CSI:Miami - "Road Trip *puts on shades* Number Nine."

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Lori's back! Ryan's pissed at me! Just the way it should be. Hope I come back soon, don't wanna get fired, Wolfe. :lol:

Lori! Holy cow, she keeps popping up everywhere! Glad she got to talk to her father, even if it was...um, an argument, sort of, and hope the case solves itself out. (If that made any sense whatsoever) But I'm glad she's back- she adds excitement to RT drama! She's the rebel! :D Anywho, more soon!
 
Oh man oh man oh man Lori's back!! And Ryan doesn't look to happy with her. And he's not too happy with Lilly, and he likes them both. Horatio in Heaven this is AWESOME. :lol: *silently prays for the century's best catfight* AND Lori wants Wolfe SHADOWED. *sqeals* This is getting better and better. If Speed DOES shadow Ryan, and then Ryan will figure out and he'll be pissed at Lori. Maybe that'll be the time when he rubs Lilly in her face. (or something) *sigh* Or maybe not, maybe some sob story will come up from both of them. But one thing is for sure (to me) is that Lilly is going to make an enemy. Ooo... don't worry Lil. I got your back. Even though the person i'll protect you from only has a 1 letter difference in her name then from mine.

I'm turning into Katie. :lol: [insert mechanical laughter here]

"Don't ever do that again."

Ooo...Lori.... Another sweet thing! He's telling her to behave like a little child (she'll probably lash out sometime when she'll be under strain under the Wolfe problem). And she's calling her father 'Sir'. I can't tell from it, was it a one time thing, have a hint of sarcasm or was actually a respect thing?

It just occured to me that i might be giving Geni ideas. :lol: Anyways, loved the update; very satisfying. Thanks Geni! :D
 
Oh, wow...Lori's back!!! And she's a lawyer, that girl is a renissance woman, she knows how to do everything :lol: I can sense the tension in the air. And she knows , somewhat, I'm gathering, about Lily. uh oh...

I like this case, but I really don't think that Speed should have to shadow Ryan on it. I think he may be able to do it himself I said that out loud didn't I? Must be pity for him getting canned this week...OH well... ;)

Lori and Speed in a scene together is always like poetry in motion, those two are so alike, it's like putting a mirror in front of them both. More of that I say! :D

The update was fab, as always, Geni!
 
cainesugar said:
Hope I come back soon, don't wanna get fired, Wolfe. :lol:
OUCH. That hurt my little Ryan loving heart. :p

Oh dear, Lori's back and Ryan seems...Ryan. Not the right girl for you mister. *looks at Lilly* Neither is she but I won't say that too loud. Whoops I just said that out loud :devil: Kidding Lilly *hugs*

Uhm...yeah. Update soon Geni! :D
 
Aw Nikki *hugs* I love Ryan, he's right up there with Hman on my character favorites. He's awesome, and I do love him. I just wanted to make a point. :p
 
I dunno. He's being a bit of a jerk now.
Ryan i mean.

But how the heck did Lori become a lawyer so fast? *pauses* Nevermind, it's a fic! :lol:

Hoping for another update. :D
 
Lora, I usually like to 'borrow' ideas for the sake of the story. :D Where would I be without you guys anyway? :lol:

Thanks for the reviews. :D

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2 hours later, Miami, Lab

Ryan: *walking down hall*

Lilly: *walks over* Hey I hear you have an old case.

Ryan: Where have you been?

Lilly: Family emergency.

Ryan: Your family's in California.

Lilly: I went to California.

Ryan: Oh. Well, welcome back.

Lilly: So this case, what's going on with it so far?

Ryan: *hands over folder*

Lilly: *opens folder*

Lori: *walks over* Wolfe. Hey Wolfe!

Ryan: Oh great. *turns around* What do you want?

Lori: I told you to call me when you had a development. Oh, it's miss Lilly.

Lilly: *frowns*

Lori: Long time no see.

Lilly: Let's keep it that way.

