CSI:NY- Love, Loss and Life

O crap and i said cute :scream: , I need to slow down in doing 3 times at once. I'm not Houdine for god sake. :lol: Sorry Natty.
 
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I'm just a little bit sad! I wanted the little girl to be alright! Good update though Natty! Get the evil man!!!!

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"The thrill is in the chase. Never in the capture."
 
Ok here's another quick update :D
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**Chap46**- Messer Moments...

It was nearly 4 o’clock, about six hours after they had found the body of Rebecca Donald. They had found epithelials under the victim’s fingernails and had matched them to Officer Jackson. Before finding the body everyone in the lab already believed that he was their guy and all they needed was the proof- and now they had it. Flack however still didn’t want to believe that one of his own men could do such a thing but even he couldn’t deny the science. Sid had confirmed everyone’s fear of sexual assault of some kind on the girl along with finding traces of Tobacco and dirt on her wrists and feet.

Danny was now sitting in his office after spending most of the afternoon processing the victim’s clothes and was now falling into the trap of imaging what the parents were doing now. He couldn’t think of what it would be like if he lost his child and although he tried to rid of it, he kept the thought of ‘what if this happened to his little girl’ in the back of his mind.

‘Stop it Messer, you idiot,’ Danny said to himself loudly, ‘You’re gonna catch this guy!’

‘Danny?’ Danny looked up as he heard the faint voice at the door.

‘Hey sweetie,’ Lindsay walked over and jumped on to Danny’s knee, ‘Did you have fun today?’

Lindsay nodded and then asked, ‘Why are you angry daddy?’

Danny smiled at his daughter and hugged her tightly, ‘because I missed you Montana. I’ve spent all day trying to get bad guys and I haven’t been able to see you.’

Lindsay smiled and turned around onto her knees and hugged Danny around the neck, ‘Well I is here now so you can be happy again! Kate got me from school remember?’ Lindsay grinned and sat back down and cuddled once again into Danny.

‘Lindsay you do know that there are nasty people outside who could hurt you if you right?’

Lindsay nodded, ‘Yes Daddy I remember what you’ve said before. Some people to bad things and can take you away from your Daddy’s. So if I go out I have to hold your hand,’ Danny smiled.

‘Good girl Montana,’ Danny said as he opened his draw where he some chocolate which he got out and put out on his desk as Lindsay’s eyes grew wide, ‘Ok, I’ve had this yummy bar of chocolate sitting here all day and I think I need some help eating it, do you know anyone that might want to help?’

Lindsay smiled, ‘Me! Me! I like chocolate daddy!’
 
I've been following your story, all the way through NattySuess. I know it's not very often I comment. But you are doing a great job with it. Montana is a little doll, who seems to have her father and Uncles wrapped around her.

So keep up the good work, and update soon.:)
 
:lol: Will I ever live that name down :lol: Glad you like it Linda- It means a lot ;) And and I should update in the next few hours ;)
 
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Sorry to double post but...

**Chap47**-Seeing is believing...

Danny and Lindsay got out of the SUV and headed over to the school. They were running a little late because of the mid town traffic and the bell went as they walked through the gates. Danny bent down gave Lindsay a kiss, ‘Go on Montana, you don’t wanna be late do ‘ya?’

‘But Daddy I gotta wait for Lizzie!’

‘Lizzie will be inside already sweetie, the bell just went,’ Lindsay nodded and kissed Danny on the cheek.

‘Bye Daddy,’ Lindsay shouted over her shoulder as she jogged to the doors.

As he got back to his SUV his phone rang,

‘Messer,’

‘Danny, we got another one!’ Danny didn’t need to ask what Mac meant by ‘another one’ he just knew.

‘Where?’ Danny said urgently as he jumped in the driver’s side and started the engine.

‘39 west 22nd Street, I’ll meet you there!’ With out another word Danny put down the phone and sped off.


