we can find the dock master." As they searched the area the dock master was nowhere to be found. "I think we should call for back up. Something doesn't feel right." "I think you are right Ryan." Picking up his cell. Danny called Flack to send some officer's. But before he had a chance to say hello. He got knocked out. "Ouff". Meanwhile.... At the station Eric was becoming concerned. "Flack...it's getting late. Have Danny and Ryan checked in yet?" "Not yet. Maybe we should go check it out." "Yeah. Let's go." When they arrived at the docks they noticed Ryan and Danny's gun and badge. "What the hell is this? Where the hell are they?" "I don't know. But we better call in for divers. I have my suit in the trunk. I'll get started on the search." While they waited for the other officer's to show. Eric dived into the water and searched the bottom for any signs of Ryan or Danny. "Hey...Flack. What is going on?" "Mac, Horatio? What are you two doing here?" "We heard the call on the scanner. Is it true? Is Ryan and Danny missing?" "They are. The funny thing is someone left their badge and guns." "Sounds like a game someone is playing. A very dangerous one." "I think....I think our two CSI's may have been kidnapped." Looking at Horatio. Mac knew he was right. For it had been an hour of searching and no bodies had been found. Meanwhile.... Stella was having a hell of time getting the pain to subside from her pelvic. "Calleigh? Calleigh? I'm hurting real bad here. Please help me." "Okay Stella. Come on. Let's get you too the Emergency Department." Heading out the car. Stella could feel something wet between her legs. "Oh Calleigh...I think I'm losing the baby again. Oh not again. Please God." "Calm down Stella. Come on we are almost there. Please God let her hold on." When they arrived the Hospital they had the OBGYN ready to take her in. "I'll call her husband." "Thank you. Tell him he needs to get here ASAP." "I will doctor. Thank you." Picking up her cell she called Mac. "Taylor". "Mac? It's Calleigh. You need to get to Miami-Dade General now. I've just rushed Stella here. She's bleeding badly." "Is it the baby Calleigh?" "They haven't said yet Mac. The OBGYN informed me you need to get here." "Okay Calleigh. I'm on my way." "Horatio. I need to go. Stella's been rushed to Emergency. Complications with the pregnancy." "Okay Mac. Okay. Go ahead. Give her my best." "I will. Flack, find our team." "I will Mac. Give Stella my love." Meanwhile... Danny and Ryan woke up in the dark. "Where the hell are we Danny?" "I'm not sure Ryan. Feels like some kind of underground shaft. Do you have a lighter or anything?" "Oh...yeah. I have my mini light. I carry it in case of car problems. Let me grab it." Trying to reach his pocket with his hands bound he grabbed the light. As he flicked it on they noticed they were in a water cave. "Oh Christ. No way." "What is it Ryan?" "We're in a cavern. It's a small opening. There are several throughout Miami. When the tide comes in they fill with water." "Are you telling me we've been left here to drown?" "We have. Christ. We need to work together on loosening these ropes. We have four hours before the tide rolls in." Back at the Hospital Mac had arrived. "Excuse me. I'm Det.Taylor. I'm looking for my wife Stella." "Yes Det.Taylor. Room 313. Take the elevator's to your left." "Thank you." Arriving on the third floor. Mac ran down the hall to room 313." "Stella? Stella? Sweetheart? Are you okay?" "Mac...she cried in tears...the baby." "Oh sweetheart. Did we lose it?" "Not yet. They are trying to stop the contractions. If they can't. They will have to abort it." "Oh Stella. I'm sorry love. This is all my fault. I should have known." Embracing her in his arms, he held her as his tears fell. "Shh...come on Mac. It will be alright. It's in God's hands now. Shhh...." As the Taylor's cried. Calleigh watched from the door praying that her prayers were strong enough to save their child.
Aww! Poor Mac and Stella. I hope the baby's okay. I hope Ryan and Danny find a way out of that cavern.
