Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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I knew it! Yay, Josh is innocent! *hugs Josh* Okay, but still, I mean...he acted too fast and on impulse and I don't know if he could have saved the kid but...poor kid. *hugs corpse* Okay I'm in a hugging mood, sorry.

Well, glad Josh is innocent. Next step, get Ernest and slaughter him. *grabs chainsaw* Great update Geni, more soon!
 
Speed: You're fine little brother. *stands*
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*bottom lip quivers* Awwwwww I just found that beyond cute for some reason. *sniffs* Geni you do what the writers won't. *huggles*

Now ok that story makes more since then Josh killing a little kid because because....Speedle's just aren't bad guys. Ok..well...sometimes they are but there not killers.

Anyways I'm glad that Joshie boy is ok and all is well. *raises hand* I don't like H man either...so Colton you are not alone. Unless I totally miss understood what you meant by that Geni and uh..*ducks from H fans*
 
YAY Geni!!! H and I will never get along. And YAY Katie for also agreeing!!!! And finally, YAY Josh!!! I knew you weren't bad!! :)

Update Soon. :D
 
Oh wow I definitely thought that josh had something to do with the death of that kid but i am so glad he isn't ... we already lost josh once it would be sad to loose him again. I mean he had his heart in the right place but not at the right time...
Fantastic update geni can't wait for more!!!
 
Yes, I do what the writers won't. :D But that's because if the writers did this, it would be a very disorganized show. :lol:

But this isn't a show so HA.

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Halls, one our later

Horatio: Calleigh.

Calleigh: *walks over* We checked the entire Hummer. His story checks out. Alexx reported cause of death was head trauma.

Horatio: Can we confirm who beat him?

Calleigh: Subcutaneous photos show both hands against the child's skin. Now, if Josh would have done it, there would be an impression from his wedding ring. There isn't.

Horatio: He could have taken off the ring.

Calleigh: He could have but he didn't. The fact is, all Josh tried to do was save him.

Horatio: So we have one man evading the scene and another man trying to save a dying little boy. You know what I think we're missing part of the story here.

Calleigh: What do you mean?

Horatio: Ernest claims they came down to Miami together.

Calleigh: Well maybe they took different flights. He could be lying.

Horatio: Yes but something doesn't add up. Where was Ethan during all of this?

Calleigh: With Ernest.

Horatio: So that means this little boy was with him too?

Calleigh: We can ask Ethan.

Horatio: Let's do that. I have a feeling he knows more than he's letting on.

Atrium

Ethan: *sits on bench*

Calleigh: *sits, smiles* Hi.

Ethan: *staring at feet*

Calleigh: I wanted to ask you some questions, is that all right?

Ethan: *nods*

Calleigh: I'm going to show you a picture now, and I would like you to tell me if you know him. *hands over picture*

Ethan: *looks at picture*

Calleigh: Do you recognize him?

Ethan: *shakes head*

Calleigh: Okay. I have a couple more questions. When you came from New York to Miami, who was with you?

Ethan: The man.

Calleigh: Who's the man?

Ethan: Ernie.

Calleigh: *smiles* That's good. Was your dad with you too?

Ethan: *shakes head*

Calleigh: Where was he?

Ethan: *shrugs*

Calleigh: Were you asleep or awake when you got to Miami?

Ethan: Asleep.

Calleigh: Did you sleep a lot?

Ethan: *nods*

Calleigh: And you've never seen this boy?

Ethan: ...

Calleigh: Ethan?

Ethan: ...Um...

Calleigh: Was he there?

Ethan: ...Yes.

Calleigh: In New York?

Ethan: *shakes head*

Calleigh: Miami?

Ethan: *nods*

Calleigh: Was he in that apartment?

Ethan: *nods*

Calleigh: Before or after you got there?

Ethan: Before. He was in a closet.

Calleigh: Did your dad ever go to the apartment before he found you?

Ethan: No.

Calleigh: Okay. *smiles* Great, thank you Ethan. You've been a very brave boy.

Ethan: *smirks*

Interrogation room

Horatio: Let me see your hands.

Ernest: Why?

Horatio: If you don't give me your hands, I'll get them myself.

Ernest: ...*lays hands on table*

Horatio: *places hands on hips* They seem pretty bruised up.

