CSI:Miami Road Trip #11: We Ain't Comin' Home

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Ok I love the Bob Jole and the Shark attack that was pretty funny! but i don't hink Tom did it ! So thats all i have to say!

Great update!
 
Mucho thanks for the reviews! :adore:

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New York, Empire State Building, boardroom, 11am

Kimberly: Okay, next.

Executive: Profits are up 10%.

Kimberly: Excellent.

Executive: But employee morale is down 30%.

Kimberly: ...You people poll the employees to see how happy they are?

Executive: Yeah.

Kimberly: What's the problem?

Executive: They don't feel appreciated by the CEO.

Kimberly: *lifts brow* That's a stupid reason. Scott and I appreciate them plenty.

Executive: Um...no, they feel appreciated by Mister Finch. It's just you they have a problem with.

Kimberly: *looks at Scott* What gives? Why do they like you more than me?

Scott: Have you thought about...interacting with the employees a little more?

Kimberly: Why?

Scott: It shows you care about them.

Kimberly: But I don't care about them.

Scott: *smiles* That might not be the best way to start boosting morale.

Kimberly: I'm not very good with PR.

Scott: We could do it together. Especially when we visit the other branches.

Kimberly: I'm not visiting the other branches. I don't get paid 80 million dollars a year to talk to ungrateful paper pushers. They should be happy they have a job.

Scott: Wrong.

Kimberly: Excuse me?

Scott: Don't even go down that road. That's disrespectful.

Kimberly: *frowns* What did I tell you about this behaviour?

Scott: *looks around*

Everyone: *staring at Scott*

Scott: You said not to question you again.

Kimberly: That's right. Are you going to be a good dog and do what I say now?

Scott: *stares at Kimberly*

Everyone: ...

Scott: Yes ma'am.

Kimberly: Excellent. *looks around, smiles* What's next?

Executive: Nothing else, ma'am.

Kimberly: Good. Then you're all excused. Scott, you stay behind.

Everyone leaves

Kimberly: You need to learn to listen, Scott. Obey. You're not in charge of this company.

Scott: *staring down at table*

Kimberly: *pulls chair closer* You want to keep your job, don't you?

Scott: *nods*

Kimberly: Then recognize your place. *places hand on Scott's cheek*

Scott: *turns head away*

Kimberly: *slaps Scott across the face*

Scott: *winces*

Kimberly: Who's in charge?

Scott: *closes eyes* ...You are.

Kimberly: *smirks* Good boy. *stands*

Scott: *looks at Kimberly*

Kimberly: You can go.

Scott: *stands*

Kimberly: Oh and Scott? Come over to my place at lunch. We'll be having a private meeting.

Scott: I'll quit before you ever put another hand on me.

Kimberly: That's fine. I'll just tell your wife we're sleeping together.

Scott: *stares at Kimberly* Let me get this straight. You want me to sleep with you or...you'll tell my wife we're sleeping together.

Kimberly: *crosses arms* And if you quit, I'll tell her the same.

Scott: I'm sure the Board of Directors will find how you assert your power very interesting.

Kimberly: *sniffs, starts to cry*

Scott: *lifts brow*

Kimberly: *crying* I didn't know what was happening. H-He forced me, he wouldn't stop. I just wanted him to stop. I trusted him, how could he do this to me?

Scott: *blinks*

Kimberly: *smiles, wipes eyes* Pretty convincing, huh?

Scott: *frowns*

Kimberly: I wonder which one of us the Board of Directors will believe.

Scott: I could go to jail if you make an accusation like that.

Kimberly: That's not really my problem.

Scott: Why are you doing this?

Kimberly: It's fun.

Scott: Okay. Go ahead and tell my wife because 1 of 2 things will happen. She'll either kill me or she'll kill you and your odds aren't that great.

Kimberly: *stares at Scott*

Scott: *walks away*

Kimberly: *shakes head*

Scott: *walks back* Oh and by the way, these meetings are usually recorded so that the minutes get taken down properly. Guess who got to bring the recorder this week.

Kimberly: *frowns*

Scott: Oops. *walks away*

Kimberly: *runs*

Middle of office area

Kimberly: GIVE ME THAT RECORDER, FINCH!

Everyone: *looks over*

Scott: Sorry, can't do that.

