GSR - One Life To Live

few things :) :

First your chapter made me hungry lol i think i'm gonna eat some eggs now lol
-Then is Ecklie their boss on the lab like he is now on CSI ? If so he doesn't have to report that to the sheriff, he can fired them by his own wish, and we all know how Ecklie can be bad :D
-I always wondered if the whole team would be happy of seeing their boss and Sara together? If you want write more, it could be nice to add some angst ;) and if it's the last chapter , that's perfect.

I've read on another thread that you wish you could write good, well you know, when it comes from your heart, when every words is a little part of you, everybody will love it. ;)

Sissi
 
Although sissi may be right about Ecklie, it's always fun to see him get what we'd all like to give him lol.

I do hope you write more on this, it's good so far.
 
Wow *blushes* Thnx so much everyone.... of course the last chapter ain't in sight for a while.

Wedding bells in the distance

It was too much to take. After Gil asked him (she accepted of course) she felt faint and had to sit down.

After all her years of misery and her years of abuse. She was finally gonna be happy again, with the one and only man she truly loved.

It was so overwhelming that she just wanted to sit and think to herself. Think over everything.... But at that moment a call came in. They had to respond to a homacide case, Just down the street from her house.... their house...

Grissom and Sarah got into one Tahoe, Cathrine, Nick and Greg all heading to a house two doors down from where the Grissoms lived, she thought...Wow that sounds weird.

The ride was long, aminly because of the silence, both thinking in their heads about todays events and their futures together. How will life feel after the wedding???

They arrived at the scene. A woman in her early thirties, and her daughter lay dead on the floor, the husband was carried out on a stretcher.

So, said Brass, it appears that our suspect entered while the family was watching a movie, shot the wife and the daughter husband tried to run, was shot and pretended to be dead, after the assailent left, the husband used his cell phone to call 911 before lapseing into uncounsiosness.

Sarah looked at the girls face, such a look of content, she died by her mama, and that made her happy to be with family. Sarah thought to herself, and memories of her childhood came back to her. She could feel tears searing the back of her eyes, longing to run free from her eyes.

Sarah Tenderly pushed back the little girls blond stiained red by blood hair, and whispered "don't worry baby I will find you mama and your's killer, maybe then you dad can live in peace, always rembering his two favorite girls."

Gil noticed Sarahs silence and the way she looked at the little girl, he could see parts of her past reflect in her eyes. He walked slowly over to her and rest his hand on her shoulder. "Sarah, this must be difficult for you, if you need to leave I understand."

Sarah glanced up and gave Gil a reassuring smile. "I'm fine thanks, just reminiceing.

They set to work, Sarah taking photos of the crime scene, Nick fingerprinted, Greg collected evidence inside, while Cathrine and Grissom looked for evidence outside.

Almost an hour before shift ended, a man came into the CSI HQ and asked to see Mr.Grissom and his team. Sarah thought that weird, this guy wasn't anyone they knew.

Gil and his team sat down opposite of the man in the room.
He figeted a little then began. "I...I..I I came to confess something that I did, something very serious and .... i..i..illegal." He paused for a moment. "I killed someone today, two people actually, and wounded one, I know he isn't dead but I couldn't kill him, he's my brother."

Shocked silence rang in the room.

Grissom was the first to gather himself. This man. He thought to himself. Killed his sister in law and neice... and tried to kill his brother.

Grissom glanced over in time to see the man pull out a gun and shoot himself in the head. After that everyone came to their senses... Gil worried about the affect this would have on Sarah and had Cathrine take her from the room.

"sarah needs to take the rest of her pregnancy off, the cases could have a debressing effect on her rate now."

After the mess in the interragation room was dealt with, Grissom met Sarah in his office. They shared a passionate kiss and then Gil told her "I want you to take the rest of your pregnancy off from work... I don't want you to be around this rate now cause I care aobut you. I don't want you to have to go through PPD with other emotionally damaging things."

Sarah looked into his eyes and knew he was right, but this job, it was her life her love... No that was GIl both her life and her love was Gil. She sighed and agreed to be a housewife for a while.

