A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love

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  1. nattybatty55

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    aaahhh that's sweet... Your becoming fluent in baby talk! :lol:
     
  2. MacsGirlMel

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    awww that is so sweet :)

    *hugs Flack*
     
  3. MacsLovlyAngl

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    After Mac left, Mackenzie entertained Flack.

    "Ee my oes"?

    "Yes I do, you have pretty toes".

    "Ee my ose"?

    "Yes I see your nose", said Don softly tweaking it.

    Mackenzie looked up at Don and said......... "Eye"! as she tried to poke him in it.

    "Yes it is my eye". "You're a very pretty girl", said Don.

    Mackenzie laughed and clapped her hands. Laying back down on Don's chest, Mackenzie fell asleep wrapped safetly in his arms



    Meanwhile.....


    Stella came walking down, and asked Mac where was Mackenzie was.

    "Mac, where is our daughter"?

    "She's in with Flack, talking his ear off". "She was feeding him her cookie earlier".

    *Smiling* "I'll go check on them".

    When Stella walked into the room, Mackenzie was curled up sound asleep with Flacks arm around her.

    *whispering* "Mac, you gotta see this".

    Leaning over Stella's shoulder, he seen Flack and Mackenzie wrapped up protectively, in each others arms.

    "Now that's a Kodak moment" , said Mac getting the camera.

    Without using the flash, Mac clicked two pictures of them. Then tugging on Stella's sleeve he pulled her away from the door.

    "Where is Michael"?

    "He's sound asleep upstairs", "why"?

    Mac's eyes lit up like little christmas trees.

    "No way Taylor", "Keep Mr.Jolly away from me, I'm ovulating, and I'm not ready for another one".

    As soon as Mac heard she was ovulating, Mr.Jolly went crazy. Without warning her first, Mac picked her up and ran with her upstairs. Just as Stella was ready to yell, to wake everyone up, Mac shoved his tongue in her mouth , shutting her up.

    While still kissing her he said..... "No screaming"!!! "be a good girl".

    Tossing her on the bed, he tore off her clothes and his and plunged deeply into her, as she screamed in his mouth.

    "See love , you wanted it too, your soaked without my touch".

    Just as Mac poured into Stella, Michael woke up.

    "Perfect timing sweetheart, I'll get him". *laughing*

    "God damn you Mac Taylor" , said Stella in a breathless whisper.



    Meanwhile....

    Danny arrived at the hospital, and found Hawkes hitting on his beautiful nurse.

    "Ahem"!! said Danny. "Sorry to interrupt".

    "Danny, come on in, this is Jimeka, my Physio Therapist".

    "I bet she is". Laughed Danny to himself.

    After she left, Danny said.......

    "Holy cow, she's hot". "Did you see her butt"?

    "I know, she's 30 and single, we're going to go out to dinner when I get sprung".

    "Dinner"? "Yeah right, more like you're going to make her see the Flack man".

    *Laughing* "My name isn't Danny Messer".
     
  4. MacsGirlMel

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    ROFL at Hawkes and Mac...so do they get another one? hehe

    Flack and the little one are so darn cute :)
     
  5. MacsLovlyAngl

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    Flack woke up to someone tweaking his nose. Looking over he seen Mackenzie looking up at him and smiling.

    "Ose", said Mackenzie.

    Flack laughed, he couldn't help it, that little "O" she formed was 100% Mac Taylor. So of course when he laughed Mackenzie laughed.

    "Well someone is in a good mood, said Stella, bringing Don and Mackenzie some lunch.

    "Unch mama"? "Me ungry".

    taking apiece of cut apple, she put it to Don's lips and said... "ummies"

    Flack took a bite and said Mmm!!!! Mackenzie giggled again.

    "She really likes you Don", said Stella.

    Don had to admit, he was taken with her too. "I can see that". "Her company has actually made me feel better".

    "Do you feel like getting up for a while". "Mac's in the Living room watching the news".

    Putting the tray on the table, Don got up slowly and walked to the Living room with Mackenzie holding his hand.

    "Hi dada". "Ook, I ought Don". "Ere, sit own".

    Don sat down and Mackenzie plopped herself on his lap.

    Mac smiled and said..... "Don had a little Mackenzie, who's hair was full of curl, and everywhere that Don went his Mackenzie followed there".

    "Dada illy", laughed Mackenzie.

    "I agree sweetheart", said Don, Dada is silly".




    Meanwhile....

    Hawkes was really putting the moves on Jimeka.

    "Listen, my dark sexy chocolate bar, let's not wait till I'm sprung, let's get funky now"? laughed Hawkes with his eyebrows moving.

    "You're crazy hawkes". "You shall learn patients" , said Jimeka as she kissed his lips quickly.

