CSI:NY - "The Younger Generation"

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  1. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    This story is continued from

    A NY:Smex Story..."Losing Faith on Love".
    http://talk.csifiles.com/showthread.php?t=54024


    Just as Mac and Stella had gotten comfortable Kong jumped back up on the bed.

    "Kong!!! Down now."

    As the dog jumped down Stella laughed again.

    "Aren't you glad you kept two of the pups from Kong's little adventure."

    "Funny Stel. I could shoot the Animal Control Center for telling us they were both fixed."

    "Aww..come on Mac. They were told they were, don't blame them."

    "I'm really trying not to love. But when Kong escaped and found that other female shepard to play naughty games. He left us with a litter of six, cause the other owners didn't want them. Saying it was our fault that the kids had let him out."

    "Even so Mac. You know you love them. I mean..look how sad you were when King and Kong died. It broke you."

    "I know that love, but they were amazing dogs."

    "As will King and Kong Jr. be one day. It's in their blood Mac."

    Feeling sorry for the little buggers who's faces were hanging down to the ground. Mac called them up.

    "Come on King. Come on Kong, up."

    Not waiting to be asked again. They jumped up and curled at the foot of the bed.

    "See Mac. Now they will sleep."

    Wrapping his wife in his arms, he went to kiss her.

    "Grrrwl..."

    "That's enough Kong. No growling at daddy."

    Looking Stella in the eyes, the dog yawned, turned a few circles and fell asleep.

    "Possesive little brats."

    "Shh...quiet now Mac. Or you will wake them again."

    Reaching over Stella passionately kissed Mac.

    "Now go to sleep." she giggled.


    Meanwhile.....

    Flack was desperately trying to get his grandchildren to sleep.

    "Please papa, we wants a story."

    "Papa said no. It's bedtime. Did I not let you's stay up late and watch The Ninja Turtle's Movie?"

    "I's know papa, but we's not tired at all."

    "I'll tell you what. If you all go to sleep, I'll take you to the beach tomorrow."

    "But that's not much fun."

    "It will be. You know why?"

    "No why papa?"

    "Well....Mackenzie is coming tomorrow with the tripp's."

    "The tripp's are coming papa?"

    "They are. Mac told papa tonight. Now tuck in and get some sleep."

    "K papa. We love you."

    "I love you three too. Have a good sleep."

    Closing the door half way Flack breathed a sigh of relief.

    whispering to himself he said...."thank God they aren't mine"
     
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  2. nattybatty55

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    :lol: Loved that bit and the ending with Flack :D
     
  3. GregNickRyanFan

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    I loved the "possessive little brats" and "thank god they aren't mine" comments from Mac and Don, respectively. Too funny!
     
  4. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    lol Don better watch it
     
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    When Mac got up in the morning. Stella tried to get out of bed to make him breakfast.

    "Aaah...where do you think you're going?"

    "To make you breakfast."

    "Oh no...you heard the doctor. No getting out of bed."

    "Come on Mac. Stop being a mean nurse."

    "Mean!!! You haven't seen mean yet love. But you will if you try and get up."

    "Listen Mac, Mackenzie and the girls are coming today. I will not be staying in bed."

    "Oh yes you will. That's why Mackenzie is coming. She's going to watch you while Don and I take the granchildren to the beach."

    "You and Don...she laughed hysterically, you're kidding right?"

    "No. We are serious. As soon as I finish breakfast, and the girls get here, we are gone."

    "Well...good luck ex detective, hope you can handle the she demons from hell."

    "That's not nice love. Those are your granddaughter's."

    "Granddaughter's or not, they are little imps."

    Kissing his lovely wife smartly he said...."we'll be fine Stel. Trust me."

    As he walked into the shower, Stella called Jennifer to place a bet on how long it would take the boys to lose control of their grandchildren.

    "Mom....we are here! Where are you?"

    "Upstairs sweetheart."

    As she heard her daughter and grandaughter's running up the stairs. King and Kong jumped them.

