The hope is alive again. Maybe Eric will calm down now.
CSI:NY - "The Younger Generation"
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Yeah that sounds better 
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
I'll update tomorrow. But I need your opinions. Do you think this should end at 1000. OR should I start a third??
Please let me know. So I kow whether to end it, or continue.
Thanks.
Please let me know. So I kow whether to end it, or continue.
Thanks.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
I always want more It's up to you though.
It's up to you though.
Asprine
Pathologist
Sorry, for late reviews, Linda. I'm trying to catch up.
Post #621
Hmm, Shannon did everything just for Sara's safety. Poor Shannon. But I understand Sara.. She really is interested in the choir. I'm glad that Eric didn't use his temper on Sara. Danny cracked me up.. :lol::lol:
Post #625
OH~! What a good and understanding husband Eric is.. :drool: Aw.. Stella..Stella.. Always love to play hide and seek. :lol:
*Faints* I could picture Mac's eye looking at her stripping off. :devil:
Post #629
Eric and Mackenzie is quarelling. *Sighs* Hope they'll be okay in further chapters. Aw, cute Peanut. It's not her fault. What a couple would be if there's no arguments.
Post #633
OH GOSH! He's INSANE!.. It's too dangerous for Shannon and Sara alone.. Why must he see small kids naked. He can just call some chick and ask them strip in front of him. They'll do that without any problem. :lol::lol: *Kidding* OH NO~!! Shannon is missing.. I hope she'll be okay.
Post #638
GRrrr! not calling him Mister. I'll call him Coward Phillips. :lol: I'm glad that Shannon cut him.. Well, serve him right for being such an idiot and insane dude. :lol: Hmm, he have to wipe his butt and wait to live in prison for very very long. :lol:
Post #640
I'm glad Shannon is okay, Plus.. Sara didn't completely blame herself for what have happened. Hmm, yeah.. Shannon is more to Taylor/Bonasera. Hopefully some witnesses and victims will come and sue him. It won't do anything bad. Just some words needed to catch this Psychosomatic guy. :lol:
Post #644
Eric..Eric.. Having your temper now won't do any good. Aw.. Wendy.. Thank God! Just you wait, Coward Phillips! :lol::lol:
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Linda, whatever it is your decisions is, I'll always appreciate them. This story is AWESOME! With those Family Bond and Those Great cases.. that involves them. :adore::adore: Thank you so much, Linda.
Post #621
Hmm, Shannon did everything just for Sara's safety.
Poor Shannon. But I understand Sara.. She really is interested in the choir. I'm glad that Eric didn't use his temper on Sara. Danny cracked me up.. :lol::lol:Post #625
OH~! What a good and understanding husband Eric is.. :drool: Aw.. Stella..Stella.. Always love to play hide and seek. :lol:
*Faints* I could picture Mac's eye looking at her stripping off. :devil:
Post #629
Eric and Mackenzie is quarelling. *Sighs* Hope they'll be okay in further chapters. Aw, cute Peanut. It's not her fault. What a couple would be if there's no arguments. Post #633
OH GOSH! He's INSANE!.. It's too dangerous for Shannon and Sara alone.. Why must he see small kids naked. He can just call some chick and ask them strip in front of him. They'll do that without any problem. :lol::lol: *Kidding* OH NO~!! Shannon is missing.. I hope she'll be okay.
Post #638
GRrrr! not calling him Mister. I'll call him Coward Phillips. :lol: I'm glad that Shannon cut him.. Well, serve him right for being such an idiot and insane dude. :lol: Hmm, he have to wipe his butt and wait to live in prison for very very long. :lol:
Post #640
I'm glad Shannon is okay, Plus.. Sara didn't completely blame herself for what have happened. Hmm, yeah.. Shannon is more to Taylor/Bonasera.
Hopefully some witnesses and victims will come and sue him. It won't do anything bad. Just some words needed to catch this Psychosomatic guy. :lol:Post #644
Eric..Eric.. Having your temper now won't do any good. Aw.. Wendy.. Thank God! Just you wait, Coward Phillips! :lol::lol:
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Linda, whatever it is your decisions is, I'll always appreciate them.
This story is AWESOME! With those Family Bond and Those Great cases.. that involves them. :adore::adore: Thank you so much, Linda. 
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Exactly how I would have put it
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Sitting down, Don and Danny waited for her to begin.