Kimberly: *grabs Scott's shirt*

Scott: *turns around* You have 2 seconds to let go of me or I knock you on your ass.

Kimberly: You won't hit a woman.

Scott: You really want to test that theory?

Kimberly: *swings fist*

Scott: *twists Kimberly's arm, drops her*

Kimberly: *screams*

Executive: *runs over*

Scott: *lifts head*

Executive: Are you going to have security call the police?

Scott: No. I'm not pressing charges. *stands*

Kimberly: *stands, rubs arm* You broke my arm, you bastard. I want him arrested.

Executive: *looks around* We all saw self-defense.

People nod

Kimberly: *looks at Scott*

Scott: Still want to sleep with me?

Kimberly: *frowning*

Miami Lab, 2pm

Katie: *walks in* Hey.

Speed: *nods*

Katie: You paged me?

Speed: Valera got a match on the DNA from the rope used to tie you. *hands over paper*

Katie: *looks down* Deputy Alex White. *sigh* Thanks.

Speed: I also wanted to...apologize for what I said to you last night.

Katie: *lifts head* You remember?

Speed: Bits and pieces. But I was drunk and you were there so I can't imagine I said anything good.

Katie: *smirks* It's okay. At least I got the truth.

Speed: What did I say?

Katie: I'm just an outdoor slut to you that's great on her hands and knees.

Speed: *stares at Katie*

Katie: *lowers head* It's not the worst thing you've said to me by any means but hey *scoffs* far be it from me to think you'll ever actually respect me.

Speed: You put up with me for so many years. How can I not respect that?

Katie: I was afraid of you, I wasn't 'putting up with you'.

Speed: *lowers eyes*

Katie: You and Anni though...you guys seem real happy. I mean, I know you were smashed and everything but I'd hadn't seen you smile like that in a long time.

Speed: Katie...I can't take back what I did to you but I can keep myself from making the same mistakes with Anni.

Katie: I hope so.

Speed: *grabs pipet*

Katie: What about the mistakes you made with Lori?

Speed: *looks at Katie*

Katie: I know Anni wants a child. Badly.

Speed: I have enough kids.

Katie: She doesn't.

Speed: Did she recruit you to talk to me about this or something?

Katie: Tim...I understand that because you've lost children, you don't to have to go through that again but...Anni kind of has a time limit, y'know?

Speed: I'm aware.

Katie: At least think about it.

Speed: Okay.

Katie: Tim.

Speed: I do my best thinking when I'm left alone.

Katie: Fine. Work it out with the GCMS, it hasn't had a good debate in a while. *walks away*

TBC........................
 
Well I guess Scot put Kimberly in her place again! He should have jst went ahead and put her ass in jail and got it over with! Stupid bitch! I hope Lori gets a piece of her before its over!

What is Speed and Anni thinking! Another Baby ! boy thats just what Speed needs! He doesn;t even like the kids he has now and hes thinking about another one! Anni isn't in the best of health it might not be the wisest dessision to have another child! It could kill her!.

great Update Geni!
 
:wtf:Kim...the tart really needs to be prosecuted to the fullest. I'm glad Scott had the recorder, or that could've gone so much worst. If I didn't like her then...NOW...she's a skank to the nth degree that only skanks could love. I think a little visit from Lori should do the trick, to make sure that Kimmy doesn't go all homicidal and try and kill the Finchs. I'm sure Lori can make sure of that, :D:devil:

It was big of Speed to respond and apologize to Katie, because although hilarious, he did say some harsh things. It was equally big of Katie to acknowledge that Speed and Anni seem to be happy, and she even vouched for Anni to have a baby. I think they should do it. What's life without chances and fulfillment? I happen to think that Speed can redeem himself as a father if he truly wanted to, and I honestly think with Anni, he does. -Whew...I went all anaylitcal there, didn't I? Sigmund Freud, eat your heart out.:guffaw:
 
You know, I really like Katie's last line... haha. She has a point, though. Very true.

And I like that Scott finally found a way to put Kimberly in her place! The b**ch! I hope he really did break her arm... hahaha.

And I really like a drunk, giggly Speed... he's awesome. :D

Great updates!
 
Thanks for the reviews! :D

I love your analytical side, Anni. :lol: :)

Mwahahaha.

