CSI:NY - "The Younger Generation"

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Sorry for late reviews, Linda.. Hardly get to come here.. I'm so happy that Linda continued this..

Aw, Sharon and Shannon.. :adore::adore: It reminds me of myself. Sister's quarrelling because of some things and calling for help from Mom but get none. Poor Mac and Stella... :lol: What Mac told Michael was true. Sometimes, they have to give more space to their kids. It would be more easy for them to communicate better. The best would be interactions with each other. Love this chapter.. :D Thank you very much, Linda.
 
Knocking on the door he said....

"Can I come in son?"

"Sure dad. It's open."

Walking in Michael sat on the bed.

"Listen MJ. I'm really sorry to have embarassed you in front of your friends. It's just lately you've been breaking rules that you normally never would. I'm really trying to understand why."

"I know dad. I'm sorry too. I know I was grounded. But I can't help but want to spend time with Lindsay. I like her alot dad, and she likes me too."

"I understand that MJ. That's not what the problem was though. The problem was the way the two of you were caught kissing. Children don't kiss like that son."

"You and mom do. Danny and Natalia do. So why can't we then?"

"Well..it's different for adults son."

"Different how?"

"We're married. We love each other so it's okay to kiss with our tongues."

Michael knew he screwing up this talk. In about five minutes he was going to call his dad.

"That's kind of silly dad. So you're telling me you never kissed a girl ever with your tongue till you were married?"

"Mm..hmm..."

Michael wasn't sure what to say now. He was totally lost.

"I kissed girls son. Quite a few to be honest. But I can honestly tell you I never used my tongue till I was in my late teens. Kissing can be fun son, but when it gets serious like you and Lindsay it's no longer fun."

"I don't understand dad. It is fun. We feel all funny inside. Kinda tingly."

Michael paniced. He wasn't sure where to go now. Or how to handle this.

"Calm down Michael. Think logical." He whispered to himself.

"Well son that would be your adrenalin pumping. When we get excited our bodies feel all kind of sensations that let us know we like what we're doing. But at your age son you shouldn't be feeling that, either should Lindsay which tells me the two of you are moving way to fast. your bodies can't keep up with what it's feeling."

"You aren't making sense dad. If our bodies are tingling that means we like it and each other, right?"

Michael was so tied up in knots. He wasn't good at these kind of talks. So using his smarts he tried a different route.

"I'll make you a deal son."

"What deal dad?"

"If you and Lindsay promise to stop kissing with your tongues then I'll arrange it with Danny that you two can go out twice during the week and on saturdays. But...if you two are caught at any time breaking the deal, then it's off."

"Hmm..I think I can live with that dad. So we can kiss though right? Just not like you and mom do?"

"That's right son. If you two keep your promises then we'll see about arranging more time."

"You have a deal dad. I love you."

Hugging his father tight Michael hoped to hell he was doing the right thing.

"One more thing son. Tell papa that we had a good talk, okay?"

MJ laughed. "I feel for you dad. Father son adult talks suck huh?"

Bowing his head in shame he nodded yes.

"No worries dad. Our talk is safe."

"Thanks son. Now let's go shopping before the family leave without us."

Walking downstairs MJ smiled for he knew he had the greatest dad in the world and a son couldn't ask for more then that.
 
If our bodies are tingling that means we like it and each other, right?"
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*Grins* What Michael said is totally true. I couldn't agree more. Sometimes it may get serious. *Can't stop laughing* Poor Michael... Hmm? Michael just want the best for his son. Just like Mac. I'm glad that it didn't turned out to be an argument. Hopefully MJ doesn't get their kisses into something neither of them wanted to face. Love this chapter. Father and son moment.. :D

Oh, I can't review "Don't Forget to say Goodbye", Chapter 18 in FF.net. Is it Linda changed the chapter? Hmm...

Lindaaaa.aaa.aa..aa.aaa.a.aa.a.a.aaa.. Your avatar makes me breathless. I keep staring at it and can't stop myself. *Grins* It does looks very very real. Hopefully it'll happen someday..

Take Care - Asprine
 
:lol: I loved how nervous Michael was getting trying to talk to his son about such a situation. :lol:

It was a great talk. Love how MJ thought his dad was the best. Awww...
 