    "So afraid of getting caught", my sexy sweetness"?

    "You know it my Chocobear".




    Meanwhile.....

    Danny was up with DJ feeding him breakfast when Lindsay walked in.

    "Good morning sweetheart", "How you feeling"?

    "Big and fat". "God Danny, two more weeks, can it go any slower"?

    "I think you look wonderful sweetheart, and I can't wait for our new additions".

    "Of course you can't, you're not the one that has to have them, I am".

    "Ouch"!!! "You're right my love, but I'm the one who has to look forward to having his fingers busted".

    "Very funny Messer". "Hi sweetheart, how's mama's boy", said Lindsay as she kissed her son.

    "What are you up too today Linds"?

    "DJ and I are going to visit Stella and Flack".

    "In that case, I'll drop you off, as I'm heading over to see Hawkes".
     
  6. MacsGirlMel

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    I'm glad he's feeling a bit better :)

    LOL at Hawkes. He needs a girl though.
     
  7. nattybatty55

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    Mackenzie Is so cute! :)
     
  8. MacsLovlyAngl

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    Hey Girl's, No post till 9pm tonight. Though there will be a cool PM with this one, and not with M/S or D/L.

    It's amazing what Physio can do :devil: :devil: :devil:
     
  9. nattybatty55

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    Oh yay to PMs!
     
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    Sorry I'm running late. PM's will follow shortly.


    After lunch, Don and Mac left to make arrangements for Caroline's creamation. Just as Stella was getting the kids settled with building blocks, Lindsay showed up.

    "Hey Linds"! "Oh my look at you, you're just about ready to go, aren't you"?

    "That I am, and I can't wait". "I tell you Stella, this is horrible, I can hardly get up anymore".

    "Well come on in and have a seat". "I'll get you some tea or something".

    "Hey Stella", how's Don"?

    "he's still hurting , but I think Mackenzie has been keeping busy and away from thinking about it".

    "Keeping him busy"?

    "yeah"!! "She's really taken with him". "She even napped with him earlier". "It was really sweet, Mac and I took pictures".

    "Awww!! that's great". "They say kids can sense when people are sad and need cheering up".



    Meanwhile.....

    Danny had shown up to visit Hawkes. As he walked into the room, he seen Hawkes and his nurse getting hot and heavy.

    Ahem!!! said Danny. "Can't you behave yourself Hawkes"? laughed Danny.

    When Jimeka heard the voice she jumped three feet in the air.

    "It's okay Jimeka, this clown is Danny Messer, my partner".

    "Hello"! said Jimeka. "Sheldon, I'll see you soon, for your rub down".

    "I'm looking forward to it Jimeka". "See ya".

    "I'm telling you Hawkes, she's so hot", said Danny.

    "You shouldn't notice that, you have a lovely wife at home".

    "Doesn't mean I can't look", said Danny.

    "So how is Don"? asked Hawkes.

    "I'm not sure, when I dropped Lindsay off at Stella's, Mac and Don had left to make arrangements for Caroline".

    "That's so sad". "To have your new life begin, and than have it snatched away without reason".



    Meanwhile....

    Don had chosen a beautiful Urn for Caroline's ashes. It was a rose colored vase, with little flower patterns.

    "I think she'd like this one", said Don.

    "Listen Don". "I'd like to go over to your place and take apart your Nursery, before you go back home".

    "That's okay Mac, I think I'll leave it for a while".

    "Are you sure Don, because I'm here for you".

    "I know Mac". "You always have been".
     
  11. MacsGirlMel

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    I feel sad for him. LOL at Hawkes :devil:
     
  12. MacsLovlyAngl

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    Meanwhile....

    He was killing her, choking away her life slowly and painfully. He loved the way she was squirming and gasping as he loosened and tightened the rope to have her suffer more.

    "This is what little teases get, next time you girls will learn not to tease us men".

    As he choked the final breath out of her , he laid her down, wraped her in bubble wrap and threw her into his large freezer.

    "Now to find me another tease, he said as he headed towards the bars.




    Meanwhile.....

    Mac and Don got back the same time Danny showed up for Lindsay.

    "Hey Don, how you doing"?

    "Better, thanks for asking".

    "How much longer you stuck with Mac here"?

    "Another three days, then I can go home".

    Danny felt bad, Don had bought their home before he and Caroline married and he had to go back there alone.

    "Stella"!!! "We're home love".

    "Hey Mac , hey Don", said Stella.

    Just as they got to the Living room, Mackenzie came running, right into Don's arms.

    "Uppy", Uppy", said Mackenzie, as Don picked her up.

    "Hi sweetie pie, you miss me"?

    Mackenzie giggled and kissed his cheek.

    "I guess she did", said Mac smiling.