Lori: Brutal. For a newbie.

Lilly: *glares*

Ryan: Lil, she's the prosecuter in the case.

Lilly: Surprising. I'll see you guys later. *leaves*

Lori: *smiles* I like her gumption.

Ryan: *rolls eyes* Stop teasing her.

Lori: What, I can't have a little fun while I'm here?

Ryan: No.

Lori: Fine. So what do you have on the case?

Ryan: Wife's sister gave a statement.

Lori: And?

Ryan: Looks like the suspect isn't a very nice guy after all.

Lori: You mean...Killer. He's still in prison.

Ryan: He might have been a rough guy but that doesn't automatically make him guilty for murder.

Lori: Everyone's capable of murder.

Ryan: Yeah well you might be.

Lori: *smirks*

Ryan: What.

Lori: Nothing.

Ryan: You're that heartless.

Lori: You try saving a little girl from drug lord and tell me not to shoot.

Ryan: *nods* Fair enough.

Lori: I might have been a lawyer by day but I worked undercover.

Ryan: *smiles* Just like Spider Man.

Lori: Spidey was a photographer. Get your facts straight.

Ryan: *smile fades*

Lori: You see Tim around here lately?

Ryan: I thought his name was daddy dearest.

Lori: I'm at work.

Ryan: He's in the Trace Lab.

Lori: Am I allowed back there or do I need a visitor's pass?

Ryan: I'll sign for you IF you stay out of the evidence.

Lori: Deal.

Ryan: *walks away*

Trace Lab

Lori: *walks in* So what are you working on?

Speed: Evidence.

Lori: Oh, what evidence?

Speed: None of your business.

Lori: You ever change this lab around? Paint the walls or something?

Speed: I work here, I don't design the building.

Lori: Figured. So does this place ever get super hot where you have to open the windows or anything?

Speed: The building's ventilated and cooled so our evidence doesn't expire.

Lori: *nods* That's interesting because the confession tape I recieved was melted.

Speed: *lifts head* What?

Lori: Yeah, it wasn't usable.

Speed: That's impossible.

Lori: You calling me a liar?

Speed: No I just don't understand how that could have happened.

Lori: Who was the primary on the case?

Speed: Wolfe.

Lori: *sigh*

Speed: Something must have happened after the evidence left the lab.

Lori: Either way the guy might get out because the lab screwed up.

Speed: That's not my problem.

Lori: Fine. I'll appeal to the judge and make sure any evidence you uncover never sees the light of day.

Speed: We didn't screw up.

Lori: He's a murderer.

Speed: Look I understand that you want to win your case, start a reputation for yourself but this isn't the way to get it.

Lori: You think because I'm your daughter, I'm going to go easy on the lab?

Speed: No.

Lori: And I'm not just doing this because I want to win a case. I trust my gut, it seems pretty obvious that he did it.

Speed: *smirks* Right.

Lori: The difference between you and I, is I don't rely on a little machine in a lab to tell me who's guilty.

Speed: *stands, walks over* Humans are falible. The evidence isn't.

Lori: You ever think maybe the evidence isn't enough?

Speed: Maybe not but you can't disregard it completely.

Lori: *nods*

Speed: Lori, don't let passion and bias blind you from what's right there for you to see.

Lori: When are you going to stop telling me what to believe?

Speed: I'm helping you.

Lori: *laughs* You're...Helping me. Well that's perfect. You think that you're some kind of god and I'm just going to worship the ground you walk on? I'm going to do whatever you say because we're related? That wasn't my choice.

Speed: You need a serious attitude adjustment.

Lori: What are you going to do, hit me? Because I don't agree with you?

Speed: You've been nothing but defiant and stubborn since you got here. No one can have a conversation with you because it ends up into an argument. And Lori doesn't like to lose arguments.

Lori: *frowns* Shove it up your ass.

Speed: We have a problem.

Lori: Oh, I didn't notice. I thought we were playing a nice little game.

Speed: Does this look like a game to you? You think I'm fooling around?