    "Auuuuuuuuugh...no, no King Kong, bad doggies." said Sara who was now on the ground being licked to death.

    "King, Kong, SIT!!" Yelled Mackenzie.

    Sitting on their butts with their tongues hanging out. Mackenzie helped up her daughter.

    When they reached their nana's room, they jumped on her bed.

    "Hi nana, we missed you."

    "I missed you too Sara, Sharon and Shannon. Look how big you've gotten."

    "I know. Where's papa?"

    "He's in the shower."

    "PAPA....yelled Shannon. ARE YOU STILL TAKING US TO THE BEACH?"

    "Hey...is that my tripp's?"

    "It's us papa. Are you?"

    "Yes I am, and guess who is coming with us?"

    "Who papa?"

    "Your cousins."

    "Yay, yay, yay," they all shouted together as Stella laughed.

    "What's so funny mom?"

    "Nothing love."

    "Mom...what are you up too? Wait a minute. You and Jennifer made a bet didn't you?"

    *Laughing*. "Just a little one."

    "Oh...you have to let me in on it."

    "Sure sweetheart. I have twenty bucks that the boys don't make it past noon."

    "What does Jennifer have?"

    "She says they'll make it till one."

    "Oh cool. Then I'll take 12:30 for twenty."

    "Oh now that's cheating."

    "No it's not mom. It's called being smart."

    Just as Stella was about to say something else Mac walked out of the shower.

    "PAPA...."yelled the girls.
     
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    mmm Mac in the shower *drooool* Mac at the beach is fun too...no shirt...nice tan...maybe the waves will take his trunks off and...*giggle*
     
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    ^^^Mel :lol: How did I know your post'd look like that :lol: But i do agree....
     
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    :guffaw: Loved the bet too.

    I agree about Mac in the shower Mel. :drool:
     
  9. MacsLovlyAngl

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    When Mac was dressed and ready. He kissed his wife good bye and left with the tripp's.

    "Papa."

    "What is it Shannon?"

    "Can we get hotdogs at the beach?"

    "Not today. We will be having a BBQ later. You can have hotdogs and burgers then."

    "But papa...we are hungry now."

    "How can you be hungry, when mommy just fed you before you arrived?"

    "Cause we are growing girl's papa."

    "Hmm...okay here we are and there's Uncle Flack with your cousins."

    When they all got into the car the kids started yelling above each other.

    "Jake, Jake...did you hear what happened in NY?"

    "Uhuh...what Shannon?"

    "Daddy had to chase a big huge rat and kill it, cause it ran into our garbage. It was gross."

    Listening to all the loud chatter Mac was getting a headache. Turning on the radio loudly, he hoped they would stop yelling. But it didn't work out that way. Instead they began to sing with the songs on the radio.

    "Great Mac!! Just couldn't leave well enough alone, could you?"

    "Christ Flack don't piss me off." Turning off the radio the kids started screaming.

    "PAPA...WE LIKE THAT SONG, PUT IT BACK ON, PUT IT BACK ON."

    Just as Mac and Flack were about to lose it they arrived at the beach.

    "Thank Christ. Five more minutes and that would have been it."

    "You think. Christ Mac what have we gotten ourselves into?"

    Parking the car they got out with their towels.

    "Let's go Jack," yelled Shannon.

    "Shannon....stop right there young lady."

    "What papa?"

    "You will wait for us. Understood?"

    "Well's then hurry's up papa"

    "What was that Shannon?"

    "Hurry papa, come on"

    "What's your hurry Shannon?"

    "I's don't wanna miss the water."

    "The water isn't going to disappear love."

    While Shannon and Jake ran ahead. Sharon, Sara, Jack and Jordan decided to take their time gabbing.

    "Come on kids, speed up."

    When they found a spot on the beach Mac layed out the blanket.

    "Okay kids. Put all your stuff here and I'll help you with your water wings."

    As Mac was helping Sara, Flack was becoming distracted by the bikini babes walking along the beach. He couldn't help it, for they didn't have this in NY, and these girls were practically naked.