"It was almost a year ago. He was my substitute music teacher. I remember when he walked into our classroom. All us girls thought he was handsom, smart, funny. You know, a thirteens year old crush."
Don continued to write.
"Anyways, he asked me to stay one day after school. Said he needed help cleaning the instruments. So a few of us stayed behind. As time past, most of my friends had to leave. So I was left alone with Mr.Phillips. I remember leaning over the sink, washing out the mouth pieces when he came up behind me."
Danny could see her tears begin to form. Letting him know that her assault was about to be told.
"He wrapped his hands around mine. I remember him leaning into my ear with his lips, as he said...This is how you need to wash the mouth piece. Nice and slow. See the way my fingers dance around it. I freaked, I told him to let go of me. But he wouldn't. He held me against the sink tighter, I could feel.....*Sob*....I could...."
"It's okay Wendy. Let's skip that part for now. We'll come back to it. How did you escape?"
"I seen a fork sitting on the sink. I guess it was left from his lunch. But I'm not sure. I picked it up and stabbed him in the chest. I could remember seeing the blood come through his shirt."
"So he should have a scare?"
"I guess. I don't know."
Don knew this was going to help for sure. For she had marked him.
"Tell me the rest please."
"He grabbed the fork from me as I tried to run past him. I remember him tossing me to the ground. I guess I must have banged my head, cause the next time I woke I was in the Hospital."
"So you can't be sure he raped you?"
"Yes I can. I live with the proof everyday."
Don was confused, as was Danny.
"What do you mean?"
Standing up she began to cry. Slowly undoing her pants she pulled them down.
"Umm..you don't have to do that. How about we get a female office to see?"
"NO!!! I want to show you, please."
Don and Danny weren't sure what they were about to see. As she pulled the waist band just a little below her hips, they seen scars. At least six, showing he had raked her skin with the fork.
"Christ....I'm sorry. If it's okay with your mom, and you can we have a female officer take some pictures?"
"What ever will help"...she quivered out.
"Wendy, can you tell me if the Hospital did a report, or an internal?"
"I can answer that. No. When she woke up in the Hospital none of us knew what had happened. All the Hospital knew was what Mr.Phillips told them. That she had fallen and banged her head. When she came to. She made me swear not to tell. She was to ashamed. She had blood and seman on her panties. I remember she kept yelling at me to throw them away. So I put them in my pocket. Then she took a shower."
"What about her fork marks? She must have been bleeding from the wounds."
"She never told them. She kept them hidden till we got home. I then told her we had to inform the Police. As we waited, she paniced. Changed her mind."
When the mother left the room, the female Officer showed up. Leading the girl into the other room, she took a series of pictures. With everything complete, Don informed her that they would contact her once they had everything filed and set to go.
"I have one more question Wendy?"
"What is it?"
"I need to know. I need you to promise that you won't back out. Promise me Wendy."
"I promise. I'm sorry for that little girl. Please tell her."
"I will. You take care. We'll be in contact soon."
Heading out the door, Don and Danny took all the information back to Mac. When they arrived Mac looked it all over, and sent it to a Judge. Not more then hour later they had Mr.Phillips back in custody.
"It was almost a year ago. He was my substitute music teacher. I remember when he walked into our classroom. All us girls thought he was handsom, smart, funny. You know, a thirteens year old crush."
Don continued to write.
"Anyways, he asked me to stay one day after school. Said he needed help cleaning the instruments. So a few of us stayed behind. As time past, most of my friends had to leave. So I was left alone with Mr.Phillips. I remember leaning over the sink, washing out the mouth pieces when he came up behind me."
Danny could see her tears begin to form. Letting him know that her assault was about to be told.
"He wrapped his hands around mine. I remember him leaning into my ear with his lips, as he said...This is how you need to wash the mouth piece. Nice and slow. See the way my fingers dance around it. I freaked, I told him to let go of me. But he wouldn't. He held me against the sink tighter, I could feel.....*Sob*....I could...."
"It's okay Wendy. Let's skip that part for now. We'll come back to it. How did you escape?"
"I seen a fork sitting on the sink. I guess it was left from his lunch. But I'm not sure. I picked it up and stabbed him in the chest. I could remember seeing the blood come through his shirt."
"So he should have a scare?"
"I guess. I don't know."
Don knew this was going to help for sure. For she had marked him.
"Tell me the rest please."