Lori: I don't know, that seems to be one of your favorite activities.

Speed: Not a good way to adjust your attitude.

Lori: I don't have to listen to you.

Speed: No you don't. It's your choice.

Lori: Good. Then I guess my attitude has nothing to worry about. *leaves*

TBC...................

Apologies on the rather....Short chapter and lack of Hummerhome but I promise to have more of that soon!
 
Humans are falible. The evidence isn't.

Oh this is like a Horatio/House thing. The 'people lie, the evidence doesn't' and 'People lie, numbers don't' kinda thing. :D

(Lori/Lilly) *in dramatic voice* It begins. (Dun dun dunnn....)

Oh MAN! 10 bucks Lori tampered with the evidence!! The tape was melted and Wolfy was in charge.... *rubs hands together* i love it when this kid of stuff happens. (To the people i'm ok with it happening too. Like Wolfe.)

GENI! WE don't care if it's a short update! At least it's A update. Because when you leave for long periods of time, ew get freaked out. "I get the rights to the fic" and "I get her stereo"'s start coming out. :lol: Thanks for the update Gen. :)
 
yo whats up with Lori?
so hostile
haha and Ryan got his spidey facts wrong:p
(by the way Spiderman 3 comes out today :D)
 
Oh Lori it's on. He's so my nam, and I'll realize that soon...or RT me will realize that soon. Back off, girly. :mad:

Speed and Lori are getting...argumentitive. :lol: She can be so rude and ignorant sometimes, but I still love her. Speed's right, evidence is the most important thing in a case, because 'the evidence doesn't lie.' In the words of Grissom himself (swithcing CSIs for a moment)

I'm back! I was visiting family in CA! Awesome, I am back on the case! This is so cool, Ryan stuck up for me! He loves me and you all know I love him. I can't wait to see where you go with our complicated relationship, because I insist it is in fact a relationship, or some sort of it, lol. Anyway, amaizng, update soon!
 
Just when do these two ( Lori and Speed) not fight? I mean, they have this aww shucks moment, and then turn around and are at each other's necks. There is a serious problem there, and I'm not sure that it will ever be solved.


Lily's back! Yes! And her and Lori square off somewhat. And well Ryan wasn't really receptive to Lori...I wonder what's that all about? Could he be leaning over to the Lily side? Remains to be seen.

And I instantly thought that Hunter , about Lori. But wouldn't that be unethical? Hey, I just remembered, we're talking about Lori... Scruples wasn't something she made a priority of.

Excellent short update, Geni!
 
Lori sure is being a pain in the ass lately .... i want to know what crawled up her A$$ and died... sheesh. The lab is doing what they can with the evidence and stuff happens sometimes.... Anxious to see what happens next...
 
Thanks for the fab reviews. :D Apologies for not being able to put up a chapter yesterday but it was my Graduation so I had very little time. :lol:

And now that I'm back, we can continue the fun.

And for future reference, Colton, you're not evil in the story. :p Just bear with me.

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Office, DA

Lori: *writing things down*

Knock on door is heard

Lori: *sigh* Door's unlocked.

Man: *walks in*

Lori: *lifts head* Carlos.

Carlos: You promised to call me when you got to Miami.

Lori: What are you doing here?

Carlos: Did I say you could speak?

Lori: ...No sir.

Carlos: I explicitely said destroy the evidence, not tamper with it. I want him out of prison. What happened?

Lori: Look, get your drugs somewhere else. He burned them along with everything else.

Carlos: I put you here so you could get him out.

Lori: Actually my job description is to keep him inside.

Carlos: You don't think I actually expected you to do that.

Lori: He's innocent. If he gets out, he'll be killed.

Carlos: I want him out.

Lori: You should have found someone else to do your job for you. Killing his wife? That was smooth.

Carlos: You got an attitude problem. Fix it.

Lori: Yes sir.

Carlos: Now. You're going to frame that Ryan Wolfe for the wife's murder.

Lori: ...

