Road Trip! The Final Frontier.

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  1. Anni Grey

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    Geni! Absolutely , great updates! And the twists keep coming...Horatio's on a vigilante thing...now, whodathunk?:lol:

    anni and her marbles...I think she still posseses a smack dab more than Eric. She's just reacting to Katie's absence. Eric however....I have no theory about that...

    Loved the update! It's hard to believe that it's coming to an end sooon:(

    Excellent work!
     
  2. Jenna_Caine

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    :wtf: Oh, shoot... *fights like hell to drag mind out of the gutter* XD I don't think I can... *sweatdrop* My imagination is waaaaaay too overactive... :guffaw:

    I love it! :lol:
     
  3. Hunter

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    HOLY MOLY how the heck did i miss so much. I was only gone for like 2 days...

    Oh yeah! I remember that bear! We all wanted to get rid of it since it was so rank. And hey, when the last time someone screamed out "Wubba Monster!"?

    That made me laugh out loud. :guffaw:

    Go to Global! Wait, no, CityTV! No wait CBC. WAIT wait no...stay on CTV long enough and you'll hit CSI Miami.

    *chokes up*.....I love you Horatio! *huggles*
    And Jenna you gotta see a shrink or something. :lol:

    Trevor kidnapped Katie? And he wants to rule the world with Stetler? OKAY what is with the bad guys wanting to rule the world?! It wouldn't be that great you know! You would have to take care of a crapload of papers and stuff to sign and supervise and everything with the politics and problems with the planet and economy and- *takes a breather* all that crap. Yeesh.
    OMG we're being CSI's again! For the first time in...like....such a long time i forget when. :lol:

    Uh yeah he has Speed, he's broken the law for being so damn handsome!! *crickets* Sorry i couldn't resist. :D But WHOO Horatio's taking the law into his own hands!

    Oh thanks for the awesome updates Geni!! I can't wait till the next! :D
     
  4. cainesugar

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    Ah, amazingness. I'm surprised it takes me so long to read through it all, but I'm loving it. Keep up the great work, Geni. :)
     
  5. CSI_in_training

    CSI_in_training CSI Level Two

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    Holy! That was amazing, and HORATIO! Bending the law?!?!?! That's so awesome!
    OMFG the return of Trevor, still as evil as ever I see, with his kidnappings and evil schemes and such. and nobody believes Delko! But he's right, and we'll all have to admit it when it's all over.
    Genius Geni!!
     
  6. Finch

    Finch Funnier in Enochian Super Moderator

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    Bwaha! Thanks for the reviews everyone. :D

    I should have another chapter up later tonight.

    I know. :eek: T__T
     
  7. CSI_in_training

    CSI_in_training CSI Level Two

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    That's sad! Some of us have been together for two...three years now! That's longer than some of the friendships I have in real life!
    It will be sad for this to end.
     
  8. Jenna_Caine

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    :cries: I just joined, and I don't want it to end!
     
  9. Finch

    Finch Funnier in Enochian Super Moderator

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    Well, if you really wanted, I could do an 11th thread but then the 'Final Frontier' title wouldn't make sense. :lol: I just figure, end it while it's still relatively good. :p

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Next morning, Colosseum

    Anni: *kicks rock* Why are we here?

    Jenna: Because Horatio left us and told us to have a vacation.

    Anni: But Katie isn't here!

    Jenna: We can have a vacation without her, I'm sure it won't kill us.

    Anni: *kicks grass* Stupid Greece.

    Speed: Why don't you just forget about the whole thing for a while. H said he'd have her back.

    Delko: H is lying.

    Speed: Eric, stop it. There's no conspiracy.

    Delko: *rolls eyes*

    Calleigh: *looks around* Oh hey! Look at this! *runs over to booth* It says here you can be a gladiator for a day.

    Ryan: Oh cool.

    Calleigh: Who wants to be a gladiator!

    Ryan: I DO! *raises hand* I've always wanted to look strong.

    Calleigh: Okay. *turns to booth* I need two tickets.

    Woman: *hands over tickets* Armour's an extra 50 bucks.

    Calleigh: ..So what's the ticket for?

    Woman: Renting the space.

    Calleigh: Oh.

    Ryan: *puts on shield and armour* This is so awesome. Okay who wants to battle me?

    Jenna: I'll battle you!

    Ryan: There's no girl gladiators.

    Jenna: What? How come?

    Ryan: Because women were like dogs back in the day.

    Everyone: *frowns*

    Delko: Fine, you know what, I can spare ten seconds to beat the crap out of you. *grabs armour*

    Lora: Is it just me or does he actually seem mad?

    Carly: I much prefer him when he's being stupid.

    Delko: *swings sword*

    Ryan: AH! NOT YET, I'M NOT READY!

    Middle of Colosseum

    Ryan: *bouncing around* Okay, okay, okay, rules? Don't hit below the belt.

    Delko: I don't think gladiators had those rules.

    Ryan: Well I do. My below parts are kind of an investment I'd like to keep.

    Delko: Fine but no face hitting.

    Ryan: Fine by me. Oh, and steer clear of my ankles. They're kind of weak.

