CSI:Miami - "Road Trip *puts on shades* Number Nine."

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*Has a feeling this might be the only decent post I'll be able to make today*

Okay, so my computer is sick and hates me so it decided to yell "NO MORE" and die. So hopefully this post will work.

Thanks for the reviews. :D And y'all should know there is always something more to the story than meets the eye so stay tuned! And I should get another chapter up soon...As soon as my computer gets fixed. But I can get on downstairs so we'll see how things go.
 
AH MY FREAKING GOD! That was absolutely amazing. And Lori's back. For someone who doesn't like Miami, she sure spends a lot of time here. I'd type more, but my keyboard is crap. Love the updates Geni!
 
Geni, that was wow, revealing! So, Lori's not really Speed and Katie's daughter? That was some story, so much so, I have to question if Lori is really that brainwashed? Either way about it, Speed narrowily missed a bullet again. That question that was posed to Carlos was deep...

And Lori would set up Wolfe? Wow, she must really be in deep.

And, I think RT Anni needs to get back to Miami, she really needs someone to mother, poor Delko.. :lol:

Great work, and I know how you feel about your computer, it's happened too many times for me to count.
 
First off. Congrats Geni! *Graduation music is playing in the background* For she's a jolly good fellow, for she's a jolly good-

Oh. Right.

I have no theories to what is going on with Lori, Carlos and Speed. I know that I'm wanting to sort of slap Lori though.
Delko makes me laugh. He's so childish! It's so adorable.
Anyway, great couple of updates Geni!

*Beats Geni's computer with a stick, stops erruptly* Oh right, that might not help.
Shall we start a "Get Geni a New Computer" fund? ;)
 
Ok...my connection is crap...I'm trying to get on as long as possible, but it ain't happening.

thanks for including me Geni! Can't wait to see your next update!
 
Horatio in Heaven Geni, these are the moments i'm happy you don't update often. :D Busy weekend guys, didn't have time for the laptop. The past few days are really are big blur really, excpet i remember some rock climbing. :lol:

Lori: *rolls eyes* Mini porn. I'm intelligent.

Speed: I noticed.

Lori: *screams*

Speed: What are you doing here?

Lori: *turns around* DON'T DO THAT!

:lol: Holy shizer that was funny. :lol: But i can see it, Speed just watching Lori quitely; with a smirk on his face.

I KNEW IT! SHE WAS SABOTAGING THE EVIDENCE!!

Speed: Would you die for her?

Carlos: *stares at Speed* ...

Speed: I guess that's the difference between you and me.

Oh man.... :(

I was expecting Tim to smoke him in the face, but a ending line like that is even better. :)

But wow! Lovin' the storyline, hating Carlos and we got some Lilly slash Lori comedy there. :lol: Great stuff, looking forward to an update! :D
 
Lori isn't really Speed and RT Katie's daughter? Hmmm...I think there's more to this story. Awww why do I find Lori setting up Ryan awesomly awesome for some reason? No wait I forgot I'm sorry i'm turning over a knew leaf and trying to like him more.

And *sighs* Anni's just awesome.

I know how you feel about the past couple of days being a blur. I can't even remember what I had for breakfast. Stupid school ending and...stuff.

Anyways, update soon.
 
I know how u feel with the puter troubles geni .... I just managed to fix mine .... by throwing it out a window *watches tower fall from upper floor of house onto a dog house* teehee how I wish I coulda done that but then my dad would be down right ticked.....
I can't wait to see what happens next .... hopefully ur puter will be all good soon, maybe its just a nervous breakdown.
And Congrats on graduating geni ...... *plays graduation by Vitamin C....
 
*sways to music* :p

Lilly, I'm sorry but I'll keep my PC for now. ;) *hugs*

Thanks for the uber-awesome reviews!

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Hallway, two days later

Ryan: *reading folder*

Lilly: You sure like to read folders.

Ryan: Keeps me busy.

Lilly: *looks across room* Who's that?