Ernest: I got them from the fall.

Horatio: The fall? Or beating a child to death.

Ernest: *rolls eyes* Josh killed that kid.

Horatio: Josh tried to save him.

Ernest: He was always such a bleeding heart, you know that? Always trying to do the right thing.

Horatio: And that's what he did.

Ernest: No. No, he beat him. I tried to stop him, remind him of what a good guy he used to be.

Horatio: We swabbed your hands. They had blood and sunscreen on them. The blood wasn't yours and the sunscreen matches what was on the child's skin.

Ernest: ....I want a lawyer.

Horatio: Better late than never.

Outside, parkinglot

Lori: *throws bags in back of car*

Ryan: *runs over* Lori!

Lori: *looks up*

Ryan: You're leaving already?

Lori: Yeah my flight leaves at 8.

Ryan: You need any help with the ba...I see you already have them in the car.

Lori: I'm more of a do-er.

Ryan: So I guess you're happy to be going back.

Lori: Yeah. I love my job.

Ryan: Don't you get kind of sad when you come home to no one?

Lori: I like being alone. Besides, I never liked crowds very much and I find that a lot of people annoy me anyway.

Ryan: Aren't you afraid of getting hurt and no one will be there?

Lori: Contrary to popular belief, there are hospitals there.

Ryan: No, I mean loved ones.

Lori: Why are you asking me these questions?

Ryan: Because I don't understand you.

Lori: What's to understand?

Ryan: I don't understand why you push people away.

Lori: Because people are idiots. They're selfish, they lie, cheat, and hurt each other.

Ryan: We're all human.

Lori: Well the human race has quite a few flaws to work out.

Ryan: Some people are decent.

Lori: Look I'm sure we could get into a big debate about human nature but I have a flight to catch and I don't have time for this petty crap.

Ryan: You can't run from everyone.

Lori: I'm not running. *slams trunk*

Ryan: You're no better than anyone else.

Lori: I didn't say I was.

Ryan: *grabs Lori's arm* Don't be afraid to get close to someone.

Lori: *stares at Ryan*

Ryan: I won't hurt you.

Lori: ...Words are just words.

Ryan: That's why you have to have a little trust.

Lori: *looks down at ground*

Ryan: *stares at Lori*

Lori: ...Thank you. *lifts head* But, I'm still leaving.

Ryan: Will you come back?

Lori: *smirks* I never really liked the idea of 'goodbye'.

Ryan: I'll take it.

Lori: *gets into car*

Ryan: Have a safe trip.

Car drives away

TBC...............
 
I'm going to miss Lori. She's really a great character, no matter what she does and how much she bends the rules. And she's smart! I really hope she does come back eventually, I'll miss her and so will Ryan. *hugs Ryan*

Wow, so they proved that Ernest had the kid with him. That was really great, but poor Ethan having to look at autopsy photos. I really hope someone murders Ernest, no one needs him around even in jail. He's being a waste of oxygen if you ask me.

This is great Geni! Whatever happened to Stetler and the whole Colton thing though? I really want Stetler to kill Ernest and then I'll kill Stetler with Ernest's corpse. Awsomeness as always!
 
hey Geni, where's Anni we haven't heard from her in a while?.

I'm gonna miss Lori too, just when she and her father is starting to get along she leaves again, I hope she's gonna come back soon.
 
*gaspage* Lori said petty crap! Ahhh she's my new favorite person! lol. Awww it wouldn't be a disorganized show it would be a show that I would watch with my eyes glued to the screen vs. changing it every five seconds.

*sighs* You...you....you're going to make me like this whole Lori/Ryan thing aren't you? But you know it kinda gross how once upon a time Ry Ry was all hitting on me in the hummer and then years later he dates my daughter. That's kinda creepy when you think about it. OH and then he got kicked out of the hummer *sighs* the olden days. lol. Great job, Geni. Update soon please.
 
We'll here from Anni. Right now she's busy at home being preggers. :D Well, for now.

HA. I am going to convert Katie into liking the Lori/Ryan stuff. :lol: I win! :p But yeah it is a little odd about the Ryan/Katieness....Interesting.

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Airport counter

Lori: What are you talking about? I validated my ticket online.

Woman: I'm sorry ma'am but our computers were down yesterday.