That was great, MJ made me laugh and Micheal was funny when he was screwing it all up. But he sorted stuff out and now its... :D
 
Later that evening Mac and Stella finally had their home back to themselves.

"Daddy can we play Hide and Seek before bed?"

"Sure Michelle. Just let daddy finish up this e-mail, then I'm all yours."

"Okay daddy."

While Michelle waited Stella came downstairs dressed in black jeans and a black shirt.

"Wow...I don't know if I should let out tonight or not love. You look to dangerous."

"Well thank you Mac." As she kissed him.

"Mommy what time will you be home?"

"I'm not sure sweetheart. Long after you're asleep."

"Oh..where you going again?"

"Out with your sister, Natalia, and Anya. It's kinda like a girls night out."

"What do you do?"

"Sometimes we have dinner, or go dancing. Adult things."

"I bet alot of boys hit on you eh mom?"

Stella laughed. The look on Mac's face was priceless.

"Drop the evil eye Mac. I've only had eyes for you, trust me. I love you, you are my life."

"Aww...that's so sweet mommy. Isn't that nice daddy. Mommy only loves you, so stop pouting."

Sticking his tongue out at his daughter Stella laughed.

"Who's helping Eric with the girls tonight love?"

"I think Michael, and Danny are watching all the troops. You can take Michelle over if you like."

"Oh please daddy. Can we? Can we go?"

"Sure, grab your coat. We have to take mommy over anyway."

"Yay...we get to over to Eric's. You're the best daddy."

When they arrived at Eric's they could hear the girls screaming.

"What is it with those girls? Must they always yell?"

Stella had to smile. They were loud. Even the neighbours could hear them if their looks were any idea.

"Paaaaaaaaaaaaapa, paaaaaaaaaaaapa..."

"Not again...."

Tackling their grandfather to the ground they smothered him in kisses again.

"Come on girls. Let papa up."

Getting Mac seen how his daughter was dressed. She had lose fitting jeans and a shirt that said "Under Construction."

"Look at you my baby. I swear you grow every minute."

"I know daddy. I feel so fat."

"That's not fat sweetheart. That's a beatiful child waiting to be born. He's a blessing."

"I really wish you'd stop calling him a he daddy. You are going to get Eric all excited, and then when it's another girl he's going to cry."

"Who's going to cry Mackenzie?"

"No one Eric. Now kiss me please, here comes Michael, Danny, Natalia and Anya."

"Hi MJ, I missed you."

"I missed you too Lindsay. Come on let's go play a video game."

"Remember our deals kids."

"We know daddy. Don't worry."

With the men settled with the kids. The girls kissed their husbands good bye and left for their night out.
 
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then I'm all yours."
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:devil::devil::devil: He's all mine. *Kidding*

I've only had eyes for you, trust me. I love you, you are my life."
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Aw, Stella is sooooo sweet. Mac's face.. Ha~ I could picture that. Hilarious though.

"No one Eric. Now kiss me please
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I love it when they are so direct even in front of their girls and boys. But they may follow sometimes.. I couldn't stop myself from smiling.

MJ and his father's deal. *Grins*

Looking forward to their night out.. :D
 
Mackenzie is pregnant again. Well, for Eric's sake I hope it's a boy this time. Poor guy is already outnumbered even though the doggies are boys (I think lol). :lol: at Mac sticking his tongue out at Michelle. She was funny when she told him to stop pouting. :lol:
And Under Construction! :guffaw:Very cute. I love it!
 
"Okay girls, where to tonight?"

"Hmm...seeing Mackenzie is our designated driver. How about clubing."

"Sounds good to me, are you okay with that sweetheart?"

"Sure mom. Just because I'm pregnant doesn't mean I can't dance."

Laughing the girls pulled into Allure Nightclub. Walking in they noticed how packed it was. Heading over to the booth they sat down.

"Hey Nat!!! How the hell you doing? We haven't seen you here since you married that guy Danny."

"Sorry??"

"Come on Nat. How can you not remember me. We went to school together. Geraldine Ditts."

Mackenzie tried not to laugh at the girls last name. But once her mom squeezed her knee to get her to stop smirking she laughed out loud. Causing everyone within their radiace to look at her.

"It's okay, she's pregnant. It's just hormonal." Smiled Stella.

"Thanks alot mom. Very funny."

