CSI:Miami Road Trip: Seven Years of Bad Luck & Counting

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Awwwww! Poor Speedy *sniff* The only baby he's got left, and she's leaving him...well I have to say, at least she didnt die..aww. But, I mean, she does kinda have a point...she only came back when she was about 14...but he's such a cute daddy! How could anyone leave him? *huggles Speed*

Aww, that last line was so cute! And yet, so sad...*sniff* Poor guy, all his kids leaving him one way or another...

anyway, please update soon
 
:)

Didn't Get To Say Goodbye

Trace lab, 10 pm

Horatio: *walks in* Hey, you're still here?

Speed: *staring at table*

Horatio: Well you look fairly upset. Care to share?

Speed: ...Am I not supposed to be happy?

Horatio: I don't understand what you mean.

Speed: ...I try to do everything right. And yeah, I make mistakes, and I'm not perfect...Even if I do my best to make things right, the people I love ditch me and leave me sitting in a stupid lab, all by my *throws gloves on table* Stupid pathetic self.

Horatio: *shifts positions*

Speed: I had no idea how to talk to Lori. What the hell kind of father can't even talk to his own child?

Horatio: Speed, you did everything you could.

Speed: ...I couldn't even keep my wife from leaving me. And now Lori's gone too....I mean, if my dad were still alive, I'd ask him what to do. He was a terrible guy, but he always knew what to do....What do I do?

Horatio: Well Speed, if you really want my advice, here it is.

Speed: *looks at Horatio*

Horatio: Go home, and get some sleep.

Speed: ...That's it.

Horatio: That's it.

Speed: It's not that simple.

Horatio: No but you know what, nothing ever is. We have to take life in stride and stop running marathons in our head over what could have happened had things played out differently.

Speed: Sometimes it seems easier to point a gun to my head and say I had a good run.

Horatio: The easy way out isn't always easy.

Speed: Yeah.

Horatio: So, I want you to leave and don't come back until tomorrow. Get some rest.

Speed: Yeah. *stands*

Horatio: Good job son.

Speed: *looks at Horatio*

Horatio: *smirks*

Speed: *nods*

Horatio: *walks away*

Speed: *leaves*

TBC..............
 
awwww *raises to give standing ovation* man I LOVED that screen....yeah H being a dad figure to Speedle...I love it-the thing I love about your writing-you keep so true to characters can always see it taking place in my minds eye. Update soon Geni!!!
 
Anni: You want to terminate the pregnancy.

Lori: It was a mistake.
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Oh, poor Lori, that's gotta be hard for her. And not wanting Speed to hate her, as if he ever would. She's had a pretty rough life.
Missy: It better not take us into a dingey part of town because I'm too pretty to be beaten up and mugged.

JC: *sigh* Dang, my whole plan is screwed.

Missy: What?
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OH! So JC want's to get me mugged? That's just great...*goes looking for real JC* on second thought, we're not going anywhere...again. Ah well, we'll hang out in the lab again!
Awww, those last two update were so sad. Lori is leaving, Speed's depressed, Katie's in Paris, Horatio's giving advice...Very sad, but very good, Geni.
 
Awww. Poor Timmy. *huggles* He's all alone...
Great work Geni :D You made me go awww a bunch of times.
Can't wait for more.
 
Awww LORI IS PREGNANT OH GOOD LORD! lol. But awww she's a big girl and is more then capable of making her own decisions. I just hope nothing happens to her like it did to me. *shivers* Aww poor Speedy, that guy has more problems then an elephant weighs..ok seriously don't know where THAT came from, but still. And he can't even THINK of putting that gun to his head, thats not allowed. lol. But holy crappers, I saw the whole plane crash thinger and I was like ".....uh....NOOO!" lol. BUt then I saw that Lori was ok, so its all good. Anyways, i'm going to stop not making sense. Update soon please.
 
Yay! Reviews! :lol:

Sorry, I get excited. :) Thanks for reading the chapters everyone. It's always a pleasure to read what y'all think about the story. :)

Don't Look Back

Miami Beach, 11pm, 5 days later

Carly: *crawls onto beach* Help...Help! *crawling* HELP! SOMEONE HELP ME! *looks around* Help!

Cars drive by on road ahead. Headlights are seen swishing by

Carly: *crawls up onto sidewalk* Help! Someone help!