Lori: Then how come when I pressed submit, it magically went through?

Woman: That must have been a glitch.

Lori: *rolls up sleeves* I'll show you a glitch, y-

Guy places suitcase on ground, walks away

Lori: *looking at suitcase* Why don't you just get me a new ticket.

Woman: Coach or business class?

Lori: *looks at woman* First class.

Woman: You sure?

Lori: Why do I look like a homeless person?

Woman: No, you just seem...Dainty.

Lori: Dainty. Well that's exactly the kind of crack education I'd expect out of you people. So are you going to call someone to take care of that bomb or are you just going to...Yap some more about how dainy I am.

Woman: What?

Lori: To your left.

Woman: *looks at floor*

Lori: I mean, the thing has a timer on it and everything. You can even hear it ticking.

Woman: *staring at suitcase*

Lori: Well that's great. I mean you get paid to do nothing all day so I guess it wouldn't be too much to ask that you pick up the phone and dial three numbers.

Woman: *grabs phone*

Lori: *shakes head* Right because this will end well. *grabs cellphone, dials*

Fifteen minutes later, Hummers arrive at front of airport. Horatio, Calleigh, Lilly, run inside

Fireman: *points nozzle at gate*

Fireman2: *on radio*

Horatio: *walks over* Lori?

Paramedic: *covers Lori's forehead with gauze*

Lori: *grabs gauze* Just let me do it.

Horatio: You called?

Lori: You sure are punctual.

Horatio: Traffic jam.

Lori: Yeah well good thing too, you would have blown up.

Horatio: How are you?

Lori: You ever realize how stupid people are when they panic? I tried to get them out the front door and they wanted to head back through security first. What the hell goes through people's minds before they're about to die? Oh gee I hope that guard doesn't find the one gram of cocaine I had in my bag six months ago, KABOOM!

Calleigh: Were you near the blast?

Lori: Yeah my ears are still ringing. You know, I can never get out of this damn state. They call it the sunshine state but what they really mean is the keeper-inner-prison state. You want to know why there are palm trees? Fool people into thinking it's a paradise.

Horatio: Can you tell me what happened?

Lori: A bomb blew up, that's what happened. You know this wouldn't have happened if the teller had stopped smackin' her gum and flippin' her hair at all of the pretty pilots and actually paid attention to her portion of the room.

Horatio: Lilly, process her please.

Lilly: *opens kit* Can you place your hands out please?

Lori: Who the hell are you?

Lilly: I'm Lilly.

Lori: You sound like a walking name-tag.

Lilly: *places on latex gloves*

Lori: Aren't you a little young to be a CSI?

Lilly: Aren't you a little young to be a tight-ass?

Lori: ...Touché.

Lilly: You have some rubber in your nails.

Lori: Yeah that's what happens when I grab anything I can find before I get blown out the window.

Lilly: Did you touch the package?

Lori: No but it probably got everywhere. It's called evidence.

Lilly: I know what evidence is.

Lori: *rolls eyes* Okay look I don't have time for this. I have to get to work for tomorrow and y'all are just slowing me down.

Horatio: I don't think you'll be going anywhere tonight.

Lori: I'll be fired if I don't get back tomorrow.

Horatio: Call your boss and tell him what happened.

Lori: No. I'm leaving. I'll take a boat if I have to.

Horatio: You can't leave in this condition.

Lori: What condition? I'm perfectly fine.

Ryan: *runs in* Lori!

Lori: *looks at Ryan* RYAN! *jumps up, runs, hugs Ryan*

Ryan: I was so worried.

Lori: *hugging Ryan*

Ryan: You okay?

Lori: I am now.

Horatio: Okay, let's get everyone home. Lilly, tomorrow you're going to be working with Anni and Ryan on the scene tomorrow. The rest of us will be gone tomorrow anyway.

Lilly: Where?

Horatio: Road trip.

Lilly: ...A what?

Horatio: It's a little vacation.

Lilly: You're leaving on a vacation?

Horatio: Well I figure we have to sometime or things would seem rather pointless. You know, since I seem to have adopted all of these CSIs for some unknown reason.

Lilly: So I'm like...The primary?

Lori: No you're like...The newbie. Like OMGOSH.

Lilly: *frowns*

Ryan: You want a ride home or something?