Ryan: *lifts head* Stetler.

Stetler: *walks over* Put down the folder.

Ryan: May I ask why?

Stetler: *lifts bag* This was found in your locker.

Ryan: *staring at bag* Yeah, so?

Stetler: This is fabric. From a crime scene.

Ryan: I...Don't know where that came from.

Stetler: Well you can explain it down at the station.

Ryan: Whoa, wait a second. You think I'm hoarding evidence?

Stetler: I think you have somethin' to do with a murder.

Ryan: I don't know what you mean.

Stetler: We found a .45 at your house. Same calibre that killed a man's wife.

Ryan: I don't own a .45.

Stetler: Come on.

Ryan: This is ridiculous, I didn't kill anyone. I was investigating this case!

Stetler: Horatio's on his way in.

Ryan: I didn't kill anyone!

Lab techs look over

Stetler: It doesn't look good for you, Wolfe.

Ryan: *looks around* ...*looks at Stetler* Listen, someone's trying to set me up. Have the gun printed, test for DNA, check my clothes, anything!

Stetler: Let's go.

Ryan: No, No I didn't do anything wrong.

Speed: *walks over*

Ryan: Speed, tell him I didn't kill anyone.

Speed: *frowns*

Ryan: Come on man, you know I didn't kill that woman.

Speed: Ryan, just go with him.

Ryan: You're not going to do anything?

Speed: *places hands in pockets*

Stetler: Follow me.

Ryan: *sigh* Great.

Stetler/Ryan leave

Lilly: What was that about?

Speed: Do we have the gun?

Lilly: We do now.

Speed: Check the numbers on it.

Lilly: Sure. *walks away*

Speed: *angry sigh*

Ballistics, one hour later

Lilly: *typing on computer*

Speed: *walks in* You paged me.

Lilly: Yeah. I think you're onto something.

Speed: Alright, what do you have?

Lilly: Gun's not registered to Barry OR Ryan.

Speed: Okay, who's it registered to?

Lilly: A...Carlos Vargas.

Speed: *looks at Lilly*

Lilly: You know him?

Speed: Do we have a DNA profile?

Lilly: *typing* He's in CODIS. Popped in '87 for drug running in Miami. Managed to bail himself out and has been in the wind ever since.

Speed: *grabs laptop*

Lilly: Oh...Kay. What are you doing?

Speed: Verifying some information. *typing*

Lilly: *lifts brow* Lori has a CODIS file?

Speed: NCIC file.

Lilly: Wow.

Speed: *typing*

Lilly: Glad I'm not on any records.

Computer beeps

Lilly: What do you got?

Speed: ...

Lilyy: DNA from Vargas and DNA from Lori.

Speed: *staring at screen*

Lilly: They're not a match.

Speed: No they're not.

Lilly: So why do you have that look on your face?

Speed: I want to know why he's using her.

Lilly: You think she's the one who's framing Ryan?

Speed: She is. Carlos convinced her that he's her father to get her to do this but she's not stupid.

Lilly: What do you mean?

Speed: She's manipulating him and he thinks he's manipulating her.

Lilly: How would you know that?

Speed: She knows he killed that woman, she probably found out by doing the same thing you did.

Lilly: She didn't have the gun.

Speed: Oh yes she did. He gave it to her to plant in Ryan's place.

Lilly: *laughs* So she just helped us.

Speed: Print the gun.

Lilly: Already did. *hands over paper*

Speed: *looks down at page* ...Match to Carlos.

Lilly: His gun, not so odd.

Speed: We need to place him at the crime scene.

Lilly: The clothes.

Speed: What about them?

Lilly: He was a drug runner. I heard about a case in LA where a drug lord would wrap his stash in a bunch of clothing and then burn it. The fumes from the clothes would overpower the fumes from the drugs so scent dogs wouldn't be able to pick it up. The evidence would vanish.

Speed: Okay, I processed the clothes.

Lilly: You have the results?