    Delko: And try not to get my side, it's bruis-

    Lora: JUST KILL EACH OTHER ALREADY!

    Delko: *swings sword*

    Ryan: *jumps back* HA! *swings sword*

    Delko: *leans back*

    Ryan: *shoves sword ahead*

    Delko: OW! *holds arm*

    Ryan: That's right! I had a sword class in highschool and I rocked it.

    Delko: *throws sword*

    Ryan: What are you doing?

    Delko: *throws shield* If we're going to fight, we might as well do it like men.

    Ryan: I thought we were doing it like men.

    Delko: We were doing it like pansies.

    Ryan: Since when am I a pansy? And since when do you c-

    Delko: *punches Ryan*

    Everyone: Oohh.

    Ryan: *falls over*

    Delko: *claps* Come on, get up.

    Ryan: *holding face* I'm blind! I can't see!

    Delko: *grabs Ryan*

    Ryan: Ah!

    Delko: *throws Ryan*

    Ryan: AHH!

    Anni: *sits on bleachers* Okay this is entertaining.

    Carly: *eats popcorn*

    Anni: Where did you get popcorn?

    Carly: *looks down* ...I'm not sure.

    Middle of Colosseum

    Ryan: *swings arms*

    Delko: *holding Ryan's head between arms*

    Ryan: LEMME GO!

    Delko: I thought you said you took classes.

    Ryan: Okay they were art classes of people fighting with swords, but it didn't look that hard! *kicks Delko*

    Delko: AH! *falls backward*

    Ryan: HA! *kicks Delko*

    Delko: OW! *falls over*

    Ryan: *kicking Delko* That's right, I'm kickin' you while you're down. TAKE THAT.

    Bleachers

    Lilly: *fans self* Whew it sure is gettin' hot over there.

    Jess: *fans self* You're tellin' me. We just need to bronze 'em.

    Anni: KILL! KILL! KILL! KILL!

    Middle of Colosseum

    Ryan: HEAR ME ROAR!

    Delko: *trips Ryan*

    Ryan: AH! *falls over*

    Delko: *stands* Owned.

    Ryan: It's pwned.

    Delko: That doesn't make any sense.

    Ryan: Well I didn't make it up. Go ask the person who did. *pokes Eric in the eye*

    Delko: OW! *holds face*

    Ryan: I WIN!

    Bleachers

    Jenna: So do we like, throw flowers?

    Carly: *throws popcorn*

    Lora: I don't think that gives the same effect.

    Carly: I'd throw my shoe but these were expensive.

    BAM BAM BAM BAM!

    Everyone: *screams*

    Anni: *ducks* Oh my God it's gunfire!

    Delko: *pulls out gun*

    Calleigh: *pulls out gun*

    BAM BAM BAM BAM!

    Carly: *dives for cover*

    Delko: *turns around* Did you see where they were coming from?

    Calleigh: No. *looks around*

    Delko: Anyone hit?

    Ryan: MY BUM! *points to butt*

    Lilly: Awww! Do you want a kiss?

    Ryan: On my bum?

    Lilly: ...

    Ryan: *rubs butt*

    TBC...........................
     
  10. that_girl1

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    Or or or... you can name the 11th thread 'Final Frontier 2' :p It could be like Final Fantasy. They keep on making like sequels so it'll be like a sequel :D

    HA! Eric and Ryan fighting! At first I thought that it was just Eric getting the anger out on Ryan, which he probably was doing, but that was hilarious!!

    HE GOT PWNED!!!! :guffaw:
     
  11. Anni Grey

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    Omg...Geni, I sooooooo needed that. The images of Ryan and Eric fighting to the death was just too crazy. Of course, Anni's chanting kill kill kill ( she can get so vicious when she's bored right?) It's good to see Eric working out that anxiety and stress...even if it is kicking Ryan's ass...but wait...who won again?

    Simply Hilarious, Geni! Excellent work!

    And I agree, as sad as it is, we'd rather go out on a good high note, right Geni?
     
  12. Hunter

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    WHOOOOO! Yeah suck it Wolfe! :evil: *throws peanuts* I bet Jenna's is going to get a kick out of this...

    GAH now i want to watch Gladiator, AGAIN! I just watched it a couple nights ago. It's one of my fav movies, other than Lion King, and Star Wars and- *smacks self* Shut up Lora let's get back to the fight!

    NO! NO! Na ha ho... Damn! *does super-uber hard lora zabiran punch to the side of ryans head* HAH! PWNED!!

    Okay seriously who made up that word anyways? Do you say 'pawned'? Or is it just like owned? Whatever. :lol: Thanks for the great awesome fantasticalastical update Gen! :D
     
  13. CSI_in_training

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    Amazingly wonderfully funny!
    I can picture Delko and Ryan duking it out ^_^ and it makes me laugh.
     
  14. Jenna_Caine

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    Yup! :D

    I believe you pronounce it "owned", but with a "p" on the front.

    I think. :lol:
     
  15. CSI_in_training

    CSI_in_training CSI Level Two

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    ^^ According to my brother the gamer, that's about right.
     
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