A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love

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  1. nattybatty55

    nattybatty55 Nadalaholic

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    Mac is so cute :D
     
  2. MacsLovlyAngl

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    After Natalia pulled up in front of Danny's apartment she walked him in.

    "You'll be okay Danny?"

    "I'll be fine. Thanks Natalia."

    "You're welcome."

    As she turned to leave Danny touched her hand. Turning to face him he said..."please stay Natalia."

    Knowing what Danny was asking Natalia just couldn't do it. She knew how deep Lindsay's death had hurt him and she also knew if she slept with him now it would just be as comforter.

    "I'm sorry Danny. I can't stay. You are really hurting right now. It would be a mistake. Please understand Danny. It's just to soon. Your pain for Lindsay is still raw."

    Deep down Danny knew Natalia was right. But he didn't care, couldn't care. For he needed to feel love again.

    "Natalia..." he whispered.

    "I'm sorry Danny. I know I like you. I know I felt something when I kissed you and I'm sure we will explore it further. But not until you heal some."

    Releasing her hand from Danny's she left.


    Meanwhile....

    Mac had gotten Stella home and into bed.

    "Come on Mac. This is silly. I can undress myself."

    "I know that love. But then you would deny me the pleasure of your gorgeous body."

    Caressing his fingertips across her top he helped her lift it over her head.

    "So beautiful Stella. I swear your love never fades. I could watch you forever."

    "Mac....please."

    Removing her bra. He softly kissed her lips causing her to shiver.

    "Lift your arms love. So I can slip on your nightgown."

    Lifting her arms in the air. Mac slipped it over her covering her beautiful form.

    "Is there anything you need love?"

    "There is..." she whispered still feeling the effects of her husbands caress.

    Without having to say another word Mac knew exactly what his wife needed. Laying her back against the pillows. He kissed her tummy and began caressing it in little circles watching as his child rippled within.

    Sighing in pleasure and passion Stella could feel the love in her husbands touch as she cried from the beauty of it all.
     
  3. GregNickRyanFan

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    very sweet! I like how Natalia wanted to make sure if she was with Danny that it wouldn't just be to comfort him.
     
  4. MacsGirlMel

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    aww I hope they do figure it out
     
  5. MacsLovlyAngl

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    As Natalia pulled away she didn't realize she was being followed.

    *SMASH*. Rolling over twice Natalia's car landed upside down.

    "Holy shit Bob. Did you see that? Call 911 man, hurry."

    Running over to the car the bystander called into the window.

    "Hey....hey lady...you okay?"

    Not getting any response he felt for a pulse. Finding one he called to his friend to grab the blanket from their car.

    "Come on man hurry before she goes into shock."

    As he covered her. They could hear the sirens in the distance.

    "Did you get the plate number Bob?"

    "No..the person just flew by so quick. The most I got was either a black or blue sedan."

    When the police and Flack showed up they noticed it was Natalia.

    "Nat...oh Christ. What the hell is going on? First Danny and Ryan. Now Natalia."

    "Call Eric, NOW!!!"

    As the EMT's arrived on site Natalia was just waking up.

    "Auuuuuuugh....I can't move my leg. It's all numb."

    Once the EMT's checked her scrapes and cuts they carefully pulled her from her vehicle.

    "Brace that left leg and her neck to be safe."

    "Yes sir, said the EMT...we need to move her now. We'll be taking her Miami General."

    Once they left Eric arrived and seen Natalia's car.

    "How is she Flack?"

    "She's going to be fine, They've taken her to Miami General. But I think we need to figure out what the hell is going on."

    "It seems to me someone is out for blood and playing a very dangerous game. Have you called Danny yet?"

    "No. I'll do that now."

    Getting out of the shower Danny heard the phone ring.

    "Messer."

    "Hey Danny it's Eric. We need you three blocks down from your apartment. Someone tried to kill Natalia."

    "Is she okay? Did she get seriously hurt?"

    "No. But they've taken her to General. I need you here to help process."

    "Okay Eric. I'm on my way."

    Hanging up the phone Danny wanted to get the scene processed quickly so he could check on Natalia.
     
  6. nattybatty55

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    :eek: Poor nat. danny's going to be so cute :D
     
  7. MacsLovlyAngl

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    When Danny arrived he seen how damaged Natalia's car was.

    "Christ...it's a wonder she survived."

    "I know Danny. Ryan has found some trace of paint transfer. He's taken it to the lab."

    "Are these our witnesses Eric?"

    "They are Danny. They seen the dark blue/black sedan smash into Nat's car. So I've put out an all points for cars matching that color with damage and paint transfer to the front end."

    "Okay. If it's alright with you Eric, I'd like to head over to the Hospital and see Natalia."

    Now Eric wasn't dense, he knew damn well Danny had feelings for Nat. He could tell the first day they met.

    "Sure Danny, that's fine."

    "Thanks man. I just need to be sure."

    After Danny left Flack turned to Eric and said...."I think she's going to be good for Danny. He's been through hell and she may just be able to help him live again."


    When Danny arrived at the Hospital he stopped at the front desk.

    "Excuse me, can you tell me where I can find CSI Bona Vista?"

    "Sure. she's in observation room one."

    Opening the door, Danny seen her laying on the bed.

    "Natalia? Natalia? Talk me hon."

    Waking up she seen the concern in Danny's eyes.

    "Hey Danny. What are you doing here?"

    "I'm here to check on you. I needed to be sure you were okay."

    At that moment the doctor walked in.

    "Oh hello! Who are you?"

    "I'm Detec.....I mean I'm CSI Messer."