    "Flack...Flack...God damn it stop staring."

    "Huh...oh yeah. Sorry Mac. Gotta love Miami."

    "Uh, yeah, and I'm sure Jennifer has a bullet for your ass if she knew what you doing."

    "Papa...what's an ass?"

    "Umm...it's a donkey sweetheart. Now let's go swimming."
     
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    :lol: Loved the last bit. I can just imagine Flack watching all the bikini-clad girls on the beach. hehe.
     
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    Once the kids were ready to go in the water. Danny walked by.

    "Uncle Danny"...yelled Jake.

    "Jake my man. When did you get here?"

    "We's came this morning with mommy."

    Just as Danny was about to say something else, a beautiful blonde walked by.

    "Hello lucious beauty."

    Smiling at Danny she kept on walking when another girl walked by in a skin tight bikini that revealed everything.

    "Hello ucious, said Jake.

    As the young lady turned around she laughed.

    "Awww...aren't you a sweetheart. Is this your son?"

    Danny looked at her, then looked at Jake and said....

    "Yeah...this is my Jake."

    "I's not yours Uncle Danny."

    Laughing the girl said...."nice try." and continued walking down the beach.

    "Thanks alot bud."

    "You's welcome Uncle Danny. Wants to swim with me?"

    "Not right now Jake. You go ahead I need to talk to your Uncle Mac."

    "What is it Danny. I have to keep an eye on the girls."

    "I know, me too." he laughed.

    "Not those girls smart ass, my granddaughters."

    "Okay, okay. Listen Mac I need your opinion on something."

    "Sure...what is it?"

    "I've kind of been dating Natalia. She's a great girl, but I still feel like I'm cheating on Linds, and I don't know how to get by it."

    "Listen Danny. If she makes you happy, I'm sure Lindsay would be happy for you."

    "I don't know Mac. Then there's my kids."

    "I can tell you this much Danny. If you like her, your kids are going to like her. Have you set it up for them to meet yet?"

    "No. And the kids are flying in tonight."

    "I'll tell you what. We are having a BBQ tonight. Why don't you bring the kids and Natalia. It might help to have family around."

    "Are you sure Mac? I wouldn't want to impose."

    "Danny, you are family. You wouldn't be imposing."

    "Okay Mac, thanks."

    "Anytime Danny. Now...I need to find my little imp's."

    Turning around Mac seen them running down the beach with their cousins.

    "FLACK...what the hell. Get the kids."

    Running down the beach Mac, Danny and Flack chased the kids, finally catching them.

    "That's it, let's go. Home."

    "No papa, we's sorry. Please papa, we will stay with you."

    Looking at his watch it said 11am.

    "What's the matter Mac?"

    "Nothing. Let's go guys, we'll get ice cream."

    "Ice cream? Yay, let's go papa."

    "Mac...are you nuts? Stella and Jennifer specificly said no ice cream."

    "Well they aren't here are they. So let's go."

    "No Mac. We're not going yet."

    "Why the hell not?"

    "I'll tell you why. Jake told me the girls have a bet on us. $20 bucks that we don't make it till noon."

    "Are you kidding?"

    "No...I'm serious Mac. We have to stay."

    "Damn it Flack, it's just twenty bucks, I'll pay it if I have too."

    "Do you really want the girls to think we can't handle our own grandchildren?"

    "But we can't. I've got a headache, and I've had enough."

    Walking back to get their stuff, they noticed it was gone.

    "Where's our stuff?"

    "I don't know Mac."

    "What do you mean you don't know?"

    "I don't know. It was here not more then 10 minutes ago."

    "Great. Now we've lost all our stuff. Let's just get the hell out of here."

    "Papa...we don't have our clothes."

    "I know love. That's okay. You have more at home."

    "But my teddy is gone. I want Mr.sparks."

    "I'm sorry Sharon, we've lost him.

    "Noooooooooooo...I want Mr. Sparks," she screamed at the top of her lungs causing everyone to stare.

    "Shh...come on Sharon, papa buy you a new one."