"He grabbed the fork from me as I tried to run past him. I remember him tossing me to the ground. I guess I must have banged my head, cause the next time I woke I was in the Hospital."
"So you can't be sure he raped you?"
"Yes I can. I live with the proof everyday."
Don was confused, as was Danny.
"What do you mean?"
Standing up she began to cry. Slowly undoing her pants she pulled them down.
"Umm..you don't have to do that. How about we get a female office to see?"
"NO!!! I want to show you, please."
Don and Danny weren't sure what they were about to see. As she pulled the waist band just a little below her hips, they seen scars. At least six, showing he had raked her skin with the fork.
"Christ....I'm sorry. If it's okay with your mom, and you can we have a female officer take some pictures?"
"What ever will help"...she quivered out.
"Wendy, can you tell me if the Hospital did a report, or an internal?"
"I can answer that. No. When she woke up in the Hospital none of us knew what had happened. All the Hospital knew was what Mr.Phillips told them. That she had fallen and banged her head. When she came to. She made me swear not to tell. She was to ashamed. She had blood and seman on her panties. I remember she kept yelling at me to throw them away. So I put them in my pocket. Then she took a shower."
"What about her fork marks? She must have been bleeding from the wounds."
"She never told them. She kept them hidden till we got home. I then told her we had to inform the Police. As we waited, she paniced. Changed her mind."
When the mother left the room, the female Officer showed up. Leading the girl into the other room, she took a series of pictures. With everything complete, Don informed her that they would contact her once they had everything filed and set to go.
"I have one more question Wendy?"
"What is it?"
"I need to know. I need you to promise that you won't back out. Promise me Wendy."
"I promise. I'm sorry for that little girl. Please tell her."
"I will. You take care. We'll be in contact soon."
Heading out the door, Don and Danny took all the information back to Mac. When they arrived Mac looked it all over, and sent it to a Judge. Not more then hour later they had Mr.Phillips back in custody.
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
yeah good
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
this is getting interesting
Asprine
Pathologist
Wendy... You're a brave girl~! :thumbsup::thumbsup: *Sobs* She makes me so proud of her.. Her condition because of the Coward Phillips. Rape her still use fork.. Later I use Fork to poke his ****. *Kidding* I'll leave that to Mac and Eric to solve the case. :lol: *Jumps around* He's in custody~ :devil::devil::devil: Hopefully the judge will find guilty in him.. This chapter is great, Linda. So touching.. Makes me want to read it again.. Thank you, Linda.
You're a brave girl~! :thumbsup::thumbsup: *Sobs* She makes me so proud of her.. Her condition because of the Coward Phillips. Rape her still use fork.. Later I use Fork to poke his ****. *Kidding* I'll leave that to Mac and Eric to solve the case. :lol: *Jumps around* He's in custody~ :devil::devil::devil: Hopefully the judge will find guilty in him.. This chapter is great, Linda. So touching.. Makes me want to read it again.. Thank you, Linda.
That poor girl. Mr Sleezy is back in custody. So relieved! Good chapter.
Good chapter.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Interrigation Room
"Look. Why am I back here again? I was released on bail."
"Lift up your shirt."
"What?? No."
"You have two choices. Either you lift it, or I lift it. I can tell you if I do it, it won't be fun."
"I want my Lawyer."
"Oh...I guess we forgot to tell you. You're Lawyer quit. He said he's no longer willing to take your case."
"What?? You're lying. I want to talk to him now."
Don tossed his phone over to Phillips.
"Call. Then when you're done. I want that shirt off."
Knowing Don was telling the truth, Phillips stood and unbuttoned his shirt.
"The undershirt too."
"This is insane. I want a Lawyer before I go any further."
"You already had your right to a Lawyer. Now. Don't make me ask again."
Lifting the shirt over his head, Danny and Don could see the four puncture holes.
"Messer. Get the camera. Do you want to tell me where you got those puncture holes?"
"I don't know. I fell I think. Yeah. Leaning over the counter their was a fork sticking out, and it jabbed me."
"It jabbed you??? Why don't we try that again. How did it happen?? Cause by the force of that scar, it looks like someone stabbed you."
"No. No. I remember falling over the counter."
"Bullshit. Let me show the difference."
Taking the fork they had, and a piece of molding clay Don showed him the difference.
"You see. If you lean into a fork, it's going to take alot of force to make wounds that deep. Now, watch me stab this piece of clay. Notice the difference? Your wounds match the stabbing motion exactly. So once again, where did you get punctures?"