Speed: They're in Trace.

Trace Lab

Lilly: *grabs paper from printer* Traces of...Cocaine, heroin, marijuana...Wow this guy has some stash.

Speed: You get info back on a projectile from the .45?

Lilly: Yeah, it's a match. The bullet in the wife's head came from that .45

Speed: Okay that puts him at the scene with his drugs and his gun.

Lilly: Barry goes free?

Speed: For now.

Lilly: What about Ryan?

Speed: He's keeping Stetler busy. We don't have to bother them.

Lilly: *smiles* You are sly.

Speed: *smirks*

8pm, Miami Lab, steps

Lori: *staring ahead*

Speed: *walks over*

Lori: *lowers head* Ryan off the hook?

Speed: Yeah.

Lori: Good.

Speed: *leans on railing*

Lori: Carlos is in the wind.

Speed: Sometimes that's the way the wind blows.

Lori: *scoffs* Yeah. And I almost believed him.

Speed: He had a compelling story for you.

Lori: He just came out of nowhere, y'know? I mean, I was working in Colombia and he approached me and said he had a job for me down in Miami. I didn't hesitate. Then he told me all those things and...It was just part of his game.

Speed: I checked into his past. Turns out he did have a daughter. She was killed in a fire.

Lori: *nods*

Speed: Maybe he was just looking for what we all want.

Lori: *lifts brow* A daughter?

Speed: A family.

Lori: *looks at Speed*

Speed: *staring ahead*

Lori: Were you ever worried about having kids?

Speed: *looks at Lori* Why.

Lori: Well...Did you ever think you'd be a good parent?

Speed: Honestly, no.

Lori: *nods*

Speed: Why, are you planning on having kids?

Lori: *laughs*

Speed: *frowns*

Lori: Y'know, I thought I'd be freaked about talking to you about this.

Speed: Why?

Lori: We don't get along.

Speed: I guess it depends on what mood you're in that day.

Lori: *nods*

Speed: So what's with the questions?

Lori: Nothing. I was just curious.

Speed: *narrows eyes*

Lori: Don't worry, I won't be having kids anytime soon. I've still got some growing up to do.

Speed: You can tell me anything, no matter what it is, you know that.

Lori: I know it. *hugs Speed*

Speed: Oof.

Lori: *hugs tighter* Love you.

Speed: You too.

Lori: *lets go*

Speed: So I guess you're leaving again.

Lori: *smiles* For a while. But when I get busted for something, I'll be sure to give you a call.

Speed: Don't get busted for anything.

Lori: *laughs* I knew you'd say that.

Speed: Take care, Lori.

Lori: I always do. *leaves*

TBC...................


...More Hummerhome stuff now, so stay tuned. :p
 
Did I hear hummerhome? *plops onto chair, waits patiently.*

Good conclusion to the Carlos Segment, Geni! We all knew Lori really is Speed's daughter, she's too much like him.

Loved the update. This makes tonight fantastic. :p
 
Hee. :D Thanks!

And yes you did hear Hummerhome! It's about freakin' time too. :p


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Hummerhome, next morning

Katie: COLTON GET BACK HERE!

Colton: *running*

Katie: GIVE ME THAT BACK!

Colton: I got Katie's diary! *waving it around*

Katie: YOU'RE SUCH A JERK, COLTON! *jumps* AH! *falls over*

Colton: *runs to dinette* Ha!

Katie: *sits up* You suck.

Colton: Ooh what's this page say? *flips page* Dear Diary, today, I-

Katie: DON'T READ THAT! *grabs at diary*

Colton: *swings diary away* Haha, you're such a baby.

Katie: Seriously, I'll murder you.

Calleigh: Nobody's goin' to murder anyone. Colton, put the diary away.

Colton: But I'm reading it.

Calleigh: *sigh* Colton...

Colton: ...I want to see what she wrote about me.

Katie: I didn't write anything about you, you loser!

