CSI:Miami Road Trip: Seven Years of Bad Luck & Counting

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AWWWWW ANNI IS SUPERMOM! Well, not really because she's not exactly a mom, but she would be a really good mom if she ever had kids. I loved Tim's reaction "Where is Anni and what have you done with the body" lol Gotta love it. AWW man I wanna know what happened with Carly! Is she okay? Is she.....not okay? lol Either way, update soon!
 
Hahaha I like speeds reaction to all of what anni has done ... sounds like she is trying to .... impress him for some reason lol. Its nice of her though to make him feel at ease after everything that happened to him and all. But wouldn't of cait reacted to what anni said when she was explaing everything and said ur sister in law was kidnapped .. wouldn't that of sent a red flag off in little caits mind? ahwell geni ur the genious and i can't wait for more!
 
Cait: Why would they make a big word for little things?

Speed: I don't know.

Cait: You're a police man. You know everything.
Good question! This is one of those 'I so totally want one!' moments, unfortunately I probably need a guy first. *glares at Jess*
Speed: Whoa, slow down. First of all, everything effed up happens in Pensacola. Why were you even there?
yes, where the actors are air heads with characters that sound a lot like the CSI miami ones! :D
Speed: Whoa, slow down. First of all, everything effed up happens in Pensacola. Why were you even there?
whoa! What's with Speed being like that to Josh? Siblings, God!
Wow, gee, thanks Horatio...I feel so special. No-one in the lab cares about me...except Josh...and Jess.
I care about you Carly! and if I had any say in the lab I would be there helping find you!
Cait: I want cheese.
I can help you with that! Oh, she's adorable!
Anni: *smiles* I'm...Yeah I'm not good enough for anyone.
after all you did, you're TOO good for most guys! Don't degrade yourself girl!
Great updates Geni!
 
Another Place Where The Faces Are So Cold

Anni's apartment, 12 am

Speed: *asleep*

Cellphone rings

Speed: *rolls over*

Cellphone ringing

Speed: *frowns*

Cellphone ringing

Anni: *walks in* PHONE.

Speed: *sits up* I know.

Anni: Why aren't you answering it?

Speed: Because I'm half asleep.

Anni: Answer it. These walls are paper thin. Which is another reason why you shouldn't bring girls over when I'm here.

Speed: *opens phone* What....

Anni: *crosses arms*

Speed: ....You sure?

Anni: *taps foot* Some people need sleep.

Speed: ....*gets out of bed, grabs shirt*

Anni: Where are you going?

Speed: *walks into living room*

Anni: What are you doing?

Speed: I'll talk to you later. *closes phone*

Anni: What's going on?

Speed: Can you watch Cait for a bit? I'm going to the hospital.

Anni: Why? What's wrong?

Speed: Lori.

Anni: ....What happened?

Speed: Uh, something about...Th-the plane...Uh, they lost a fuel tank or...*looks around* Where's my keys?

Anni: Right here. *hands over keys*

Speed: *fiddling with keys* And they probably have her stabilized right now, b-but I don't k-

Anni: I'll drive you, Tim.

Speed: What about Cait?

Anni: We'll take her too.

Speed: No, she's already asleep. Don't wake her.

Anni: We can't leave her here Tim. She's three. Are you okay?

Speed: No.

Anni: Okay, I'll get Cait, and I'll drive you over there.

Speed: Okay.

Hospital

Doctor: *walks over*

Speed: What happened?

Doctor: Well from what I gather about the accident, the plane lost an engine tank due to stress in the aircraft. It buckled and the plane blew. They were finding people all over the place.

Anni: What about the girl.

Doctor: Two broken ribs, burns on her hands, and some blood loss. However we checked the rest of her out, and her baby is fine.

Speed: *lifts brows* Her what?

Anni: *wide-eyed*

Doctor: ...You didn't know she was pregnant?

Speed: *staring at doctor*

Anni: ...

Doctor: ...Awkward. You can see her if you like but she's been sedated. *walks away*

Anni: ...Tim?

Speed: ...Oh Jesus.

Anni: Are you okay?

Speed: ...*staring blankly*

Anni: Do you need to sit?

Speed: ...No. I'm fine.

Anni: You want to go see her?

Speed: ...I see spots. Big red spots. *blinks*

Anni: Uh, maybe you should sit down.

Speed: No, I'm fine. I'm calm, cool, and collected.

Anni: You know, she went over to Josh and Carly's place the other day to grab a going away present from them. They left it there for her to pick up.

Speed: ....

Anni: Maybe Carly's not the one who used that t-

Speed: Shut up. Just...Stop talking.

Anni: Sorry.

Speed: ....Okay I need to sit.

TBC............
 
0_0 WHAT?!?!?

Okay, first of all WHOA TWIST MUCH?!?!?! Secondly she's 19 years old and SHE GETS ONE?!?!?!! I'm what, 27 and I still don't have one! raaaaahhhhh! lol. Poor Speed, hard way to find out that your daughter is pregnant huh? Who's the father Geni? WHO WHO HOW HOW WHOOOOOO ARE YOU?!? WHO WHO WHO WHO?!?! lol

UPDATE SOON! lol
 
OMG okay *is hoping geni's fingers are on fire* oh wow ... oh god ummm really ... just wow ... lost...for...words... i mean oh gosh Lori is ... is .... is ... pregnant .... and with whoms baby?
Geni you never cease to amaze me with ur wonderful edge of seat updates!! lol
 
Oh my god! Geni, how could you just leave it there??? Oh, poor Lori! And wait... was Katie on the same plane?
Geni... more more more! I mean... pretty please?
 
Doctor: Two broken ribs, burns on her hands, and some blood loss. However we checked the rest of her out, and her baby is fine.
Hold on WHAT? Lori's pregnate? OH MY GOD when did that happen?
Speed: ...I see spots. Big red spots. *blinks*
that's never a good thing. OH MY GOD THERE WILL BE TWO NEW RT BABIES? oh, it doesn't seem that long ago that Lori was our RT baby, now she's having her own? Whoa!
 
Lol and Ive just been reading a bit of RT5, where Lori is a cute little baby!! And now Grandad Speed!!! AND WHAT HAPPENED TO KATIE!!!!!
Update soon please!
 
Geni *removes hat* I take my hat to you....such superb fan fic....makes others writing efforts put to same...looking forward to the next update :D such a fab writer Geni
 
^^Ah come on now, there are a lot of talented writers on this board. There are some who surpass my fic wholeheartedly. ;)

Unexpected

Hospital room, next morning

Speed: *walks in*

Lori: *looks at Speed*

Speed: I see you're doing alright.

Lori: ...What did the doctor tell you?

Speed: Uh, that you're okay.

Lori: Any specifics?

Speed: No.

Lori: So why did you wait so long to see me?

Speed: We had to take Cait home, and make sure she got to sleep. You know, because she needs to have a responsible adult take care of her.

Lori: *nods*

Speed: So I hear the plane went down.

Lori: Yeah. Something about stress in the bulkheads. Must have been faulty.

Speed: Was your mother on the plane?

Lori: *shakes head* She took an earlier flight.

Speed: *sits down*

Lori: ...

Speed: Is there anything you want to tell me?

Lori: About what?

Speed: Well you didn't even call to say goodbye.

Lori: I guess I just needed to get out of there.

Speed: ...So you just decided to leave. Didn't you have friends at school, or...A boyfriend?

Lori: Boyfriend?

Speed: Yeah. That Logan guy.

Lori: *frowns*

Speed: You're not friends with him?

Lori: I haven't spoken to him for a while.

Speed: Why?

Lori: I don't know, I haven't really had the chance.

Speed: Have you spoken to your other friends?

Lori: No.

Speed: So you've been avoiding everyone.

Lori: I guess I just haven't had a lot of time to talk to anyone.

Speed: Where have you been?

Lori: Why are you interrogating me?

Speed: I'm not. They're just some questions.

Lori: Look, I don't really want to talk to you right now.

Speed: Why.

Lori: I don't need to give a reason.

Speed: Why are you getting so defensive?

Lori: Get out.

Speed: Lor-

Lori: GET OUT!

Speed: ...Lori, if you need to ever tell me anything, you know I'll listen.

Lori: *throws bedpan at Speed* GET OUT OF MY ROOM! GET OUT!

Speed: ...Alright. *stands, leaves*

Lori: *crosses arms*

Hall

Anni: What was that about?

Speed: I don't know.

Anni: Is she okay? What did you ask?

Speed: Nothing. She obviously doesn't want to see me.

Anni: Did you confront her about the baby thing?

Speed: No, I didn't.

Anni: Let me go talk to her.

Speed: *sigh* Well I have to get back to work anyway, so go ahead. I'll see you later.

Anni: Okay.

Speed: *leaves*

Hospital room

Anni: *smiles* Hey.

Lori: *frowning*

Anni: Your dad just left, he had to go back to work. I thought I'd see how you're doing.

Lori: I'm fine.

Anni: I'm sure you are. *sits* I spoke to the doctor.

Lori: *shakes head*

Anni: I know about the baby.

Lori: *wipes eyes* D-does my dad know?

Anni: ...Yeah, he does.

Lori: Oh great, I'm dead.

Anni: No, honey you're not. He was just trying to make sure you're okay.

Lori: Why didn't he just say he knew?

Anni: He wants you to be open with him.

Lori: About that? I don't think so. He doesn't need to know every detail about my life. It's why I wanted to move with mom to Paris. She understands.

Anni: Understands what?

Lori: ...What I want to do.

Anni: ...And what exactly do you want to do?

Lori: *looks away*

Anni: You want to terminate the pregnancy.

Lori: It was a mistake.

Anni: Who's the father?

Lori: No one important.

Anni: Does Katie support this?

Lori: She supports me, is that good enough?

Anni: Yeah.

Lori: I suppose you think I'm being irrational and murderous.

Anni: No. No, I think you made a decision and you're sticking to it.

Lori: *nods*

Anni: Why won't you tell your father?

Lori: Mom told me what happened to her when she told him, and...I...I don't want him to hate me.

Anni: *sigh* He doesn't hate you, and he never will.

Lori: How do you know?

Anni: He's not the same man he was back then.

Lori: ...I'm scared to tell him.

Anni: Would you like me to tell him?

Lori: *nods*

Anni: Okay. I'll call you when I'm finished. *stands*

Lori: Anni.

Anni: Yeah?

Lori: Thanks.

Anni: No problem. *leaves*

Lounge

Missy: ...Where is everyone?

JC: Probably on some cool trip. Man we're always left out. This sucks.

Missy: Well maybe they forgot us.

JC: That's even worse.

Missy: I'm sure they're all around here somewhere.

JC: I haven't seen anyone. And no one tells us anything. What if they died in some huge explosion or something? We'll be stuck here for eternity.

Missy: Unless we go outside.

JC: I say we have a road trip of our own. Just you and me.

Missy: But I get carsick.

JC: You never did in the Hummerhome.

Missy: It's not a car.

JC: ...

Missy: ...

JC: Come on, we're leaving.

Missy: Where?

JC: I don't know. Wherever the road takes us.

Missy: It better not take us into a dingey part of town because I'm too pretty to be beaten up and mugged.

JC: *sigh* Dang, my whole plan is screwed.

Missy: What?

JC: Nothing, come on.

Trace Lab, two hours later

Anni: Hey Tim.

Speed: Hey.

Anni: Have the feds got any leads on Bradford?

Speed: None. And Carly's still in the wind.

Anni: She's strong, I'm sure she'll make it. I think we should be doing more though, but that's just me.

Speed: Yeah she is strong.

Anni: Speaking of strong women, I was talking to Lori.

Speed: You settle her down?

Anni: She's a woman, not a horse.

Speed: *nods*

Anni: She told me about why she was moving to Paris.

Speed: Why?

Anni: ...Because Katie supports her decision.

Speed: ...Decision for what?

Anni: You don't usually kill the messenger, right?

Speed: Just spill it and we'll see.

Anni: She's terminating the pregnancy.

Speed: *stares at Anni*

Anni: ...

Speed: ...

Anni: Are you mad?

Speed: *frowning* Why didn't she tell me herself.

Anni: She's scared.

Speed: Scared of what?

Anni: You.

Speed: ...Me.

Anni: Well Katie told her about how you went off on her about the same thing years ago.

Speed: Yeah, I was young and stupid. I didn't respect Katie as much as I should have back then. I was an ass and I was selfish.

Anni: And now?

Speed: It's Lori's decision, not mine.

Anni: How do you feel about it though?

Speed: Well I'm not about to skip around the lab like a ray of sunshine if that's what you're asking.

Anni: So you're mad.

Speed: She's my daughter, and I love her. I respect her decision.

Anni: ...So you're not going to go around calling her a murderer and never look at her again.

Speed: Like I said, I was young and stupid back then.

Anni: Still, after all these years...Your values shouldn't change.

Speed: They haven't. But the way I see life has. I'm not about to disown my daughter because she made a mistake and wants to rectify it. The means might not be what I agree with, but I won't stop loving her because of it.

Anni: That's really sweet.

Speed: Yeah, Hallmark should have their own category for me.

Anni: *laughs*

Speed: I'm going to go visit her after work.

Anni: Oh you're not going to go lecture her about it are you? Because then the whole Kodak moment you just made would blow out the window.

TBC...................
 
Lounge

Missy: ...Where is everyone?

JC: Probably on some cool trip. Man we're always left out. This sucks.

Missy: Well maybe they forgot us.

JC: That's even worse.

Missy: I'm sure they're all around here somewhere.

JC: I haven't seen anyone. And no one tells us anything. What if they died in some huge explosion or something? We'll be stuck here for eternity.

Missy: Unless we go outside.

JC: I say we have a road trip of our own. Just you and me.

Missy: But I get carsick.

JC: You never did in the Hummerhome.

Missy: It's not a car.

JC: ...

Missy: ...

JC: Come on, we're leaving.

Missy: Where?

JC: I don't know. Wherever the road takes us.

Missy: It better not take us into a dingey part of town because I'm too pretty to be beaten up and mugged.

JC: *sigh* Dang, my whole plan is screwed.

Missy: What?

JC: Nothing, come on.

LMFAO that sounds exactly like something i would say .... geni you know me to a tee it seems.... lol (thought I told u to stop spying on me LOL)

can't wait for more geni, and your fic is the best I have read by far in this board lol. You are a excellent writer! :p
 
Aww, poor Lori...and I remember when that happened to Katie and Speed went all postal...creepy. But HA! go Anni! Aww, Anni rocks...she's gonna make a good mum one day ;)

AWWW that last scene between Anni and Speed was so cute! I love emotional Speed...almost as much as I love creeper Speed ;) But awww, he's just such a cute daddy!!

And it is a little weird to think about Lori being pregnant...it seems like only yesterday when she was obsessed with cheez-its and watching Blue's Clues with me and Jess...ah, those were the days :lol:

anyway, please update soon
 
Thanks Jaci... :)

And Carly! :lol: Blue's Clues was good times indeed. :)

It's Easy To Forget

Hospital, 7 pm

Lori: *grabs purse, walks to door*

Speed: *walks over*

Lori: *looks at Speed*

Speed: You're leaving?

Lori: I have a plane to catch.

Speed: Oh. So you want to leave pretty quick then.

Lori: Yeah doctor said I was fine, so I'm gone. Plus hospitals give me the creeps.

Speed: You don't want to say goodbye first?

Lori: Bye. *walks away*

Speed: Lori...

Lori: *walking*

Speed: *follows* Lori, hold on.

Lori: Sorry, I'm busy. You'll have to scream at me later.

Speed: I didn't come here to scream at you.

Lori: Okay lecture me.

Speed: Lori, slow down.

Lori: No. I have to go or I'm going to miss my flight.

Speed: When does your plane leave?

Lori: Soon.

Speed: How soon?

Lori: Very soon.

Speed: You don't have time to grab a soda or something? Maybe some dinner?

Lori: No.

Speed: Why won't you talk to me?

Lori: *digging through purse* You don't understand.

Speed: You've never kept anything from me.

Lori: I guess some things have to change. I'm not your little girl anymore.

Speed: I know, I just thought since we were close and everything, th-

Lori: *stops walking* Close? We're not close.

Speed: We aren't?

Lori: Maybe at one time I thought I needed you. I didn't have anyone else and you were an authority figure to keep me in check. You fed and housed me. But I don't need you anymore. I know it sounds terrible, but you didn't raise me. I raised myself and right now I need to be on my own.

Speed: Lori, I'm not mad for what you want to do. It's your decision and I'll stand behind it 100%.

Lori: *smiles* You're a good man Tim.

Speed: *stares at Lori*

Lori: Promise me something.

Speed: *nods*

Lori: Promise that you'll stay strong.

Speed: ...

Lori: *walks away*

TBC................
 
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