Gil kissed her goodbye and sent her home..... "Whats gonna happen now?" he thought.

Alright there we go again advice plz... and thankyou so much for reading it.
 
*Thankyou for pointing out that I spelled Sara wrong ... I have a tendency to do that..... well here goes*

A new Begins with us

Sara was bored out of her mind.... now that she was staying home from work, only since Gil told her to yesturday, she honestly had nothing to do.

She had done the laundry vacummed, and washed the dishes. She had dust and moped the floors, done anything she could think of, to end the boredom. The problem was, it just wouldn't end.

Sara sat in quite thought for a bit, what could she do..... "well we could use some groceries" she said aloud to herself.

Sara grabbed her keys, plastic bags...(just in case she needed to empty her stomach) and headed to her Tahoe, and off to the grocery store.


Gil sat in his office, he missed Sara, he wanted to be with her, but someone had to make some money for the household, and there were cases to be solved.

Gil pulled out his cell phone, to look at the gorgeous picture he had on there of Sara. Anytime he longed for her, he would look at this picture, and things would almost be right again. Gil always worried about her when she was on her own. Terrible things chased themselves around in his head of what could happen to her while he was at work.


Sara was happy to be out of the house. Although she missed being at the lab, and most of all missed Gil, she had time for herself to go to the grocery store... and well buy groceries.

After her grocery shopping trip that took her two hours, and five hundred dollars..... she headed home, to put away the groceries and make dinner for Gil.... she wanted to wow him with the new skills she had recently been picking up so she could make good meals for her family.... unlike before where a simple peice of toast wasn't worth the risk for her to make.

Tonight she decided, that she would make, boneless skinless chicken breast, with tequila lime marinara sauce.... she didn't like the idea of eating meat yet, but was warming up to it after being a vegitarian for so long, stuffed in the middle of the chicken breasts would be red onion chives and garlic, cooked in the over wrapped in tin foil. She boiled potatoes and mashed them with milk to make them creamy, and steamed so fresh veggies. Sara finished dinner as Gil walked in the door.

Gil looked so tired, and Sara could tell he had worried about her all day again. He walked over and they shared a passionate kiss, then Sara led Gil to the dining room where his eyes met a feast that looked so good only because Sara had made it.

They ate dinner and talked about Gil's day at work. Sara shared the little things of her uneventful day. After dinner, Gil decied to take sarah for a drive, they went to the cinemas, and Gil let Sara pick the movie....

They enjoyed their night so much, and after geting home curled up in bed together and fell into a deep dreamless sleep.

Alright once again open to suggestions... and of course if you find a spelling mistake ... tell me bout that too.
 
very cute :) although you had me worried when she went out, bad things happen when people go out around here way too often LOL
 
How could they tear us apart?

Sara awoke to harsh ringer of the phone. Looking at the clock on her beside table .... 2:00am... who would call at this time.

"hello" she said into the reciever.

Cathrines voice was on the other side. "Sara, theres a major cross juristiction case, the want Gil, Nick and Warrick to go on it, they won't let them come back until its solved.... I don't know how to say this but Gil needs to be here at the lab by 4:00am, packed and ready to fly out"

Cathrine could hear the silence on the other end.... and then the silent sobbing of Sara.

Sara thanked Cathrine and hung up the phone. She silently cried for a minute thn awoke Gil.

"wasmatter?" he asked groggly.

"Gil, Cathrine just called, you have to go on a cross juristiction case, they won't let you, nick or warrick come back until its done... you ...you .....

Sara knew she had to say it, if she didn't tell him and he didn't go he could loose his job and be forever shamed, just because she wasn't willing to tell him about his assignment.

"You have to be at the lab for 4:00am packed and ready to go"

Sara began to sob...... days maybe even weeks, or worse, months without Gil by her side. What if something went wrong?

Gil looked at Sara, his heart crushed to see her so sad, but what could he do... he knew he had to go or else risk loosing his job.....

Sara got up to make Gil something to eat, then sat quitely at the table sipping some coffee. She was going to drive him to the lab so that his Tahoe would not be sitting unattended. Her world had shatter within five minutes of picking up that call.......

