nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
nnnnnnnnnoooooooo!!! 
A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Ack you're mean making us wait till tonight. Does Flack count as a main char?
At least if it's still near the ground it can crash sort of and they can still make it. I did that with Mac and Stella once myself in an RP.
At least if it's still near the ground it can crash sort of and they can still make it. I did that with Mac and Stella once myself in an RP.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
I ws thinking the same thing.... but I bet Caroline isn't!!
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Is Flack a main charc, hmmm!!! have to think about that one. :devil: hehe!!
Thanks again for the awesome feedback :lol:
Thanks again for the awesome feedback :lol:
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
You love teasing us don't you!?!?!?
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Meanwhile.....
Mac and Danny had returned to Hawkes room.
"I guess he's not back yet", said Mac.
As they sat and waited for Hawkes to return, Mac got a call from NYPD.
"Det.Taylor", said Mac.
"Mac"! "This is NYPD, we need to inform you that Flight 201 has crashed", no known survivers at this time".
Mac thought to himself, Flight 201, why does that ring a bell"?
Then all of a sudden it came to him. "Flack and Caroline". "Christ, Flack and Caroline were on that flight".
"We know Sir, that's why we called you". "Most of us are at the crash site, but it doesn't look good".
"Have you found any survivers"?
"None at this time Sir", the Fire and Rescue are checking now".
"Okay, keep me informed".
"Will do Sir".
When Mac hung up the phone, he told Danny.
"Are you serious Mac, please tell me you're joking".
"I'm sorry, I can't do that", said Mac as he called Stella.
Meanwhile.....
Fire and Rescue, had pulled out four deceased victims from the plane, as P.D. went over to look, they realized it wasn't Flack or his wife".
"How many more, are in their"?
"To many too count, we haven't found any live ones yet".
The Fire Dept kept pulling out bodies, when one Fireman shouted......
"I have two live ones here", get me Rescue now".
As P.D. ran over with Rescue, they seen it was Flack and his wife.
"It's them, called the Officer, they're alive, call Mac Taylor".
After Mac got the call, he and Danny waited for Don and Caroline to arrive.
"Here they come now" , said Mac, as the Ambulances pulled up.
When they seen Don, he had laserations to his face and arms. But as they brought out Caroline, she had a piece of metal sticking out from her abdominum.
"You do know she's pregnant, right"? yelled Mac at the EMT.
"If she was Sir, she isn't now, that metal has gone straight through her abdominal wall".
"Christ"!!! said Mac to Danny. "How the hell is Flack going to survive this"?
"I don't know Mac, I guess we'll have to wait and see".
Meanwhile.....
Stella and Lindsay had just gotten to the Hospital.
"How are they Mac, asked Stella.
"Not good love, Caroline has lost the baby, that's all we know right now".
"Oh God"!! "How is she going to survive that"? "Jesus Mac, what's next"?
"I don't know love", said Mac as he held Stella in his arms.
"how you feeling Lindsay"? asked Danny.
"I'm fine Danny, just a little tired".
"Come on over here and sit down".
Everyone was waiting patiently, to hear not only about Hawkes, but also about Flack and Caroline too.
Mac and Danny had returned to Hawkes room.
"I guess he's not back yet", said Mac.
As they sat and waited for Hawkes to return, Mac got a call from NYPD.
"Det.Taylor", said Mac.
"Mac"! "This is NYPD, we need to inform you that Flight 201 has crashed", no known survivers at this time".
Mac thought to himself, Flight 201, why does that ring a bell"?
Then all of a sudden it came to him. "Flack and Caroline". "Christ, Flack and Caroline were on that flight".
"We know Sir, that's why we called you". "Most of us are at the crash site, but it doesn't look good".
"Have you found any survivers"?
"None at this time Sir", the Fire and Rescue are checking now".
"Okay, keep me informed".
"Will do Sir".
When Mac hung up the phone, he told Danny.
"Are you serious Mac, please tell me you're joking".
"I'm sorry, I can't do that", said Mac as he called Stella.
Meanwhile.....
Fire and Rescue, had pulled out four deceased victims from the plane, as P.D. went over to look, they realized it wasn't Flack or his wife".
"How many more, are in their"?
"To many too count, we haven't found any live ones yet".
The Fire Dept kept pulling out bodies, when one Fireman shouted......
"I have two live ones here", get me Rescue now".
As P.D. ran over with Rescue, they seen it was Flack and his wife.
"It's them, called the Officer, they're alive, call Mac Taylor".
After Mac got the call, he and Danny waited for Don and Caroline to arrive.
"Here they come now" , said Mac, as the Ambulances pulled up.
When they seen Don, he had laserations to his face and arms. But as they brought out Caroline, she had a piece of metal sticking out from her abdominum.
"You do know she's pregnant, right"? yelled Mac at the EMT.
"If she was Sir, she isn't now, that metal has gone straight through her abdominal wall".
"Christ"!!! said Mac to Danny. "How the hell is Flack going to survive this"?
"I don't know Mac, I guess we'll have to wait and see".
Meanwhile.....
Stella and Lindsay had just gotten to the Hospital.
"How are they Mac, asked Stella.
"Not good love, Caroline has lost the baby, that's all we know right now".
"Oh God"!! "How is she going to survive that"? "Jesus Mac, what's next"?
"I don't know love", said Mac as he held Stella in his arms.
"how you feeling Lindsay"? asked Danny.
"I'm fine Danny, just a little tired".
"Come on over here and sit down".
Everyone was waiting patiently, to hear not only about Hawkes, but also about Flack and Caroline too.
bringirl2001
Hit and Run
well this story is just full of drama- you are oding an excellent job. more please
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
lol yes she does love teasing us and being evil.
At least they're alive for right now.
At least they're alive for right now.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Hawkes had returned from his MRI.
"How did everything go Doctor"? asked Mac.
"Everything went fine, Sheldon has damaged some nerves on the right side, but with some Physio he should be fine".
"Thank-you doctor".
After the doctor left, Mac told Hawkes the bad news.
"Listen Sheldon". "Flack and Caroline's plane crashed". "they are here in the Hospital, being worked on". "Caroline has lost the baby, and is still in surgery having a piece of metal removed from her abdominal cavitiy". "Flack has a concusion and is resting comfortably". "He hasn't been told about the baby yet".
"Oh my God Mac", "Flack is going to be devistated".
"I know Sheldon". "All we can do is be there for him".
At that moment Stella came running into the room in tears.
"Mac"!! "Caroline didn't make it". "The doctor just informed us, they couldn't save her". "Oh God Mac, poor Flack".
"Is he awake yet Stella"?
"No, he was still out, when I ran in here"?
"Okay love". "You stay here with Sheldon, Danny and Lindsay, and I'll go check on Flack".
When Mac got down to Don's room, he was still sleeping.
"Excuse me", "Det.Taylor"?
"Yes". "I'm Det.Taylor".
"The doctor said I should give you this". "It's Det.Flacks wife's wedding band".
"Thank-you nurse", said Mac.
Meanwhile....
Stella walked down to Don's room, to let Mac know she was going home.
"Mac"! "I'm going to go home and see our babies". "I'm taking Lindsay, and Danny said he would pick her up later".
"That's fine love, I'll see you soon, give the babies a kiss for me".
"I will Mac". Bending down Stella kissed Don on the cheek and told him to get better.
Once Stella got home with Lindsay, she paid the sitter and then went up to check her babies. Finding them all asleep, she went back downstairs and put on some water for tea.
"How you feeling Lindsay"? "You look really pale".
"I'm fine, just shocked and upset". "Poor Don, loosing his wife and child at the same time like that, I can't imagine, what he's going to be feeling".
Meanwhile....
Don was coming around to waking up.
"Don"!! "It's Mac". "Do you know where you are"?
Looking around he noticed the Hospital.
"I'm in the Hospital, we were in a plane crash". "Where is Caroline, and how's our baby"?
Looking into Mac's eyes, Flack already knew she was dead.
"No"!!! "Please tell me she's not gone Mac", "Please".
"I'm sorry Don, both she and the baby died".
"Noooooonoooo!!!!!! God not my wife and child". "Why"! "Why did you take them"?
"Listen Don, you're going to be okay, we are all here for you".
"It's going to be okay"? "It's never going to be okay Mac". "You have a wife and three children". "Danny has a wife and almost four children". "What do I have Mac"? "I'l tell you what I have, nothing". "I have nothing", said Don as he threw the jug across the room.
"You have your life Don", said Mac.
"What good is my life, if I don't have Caroline".
"Just get the hell out Mac". "I said leave".
Mac pulled the wedding band out of his pocket and placed it beside Don. As he walked out the room, he could hear the ring tink, against the ground.
"How did everything go Doctor"? asked Mac.
"Everything went fine, Sheldon has damaged some nerves on the right side, but with some Physio he should be fine".
"Thank-you doctor".
After the doctor left, Mac told Hawkes the bad news.
"Listen Sheldon". "Flack and Caroline's plane crashed". "they are here in the Hospital, being worked on". "Caroline has lost the baby, and is still in surgery having a piece of metal removed from her abdominal cavitiy". "Flack has a concusion and is resting comfortably". "He hasn't been told about the baby yet".
"Oh my God Mac", "Flack is going to be devistated".
"I know Sheldon". "All we can do is be there for him".
At that moment Stella came running into the room in tears.
"Mac"!! "Caroline didn't make it". "The doctor just informed us, they couldn't save her". "Oh God Mac, poor Flack".
"Is he awake yet Stella"?
"No, he was still out, when I ran in here"?
"Okay love". "You stay here with Sheldon, Danny and Lindsay, and I'll go check on Flack".
When Mac got down to Don's room, he was still sleeping.
"Excuse me", "Det.Taylor"?
"Yes". "I'm Det.Taylor".
"The doctor said I should give you this". "It's Det.Flacks wife's wedding band".
"Thank-you nurse", said Mac.
Meanwhile....
Stella walked down to Don's room, to let Mac know she was going home.
"Mac"! "I'm going to go home and see our babies". "I'm taking Lindsay, and Danny said he would pick her up later".
"That's fine love, I'll see you soon, give the babies a kiss for me".
"I will Mac". Bending down Stella kissed Don on the cheek and told him to get better.
Once Stella got home with Lindsay, she paid the sitter and then went up to check her babies. Finding them all asleep, she went back downstairs and put on some water for tea.
"How you feeling Lindsay"? "You look really pale".
"I'm fine, just shocked and upset". "Poor Don, loosing his wife and child at the same time like that, I can't imagine, what he's going to be feeling".
Meanwhile....
Don was coming around to waking up.
"Don"!! "It's Mac". "Do you know where you are"?
Looking around he noticed the Hospital.
"I'm in the Hospital, we were in a plane crash". "Where is Caroline, and how's our baby"?
Looking into Mac's eyes, Flack already knew she was dead.
"No"!!! "Please tell me she's not gone Mac", "Please".
"I'm sorry Don, both she and the baby died".
"Noooooonoooo!!!!!! God not my wife and child". "Why"! "Why did you take them"?
"Listen Don, you're going to be okay, we are all here for you".
"It's going to be okay"? "It's never going to be okay Mac". "You have a wife and three children". "Danny has a wife and almost four children". "What do I have Mac"? "I'l tell you what I have, nothing". "I have nothing", said Don as he threw the jug across the room.
"You have your life Don", said Mac.
"What good is my life, if I don't have Caroline".
"Just get the hell out Mac". "I said leave".
Mac pulled the wedding band out of his pocket and placed it beside Don. As he walked out the room, he could hear the ring tink, against the ground.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
ack that's extremely sad. More more more! It is interesting to do things like that now and then cause since you don't let any main chars die, it would get kinda boring if we automatically knew everyone would be safe every time. But you're still evil lol
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Good points Mel!!
1. Extremly sad
2. Good to know we get a bit of dramma
3. You are so evil !!!
1. Extremly sad
2. Good to know we get a bit of dramma
3. You are so evil !!!
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
When Mac got back to Hawkes room, Danny asked how Flack was doing.
"How is he Mac"?
"Not good Danny, he's really hurting".
"May be I should talk to him". "It might help".
"Trust me Danny, the only thing we can do is wait. Once he's accepted it, then we'll be there to pick up the pieces". "Hawkes, I'm going to head home to Stella, I'll be back in the morning to check on you and Flack".
"Yeah"!! "I'll see you tomorrow too Hawkes, I'd like to get Lindsay home".
"That's fine, I'll see you both in the morning".
After Mac and Danny left, Hawkes called for the nurse.
"What is it Det.Hawkes"? said the gorgeous nurse.
"I'd like you too get me a wheelchair, help me out of this bed, and wheel me down to my patners room".
"Sure, I can do that".
Meanwhile.....
Mac and Danny got home and found everyone in bed.
"You may as well stay the night Danny, there's no use waking her up".
As they headed upstairs Mac could hear Maddy talking in her crib.
"There's my little girl". "How's daddy's Maddy"?
Maddy gurggled, as Mac kissed her pretty little rosebud lips. Taking her to the chair, he began to sing......
You're the end of the rainbow, my pot of gold,
You're daddy's little girl to have and hold.
A precious gem is what you are,
You're mommy's bright and shining star.
You're the spirit of Christmas, my star on the tree,
You're the Easter bunny to mommy and me.
You're sugar you're spice, you're everything nice,
And you're daddy's little girl.
You're the end of the rainbow, my pot of gold,
You're daddy's little girl to have and hold.
A precious gem is what you are,
You're mommy's bright and shining star.
You're the treasure I cherish so sparkling and bright,
You were touched by the holy and beautiful light.
Like angels that sing, a heavenly thing,
And you're daddy's little girl.
Once Maddy was sleeping again, Mac laid her back down. Heading back to their room, he got undressed and cuddled up to Stella.
"I love you Stella", "So much".
"I love you to Mac Taylor", "More then you'll ever know".
Meanwhile....
Once the nurse had Hawkes in the chair, she left him alone to see his friend.
"Flack"!! "Flack", It's Sheldon"? "You awake Don"?
"What do you want Sheldon"?
"To talk". "I thought you could use a friend".
"I don't need any friends, just leave".
"I can't do that". "You need to hear this". "God chose to keep you alive, because you have a greater purpose here". "You are needed, needed to help and protect others". "You can't blame yourself, you could not have predicted that flight would crash".
"You don't understand Hawkes". "I promised Caroline".
"Promised her what Don"?
"Just before the plane went down, she said
"We're going to crash, aren't we Don"? said Caroline in tears. "What about our baby Don, we will never see it , or hold it, or love it".
"Do you know what I said to her"? "No"!!! "Well let me tell you........*Crying* "Just close your eyes and think of the two of us together forever". "That's what I told her". "Now she's up in heaven with our baby and I'm down here". "Now I have to go through the rest of my life, knowing I lied to her". "While she's up there all alone".
Hawkes was stunned, moving his chair closer to Don's bed, he held him, while he cried.
"How is he Mac"?
"Not good Danny, he's really hurting".
"May be I should talk to him". "It might help".
"Trust me Danny, the only thing we can do is wait. Once he's accepted it, then we'll be there to pick up the pieces". "Hawkes, I'm going to head home to Stella, I'll be back in the morning to check on you and Flack".
"Yeah"!! "I'll see you tomorrow too Hawkes, I'd like to get Lindsay home".
"That's fine, I'll see you both in the morning".
After Mac and Danny left, Hawkes called for the nurse.
"What is it Det.Hawkes"? said the gorgeous nurse.
"I'd like you too get me a wheelchair, help me out of this bed, and wheel me down to my patners room".
"Sure, I can do that".
Meanwhile.....
Mac and Danny got home and found everyone in bed.
"You may as well stay the night Danny, there's no use waking her up".
As they headed upstairs Mac could hear Maddy talking in her crib.
"There's my little girl". "How's daddy's Maddy"?
Maddy gurggled, as Mac kissed her pretty little rosebud lips. Taking her to the chair, he began to sing......
You're the end of the rainbow, my pot of gold,
You're daddy's little girl to have and hold.
A precious gem is what you are,
You're mommy's bright and shining star.
You're the spirit of Christmas, my star on the tree,
You're the Easter bunny to mommy and me.
You're sugar you're spice, you're everything nice,
And you're daddy's little girl.
You're the end of the rainbow, my pot of gold,
You're daddy's little girl to have and hold.
A precious gem is what you are,
You're mommy's bright and shining star.
You're the treasure I cherish so sparkling and bright,
You were touched by the holy and beautiful light.
Like angels that sing, a heavenly thing,
And you're daddy's little girl.
Once Maddy was sleeping again, Mac laid her back down. Heading back to their room, he got undressed and cuddled up to Stella.
"I love you Stella", "So much".
"I love you to Mac Taylor", "More then you'll ever know".
Meanwhile....
Once the nurse had Hawkes in the chair, she left him alone to see his friend.
"Flack"!! "Flack", It's Sheldon"? "You awake Don"?
"What do you want Sheldon"?
"To talk". "I thought you could use a friend".
"I don't need any friends, just leave".
"I can't do that". "You need to hear this". "God chose to keep you alive, because you have a greater purpose here". "You are needed, needed to help and protect others". "You can't blame yourself, you could not have predicted that flight would crash".
"You don't understand Hawkes". "I promised Caroline".
"Promised her what Don"?
"Just before the plane went down, she said
"We're going to crash, aren't we Don"? said Caroline in tears. "What about our baby Don, we will never see it , or hold it, or love it".
"Do you know what I said to her"? "No"!!! "Well let me tell you........*Crying* "Just close your eyes and think of the two of us together forever". "That's what I told her". "Now she's up in heaven with our baby and I'm down here". "Now I have to go through the rest of my life, knowing I lied to her". "While she's up there all alone".
Hawkes was stunned, moving his chair closer to Don's bed, he held him, while he cried.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
I feel so sorry for Flack
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Yeah me too. And DaddyMac is so adorable
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
In the morning after speaking with Don's doctor, he informed Mac, he could go home as long as he was supervised.
"Morning Don", how you doing "?
"Fine Mac, can I be released yet"?
"You can, but only under supervision, due to your concussion". "So we want you to stay with us for a while".
"Whatever, just get me out of here".
Mac could tell Don was still very distraught, but he also knew he was a little better, because at least he was talking today. After signing the release papers, they stopped off to see Sheldon.
"How you doing this morning Sheldon"? asked Mac.
"Better thanks, You getting sprung Don"? laughed Hawkes.
"Yeah"!!! "As long as I stay with Mac and Stella".
"Good, that's really good". "You'll be fine Don, it will get easier", said Hawkes.
Meanwhile.....
Once Mac had Don home, he got him comfortable in bed.
"Anything you need Don"? asked Mac.
"No"! "I'm fine right now" , thanks Mac.
"Your welcome". "If you need me just call, you're right near everything". "The bottom room is the best, it's closest to the kitchen, laughed Mac.
Don smiled, Mac thought to himself, that's a good start.
Meanwhile......
Danny heard DJ gabbing away in his crib. Letting Lindsay sleep, he took DJ down for breakfast.
"There you go little man, are you hungry"?
Danny got down the Cheerio's, and cut up some fresh fruit, along with soft toast. Sitting down with DJ, he heard the phone ring.
"Hello"! said Danny.
"Hey Danny, it's Mac. "Just wanted to let you know, Don is out of the Hospital, and staying with us for a while".
"How is he Mac"?
"He's a little better, it will take time".
"What about Hawkes, when does he get out"? asked Danny.
"Not for a while yet, he hasen't even started Physio".
"Okay then, I'll stop by the Hospital, and see Hawkes, then I'll come by and see Don".
"Okay Danny, bye".
While Mac was on the phone, Mackenzie who was now almost two, ran down the hall into Don's room.
"Hi"!!, "Hi"!! said the little voice to Don.
"Hello Mackenzie, does daddy know you're in here"?
"Dadadada"!!!, said Mackenzie as she pointed to the door.
Being a mischievious little girl, she pulled herself up on the bed and sat beisde Don. pointing at his head she said.....
"Booboo", "booboo"!!!
"Yes sweetheart, that's a booboo".
Just as she was trying to feed Flack her cookie, Mac walked in.
"What are you up too Mackezie"?
Taking her cookie she pointed it towards her dad, "ookie", dada".
"No love, I don't think Uncle Don wants your cookie". "Come on, let's go".
"No"!! no,no,no". "Ease dada, no go".
Scrambling over the bed, she laid down beside Don.
"See dada, I eep now".
"No you don't you little monkey, you just woke up".
"It's okay Mac, you can leave her for a while".
"You sure"? "She'll talk your ear off".
"That's okay, I'll take my chances".
"Aright then, if you need me call".
"Morning Don", how you doing "?
"Fine Mac, can I be released yet"?
"You can, but only under supervision, due to your concussion". "So we want you to stay with us for a while".
"Whatever, just get me out of here".
Mac could tell Don was still very distraught, but he also knew he was a little better, because at least he was talking today. After signing the release papers, they stopped off to see Sheldon.
"How you doing this morning Sheldon"? asked Mac.
"Better thanks, You getting sprung Don"? laughed Hawkes.
"Yeah"!!! "As long as I stay with Mac and Stella".
"Good, that's really good". "You'll be fine Don, it will get easier", said Hawkes.
Meanwhile.....
Once Mac had Don home, he got him comfortable in bed.
"Anything you need Don"? asked Mac.
"No"! "I'm fine right now" , thanks Mac.
"Your welcome". "If you need me just call, you're right near everything". "The bottom room is the best, it's closest to the kitchen, laughed Mac.
Don smiled, Mac thought to himself, that's a good start.
Meanwhile......
Danny heard DJ gabbing away in his crib. Letting Lindsay sleep, he took DJ down for breakfast.
"There you go little man, are you hungry"?
Danny got down the Cheerio's, and cut up some fresh fruit, along with soft toast. Sitting down with DJ, he heard the phone ring.
"Hello"! said Danny.
"Hey Danny, it's Mac. "Just wanted to let you know, Don is out of the Hospital, and staying with us for a while".
"How is he Mac"?
"He's a little better, it will take time".
"What about Hawkes, when does he get out"? asked Danny.
"Not for a while yet, he hasen't even started Physio".
"Okay then, I'll stop by the Hospital, and see Hawkes, then I'll come by and see Don".
"Okay Danny, bye".
While Mac was on the phone, Mackenzie who was now almost two, ran down the hall into Don's room.
"Hi"!!, "Hi"!! said the little voice to Don.
"Hello Mackenzie, does daddy know you're in here"?
"Dadadada"!!!, said Mackenzie as she pointed to the door.
Being a mischievious little girl, she pulled herself up on the bed and sat beisde Don. pointing at his head she said.....
"Booboo", "booboo"!!!
"Yes sweetheart, that's a booboo".
Just as she was trying to feed Flack her cookie, Mac walked in.
"What are you up too Mackezie"?
Taking her cookie she pointed it towards her dad, "ookie", dada".
"No love, I don't think Uncle Don wants your cookie". "Come on, let's go".
"No"!! no,no,no". "Ease dada, no go".
Scrambling over the bed, she laid down beside Don.
"See dada, I eep now".
"No you don't you little monkey, you just woke up".
"It's okay Mac, you can leave her for a while".
"You sure"? "She'll talk your ear off".
"That's okay, I'll take my chances".
"Aright then, if you need me call".