    "Oh, okay. Natalia we got your x-rays back. Nothing is broken you were very lucky. But we do have concern with that bump on your head. We think it would be best if you stayed overnight."

    "No...I want to go home."

    "Natalia...please understand you need to be watched for the next 24 hrs."

    "I'll watch her. I'll keep her at my place for the night."

    "Is that okay with you Natalia?"

    "Yeah...I'll agree to that doctor. Please can I go?"

    "Sure. Just let me get your release papers."

    When the doctor left the room Natalia began to cry.

    "Hey now Nat. What's the matter?"

    "I hate Hospitals."

    "You know what Nat? So do I."
     
  8. MacsGirlMel

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    Wait...he's not a detective there?

    I'm glad she's okay
     
  9. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    No. He's second to Eric. A CSI. Only Flack is a detective. For he took over Franks job.

    The new CSI:Miami team, will consist of
    Eric: Head CSI, taken over Horatio's job
    Danny: CSI: Second to Eric
    Ryan: CSI
    Sheldon: Coroner
    Flack: Head of Detectives
    Adam: Head Lab tech
     
  10. GregNickRyanFan

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    Very good chapters. I can't wait to see what happens when Danny gets Nat to his place. :lol:
     
  11. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    When Danny pulled into his driveway. He seen Natalia was sleeping. Not wanting to wake her. He picked her up in his arms.

    "Mmm...Danny? What are you doing?"

    "You were sleeping Nat. So I was going to carry you into my place."

    "Umm...I'm awake now. So you can, put me down." she smiled.

    Setting her feet on the ground she almost fell.

    "Whoa...easy there Nat. Get your balance. You okay now?"

    "Mmhmm. Thanks Danny."

    "No thanks needed Nat. Let's get you inside."

    When he got her inside he took her right to his room and placed her in his bed.

    "Oh Danny. I can't take your room."

    "Sure you can. Now, you can wear one of my t-shirts. I'll be back in five, I'm going to get you some water so you can take your pain killer."

    Once Danny left Natalia changed into Danny's huge NY t-shirt and climbed back into his bed.

    "All settled Nat?"

    "I think so. I really want to thank you Danny for helping me escape that place."

    "No worries Nat. Here's your pill. Get some sleep now. I'll see you in the morning."

    Leaving the room Danny shut off the light and walked into the living room.

    *Ring*

    "Hello."

    "Hey Danno. How's Natalia?"

    "She's fine Don. Did you guys find anything?"

    "Not yet man. Hopefully soon. Adam's still working on the trace."

    "Okay. Call if anything changes."

    "I will Danny. Night."

    Hanging up the phone Danny laid down on his sofa and fell asleep.

    She heard the screams at three in the morning. Getting out of bed she shook Danny awake.

    "Danny...wake up Danny."

    Looking at Natalia with tears she could feel his pain.

    "Are you okay Danny?"

    Wiping his eyes he said..."I'm fine Nat. Go back to bed."

    "No. I want to make sure you are okay first."

    Danny was more then okay. He was aroused by Natalia in his big NY shirt.

    "Listen Nat...he said with a dangerous whisper...leave now."

    She could see the dangerous passion in his eyes. Too frozen to move he grabbed her and tossed her under him.

    "Why didn't you listen Nat. Why didn't you just go back to bed?"

    Not waiting for her answer he kissed her in wild passion. Tongue against tongue, caress against caress as his hand slipped under his huge shirt.

    Breaking the kiss he said..."Tell me you want this Nat. Tell me you want me to love you?"

    Sighing in the deepest passion she whispered...."Yes Danny. Love me. Love me now."

    With no more words between them. Danny drugged and seduced Natalia into his world of wicked desire.
     
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    Woo-hoo! I love that last line!
     
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    rroooowwrrrrrrrr :evil:
     
  14. nattybatty55

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    *whistles* :devil:
     
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    Picking her up in his arms. He carried her into the bedroom and laid her on the sheets. Not wanting her to change her mind Danny lifted his shirt over her head and placed his knee between her thighs as she cried out..."Danny".

    Kissing her wildly across her lips, her neck, her arms, she began rocking against him. Not wanting to wait any longer. Knowing she was more than ready Danny pulled off his sweats and buried himself into her soul. As they rocked in rhythm, they could feel the tightness and passion build.

    "Are you ready Nat? Please tell me you are ready?"

    "Yes Danny. Now. I'm ready now."

    After wildly attacking each other in frenzied bliss, he picked her up and carried her into the shower.


    Meanwhile....

    After questioning several witnesses. Not one of them could remember seeing anyone.

    "That's our last witness Don. Let's call it a night."

    "Sounds good Eric. I'd like to get home to my wife."

    "I understand. Is your daughter coming in this week-end to see you?"

    "Yeah. Marie is flying down with the kids. Her husband is staying in NY."

    "Sounds like it should be alot of fun." Get home safe and watch your back."

    "You too Eric. See ya."

    Watching them leave the station. He looked at them with pure evil. How dare they force him into retirement. He wasn't ready. But did they listen? No. Getting into his now rented car he followed behind Flack.

    Turning the corner Flack realized he was being followed. Pulling over to the side he waited to see what the guy would do. As the guy just sat there Flack reached for his phone but realized he had left it at the station.

    "Smart move Flack. Now what?"

    Pulling out his gun, he opened his door. Just as he was about to step out the car pulled out knocking off his door.

    "Holy shit...you son of a bitch."

    Not waiting around Flack began to follow the black sedan. Not seeing any plate they raced through the red lights narrowly missing on coming traffic. Knowing it was time to stop before he caused an accident. Flack pulled over to the side, watching as the sedan rounded the corner.
     
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