Gil came down the stairs and saw Sara's discast face, she looked so pitiful, so depressed... their unborn child growing in her now starting to bulge tummy.

He thankfully ate the wonderful breakfast Sara had whipped up, put his bags in the SUV and waited for Sara to lock the door, and come to the vechile.... He could see the silent tears slide down her face in the early mornign light....

After arriving at the office, Sara said goodbye to Gil, sharing with him a long and passionate kiss goodbye.... she stared him in his gorgeous eyes and asked him when she would see him again ..."I don't know, when the case is over.... if I can help it ... that will be soon" They shared one last kiss and Sara got in the Tahoe and drove away.

Gil went inside and looked for Cathrine .. since she was staying behind, she could watch over Sara....
He found her in the break room with Nick and Warrick, preparing the last of the gear they needed.. she would be driving them to the airport.

"Cathrine I need to speak to you."

Cathrine followed Gil out the breakroom door, down the hall and into his office.

"Cathrine, I want you to take care of Sara while I am gone, she can't be left alone for this long... take her shopping do something... just............ just please don't let her mope about that house by herself."

Cathrine agreed and they were soon packing the Tahoe and heading for the airport.....

alrighty let me know what you think.... suggestions taken here if you wish ........
 
in honor of one of my most devoted fans of my story... here is another update within half an hour (what can i say I don't sleep much at night... happens when ur an insomniac)I am also gonna use the name of my neighbourhod in the story in this chapter it is a fic after all!

A gurls night out ..... Free of worry

Sara arrived back at the house, on Bridlewood way. It felt so big and lonely already. As soon as Sara set foot in the vechile to leave Gil behind she felt so alone, she missed him already and wished the cast was over.

She sunk to the floor and let the greif of her lonliness get the best of her. She lay for two hours sobbing out loud in the big empty house.....


Cathrine sat at her desk....debaiting wether to call Sara or not. Thoughts chased themselves around in her head, if I call now, she thought, then Sara will know that Gil put me up to this, but if I don't what might she try to do?

Cathrine picked up the phone and dialed the house number.... it rang four five six times then the answering machine came on..."Grissom residence" Said Gils strong voice "we are unable to take your call at the moment please leave a detailed message, the date and time of the day you called and you number after the tone." The tone sounded and Cathrine began to speak.

"Sar, I know your in there, I am worried bout you, why don't we go out tonight.... say to the spa.. just you an me" she paused for a moment "well if you feel up to it call me back rate away.. but if i don't hear from you i am coming over there!"


The tone sounded and Cathrines voice was gone. Sara knew she should of picked up the phone for her best friend at least. "ha my best friend" she said out loud... it sounded strange ... only a month ago they had been enemies, now since the conseption of the child growing inside of her, cathrine had become her best friend... her mentor.

Sara slowly got up, and walked to the phone, dialing Cathrines call phone number, then waiting for her to answer.

"Willows!"

"Cath, its Sara, I would like to take you up on your offer, are you able to get off work early.. i need some help with things?"

"sure thing, I can leave in two hours so I will be there at four, how does that sound?"

Sara agreed, and then hung up. She wandered off to the kitchen to do dishes..... until she had to go to her appointment.

At twelve, Sara left the house to go to her appointment to see how the babies developement was going... to make sure everything was okay.

She sat patiently in the waiting room, waiting for her turn.. when her name was called... Miss Sidle?

Sara got up and walker over to the nurse.

"this way please"

Sara followed obediently, and was seated in a small room, decorated with puppies playing on the wall..... how she longed for a companion.


Gil sat on the plane ... on a ride out to Miami.. they had had one other cross Juristiction before with miami... That meant that he would be seeing an old friend Horatio caine again.

Gil was lost to his thoughts, while nick and Warrick played travel size battle ship.

Sara should have a constant companion with her for when I am not there..... She did mention before that she had always wanted a dog.... A rottweiler to be in fact.... and I know a breeder.... Gil pulled took the reciever of the airline phone and dialed a number......"hello" said a voice on the other end, "Heather, how is bussiness???"