Colton: HEY now, you want me to start reading this out loud?

Katie: NO!

Calleigh: *stands* Okay I have a solution. Colton, you give her the diary and Katie, you apologize.

Katie: How the hell is that a solution?

Colton: I'd rather just read the diary.

Katie: *frowns*

Calleigh: Eric, help me out here.

Delko: Okay. Colton, give me the diary.

Colton: *hands over diary*

Delko: *flips page* Ooh there's a page about me in here.

Katie: OH MY GOD! ERIC!

Calleigh: *grabs diary* Enough.

Katie: Give it.

Calleigh: Not until you promise to behave.

Katie: I'm not two years old.

Calleigh: You're acting like it.

Katie: Give me my diary! *stomps*

Calleigh: *crosses arms*

Katie: ...Please.

Calleigh: If you insist. *hands over diary*

Katie: *hugs diary*

Colton: Yeah well that's the last you're ever gonna see of it because I'm gonna burn it.

Katie: Good, then no one can read it.

Colton: I'll read it first.

Katie: JERK!

Colton: B-

Katie: Don't you dare.

Colton: Sorry.

Calleigh: Be nice to each other.

Delko: Yeah, you should act more like Calleigh and I.

Katie: ...How. You guys barely say anything to each other.

Delko: Exactly.

Miami Lab

Josh: *runs in* HEY!

Speed: *lifts head*

Josh: You're here. Big brother. My favorite brother. My only brother.

Speed: What do you want.

Josh: I have a court date.

Speed: And?

Josh: And I need to leave the kids with you.

Speed: How many do you have?

Josh: I left Alena with Anni's mom.

Speed: That's...Cruel.

Josh: She loves kids. So I brought Ethan and Cait over. You mind watching them for a while?

Speed: *sigh* Are they going to pee anywhere?

Josh: *lifts brow* No, they come fully lab-trained.

Speed: Good because I'm not cleaning any messes.

Josh: CAIT!

Cait: *runs in* Yeah?

Josh: Stay here. I'm going to put Ethan in the lounge.

Cait: ...Do I have to stay here?

Josh: Yes.

Cait: Why?

Josh: Because I said so.

Cait: But daddy, this lab is too clean.

Josh: So mess it up and make uncle Tim clean it up.

Cait: *smiles* Okay.

Josh: Good girl. *leaves*

Speed: *rolls eyes*

Cait: *grabs beaker*

Speed: Don't.

Cait: ...*puts beaker down*

Speed: *writing things down*

Cait: *places hands behind back, rocks back and forth on feet* So um...Uncle Timmy?

Speed: yeah.

Cait: Do you have food?

Speed: *frowns* No. This is a lab.

Cait: Oh. Do you have any drinks?

Speed: You're a little young for alcohol.

Cait: *giggles*

Speed: *frown fades*

Cait: *runs over* I gots a question.

Speed: Go for it.

Cait: How come you sit here all day? Don't you do anything?

Speed: *smirks* Right now I'm doing paperwork.

Cait: Oh. Why?

Speed: It's part of my job.

Cait: What's the other part?

Speed: Catching criminals.

Cait: Oh. So you help people.

Speed: Yeah.

Cait: And do paperwork.

Speed: It's not always glamorous.

Cait: *giggles*

Speed: *flips page*

Cait: Can I help?

Speed: This is a job for grown-ups.

Cait: *places hands on hips* I'm not stupid.

Speed: I didn't say you were.

Cait: ....Daddy never lets me help him.

Speed: Nice try.

Cait: *sigh*

Speed: Why don't you go play with your brother.

Cait: He's not very fun.

Speed: Why not?

Cait: He's a boy. They're icky.

Speed: I'm a guy.

Cait: You're my uncle, you're not a guy.

Speed: *smiles*

Cait: *grabs pen* I wanna help.

Speed: *hands over paper* Put a big 'X' on the bottom lines of those pages.

Cait: *lifts brow* How's that gonna help?