    As Mac kissed his wife, he swore he could smell peanut butter. But then he realized , she most likely gave it to the kids for lunch.

    "Where's Michael love"?

    "He's sleeping, he's got a cold and was very cranky, so I laid him down".

    "I'll go check on him, make sure he doesn't have a fever".

    Mac was always cautious with Michael, because when he was born, Mac had to help him take his first breath.

    After seeing he was okay , Mac headed back to the Living room.



    Meanwhile.....

    Sheldon was enjoying his massage with Jimeka.

    "That's wonderful Jimeka, you certainly know how to hit the right spots".

    "That's my job silly".

    As she was massaging, they were looking into each others eyes.

    "You are so beautiful Jimeka, I can see myself falling for you".

    "You're such a flatter", said Jimeka.


    He was watching them from outside the door, he could see how she teased the patient.

    "Looks to me like I've found my next vicitm". "Would have never thought it'd be Jimeka", but oh well".

    After one last look he went to check on his patients.
     
  13. MacsGirlMel

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    Come on, what's with the PB? I wanna know.
     
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    I feel so sorry for Don when they mention nursery!:(
     
  15. MacsLovlyAngl

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    Meanwhile......

    After Danny and Lindsay left for home, Flack, Stella, Mac and the kids, wnet for a evening walk in the park.

    "Uppy", Mackenzie said to Don, as they were headed to the park.

    "You're fine in your stroller sweetheart", said daddy.

    "Uppy, uppy, uppy, yelled Mackenzie, stretching her arms out to Don.

    Reaching in Don snatched up Mackenzie as she giggled. knowing fair was fair, he went to pick up Michael, but he shyed away.

    "He's the shy one Don"., said Stella. "he won't come uppy".

    When they got to the park, Mac took Michael into his arms and walked him and Mackenzie over to the swings.

    Stella sat at the picnic table with Madison.

    "God I'm hungry" , said Stella to herself. Looking in the bag, she seen the kids peanut butter cookies, taking one out she started to eat it. Still feeling hungry, she ate another and another, until they were all gone.

    When Mac returned with the twins, Mackenzie asked... "Ookie mama"?

    Stella realizing she had eaten all four of them, told Mackenzie she could have cookies when they got home. Well that did it, she screamed, and screamed.........

    "Ookie, ookie, ookie", pease mama".

    "Stella"! "I thought you packed them each two cookies"? asked Mac.

    Looking at Mac, she said..... "I was hungry, so I ate them".

    Mac looked at her strangely.

    "You ate them, you ate the kids cookies"?

    "I was hungry Mac, I forgot to have lunch". "So I thought I'd be okay with one, but then I ate another and another, until they were gone".

    "Well then, we may as well head home". "Mackenzie won't stop till she gets her cookie", said Mac.

    Once they got home, Stella sat them in their booster chairs and gave them both cookies and milk.

    "Ank-ou mama", said Mackenzie.

    "Ank-ou mama", said Michael.

    Once she had Madison down for her nap, she sat with the twins while they ate their snack. Feeling hungry again, Stella helped herself to another cookie. When Mac reached in the jar to grab one out, he seen it was empty.

    "Stella were did the cookies go, you made this morning"?

    Looking at Mac again, she said...... "I'm sorry, I was still hungry".

    "Then have some lunch, I'll make you a grilled cheese", said Mac.

    "No thanks, getting up Stella looked in the cupboard and found a new jar of peanut butter, sitting down infront of the kids and Mac, she started to eat it, and eat it.

    "STELLA"!!!!! yelled Mac, you're going to be sick, stop now".

    "I'm fine Mac, jeeze, relax".

    Don started laughing.

    "What's so funny Don"? asked Mac.

    "The last time I seen your wife eat peanut butter like that, was when she was pregnant".

    Stella stared at Mac, Mac stared at Stella, "NO WAY"!!!! they said at the same time.


    *Phone rings*

    "Hello"! said Mac. *Talking*, "Okay we'll be right there".

    "What's the matter Mac"? asked Don.

    "The Chief needs our help". "Missing person's case, has to with someone the chief knows".

    Picking up the phone, Mac called Danny.

    After informing him of the situation, Danny told Mac, he'd meet him at the station.


    Meanwhile.....

    Sheldon and Jimeka were talking about getting together when Dr.Weir walked in.

    "Jimeka"! "A moment of your time please".

    "Yes doctor"?

    "You know you are not to spend all your time with one patient". "Mrs Hall has been waiting for 20 minutes now, for her ankle exercises".

    "I'm sorry docotr, I'll get right on that".

    Sheldon, had never seen the doctor look so angry over a simple conversation. Thinking to himself he said......

    "Something about him bothers me".
     

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