Carlos: Barry will get out of prison and I will get my drugs, or whatever's left of the stash. Guinea pig or not, he agreed to play my game. And so did you.

Lori: Promise you won't hurt anyone.

Carlos: Who? Like um...What's his name..Oh yes. Tim Speedle?

Lori: *stares at Carlos*

Carlos: He's not your father. How much do you really remember from when you got back here? You were 13 years old. They've been telling you lies. You were born in Colombia, stolen from me. We finally got you back. You lived with my brother, remember?

Lori: I remember a drug dealer.

Carlos: It was for your own protection. Those people here, they're not your family.

Lori: *shakes head* I lived with my mother after I was born, w-

Carlos: No. The man who kidnapped their daughter in California also had you. You were switched and their child was killed. You lived. I had been trying to find you and my friend Colton was able to help.

Lori: I was shown a DNA profile when I got back.

Carlos: These people are liars. You didn't understand DNA back then. You ever wondered why you were drawn more to Colombia than Miami?

Lori: *looks down at desk*

Carlos: You don't even get along with them. You belong with me and your mother. We love you.

Lori: Yeah you love me so much that you're using me to get your drug dealer out of prison.

Carlos: After this is finished you can come home. With me and your mother.

Lori: ...If you love me you wouldn't have abandoned me this whole time.

Carlos: If those people loved you, they wouldn't have either. *sits beside Lori* You are my little one. I had been looking for you so long and I had found you. You would have been dead if my brother hadn't protected you.

Lori: Huh. Protected me. Is that what he did.

Carlos: A little girl's perception can be altered.

Lori: Then where the hell were you.

Carlos: Your mother was sick, I had to take of her.

Lori: ...

Carlos: You should not be lied to any longer, by anyone.

Lori: I don't understand. How could I have been stolen from Colombia?

Carlos: The man who killed those people's daughter stole you. He's from Colombia. Fortunately he was killed by your so-called mother. It took me five years to find you, Lori.

Lori: ...

Carlos: Now, my drugs are still somewhere on that property. You need to find them.

Lori: I'm tellin' you they were burned.

Carlos: Barry's smart, he wouldn't have burned all of them. He would have wrapped some in clothing, and hid the rest.

Lori: You want me to dig around a re-opened crime scene.

Carlos: Whatever you have to do.

Lori: I could be thrown in jail.

Carlos: I won't let that happen. Trust me.

Lori: ...How do I implicate Ryan?

Carlos: Leave some of the drugs at the scene so they'll be found. Then take some and put it in Wolfe's posession. You know of somewhere?

Lori: His kit.

Carlos: Good girl. Then, I want you to sabotage the evidence against Barry.

Lori: The tape.

Carlos: Destroy it.

Lori: *nods* Yes sir.

Carlos: Steal some un-burnt clothing and place it with mister Wolfe as well.

Lori: *nods*

Carlos: Do not let anyone get in your way. If they do, call me. I will take care of it.

Lori: ...Take care of it how?

Carlos: Leave it to me.

Lori: Don't hurt anyone.

Carlos: You must know that sometimes violence is necessary to get what we want. The only one who poses a risk is the ones important to the case. Yelina Salas, Ryan Wolfe, Tim Speedle and Frank Tripp.

Lori: We can do this without hurting anyone.

Carlos: Do not let your feelings cloud your judgement, little one. You have a job to do.

Lori: *nods*

Carlos: Do not let the Americans fool you into mercy.

Lori: Yes sir.

Carlos: It would be best if you were to plant the clothing first. Go.

Lori: *stands, leaves*

Hummerhome

Delko: What are we eating again?

Anni: This is from the fancy restaurant down the road.

Calleigh: Couldn't we just...Eat there?

Anni: No. I ordered take-out.

Colton: *picks at food* I didn't think fancy places did that.

Anni: Apparently they do.

Horatio: What is this?

Anni: Spinach with lentils.

Horatio: Oh...Sounds delicious.

