Yikes! Close call for Don! I hope that guy doesn't go after Jenn.
A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love
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nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Agreed. Loved the danny/nat bit 
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Seconded I hope they get the guy
I hope they get the guy
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Later that evening Mac had dinner made. Heading into Stella's room he found her sitting in the rocking chair.
"Stel...love. You know you are not supposed to be out of bed."
"I know Mac. I can't help it. I hate being tied down to one spot."
"I know that love. But if you aren't extremely careful this time. We could lose the baby."
Trying to get up out of the rocker. Mac lifted her and carried her to the bed.
"Damn you Mac Taylor. Would you stop."
"Never love. Never will I stop. Now...if you don't eat I'll have to force you."
"Haaaa...dream on Taylor. That day will never come."
Placing the tray beside her he picked up he fork and twirled her spaghetti. Moving the fork up towards her mouth she tightened her lips.
"Come on love. Please eat. Think of the baby."
sighing strongly, she ate the first helping.
"Mmm....holy Mac. This is great. Did you make it?"
"Of course I made it. Made it just for you," he smiled.
Stella knew something wasn't right. For she had had Mac's spaghetti before, and it never tasted like this.
"You have five minutes to tell me where the spaghetti came from. Or I'll get up out of bed and look myself."
"Okay...okay, you win love. It came from Tony's."
"I thought so. It was the flavour and texture that gave it away."
"I'll be right back love. I need to let in King and Kong."
When he opened the door. King and Kong ran upstairs right onto the foot of their bed.
"Well....hello King and Kong, miss me?"
Crawling up beside Stella they licked her and fell asleep.
Changing into his night clothes, Mac came out of the washroom and tried to get into bed.
"Grrrrrwwwl, grrrwwl." The dogs growled.
"What the hell is the matter with you two. Get down."
Not listening. Mac was getting pissed off. For it was his wife, his room, and his bed.
"DOWN!!!" he yelled.
With their tails between their legs and their heads down. They leaped from the bed.
"Laydown." yelled Mac.
Flopping their butts on the floor, they laid down and fell into sleep.
Meanwhile Flack had gotten in the door and found his daughter Marie and his grandchildren there early.
"Hi papa...you miss us?"
"Jordan, Jake, Jack, come give papa a hug."
Running into their grandfathers arms, he held them tight.
"Where is mommy and nana?"
"They's cooking in the kitchen."
"They are? Wow. What are they making?"
"I not know papa. I's too little."
Laughing at his gorgeous grandson he hugged him tightly.
"God I missed you characters."
"We missed you too papa. A whole bunch."
Now there is a sight for my eyes."
"Marie....look at you. You're pregnant again."
"I am dad. What's your excuse?" You should have had kids by now."
"It's not for lack of trying love. It's just not in the books for your mom and I right now. We both have very hectic schedules."
"You need to make time dad. Take a walk along the beach, go for dinner, make love on the Miami sand."
"You young lady are just to cheeky. Now let's eat."
Sititng down to dinner Flack knew how badly he wated a child of his own, But he also knew with their hectic schedules it wouldn't be anytime soon.
"Stel...love. You know you are not supposed to be out of bed."
"I know Mac. I can't help it. I hate being tied down to one spot."
"I know that love. But if you aren't extremely careful this time. We could lose the baby."
Trying to get up out of the rocker. Mac lifted her and carried her to the bed.
"Damn you Mac Taylor. Would you stop."
"Never love. Never will I stop. Now...if you don't eat I'll have to force you."
"Haaaa...dream on Taylor. That day will never come."
Placing the tray beside her he picked up he fork and twirled her spaghetti. Moving the fork up towards her mouth she tightened her lips.
"Come on love. Please eat. Think of the baby."
sighing strongly, she ate the first helping.
"Mmm....holy Mac. This is great. Did you make it?"
"Of course I made it. Made it just for you," he smiled.
Stella knew something wasn't right. For she had had Mac's spaghetti before, and it never tasted like this.
"You have five minutes to tell me where the spaghetti came from. Or I'll get up out of bed and look myself."
"Okay...okay, you win love. It came from Tony's."
"I thought so. It was the flavour and texture that gave it away."
"I'll be right back love. I need to let in King and Kong."
When he opened the door. King and Kong ran upstairs right onto the foot of their bed.
"Well....hello King and Kong, miss me?"
Crawling up beside Stella they licked her and fell asleep.
Changing into his night clothes, Mac came out of the washroom and tried to get into bed.
"Grrrrrwwwl, grrrwwl." The dogs growled.
"What the hell is the matter with you two. Get down."
Not listening. Mac was getting pissed off. For it was his wife, his room, and his bed.
"DOWN!!!" he yelled.
With their tails between their legs and their heads down. They leaped from the bed.
"Laydown." yelled Mac.
Flopping their butts on the floor, they laid down and fell into sleep.
Meanwhile Flack had gotten in the door and found his daughter Marie and his grandchildren there early.
"Hi papa...you miss us?"
"Jordan, Jake, Jack, come give papa a hug."