"I don't know. I don't remember."
"You don't remember? You hear that Messer. He don't remember."
"Yeah. Yeah I heard that. Maybe we should remind him."
"Know what?? I think you're right. Does the name Wendy Detony ring a bell?"
"No....no, why??"
"No??? Well maybe these will help refresh your memory."
Tossing the pictures of Wendy's wounds on the table, Phillips turned away.
"Oh come on now. You can't turn away. We need you tell us if this is your handiwork."
Walking over Danny lifted his face, and forced him to look at the pictures.
"Now. Is that your work or not??"
"Yes...Yeeeeeeeeees...okay. I raped her. I cut her up."
"Just her?? Or are there more we should know about? Come on Phillips, you've already told us about Wendy. How many others??"
"Four, four others besides Shannon and Wendy."
"You're really a piece of work. The boys are going to love you in prison."
Looking over at the Officer, Don said...
"Get this piece of garbage out of here."
With Phillips confession, the Judge sentenced his to twenty five years. Five years for each girl he raped. As Mac, Don, and Danny sat in the Courtroom they knew he would only serve ten to twelve of those years at most. But they would be ready for his release. Ready to send him back for good. That is if the inmates didn't kill him first.
Mac phoned Eric with the news. While Don called Wendy to let her know that Phillips fully confessed about all five girls, and she wouldn't have to tell her story in Court.
"Look. Why am I back here again? I was released on bail."
"Lift up your shirt."
"What?? No."
"You have two choices. Either you lift it, or I lift it. I can tell you if I do it, it won't be fun."
"I want my Lawyer."
"Oh...I guess we forgot to tell you. You're Lawyer quit. He said he's no longer willing to take your case."
"What?? You're lying. I want to talk to him now."
Don tossed his phone over to Phillips.
"Call. Then when you're done. I want that shirt off."
Knowing Don was telling the truth, Phillips stood and unbuttoned his shirt.
"The undershirt too."
"This is insane. I want a Lawyer before I go any further."
"You already had your right to a Lawyer. Now. Don't make me ask again."
Lifting the shirt over his head, Danny and Don could see the four puncture holes.
"Messer. Get the camera. Do you want to tell me where you got those puncture holes?"
"I don't know. I fell I think. Yeah. Leaning over the counter their was a fork sticking out, and it jabbed me."
"It jabbed you??? Why don't we try that again. How did it happen?? Cause by the force of that scar, it looks like someone stabbed you."
"No. No. I remember falling over the counter."
"Bullshit. Let me show the difference."
Taking the fork they had, and a piece of molding clay Don showed him the difference.
"You see. If you lean into a fork, it's going to take alot of force to make wounds that deep. Now, watch me stab this piece of clay. Notice the difference? Your wounds match the stabbing motion exactly. So once again, where did you get punctures?"
"I don't know. I don't remember."
"You don't remember? You hear that Messer. He don't remember."
"Yeah. Yeah I heard that. Maybe we should remind him."
"Know what?? I think you're right. Does the name Wendy Detony ring a bell?"
"No....no, why??"
"No??? Well maybe these will help refresh your memory."
Tossing the pictures of Wendy's wounds on the table, Phillips turned away.
"Oh come on now. You can't turn away. We need you tell us if this is your handiwork."
Walking over Danny lifted his face, and forced him to look at the pictures.
"Now. Is that your work or not??"
"Yes...Yeeeeeeeeees...okay. I raped her. I cut her up."
"Just her?? Or are there more we should know about? Come on Phillips, you've already told us about Wendy. How many others??"
"Four, four others besides Shannon and Wendy."
"You're really a piece of work. The boys are going to love you in prison."
Looking over at the Officer, Don said...
"Get this piece of garbage out of here."
With Phillips confession, the Judge sentenced his to twenty five years. Five years for each girl he raped. As Mac, Don, and Danny sat in the Courtroom they knew he would only serve ten to twelve of those years at most. But they would be ready for his release. Ready to send him back for good. That is if the inmates didn't kill him first.
Mac phoned Eric with the news. While Don called Wendy to let her know that Phillips fully confessed about all five girls, and she wouldn't have to tell her story in Court.
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nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Well done They got a confession
They got a confession
That was great! The guys did a good job getting him to confess.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
yay Nice job.
Nice job.- Status