Carly: Um...Is this supposed to be dripping?

Anni: Yes, that's the pasta sauce.

Carly: It's more like juice.

Anni: Eat it.

Delko: I DON'T KNOW HOW TO EAT ART! *starts to cry*

Horatio: Maybe we should have tried ordering from the Burger King.

Calleigh: Maybe after we've finished this.

Anni: NO! This is dinner! How they eat it in France.

Delko: I don't want to go to France.

Colton: We've been to France.

Delko: Okay I don't want to eat in France or have drippy food.

Colton: So don't eat it.

Delko: Anni's forcing me to.

Colton: No one's forcing you to.

Delko: She's giving me an evil glare.

Colton: Ignore it.

Delko: I can't. It's like she knows what I'm thinking.

Colton: Dude, maybe that's because you're saying everything you're thinking.

Delko: Good call.

Anni: EAT!

Delko: Sorry. *eating*

Anni: *smiles* I love it when we're all together.

Calleigh: I love it too! We should to this more often...Without the food.

Anni: The food is the best part.

Carly: Who wants to barbeque?

Horatio: Let's do it.

Delko: I'm game.

Colton: I'm starving.

Anni: FINE. I HOPE THE HUMMERHOME SETS FIRE!

Trace Lab, 8pm

Lori: *walks in* No one's home. *walks over to desk, opens drawers*

Doors creak

Lori: *looks up*

Lights flicker

Lori: *digs through folders*

Footsteps are heard

Lori: Come on, come on....Ah. *grabs folder* Hello fabric.

Lilly: Lori?

Lori: *stands straight* AH!

Lilly: What are you doing here?

Lori: I...Could ask you the same thing.

Lilly: I was working late.

Lori: Good. Shows you have initiative.

Lilly: Why are you in the Trace Lab?

Lori: I was...Just...Um...Looking for something.

Lilly: Oh, maybe I can help.

Lori: *steps in front of Lilly* No no. No, I don't need help.

Lilly: Why's the drawer open?

Lori: It's...My porn stash.

Lilly: In the Trace Lab?

Lori: *laughs* Yeah. I'm a drawer porno freak.

Lilly: In a small folder?

Lori: *looks down* Mini...Porn. *nervous smile*

Lilly: Is that an evidence folder?

Lori: It was the closest thing I could find.

Lilly: How did you get that drawer opened? I thought you needed a key.

Lori: I have a key.

Lilly: Really? I don't even have a key. Usually Speed has the key.

Lori: *laughs* Okay I jimmied it open. Guilty as charged.

Lilly: You should probably close that up.

Lori: Yeah. *slams drawer closed* Thanks for the advice.

Lilly: Um...You probably shouldn't be back here.

Lori: I know but I didn't want everyone else to find my stash.

Lilly: You could have tried hiding it somewhere else like...At your place where no one has to...Find out about your weird fetishes.

Lori: Right, right yeah. Silly me. Sorry.

Lilly: Well I'll see you later I guess.

Lori: Rock on.

Lilly: *leaves*

Lori: *rolls eyes* Mini porn. I'm intelligent.

Speed: I noticed.

Lori: *screams*

Speed: What are you doing here?

Lori: *turns around* DON'T DO THAT!

Speed: *looks down at folder* You broke into my drawers.

Lori: *laughs* That sounded SO dirty.

Speed: *frowns*

Lori: Um...Okay so only I found that...Funny.

Speed: You don't have permission to be in here.

Lori: I'm under orders.

Speed: From who.

Lori: Can't say.

Speed: Is that the fabric evidence?

Lori: I wanted to take a closer look.

Speed: Put it back.

Lori: No.

Speed: Lori, put it back.

Lori: Sorry, I can't.

Speed: Why not?

Lori: I'm under orders.

Speed: So you say.

Lori: Look, it's late, you should get back to your son so I'm going to leave.

Speed: Not with that evidence.

Lori: *frowns* I just want to take a closer look. No harm in that.

Speed: Give it to me.