"Anyways Nat. Give me all call sometime we'll do lunch. Bye."

After she left Natalia breathed deep.

"I don't even know who she was. How bad is that?"

They all laughed. After ordering their drinks some gorgeous young man walked over to their table. Keeping his bright blue eyes on Stella the others kicked her under the table. Yet the only thing on Stella's mind was..."God he could pass as my son."

"Shh..stop that mom. See what he has to say." Smiled Mackenzie wickedly.

"You are just like your father with that grin young lady."

"Suck it back mom your beautiful. Here he comes. Just go with it. It's only a dance."

"Your father will kill me sweetheart. Get rid of him."

"Too late mom."

"Excuse me, my name is Mack would you like to dance?"

Oh God that did it. None of them could stop the snicker.

"Go ahead mom, we'll be fine."

Getting up from the seat, he took her hand.

"Wow...you are gorgeous. Shall we?"

Leading her away Anya said....

"Ten bucks says Mac smells his cologne and has a temper tantrum."

"I'm in."

"Me too."

Laughing they watched the young stud slip his hands down Stella's bum, as she lifted them back to her waist.

Meanwhile....

"So dad, what do you think the girls really do on Saturday night?"

"Most likely go to Bingo, or a movie."

"I don't know about that Mac. I've seen Natalia come home with Alcohol on her breath. I have a feeling they go to the bars."

*Snorts*...Listen Danny I know my wife. She's past that bar stage. I don't see it."

"If ya say so Mac. She's aweful damn beautiful for her age. Even after three kids she never lost that shape. You'd swear she's never aged.

"You guys aren't helping. Quit teasing him. Before he pouts."

"Listen Michael. I'd be more worried about your wife. She's no bag of onions you know. Either is Natalia. You should all be worried. Except for you Eric. Yours is pregnant."

"So...should we take bets which one comes home with the smell of cologne?"

"Hah..this is going to be the easiest amount of money I've ever made. I know my wife. She won't dance with anyone. So twenty bucks on my Stella."

After their money in the middle of the table. The men waited for the return of their wives.
 
After the dance Mack brought her back to the table.

"Thanks for the dance Stella. Here's my number, give me a call sometime." He smiled as he kissed her hand.

"Listen Mack. You are a wonderful dancer. But I have a son and daughter who are your age, a wonderful husband and younger daughter at home. I'm sorry I can't accept this."

"Okay Mrs. Stella. Tell your husband he is a very lucky man to have such a beautiful wife."

Kissing her hand once more he left.

"Oh wow mom. What did you do to that young man. And if I'm not mistaken is that a blush on your beautiful face."

"Stop Mackenzie. It's getting late. We should head home."

The girls all looked each other and tried not to laugh. There was no way they were going to let Stella know she smelled like a man, especially when they had money riding on Mac.

"Sure, we're ready mom. Let's go. But we need to stop at that burger joint I have a craving for a double cheeseburg with fries."

"Mm..that sounds great. I could eat. Maybe we should take some home to the boys?"

"Nah. They'll be fine mom. I made sure they had lots of food when we left. Let's just hurry the baby is kicking up a storm."

"I think your father may be right this time Mackenzie. You could be carrying a boy. For if I remember right you couldn't eat meat with the girls. It always made you sick."

After finishing their meals they headed home.

When they pulled into the driveway Mackenzie said....

"Mmm...what's that wonderful cologne you're wearing mom? I've been smelling it all the way home."

"Me too Stel. Could it be Mack's all over you."

"Smelling her clothes she cursed.

"Damn, your father is going to have a fit. Who has an extra shirt?"

"Jeez, sorry Stel. I didn't bring anything. You could always run upstairs quickly and change. We'll keep Mac busy."

"You're funny Natalia. You and I both know the men are going to be up as soon as we walk in that door. I can't believe you girls didn't tell me. Especially you Mackenzie Delko."

They all laughed.

"Wait a damn minute. You all have a bet going on, don't you? How could you guys. That's it, I get half of whoever wins."

Opening the car door she slammed it.

"Think she's pissed?"

"Oh yeah. this is going to be good. Now she's fired up we should get one hell of an arguement."

Getting out of the car Natalia said....

"Maybe Stella should have gotten Mack's number after all."

Laughing they all breathed deep as they entered the house.
 
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