Running into their grandfathers arms, he held them tight.
"Where is mommy and nana?"
"They's cooking in the kitchen."
"They are? Wow. What are they making?"
"I not know papa. I's too little."
Laughing at his gorgeous grandson he hugged him tightly.
"God I missed you characters."
"We missed you too papa. A whole bunch."
Now there is a sight for my eyes."
"Marie....look at you. You're pregnant again."
"I am dad. What's your excuse?" You should have had kids by now."
"It's not for lack of trying love. It's just not in the books for your mom and I right now. We both have very hectic schedules."
"You need to make time dad. Take a walk along the beach, go for dinner, make love on the Miami sand."
"You young lady are just to cheeky. Now let's eat."
Sititng down to dinner Flack knew how badly he wated a child of his own, But he also knew with their hectic schedules it wouldn't be anytime soon.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
awww surprise them and make it happen lol
Did they get new dogs or is this the same King and Kong?
:lol: At Marie and the kids.
:lol: At Marie and the kids.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
^^Not sure...But I missed king and Kong
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Hi guys,
I don't want to start a new chapter till the new thread. So I'm going wait on a response from one of the Mod's that it's okay to start the new thread as we still have two posts to go before we hit 1000.
So be patient, the next chapter is coming.
I don't want to start a new chapter till the new thread. So I'm going wait on a response from one of the Mod's that it's okay to start the new thread as we still have two posts to go before we hit 1000.
So be patient, the next chapter is coming.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
ok- Im sure it'll be worth the wait anyway
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Leave it too you Natty to help me hit 1000.:lol:
Now if one of our lovely Mod's will lock this thread it would be much appriciated
Now if one of our lovely Mod's will lock this thread it would be much appriciated
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
You won't hear much about Maddy as the story continues. She left with her family across seas. Which is why you no longer hear of her. I may bring her back at a later time.
But the story continues from here
The Younger Generation
http://talk.csifiles.com/showthread.php?t=56561
But the story continues from here
The Younger Generation
http://talk.csifiles.com/showthread.php?t=56561
Asprine
Pathologist
Thank you for the story Linda..
Mac is a lucky guy. Lost Peyton got Stella. :lol: I love the way you descrive the 'savage'. Like you said,"40% of the scene has been cut" Why? can you send to me through PM please? I wish i could read them.. Breakfast in bed was a good idea. I'm glad that Mac cook Steak. Unlike he made burgers for Peyton. :lol:. I'm evil:devil: i know. This story has lots of intimate moments yeah. OMG! I'm sure Stella will really do something wrong if she sees Mac in boxers only.
GOSH! That was a brilliant one Linda.. Without nothing on but an apron. That surely will make Mac Drools. Seriously, your story makes me drool too. :drool::drool:
My comment for your story :
Maybe you shouldn't make so much intimate moments between the two of them. I love it but i would like to see more err.. How should i say. For example, how they got together or something like that and slowly developes into intimacy. Hee.. Hope you don't mind.
This is my suggestion only.. >> Maybe something you can write stories according to season 5 spoilers. I'm sure it will be a good and interesting one.
Like i said, I'm looking forward to more of your stories. This SMacked story of yours really makes my day. I've been reading them repeatedly too. :lol: Thank you Linda.. I still left one more story "Younger Generations". I'll read it later. :drool:
Mac is a lucky guy. Lost Peyton got Stella. :lol: I love the way you descrive the 'savage'. Like you said,"40% of the scene has been cut" Why? can you send to me through PM please? I wish i could read them.
. Breakfast in bed was a good idea. I'm glad that Mac cook Steak. Unlike he made burgers for Peyton. :lol:. I'm evil:devil: i know. This story has lots of intimate moments yeah. OMG! I'm sure Stella will really do something wrong if she sees Mac in boxers only. GOSH! That was a brilliant one Linda.. Without nothing on but an apron. That surely will make Mac Drools. Seriously, your story makes me drool too. :drool::drool:
My comment for your story :
Maybe you shouldn't make so much intimate moments between the two of them. I love it but i would like to see more err.. How should i say. For example, how they got together or something like that and slowly developes into intimacy. Hee.. Hope you don't mind
. This is my suggestion only.. >> Maybe something you can write stories according to season 5 spoilers. I'm sure it will be a good and interesting one.
Mac and Stella gets new love interest.
Like i said, I'm looking forward to more of your stories. This SMacked story of yours really makes my day. I've been reading them repeatedly too. :lol: Thank you Linda..
I still left one more story "Younger Generations". I'll read it later. :drool:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
:
Maybe you shouldn't make so much intimate moments between the two of them. I love it but i would like to see more err.. How should i say. For example, how they got together or something like that and slowly developes into intimacy. Hee.. Hope you don't mind
Not at all. This was the second story I did when I joined the board back in 2007. I never use to write, till Melly told me I should. Then I tried a couple and members seemed to like them, so I kind of kept writing.:lol:
Now I can't stop.
Thanks for your review, it's appriciated.
Wow, is still surprised this hasn't been locked yet:guffaw: