A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love

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  1. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    ack I hope he doesn't hurt her or they stop him before he does.

    oooh another SmackedBaby :D
     
  2. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Due to work again today. No posts till tonite. All this over time is killing me. thanks for reading, love the FB.

    See ya'll tonight :D
     
  3. nattybatty55

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    LMH your fics are worth the wait!:)
     
  4. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Meanwhile....

    Mac and Danny had arrived at NYPD.

    "Chief"! said Mac. "What can I do for you"?

    "It seems my neice's friend is missing". "She's only 21 and her parents are very concerned".

    "How does this have to with us". "We're CSI's?

    "I'm asking you as a favour to my neice, to please check into things for me".

    Mac didn't know what to tell the Chief, this wasn't his territory.

    "Okay"! "I'll have a look, but if something else comes up, your case goes on the back burner".

    "That's fine Mac". "Just please find this girl".



    Meanwhile.....

    Jimeka had finished up with her patient and decided to check on Hawkes, before heading home.

    "Hey"!!! "There she is". "I missed you beautiful".

    "I missed you too Hawkes", said Jimeka as she gave him a kiss.

    "Are you finished your shift"?

    "Yeah"! "I'm just heading home now".

    Giving her one more kiss, she left.

    Taking the elevator to the basement garage, she got off and headed towards her car. Just as she was pulling out her keys, she felt someone behind her. Reaching for her mace, she turned and went to spray.

    "Dr. Weir"? "Did you need something"?

    Twisting the rope behind his back, he got ready to choke her, as another nurse came off the elevator.

    "Dr.Weir"! "They need you back upstairs". "One of your patients is in Cardiac Arrest".

    Knowing he wouldn't be able to take her tonight, he headed back upstairs.



    Meanwhile.....

    Mac and Danny headed over to the Hospital to see Hawkes.

    "Mac, Danny", "How are you's"?

    "Fine Hawkes, said Mac. "You go home tomorrow, don't you"?

    "Yeah, I do". "Thank god". "This place is driving me to become Claustrophobic".

    "I bet, said Danny. "More Like a certain nurse is causing that".

    "What nurse"? asked Mac. "Hawkes, you have a girlfriend"?

    "She's just a friend Mac, a very nice nurse".

    "Don't believe him Mac, he was very comfortable with her last night when I walked in".

    Mac laughed.

    "Listen Mac, while I have you here, I'd like you to check out this Dr.Weir for me". "I keep getting this really weird vibe from him".

    "You think he's into something illegal"?

    "I don't know Mac". "Just check him out for me". "Please".

    "Okay Hawkes". "I'll do that".
     
  5. MacsGirlMel

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    I hope they stop him in time.
     
  6. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Meanwhile....

    Stella dressed the twins and Madison, to take them too the Pharmacy for a pregnancy test.

    "Come on Mackenzie"! "Don't you want to go bye-bye"?

    "I tay with on", ease mama".

    "Do you mind Don"?

    "Not at all Stella, why don't you just leave them al with me, that way you can get back quicker".

    "Oh that's wonderful", thanks a million".

    After Stella left, Don read Michael and Mackenzie "The Three Bears".



    Meanwhile....

    Jimeka was sleeping when someone knocked on her door. Getting out of bed, she asked....

    "Who is it"?

    "It's Mary-ann, I need to talk to you Jimeka".

    Unlocking her door she let Mary-ann in.

    "What's the problem, Mary-Ann"?

    "I need to know if you could do my shift at 3pm today, and I'll do your 11pm shift".

    "Sure, that's fine, I'll see you later".

    After relocking her door, Jimeka went back to bed.


    Once 1pm came, Jimelka awoke and dressed for work. Heading out, she was actually excited, because this meant she didn't have to run into Dr.Weir tonight.

    When she got to the Hospital, she ran into Hawkes room without realizing he may have company. Jumping into his arms, she kissed him in heated passion.

    "See"! "What did I tell you Mac", said Danny.

    "Oh"!!! "I'm sorry, I didn't realize you had company".

    "That's okay sweetie". "This is Mac Taylor, my boss and friend, and of course the Messerman needs no intro".

    "It's nice to meet you Mac".

    "You too Nurse Jimeka".

    "What are you ding here love, I thought you were in tonight at 11pm".

    "Mary-Ann switched shifts with me". "She had something to do". "Which I'm really excited about, because I don't have to see Dr.Weir tonight". "I hate the way he stares at me, and last night he followed me to my car". "If it wasn't for the nurse calling him back, I don't know what he would have tried".

    "Jimeka"! called Mac. "How long has he been acting like this"?

    "Just the last couple days". "I hate the way he always hides his hands behind his back, it freaks me out".

    Mac was begining to get some idea's about the good doctor Weir.

    "Hawkes"! "I'll see you later". "I need to go check on a few things".

    "Sure Mac". "Take Messer with you". "He seems to be glued in his seat".

    With one last look at Jimeka Danny left the room with Mac.

    "You're bad Messer". "Lindsay would kill you if she that".

    "I'm only looking Mac, only looking at what I can't have". *Laughing*
     
  7. MacsGirlMel

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    LOL @ 'Messerman' he better behave himself.
     
  8. MacsLovlyAngl

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    Meanwhile....

    Stella got to the Pharmacy and grabbed a ClearBlue Easy from the shelf along with some Peanut Butter cups. Giggling to herself she said.....

    "God"! "Another one, this is so awsome". "I can see my own Baseball team soon", laughed Stella.

    The Pharmacist looked at her like she was insane.

    "Oh"! "Don't worry about me, it's just hormones", said Stella.

    When she got back to the car, she opened the Peanut Butter Cups and shoved one in her mouth. Well she almost melted , it tasted so heavenly. Buckling her seatbelt, she headed home.



    Meanwhile....

    Jimeka peaked into Hawkes room, to see if he was alone. When she seen him sound asleep, she walked over and kissed his lips. Opening his eyes, he seen her beautiful face above him.

    "Hello, Sexy".

    "Hey handsome, I've come to give you your massage". "Just relax and let Nurse Jimeka work her magic".

    Just as Jimeka was finishing up, Dr.Weir walked in.

    "Jimeka, what are you doig here"? "Your shift hasn't even begun yet".

    "My shift is done Doctor, I switched with Mary-Ann, she's in tonight".

    Doctor Weir was pissed, he wanted Jimeka tonight. Now he was stuck with Mary-Ann.

    "Oh well"!!! "one tramp is the same as another", as he walked out of the room.



    Meanwhile.....

    Stella walked in and found Don doing a wooden puzzle with the twins.

    "Hey guy's"! "How are you"?

    "Hi mama". "We oing uzzle with on", said Mackenzie.

    "I see that sweetheart". "How's Madison"?

    "She's sound asleep, Mackenzie helped me with feeding her".

    "Aww!! "That'as mama's big girl".

    Taking off her coat, she ran upstairs to test. Waiting seemed like forever, but then the timer went off and she looked at the stick, sure enough it was blue.

    "Yes"!!! "She screamed, Oh my God", "We did it again", laughed Stella hysterically.



    Meanwhile.....

    Dr.Weir waited for Mary-Ann to show up. He couldn't wait till morning now. He was so angry, he needed to kill her now.

    "this is all your fault Jimeka, but that's fine, I'll get you , soon".

    Just as he was finished ranting to himself, Mary-Ann showed up. Getting out of her car, she grabbed her purse, while Dr. Weir, grabbed her from behind. Taking his rope, he choked her quickly. To quickly for his liking, but he was just so angry, he couldn't take his time to make her suffer.
     
  9. MacsGirlMel

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    I hope they stop him soon.

    Dont they have two girls and a boy? They should have another boy *g*
     
  10. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Yup! "They have Mackenzie and Michael, the twins". And then they have Madison".

    As for another boy, or boy's , Hmmmm!!!! :lol:
     
  11. nattybatty55

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    Mel you should stop asking open questions for LMH to answer because she has REALLY anoying answers :lol:
     
  12. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Behave Natty :p :lol: Here come the Triplets :lol:


    Meanwhile.....

    "Well Stella, said Flack. "What's the good news"?

    "I'm pregnant again". "God I'm so giddy".

    Sitting down, she took a package of Peanut Butter cups out of the bag.

    "Ochlate mama"?

    "Sure baby, you can have some chocolate". After giving a cup to Mackenzie, she offered Flack one.

    "No thanks Stella". "I hate the smell of peanut butter".

    Just as she was putting the last cup in her mouth Mac walked in.

    "Hi sweetheart, said Mac as he kissed his wife. "Stella , why do I taste peanut butter again"?

    "That's because you're going to be a dad again", giggled Stella.

    "What"!!!! "Are you telling me Flack was right the other night"?

    "Uhuh!! "Isn't it wonderful, another baby".

    Mac wasn't sure what to think, Mackenzie and Michael were now two, the baby was almost one, and now the new baby which is due in 8 months.

    "Yeah Stella", it's wonderful", said Mac with a painful smile.




    Meanwhile.....

    Hawkes was walking down to the Hospital kitchen for some ice water, when he seen Dr.Weir coming from the elevator shoving rope in his pocket.

    Knowing the elevator came from the garage, he went to have a look. Once he got to the gargage, he noticed a car door ajar. Looking inside, he seen Jimeka's friend dead in the seat.

    Looking around for the Emergency phone, he called Mac.


    (Phone Rings)

    "Taylor"!! said Mac.

    "Mac it's Sheldon, I need you and Danny down here now". "Nurse Mary-ann has been murdered".

    "Murdered, what are you talking about Sheldon"?

    "I seen Dr.Weir coming off the elevator, with some kind of rope he was putting in his pocket". "So I went down here in the garage and found Mary-Ann's body".

    "Okay Hawkes, we'll be right there". "Watch your back".

    "I will Mac, don't worry".




    Meanwhile.....

    Danny was just getting in the door when the phone rang.

    "Messer"!! said Danny.

    "Danny, we need you back at the Hospital, one of the nurses have turned up dead". "Hawkes is with the body".

    "Alright Mac , I'm on my way".

    Just as Danny headed into his room, to see Lindsay for a second, he found her in labour.

    "Sweetheart"!! "Lindsay, are you okay"?

    "My water just broke Danny, I need to get to the Hospital now".

    Not wanting to take a chance on driving her, he called for an Ambulance. When they arrived, they loaded Lindsay in with Danny and off they went.
     
  13. MacsGirlMel

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    ooh I can't wait for them to arrive :)
     
  14. MacsLovlyAngl

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    I need you two girls, to give me some names. Don't Take your time, as thie Triplets will be born in the next chapter. :D
     
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    casey and addriene and dom for a boy :)
     

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