Lori: Well where do you live?

Ryan: I have a small condo now.

Lori: Let's go there.

Ryan: ...Together?

Lori: No you can sleep on the balcony. I'll throw some dog food out there when you wake up in the morning.

Ryan: Oh...Kay.

TBC..................
 
Well I still have plenty of time to chage my mind about this whole thing. But yes it is rather intersting isnt it. lol.

Lori: Aren't you a little young to be a CSI?

Lilly: Aren't you a little young to be a tight-ass?
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Oh man I was laughing while I was saying Ohhhh and I sounded like Pooh Bear or something. lol. *sighs* That was weird! ANYWAYS!

I swear the Speedle's are always in danger. I mean Ethan got kidnapped, Speed's been shot, I've been shot...the list goes on. Anyways I'm glad that Lori is ok because I would hate to get Lori back just to lose her again so quickly. Great job, Geni.
 
Pfft, Ernest is a really bad liar..."No. No, he beat him. I tried to stop him" HA! Idiot. *rolleyes* But still *shkes fist at Ernie* I hope I (or Joshie) gets him...

Awww, I like Ryan/Lori...they're so cute! But poor Ry Ry...Lori leaving him after one date. Well, he's gonna be pining for a while :lol: Men... *rolleyes* But I hope they get back together again...

please update soon!


Edit: ah, missed an update. Ohh, poor Lori. Always almost getting blown up. Woah, that just reminded me of NCIS for some reason...And YAY ROAD TRIP! WOO!...

anyway, please update soon (again). ECRIS!
 
OMG poor lori she got half blown up!!!! and its so sweet that she isn't pushing ryan away now and actually ran to hug him, it was so sweet i almost cried Geni. I think you also portrayed the stupid hostess peoples at the air port perfectly ... i have had bad experiences with them....
Congrats once again on the edge of my seat .... and YA WE ARE GOING ON ANOTHER ROAD TRIP .... WE HAVENT BEEN ON ONE FOREVER!!! oops caps lock
anyway can't wait for more!!!
 
Aw, this was so sweet! First, Josh is innocent..I never thought otherwise, but in your face, Ernie!!! Ha, I just wanted to do that.

And Lori/ Ryan...okay, first I give props to Ryan, now I'm secretly loving their relationship? Truly, something's in the water here in NC...But honestly, I love their relationship. I love how she dishes out, and he takes it and dishes it right back. She needs someone like that. And omg, she said petty crap!!! :lol: And what's this with a bomb? Does she just have bombs and killers follow her around?

Ha..I'm going to work the scene with Lily, who is awesome by the way...but wait, the rest of the team is going on RT? This is going to be cute, pregnant and working a bomb scene. SO can't wait to see that.... :lol:.... excellente!
 
That was the best chapter I've read so far. For sure.

Well, to start, I process my first scene! *snaps latex gloves* Oh yeah, kick ass. And the me-Lori convo? That was hilarious, I was laughing so hard my parents came in to check on me. Lori is seriously awesome. And theres a RT? YAY! But I'll be busy processing a blown up airport...well, it's better than doing nothing!

And awesome, Lori's staying! This is fantastic, I really like her, she's a really fun character. *hugs Lori* And I need more smart-ass comments like that, she's funny too. Anyways, update soon!
 
:lol: Anni, you are my hero.

And yeah Katie that always seems to happen to the Speedle clan. :p

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Hummerhome, 9am

Katie: *in straight jacket* How did y'all even find one of these?

Delko: There's a hundred of them in the closet.

Katie: Why?

Horatio: For you.

Katie: I'm not that destructive! *struggles*

Fridge falls over

Everyone: *stares at Katie*

Katie: Okay so Horatio hit a bump in the road. I couldn't have possibly knocked the fridge over.

Speed: It's bolted to the wall.

Katie: I'M NOT SUPERMAN!

Carly: *covers Katie's mouth*

Katie: *bites Carly*

Carly: AH! *holds hand*

Katie: I feel like Hannibal Lector.

Speed: That isn't something you should be proud of.

Katie: Well poo on you. *sucks in air*

Carly: STOP IT that movie scared me.

Katie: HELOOOO CARLICE.

Carly: I thought it was Clarice.

Katie: You're Carly.

Delko: *screaming*

Calleigh: What? What?