Lori: Stop telling me what to do.

Speed: This is ridiculous. Just give me the evidence.

Lori: You're not my father.

Speed: Uh...Are you drunk?

Lori: *grabs phone, dials* You shouldn't have come down here.

Speed: Why?

Lori: I'd leave if I were you.

Speed: Who are you calling?

Lori: You have about five minutes to leave.

Speed: Lori...

Lori: Tim get out.

Speed: No.

Lori: GET OUT!

Speed: *looks at door*

Carlos: *lifts gun*

Lori: *steps back*

Carlos: I should have known he'd get involved fairly quickly. You know you're a real nuissance.

Speed: And you would be?

Carlos: Lori's father.

Speed: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *walks over to Carlos*

Carlos: And my plan was going over so well.

Speed: Your plan.

Carlos: I never liked Miami. It's caused so much trouble for me over the years. And yet again I am at another road block. *hands gun to Lori* Give me the evidence, you get rid of him and make it look like Wolfe did it.

Lori: *holding gun*

Speed: What are you trying to do?

Carlos: I want what's mine. Including her.

Lori: *lifts gun*

Speed: What the hell are you doing?

Lori: You're in the way.

Speed: So you're just going to shoot me because he claims to be your parent.

Lori: It's more than that. I've never really felt at home here. In Colombia, I felt like I belonged there.

Carlos: Your daughter died a long time ago. Switched in California that time when she was kidnapped.

Speed: *nods*

Carlos: So you understand how this happened.

Speed: I do.

Carlos: Good.

Speed: I just have one question. How did you get her to believe any of that?

Carlos: Fathers and daughters have a connection. She merely came around when I explained everything to her. Isn't that right?

Lori: Yeah.

Carlos: *smiles* See?

Speed: Yeah I see.

Carlos: I expect you won't get in my way again. You will work a different case and you will not get involved with the current one.

Speed: If you say so.

Carlos: Good. Then you will not have to die. Lori, the gun.

Lori: *hands over gun*

Carlos: I will carry out my business as planned. Lori, meet me outside.

Lori: Yes sir. *leaves*

Carlos: *walks to door*

Speed: Hey.

Carlos: *looks back*

Speed: Would you die for her?

Carlos: *stares at Speed* ...

Speed: I guess that's the difference between you and me.

Carlos: *leaves*

TBC......................
 
Wow okay i am so confused is katie and speed really loris parents or not ... i mean first they are now they're not .... AGGGHHHH so confused .... can't wait for more!!!
 
Speed: Would you die for her?

Carlos: *stares at Speed* ...

Speed: I guess that's the difference between you and me.

*sigh* I feel so bad for poor Speed right now. Lori's being an ass, I mean Speed was there for her all that time and that doesn't mean ANYTHING to her? Carlos may be her biological father but Speed really took care of her and was miserable when she 'died' and welcomed her back and tried to fix her problem when she came back. He's been, while a tough one, a real father to her. While she's had a tough life so has he, and he's taught her life lessons and she points a gun at him. I hope she dies, no matter how much I love her character.

And to plant it on innocent ol' Ryan! What did he ever do? The same thing as Speed- love her. He was there for her when she felt she wasn't exactly close with her father, and he loved her. She's willing to put two people who really cared about her in danger? What an ass. I REALLY hope she dies.

How could I be so stupid? Mini porn? :lol: That cracked me up Geni, I'm such a newbie, just walk away, let someone else deal with it. Speed isn't going to be ver happy with me, even though he saw it in the end. *puts brain back in head* And I still can't believe Speed's not Lori's biological father! It makes sense, but...they always seemed to have something, while shaky and nonexistant at times, there between them. A connection. *sigh*

Anni is so awesome. Trying to get the Hummerhome to be civil...that's not going to happen anytime soon. Please, Horatio, don't let Delko BBQ...that leads to disaster. I fear for the Hummerhome gang, Ryan, Speed, Yelina and Frank, and my sanity! Update soon Geni!
 
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