When he arrived he got out and grabbed his kit as Flack walked up to him, ‘Mac and Stella are already up there and have begun to process the apartment. We have no evidence to say that it’s Jackson this time but Mac’s sure it will be! This time he made a mistake and the father heard him moving around. When the father reached the bedroom he saw a man carrying his daughter down the fire escape however when he tried to go after him the man shot at him,’ By now Flack and Danny had reached the intended floor, ‘the father has managed to give us a brief description and Jackson fits the image.’

When they got closer to the apartment Danny saw the parents along with two officers. The man’s back was facing him as he held his wife close to his chest as she cried. Danny couldn’t bear to look at their faces so walked straight into the apartment until he heard, ‘Danny?’

They both turned around confused who had just called him by his first name- no officer would have at a crime scene. Danny had only spoken to this man once before but there was no doubting who it was. Flack looked at his best friend confused as he and Matt Philips stared at each other as Danny tried to take in who the little girl must be.
 
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nattybatty55 said:
Lindsay,

Since you arrived and I got to know you Linds you’ve been the bestest friend I could have hoped for. You’ve helped me through some rough spots and I’ve helped you through yours. It’s still strange that you’re not here but I do try and be strong for Danny and your wonderful daughter. She’s beautiful Lindsay but even though I’ll try I don’t think that Danny will need any help- he’s the best father in the world. I can still remember your first day I knew you’d do great and you didn’t prove me wrong! I’m going to miss you Linds but I hope you are in better place and I’ll take care of Danny for you.

Stella



Linds,

Ok Linds, you know I’m not good with saying things- remember my best mans speech! When Danny said he had this idea about us writing a message to you the only problem I had was I wasn’t sure what to write. But one thing I do know is that you are an amazing woman Linds and you must be one special personto have changed Danny the way you did. I which we could have said goodbye properly but we couldn’t so I’m saying it now. Goodbye Linds, I’ll miss you and I’ll try and keep Messer in one piece for you.

Flack



Lindsay,

Lindsay from what you told me you were never that good at goodbyes. And neither am I. I know that the others will probably write a lot but it breaks my heart having to write this knowing I will never get to talk to you again because I will miss you. Goodbye Lindsay Monroe

Adam



Lindsay,

I don’t feel like I can say goodbye to you Linds. I can remember when you first started and we were both getting used to being part of the NY team. You were clumsy and nervous but since then you have completely changed. You and Stella had the hard job of keeping us boys in line and holding the team together. You alone did this with your happiness and made us more of a family. So I thank you for that Linds and I’ll miss you.

Sheldon



Lindsay,

For not the first time in my life Linds the past few weeks has had me completely lost. I would sit there and watch my team fall apart because you were gone and unable to pull them back together. I never thought that Danny would be the one to recover first but he did and the only real reason for this was your daughter. She’s beautiful and she’s going to be the mirror image of her mummy when she grows up. I promise you Linds that I will not let anything happen to her even if my life depends on it. I have lost too much already. I never thought another friend of mine would be taken from me but I was wrong. You were more like a daughter to me Linds and I’ll miss you.

Mac


Montana,

I hope I haven’t disappointed you Montana since you had to leave. I just wish we could have said goodbye properly. I know I do not need to write much because I know that you know how I feel about you. You will never be replaced in my heart Montana, there is only room in there for you and our daughter. I will take care of Linds and make sure that she knows what a special person you were. I love you, I always will, I miss you and I always will.

Danny



They all stood back from the grave. Tears escaped from everybody, nobody was ashamed even Flack because they knew that this was one time they were allowed. They turned around and started to head back to the gates. Stella holding on to Mac as she let her tears flow.
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Reading the part with the letters really made me cry, and i still am, are you a writer or something? The way you write really make me believe that Lindsay is gone, and when i read those letters over and over i really feel the pain the team is feeling, it is just so beautifull! Im looking forward to read the rest, i've just gotten to this part and i felt i had to reply now!
 
I love this story, haven't finished it yet, but you inspired me to write a Stella-Flack story, i just love the idea! I'm kinda Smacked person, but i LOOOVE the thought of Della and "Fack" :D
 
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