Delko: WE AWAKENED HANNIBAL FROM THE DEAD! *runs into bathroom*

Calleigh: *shakes head*

Jess: Wait, what if Hannibal is posessing Katie?

Carly: YEAH! YEAH! And he's turning her crazy from the inside out!

Katie: *starts to cry* I don't want to eat people.

Horatio: Alright everyone, Katie is not Hannibal.

Katie: YEAH! Take that.

Delko: *walks out of bathroom* Has the evil spirit been rid of her body?

Katie: Yeah they threw a bunch of garlic and mountain dew at me and now I'm good as new! Hey I'm a poet and didn't know it. *gasp* I COULD BE A RAPPER!

Delko: Like Tupac?

Katie: No...Rapper. Not candy wrapper.

Delko: Oh. See I never get it.

Katie: You want me to write everything down? Because I'm sure there are people out there who understood what I meant.

Delko: Well sorry whenever you talk, the words don't actually come out. Although that would be a neat drug to try.

Jess: *slaps Eric*

Delko: OW.

Katie: Timmy, tell them I'm not crazy. THE CRAZIES AREN'T CRAZY!

Speed: Whenever people say that, I tend to think their crazy. Because crazy people don't know they're crazy.

Katie: Yeah so the crazies aren't crazy.

Delko: But if they weren't crazy then why do we say they're crazy? Because they don't think they're crazy so we call them crazy?

Katie: No the crazies aren't crazy because they don't believe they're crazy. So we believe they're crazy because they say they aren't.

Carly: I think my head is about to pop off.

Katie: Speed tell them I'm not crazy.

Speed: You're wearing a straight jacket.

Katie: Yeah! Because they put it on! Come on man we're tight!

Speed: No we're not.

Katie: We're best friends!

Speed: No we're not.

Katie: We're...Friends?

Speed: Katie, you're insane.

Katie: Yeah but I didn't think I needed to be in a straight jacket. *elbows Speed* Haha I can still elbow you.

Speed: Stop it.

Katie: *elbows Speed*

Speed: Stop it.

Katie: *elbows Speed*

Speed: Stop it.

Katie: *elbows Speed*

Speed: Quit it.

Katie: *elbows Speed*

Speed: Quit it.

Katie: *elbows Speed*

Speed: *looks at Katie*

Katie: ...You have very nice eyes.

Speed: Quit it.

Katie: Sorry.

Five minutes later

Katie: *belches*

Delko: Always better the second time around.

Katie: I shouldn't have had that burrito.

Calleigh: I could go for a burrito.

Carly: I could go for some chicken.

Jess: CHEEZ-ITS!

Delko: Milk duds!

Horatio: OLD SPICE!

Everyone: *looks at Horatio*

Horatio: ...I thought we were listing things.

Calleigh: And it had to be Old Spice?

Horatio: Don't knock it 'til you've tried it.

Calleigh: I'm not a man.

Horatio: Well there you go.

Katie: I have an itch on my tummy. Speed, scratch it.

Speed: No.

Katie: Why?

Speed: Because I don't want to.

Katie: Oh come on it's not like you haven't touched me before.

Everyone: *staring at Katie*

Katie: We had kids together. Grow up. *elbows Speed* Right?

Speed: Yeah.

Katie: We were in love.

Speed: Yeah we were.

Katie: We were?

Speed: You just said we were.

Katie: You agreed with me.

Speed: I'm not going to lie.

Katie: So how come you hate me now?

Speed: I never said I hated you. I said you were crazy.

Katie: I'm not crazy.

Speed: *rolls eyes*

Katie: Hey come on. You loved me. Give me more credit than that.

Speed: Why do we have to go over and over this?

Katie: Because you never aknowledged it!

Speed: I just did!

Carly: Aw they're like a bickering married couple.

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: Did you love me or not?

Speed: Yes I did. A lot. Are you happy?

Katie: So why did we divorce?

Speed: You divorced ME!

Katie: *laughs* Oh yeah. Damn and now you're married.

Speed: Yeah and I have a little boy on the way so keep your claws in the straight jacket.

Katie: Ah man.

Carly: Haha.

Katie: What?

Carly: I own his brother.

Katie: JERKS! ALL OF YOU!

TBC..................
 
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