Cars continue to drive by

Carly: *crawls near road* HELP! *waving hands*

Cop car drives by

Carly: HELP! PLEASE STOP! PLEASE!

Cop car stops by the side of the road, and backs up. A patrolman walks out of car

Carly: *stands, runs over into cops arms*

Cop: Whoa, ma'am, are you okay? What's the problem?

Carly: I was kidnapped and I was in a boat on the ocean and I swam to the beach.

Cop: Okay slow down ma'am. I'm going to get you some help. Come sit in the car for me, alright?

Carly: *sits in car*

Cop: *grabs radio* Central, I've got a female here who needs medical attention and Victim's Services.

Radio: Copy that, sending an ambulance and Victim's Services to your location.

Cop: *looks at Carly* ...You said you came from a boat?

Carly: Yeah. I was drugged and kept there.

Cop: Ma'am is that a bullet wound in your side?

Carly: *looks down* ...I don't remember getting shot.

Cop: *grabs radio* Central, I need the Crime Scene Unit as well.

Radio: Copy that, sending CSUs out to your location.

Cop: We're going to get you checked out okay?

Carly: *holding side* I don't remember getting shot.

Cop: Do you remember anything about the people who took you?

Carly: There were three of them. And they were going to meet a man named Domingo to find a guy named Jack Bradford.

Cop: *writing notes* That's a good start. Ma'am, can I get you to tell me your name please.

Carly: Uh...Um...Carly.

Cop: And your last name?

Carly: Speedle.

Cop: *looks at Carly*

Carly: ...

Cop: You're a cop's wife.

Carly: *nods*

Cop: Okay, step out of the back seat please and let's get you seated in the front. *grabs Carly's hand*

Carly: *stands*

Cop: You okay?

Carly: *nods* Yeah.

Cop: *opens trunk, grabs blanket* Here go you ma'am. *wraps Carly*

Carly: Thanks.

Cop: *sits Carly in front seat* Comfortable?

Carly: *nods*

Cop: *kneels* Are you injured anywhere else?

Carly: I don't think so.

Cop: Okay. Paramedics are going to check you out. Would you like me to call your husband?

Carly: *nods*

Cop: Alright, what's his name?

Carly: Josh.

Cop: Okay I'll give him a call. You sit tight.

Carly: Yeah.

Ambulances show up 10 minutes later, as well as 15 police cars and a couple of fire trucks. Police officers scower the area, and CSUs snap photographs down on the beach.

Road

Josh: *runs over*

Cop: *turns around*

Josh: Where is she? Is she okay?

Cop: She's sitting with the paramedics.

Josh: Is she okay?

Cop: She has what looks like a gunshot wound.

Josh: *runs over to ambulance*

Ambulance

Carly: *looks over* Josh!

Josh: *runs over, hugs Carly*

Carly: *hugs Josh, starts to cry*

Josh: Hey, it's okay. You're okay.

Carly: *hugs tighter*

Beach

Delko: *snaps photos*

Speed: *walks over*

Delko: You're not on this case, man.

Speed: *looks around*

Delko: H said you weren't on the case.

Speed: *points to ground* What's that?

Delko: *looks down* ...A piece of metal. It's the beach, we're bound to find trash.

Speed: Collect it.

Delko: *laughs* Who died and made you H?

Speed: Eric, pick it up.

Delko: What's your problem?

Speed: *lifts badge* Do it.

Delko: *smiles* Okay we're both cops, you don't have to prove you have a badge.

Speed: Mine's prettier.

Delko: *looks at badge* ...*lifts brow*

Speed: Pick it up.

Delko: ...*puts down camera, opens kit*

Speed: *looks around*

Delko: Where's H?

Speed: He was transfered for the remainder of the case and he didn't say where.

Delko: Something came up?

Speed: That's classified..

Delko: High profile huh.

Speed: That's classified.

Delko: Gee sorry.

Cop: *runs over* Lieutenant.

Speed: *turns around*

Cop: *hands over papers* Statment from the victim.

Speed: You were first on the scene?

Cop: She practically ran into my arms.

Speed: She say anything about Bradford?

Cop: Just that to find him they were tracking down a guy named Domingo.

Speed: Okay.

Cop: You want to talk to her?

Speed: ...Did I say I wanted to talk to her?

Cop: No sir, b-

Speed: I'll talk to her when I talk to her. I don't need your permission, officer.

Cop: Sorry sir.

Speed: Go check the database and see if anyone by the name of 'Domingo' pops up.

Cop: Yes sir. *runs off*

Delko: *smirking*

Speed: What.

Delko: You're mean.

Speed: Yeah next time I'll try and cuddle the officers and whisper sweet nothings in their ears.

Delko: *laughs* I'm just saying.

Speed: *frowns*

Delko: So, Lieutenant, what now?

Speed: How about a little diving.

Delko: I'm up for it. Where do you want me?

Speed: The divers are setting up grids from where the victim exited the water. I want you in there with them.

Delko: Looking for...

Speed: Looking for evidence.

Delko: *salutes* No problem.

Speed: Good suit up, you'll be working overtime.

Delko: And are you paying into that overtime?

Speed: Depends what you find.

Delko: *frowns*

Speed: Keep up the good work. *walks away*

Delko: *shakes head*

TBC......................
 
Okay.....LT? Where is Horatio? What happened to Horatio? And WHY is Tim LT now? So many questions! I'm glad Carly is okay, and I'm really glad she got out herself, she's a strong girl. I don't like Speedle's new character, the bad Speedle lol. He seems very..........deadpan. Delko seems to be his little slave....lol

Great update, hope to see some more soon hun!
 
Yay! I'm safe...but seriously, could Speed be any more cold...and I don't think it's just because of Lori, because he was like that waaay before Lori aswell. Hmm, seriosuly man, show some emotion...

And yeah...where is Horatio?! Horatio never goes anywhere unless he's in his Hummerhome. Well, maybe he took that with him wherever he went :p

And haha, I think it's funny that the cop guys only got me a blanket and treated me nicer when he found out I was a cops wife :lol: Ah, men... :p

anyways, please update soon
 
:lol: Deadpan.

I Walk These Streets

Miami Lab, next morning

Speed: *walks over to Josh* Hey.

Josh: Hey man.

Speed: You and I need a word.

Josh: ...We do?

Speed: I hate to sound all...IAB on you, but better I get to you before they do. Where were you yesterday around 9pm?

Josh: ...I was at home.

Speed: That's interesting because I found Cait on the front steps of your house, alone at 10.

Josh: ...

Speed: Where were you.

Josh: ...I was with Jess.

Speed: Doing what?

Josh: I love my wife, b-

Speed: *laughs* Save it.

Josh: *looks down at ground*

Speed: Jess tells me she was at the lab.

Josh: You know, you should probably let the real detectives handle this.

Speed: *frowns* Okay let's put it this way. You start telling the truth or I start firing your ass.

Josh: You're my brother.

Speed: No. I'm your boss. So what were you and Jess doing?

Josh: Why, are you jelous?

Speed: Josh, you have never lied in your life so there is something either you're embarassed about, or there's something else going on. Which is it?

Josh: Are you going to drop the whole cop thing?

Speed: No.

Josh: Then fire me. *leaves*

Speed: *glares*

Interrogation room, one hour later

Speed: *sits down*

Calleigh: *walks in*

Carly: *sitting in chair*

Calleigh: How are you feeling?

Carly: I-

Speed: How'd you get off the boat.

Carly: *looks at Speed*

Calleigh: ...

Carly: ...I jumped.

Calleigh: You did a good thing Carly. You're very stron-

Speed: Someone shot you. Who was it?

Carly: ...Uh...I don't even remember getting shot.

Calleigh: It's okay. We understand that what you went through, and it's not uncommon for victims to forget events that ha-

Speed: How many people were there?

Calleigh: *looks at Speed*

Carly: ...I don't know.

Speed: Did you turn around, or were you just running around with a blind fold?

Carly: *frowns*

Calleigh: *frowns*

Speed: Come on, either you saw something or you didn't.

Carly: It was dark.

Speed: Why'd you run?

Carly: I saw the edge of the deck.

Speed: You saw the edge of the deck but it was too dark to see anything.

Carly: What are you, IAB?

Speed: I'm just trying to get a straight answer.

Carly: Well I can't give you a straight answer if you're interrogating me like I'm a suspect.

Speed: You were on the boat for almost two weeks and you have no information.

Carly: I was drugged.

Speed: For two weeks?

Carly: Yeah.

Calleigh: What did the doctor's report say?

Carly: ...

Calleigh: It's okay.

Carly: ...The ricochet to my abdomen killed the baby.

Calleigh: ...I'm sorry. It was a terrible thing that happened, and we're going to do everything in our power to find out who d-

Speed: Ricochet. So you weren't shot directly.

Carly: ...I don't know.

Speed: Well it had to be something. Damnit you've been gone two weeks and you don't know anything!

Carly: I'm sorry! What do you want me to say! It's not like I was trying to be a CSI and take down the bad guy! I was trying to escape!

Speed: If you had tried it wouldn't have taken two weeks!

Calleigh: *stands* That's enough. Let's go.

Speed: Fine, not like this bitch is going to say anything useful.

Carly: *looks at Speed*

Calleigh: *glaring* Out.

Speed: *leaves*

Calleigh: *leaves*

Hall

Calleigh: What is your problem?

Speed: I don't need this.

Calleigh: Just because you have a different badge doesn't mean you can be rude to the victims.

Speed: It has nothing to do with being promoted. She's witholding information.

Calleigh: How do you know? You were running roughshot over her statement.

Speed: You know what, forget it.

Calleigh: *grabs Speed's arm* No, you can't treat people like that. And I don't know what you problem is, but it has to stop right now.

Speed: *frowning*

Calleigh: *staring at Speed*

Speed: Let go of my arm.

Calleigh: *lets go*

Speed: Don't forget who's in charge.

Calleigh: Horatio will be back.

Speed: Yeah and until then you're going to do what I say.

Calleigh: *nods*

Speed: Now, the ricochet. That's abnormal.

Calleigh: Yes.

Speed: Why is it abnormal?

Calleigh: Because the gun was probably fired into the water. She wouldn't have heard it because of the rutter from the boat. Bullets break water and get slowed down because water is more dense than air. That's how she got the ricochet and that's why she didn't bleed to death.

Speed: Good. What kind of gun was it?

Calleigh: .38 caliber.

Cellphone rings

Speed: *opens phone* Yeah it's Speed.

Delko: We found the boat.

Speed: Where?

Delko: A canal.

Speed: Anyone on board?

Delko: You'd better get down here.

Speed: *closes phone* Grab your kit.

Calleigh: Why?

Speed: Because I said so. Phone Eric and ask him where to meet him. *walks away*

Calleigh: *frowns*

Hall

Anni: Tim!

Speed: *walks over* Yeah, look I'm real busy right now.

Anni: I brought Cait over. She wanted to thank you for letting her into the house last night.

Speed: *nods*

Cait: *swaying back and forth* Thankie.

Speed: You're welcome.

Anni: Are you okay? You look a little stressed.

Speed: I'm fine.

Anni: ...You didn't even eat the breakfast I made for you this morning.

Speed: We're not dating, I don't have to eat your food. I'm your roommate because you were stupid enough to let me stay. And by the way, get whatever the hell couch you want.

Anni: ...I'm sorry, I didn't know I was coming on a little strong.

Speed: Well no one really knows they're anything nowadays do they?

Anni: What do you mean?

Speed: Nothing.

Anni: Well, anyway, I washed your car for you and t-

Speed: Stop! Just stop doing things for me! WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM! I DON'T EVEN LIKE YOU!

Anni: *stares at Speed*

Cait: *starts to cry*

Anni: *picks up Cait* You know what, screw you Tim. *leaves*

Speed: *rubs face*

TBC................
 
Ok...Speed is an ass. Seriously...he can't even do his job anymore, and he's taking everything out on everyone. Especially me. And Anni :rolleyes: Ok, I understand his Katie and Lori left him, but if he can't even muster up one once of sympathy for me, or Josh. *narrows eyes* and poor Anni. All Anni is trying to do is help him, and he's still being a jerk.

And well, at least some people in the lab care (Josh, Jess and Calleigh) so yay for you guys! And GASPAGE! The baby died?! Awww no. Thats so sad. *sniff* But you said...*narrows eyes* Oh well...

And what did Joshie and Jess do? Well, he is a Speedle...but he's the good Speedle! the good one I say!

please update soon
 
Gonna have to agree with Carly on this one. Speed's being an ass. What craw-- um, I mean, what's his problem? Geez. And the baby died? Oh, poor Carly.
I need to know what happens! Geni!
Update soon please :D
 
Oh Geni....please update soon....I can't believe speed is being sooooooo harsh-esp to the guys in the lab, can I scream 'GET OVER IT' at him??H needs to have some words with him, or take so action-show him the back of his had?? pleassssssssssseeeeee update soon!:)
 
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