"Excuse me. Mr & Mrs Taylor. I'm Dr. Weaver. I'd like to talk to you both about your condition." "Sure...come on in." sobbed Stella. "I know how hard this is Stella. But I just recieved your records from NY. I understand a few years backs you had trouble with your third child Caroline." "We did. When I was in my second tri-mester we almost lost her. My walls weren't strong enough to hold her in my sac. I was bed ridden for the rest of my pregnancy. She delivered normally. But then we lost her to a drunk driver." "I know that Stella. Once again I'm truely sorry. But it seems you are having the same problem with this child. We've stopped the bleeding, but I'm afraid you're looking at another six months bed rest. Also. After this one I would suggest not having anymore. Just not because of your condition, but also because of your age." "We understand that. This child was as much as a surprise to us. For we weren't even trying." "Okay. So how are you feeling now?" "Not bad. The pain has faded a little." "That's good. As we can see from the monitor the baby's heartbeat is very strong. So we will keep you in overnight, and you can go home tomorrow with strict orders to stay in bed." "I promise. Thank you so much." "You are very welcome. I'll set up appointments for you to come see me bi-weekly. This is the only time you should be out of bed except to go to the bathroom." "I understand. Good bye doctor." "Bye Stella. I'll check on you in the morning." Once the doctor left Calleigh came in. "Horatio just called. They still haven't found Danny or Ryan." "Great. I have to go sweetheart. Calleigh stay with Stella?" "Of course. You go ahead. Good luck finding the guys." "Thanks Calleigh. We are going to need it." Meanwhile.... Danny and Ryan were trying to loosen their ropes by rubbing up against the stone wall. "I have an idea Ryan. Let's face back to back and try and untie each other." "Sounds like an idea Danny. Can you make it over to me?" "I think so." Sliding across the cold wet cavern Danny made his way to Ryan. Now sitting back to back they began trying to untie each others hands. "It's not working Danny. The ropes are to tight." "Okay. Let's make our way to the opening and see how high up they've put us." sliding over to the little openeing they seen a very deep drop. "Christ. No way can we jump Danny. We'd kill ourselves before hitting the water." "Not really. If we jump together we should be alright." "How? We can't even use our hands to swim." "Shit. Okay. Give me your little flashlight." Passing the light to Danny he began an SOS signal. "Do you think anyone will see us?" "They better Ryan. For it will soon morning." Meanwhile.... Flack, Horatio, Eric and Mac were searching the beach. "Horatio...what time does the tide come in?" "Usually around 5 or 6am." As Mac looked above him he seen a light flashing. "Horatio...look up there. Above us." "That looks like an SOS signal. Let's go." As they drove up to the top. They called in Search and Rescue. "DANNY....DANNY? You hear us?" "Mac...yeah. We hear you. But hurry. We are freezing down here." "Okay. Hold tight. Rescue is on their way down." Once Rescue had them safely up. Horatio asked them what happened. "I'm not sure Horatio. One minute we were processing. The next we woke up in a cavern." "So there is no way you seen your attacker?" "No. We were taking by surprise." "Danny? That head is going to need stitches." "Okay Mac. How's Stella and the baby?" "They're holding. She can come home tomorrow as long as she promises to stay in bed." "Deja Vu, eh Mac?" "Yeah. Now if you two can manage to get home safe this time. I'd like to get back to my wife." "Go ahead Mac. I'll take them home." "Thanks Eric. Let me know if you need help with this case." "I will Mac. But we can handle it. Thanks though." "Anytime Eric. Horatio? You coming to pick up your wife. She's with Stella." "I'm coming Mac. I'm coming." Putting on his sunnies. They headed to the Hospital.
When they got back to Miami-Dade. Natalia seen Danny's head. "Oh my God!! Are you okay Danny?" "Yeah!! I'm fine Natalia. Don't worry." "I do worry. It looks like you need some stitches. Come on I'll take you to the Hospital." "I'm fine Natalia. Please. I don't need a Hospital." "Then at least let me clean it for you. Sit down." Sitting down. Danny spread his legs as Natalia stood between them leaning in against Danny's face with her chest. "Ouch...careful there Natalia. That burns." "Sorry Danny. I don't mean to hurt you." Looking up at her he could see the concern in her eyes. Now whether it was the pain, or the look of her sad face. Danny wrapped his hands around her face and pulled her in close till she was a breath away. "Danny"....she sighed. Touching their lips softly upon each others they felt the room spin, the air thicken, the temperature rise. And as Danny took her deep they dualed, tongue against tongue until they knew it was to much. "God...I'm so sorry Natalia. I never meant for......" "Shh...it's okay Danny. I felt it too. Come on I'll drive you home." Meanwhile.... Horatio and Mac arrived just as Calleigh was coming back with ice water. "How is she Calleigh?" "She's fine. She's determined to go home tonight. Hi handsom. I heard you found the boys." "We did love. We did." "It's about time Mac. I want to go home tonight." "Sweetheart...come on now. The doctor said in the morning." "I don't care. I hate it here. Please Mac. I want to go home." "Okay. Let me talk to the doctor." After they got the okay. Mac lifted her into a wheelchair. "Mac....*she giggled*. I can walk you know." "No...you can't. If you are coming home Stella you will obey the OBGYN's orders." "Fine. Remind me why I love you so much?" "You love me because I'm your destiny. Just like you are mine." Staring at his wife. He kissed her smartly on the mouth.