Speed: It will, trust me.

Cait: *scribbling on page*

Speed: *staring at Cait*

Cait: *scratches head* This is hard work.

Speed: Someone has to do it.

Cait: *looks at Speed* I got a question.

Speed: Shoot.

Cait: When am I gonna get to see Lori again?

Speed: ...She went home.

Cait: To Columbo?

Speed: Colombia.

Cait: Oh. How come she won't live in Miami?

Speed: I don't know.

Cait: OMG! Guess what happened on the bus at school the other day!

Speed: What.

Cait: Some kid spit a spit ball in my hair!

Speed: Why did he do that?

Cait: He's an icky boy.

Speed: *nods*

Cait: And then he made fun of me and called me blondie.

Speed: Kids are cruel.

Cait: He's always making fun of me. He said my accent was funny.

Speed: Well you tell him he smells like a monkey's butt and you'll be even.

Cait: *giggles*

Speed: Nah, he just likes you.

Cait: *crinkles nose* EW.

Speed: Don't worry about it.

Cait: I got a question.

Speed: You have a lot of questions.

Cait: Since daddy used to be gay, how come you aren't?

Speed: Um...Well it's really a matter of how you feel.

Cait: Oh. I got a question.

Speed: *sigh*

Cait: Um....Okay I forgot what it was. But it was a good question.

Speed: I'm sure it was.

Cait: OH! Wait...No. *rubs chin* Hmm....I knew there was somethin'.

Speed: It's okay. I think you've asked enough questions for today.

Cait: Yup.

Speed: *writing things down*

Cait: *stares at table*

Speed: *flips page*

Cait: ...

Speed: *writing*

Cait: *starts to cry*

Speed: *looks at Cait* What, what's wrong?

Cait: *crying* I miss mummy.

Speed: *sigh* She'll be home soon.

Cait: *crying*

Speed: *looks around*

Cait: *wiping nose*

Speed: You want...A hug or something?

Cait: *hugs Speed's arm*

Speed: ...Oh...Kay.

Cait: *sniffs*

Hummerhome

Katie: COLTON! *slaps Colton*

Colton: OW! OW! STOP IT!

Katie: GO AWAY!

Colton: Stop hitting me!

Calleigh: BOTH OF YOU KNOCK IT OFF!

Delko: YEAH! What she said!

Carly: *rubs temples* It's just always the same thing with those two. I'm going to have a hernia.

Katie: Oh pfft like we all haven't had one before.

Colton: You've probably had billions.

Katie: You're goin' down busta. *attacks Colton*

Colton: AH! *falls over*

Katie: MRAWGH! *slapping Colton*

Colton: OW! OW! OW!

Katie: TEEHEE!

Colton: GET LOST!

Katie: NEVER!

Delko: Get a room already.

Colton: NO! I LIKE CALLEIGH! C-A-L-L-E-I-G-H!

Calleigh: *smiles*

Katie: WHAT?

Colton: What?

Katie: What? Wh-What? Who said what?

Colton: You said what.

Katie: I didn't say what.

Colton: Yes you did say what.

Katie: Yeah well I'll tell you what's what, mister what what.

Colton: *lifts brow*

Katie: WHAT!

TBC...............
 
The update was awesome! I thought that the whole story that Lori was really Carlos' daughter was malarky.. Speed's written all over that girl...

Ha, I loved the fact that Speed would rather leave the two town idiots to play off each other *sorry to those who love ryan*. That seemed so..speedish..lol

And did I hear hummerhome??? *grabs chair* I'm waiting patiently..lol

And Katie..you rock too! ;)

Great job, Geni...and yes, congrats on graduating!
 
Wow... I didn't have to wait long. :)

Wait a minute. How come the kid acted more grown up than the grown ups?

What What! I loved it Geni! Perfect after the drama.

Speed's good with kids, he should just stop trying to deny it. He loves them, and he's good with them.

Now getting to sleep for work is going to be even harder. ;)
 
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