Lady Heather, was the diabetic dominatrix he knew, and as of recently had began to breed rotties. "Heather, I would like to buy two rotties from you.. do you have any at the moment?"

"yes I do ... what sexes to you want?"

"If possible two females, I will pay you when i get back from Miami"

"Payment is not necessary from you Gil, you have got me out of tight spots, you may have them free."

"Thankyou Heather, Could you drop them off at 16396 Bridlewood Way, sometime tomorrow?"

"Of course I can"

They echanged goodbyes and Gil called the house.. leaving a message on the answering machine....

alrighty there we are a next chapter .. i will probably do one more tonight
 
I really love it, but I've got one thing to mention; it's CathErine, not Cathrine. :) Please update soon!
 
alright cause I love you so much, here is another chapter for you guys... and thank you very much RoosCSILover for pointin out my mistake..... Hopefull i will spell it right this time *shakes head in shame*

A gurls night out.......Free from worry, Part 2

"TWINS!!!!!!!, are .....are...are you sure doctore?"

Sara was stunned, she was pregnant with twins... what will Gil do when he hears this news?

Sara left the doctors office, in a trance like state... stoped for a cold drink of water, waking herself to her senses, and drove home.

When she got home there was a message on the answering machine....

Catherine..... what now? She thought to herself... but when she hit play, she was surprised to hear, Gils sweet and heavenly voice.

"My dear dear Sara, I miss you more then words can say, I called to tell you that a surprise is coming to the house for you tomorrow, so please be there to get it. I love you my beautiful girl, and I'll talk to you soon"

The tone sounded and Gils voice was gone. A surprise for me? She thought .... what on earth could it be?

At four o'clock on the dot, Catherine arrived. She rang the doorbell and waited for Sara to answer.

Sara eagerly bounded to the door and nearly pulled it off the hinges.

"catherinei'mhavingtwins!" she said all in one breath.

"WHOA, good to see you too Sar, now slow down and say that agian." Catherine maaged while laughing.

Sara took a deep breath and began. "Cath, I am pregnant with twins!" the last part was a excited little squeal, but Catherine understood all the same.

"Congrats" she tenderly huged Sara. "have you told Gil yet?"

"No his cell has been off"

"it should be on now, the plane landed an hour ago"

Sara and Catherine walked to the kitchen where Sara set out cups and some fresh sqeezed orange juice. She then grabbed the phone an dialed Gils number.

The phone rang once and he picked up Immediatly.

"Sara? is something wrong?" He sounded so concerned.

"No Gil I am fine, Catherines with me" Catherine said hi at that moment, and Gil knew he was on speaker phone. "Anyway I called to let you know how my appointment went today" She took a large breath then lunged on "Gil, we're having twins"

Sara could tell this was alot to process for him, and gave him a few minutes before saying "honey are you alright?"

"ya ...uh ya ya, a....a....are you sure?!"

"Yes Gil, its twins." Sara and Catherine looked at each other, the excitment dancing in both womens eyes.

"Anyway honey, I should go, me and Catherine have reservations at a resturant and then are going to the spa"

after sharing a long good bye with each other, ensuring that Sara would call the next day after her surprise arrived at the house, they hung up and Catherine and Sara were on their way to the resturant.

They went to the finest resturant in town for Japanese cuisine. Sara loved the Sushi now that she ate meat, it wasn't that bad.

They ordered their meals, and a large tray of sushi and sat talking quitely at their Candle lite table... sharing secrets with each other.

After dinner they head to the La Chiche Spa, to treat themselves with messages, mud baths, tanning, nails and waxing.

Sara didn't normally do this but it felt great, made her feel feminine, after the spa, Catherine and Sara went back to the Grissom residence, and Watched movies on the two fold out couches in the living room, until they fell asleep, Catherine had decided to stay because she had the next day off......

Sara wondered what her surprise was and after drifting off she dreamt many thoughts of the surprise and its contents... none to the likes of what it really was.....

I have a great love for Japanese cuisine so I had to put that in there, anyway once again open to your thoughts
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top