    "I's no want a new one. I want Mr.Sparks." she cried.

    Picking her up, Mac held her close.

    "I promise Sharon, we'll find Mr.Sparks."

    As they headed back to the car, the kids fell asleep.

    "What are we going to Mac?"

    "We are going to stop at Toy's R Us, and pick up another one."

    "Come on. That's not going to work. She's going to know."

    "No she won't. It had a chunk taken out of it from Kong. I'll just wrestle him with the new one, and get him to tear it again."

    "I'm telling you Mac, it's going to backfire."

    "Stop worrying Don. Look at it this way. We won't get home now till after one. So the girls won't win their bet."

    "Mac....as right as you are. It's still not going to fool Sharon."

    "We'll see Don. Now let's go."

    Putting the sleeping grandchildren in their seats, they headed to Toy's R Us.
     
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    I hope they find it and it's not part of something bigger
     
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    I'd love to see Mac wrestling those dogs :lol:
     
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    He knew he had to work quickly. Opening the bear he placed the little bomb inside. Sewing the bear back up, he put it in a box, got in his car and drove to Miami-Dade Police Station.

    Getting out of the car he walked the box into the Police Station.

    "Excuse me, I found these items on the beach."

    "Okay, just a minute I need to get some information from you."

    As the girl left the desk, she came back and found the guy gone.

    "Hmm.." Looking inside the box she seen the items. As she looked at the bear Danny walked by.

    "Hey Sue, where'd you find that bear?"

    "I don't know. Some guy dropped this stuff off. Said he found it. Why? Do you know who it belongs too?"

    "Yeah! Mac Taylor's granddaughter. I'll give him a call."

    Meanwhile...

    "I'll be right back Flack. Stay with the kids."

    As Mac got ready to get out his cell rang.

    "Taylor."

    "Hey Mac it's Danny. We've found Sharon's bear. Someone handed your stuff in to Miami-Dade."

    "You're kidding? Great. Bring it with you tonight."

    "Sure Mac, see ya around 6pm."

    "Who was it Mac?"

    "Danny. He said someone turned our stuff in, including Sharon's bear."

    "Talk about luck Mac. Now let's get home."

    When they pulled into the driveway the kids woke up and Sharon started crying again.

    "My bear papa, I's want my bear."

    "Come on love, don't cry. Uncle Danny found your bear, he's bringing it tonight."

    "He did papa?"

    "He did. Now how about we go see mommy?"

    As the kids ran into the house, King and Kong jumped them.

    *Ouff*. "No, no. Bad doggies, sit."

    "King and Kong get down." yelled Mackenzie.

    "Hey dad. How was the beach?"

    "It was okay, till our stuff got stolen."

    "Your stuff?"

    "Yeah. Including Sharon's bear. But someone turned it into the station. Danny's bringing it tonight when he comes with the troop's and Natalia."

    "Thank God. She won't sleep without that bear."

    "I know. How's your mom feeling?"

    "She's fine. I brought her downstairs. She's in the living room laying on the couch."

    "She's not supposed to be out of bed."

    "Oh daddy relax. I know what the doctor said. But it's not going to hurt mom to walk a few feet."

    "Hey Mac! Want me to fire up the Barbeque?"

    "Sure Flack. I'm going to check on wife."

    "Such a worrier daddy."

    Walking into the living room he found his wife sound asleep. Kneeling down beside her he lifted her shirt and kissed his baby.

    "Mmm...you're home."

    "We are love. All in one piece and past noon." he laughed.

    "So you know?"

    "Of course we know. Jake overheard your converation with Jennifer."

    "Ahh, I see. So how was the beach?"

    "It was good love. We lost our stuff, but someone turned it in to Miami-Dade. Danny's bringing it tonight."

    Caressing her tummy Stella took her hand and caressed her husbands hair.

    "I love you Mac," she said with tears.

    Looking into his wife's beautiful tear filled eyes he whispered..."I love you too sweetheart."
     
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    I reall really cant wait out to find out if they find the bomb! :D
     
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