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Brooklyn, NY, brownstone, 4pm

Lori: *zips up jacket* Ergh, doesn't this bloody state ever get warm? *stirs sauce*

Steph: *runs over* MOMMA MOMMA MOMMA MOMMA!

Lori: What?

Steph: DADDY'S HOME!

Lori: *looks over at window* So he is.

Steph: *runs over to door*

Lori: *smirks*

Scott: *steps inside, shuts door*

Steph: DADDY!

Scott: *smiles* Hey! *picks up Steph*

Steph: *wraps arms around Scott's neck*

Lori: Scott, I need your taste buds.

Scott: *walks over* For what?

Lori: This sauce thingy I'm trying. *lifts spoon*

Scott: *tastes sauce*

Lori: How is it?

Scott: *coughs*

Lori: That bad?

Scott: It kind of reminds me of you. Strong and spicy.

Lori: Cute.

Scott: *removes tie* It's really hot in here.

Lori: It's cold in here.

Scott: *places Steph on floor* In Miami standards, sure.

Steph: *runs over to television, sits on floor*

Lori: How was work?

Scott: Well I think Kimberly's days as the CEO are numbered.

Lori: What happened?

Scott: The only thing that matters is I have it all on tape.

Lori: *smiles* Oooh a tape! Can I hear?

Scott: *hands over recorder*

Lori: *presses 'Play'*

5 minutes later

Lori: *frowns* That BITCH!

Scott: *nods*

Lori: She pulled a me. *gasp* And you didn't fall for it. *kisses Scott's cheek* See? We're meant to be together. *smiles*

Scott: *laughs*

Lori: But you do realize this means I have to go kick her ass.

Scott: Lori, you want to stay out of prison, remember?

Lori: She was going to accuse you of rape. She needs to die.

Scott: The Board will take care of her.

Lori: Yeah in the most legal sense of the word and that's unacceptable. I want to hear her beg for her life. HEY. *grabs Scott's face* Why is your cheek bruised?

Scott: She hit me.

Lori: She did WHAT?!

Scott: Lori-

Lori: And let me guess, like the gentle soul you are, you did nothing.

Scott: Not until she swung her fist again.

Lori: Ooh what happened?

Scott: I knocked her down a peg.

Lori: With words or with these strong muscles? *smiles*

Scott: I twisted her arm and dropped her to the floor before she could get a punch in.

Lori: *smiling* And then what!

Scott: Then I let her go.

Lori: *smile fades* What the hell did you do that for? You had her.

Scott: I'm a businessman, Lori. Not a hitman.

Lori: But you could have done some serious damage! Okay, I'll show you. Hit me.

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Lori: Come on. Take a swing.

Scott: I'm not going to hit you.

Lori: I'll stop your fist miles before it even reaches my face, Scott. Just do it.

Scott: First of all, no. And secondly, double no in front of Stephanie.

Lori: *steps back* There, she can't see us now.

Scott: Lori, this is ridiculous.

Lori: You need to know what you're capable of in case of a home invasion or more slutty bosses and so far, you've got the right idea. Trust me, this is an educational exercise. You'd be surprised what the human weapon can do. So pucker up and start swingin'.

Scott: And what happens if I actually hurt you?

Lori: That's the risk the teacher takes.

Scott: Teacher.

Lori: Hey, you teach me how to do my taxes, I teach you how to take someone out. It's only fair.

Scott: I don't want to take anyone out.

Lori: C'mon, let's go. Just a couple of things and I can start the sauce over.

Scott: *sighs*

Lori: Attack me from behind. *turns around* Go.

Scott: *grabs Lori*

Lori: *stomps Scott's foot, kicks his groin*

Scott: AH!

Lori: *shifts leg around Scott, grabs his legs, flips him into floor*

Scott: UGH!

Lori: That one's good if you're trying to take down someone who's twice your size. Most of that person's weight will be resting on your upper thigh area which distributes the load. The key is leverage.

Scott: Leverage.

Lori: *grabs Scott's arm*

Scott: *stands*

Lori: Whenever you're engaged with someone, you should follow-up your high hits with a low hit. For example. *elbows Scott in the jaw*

Scott: AGH!

Lori: *knees Scott in the side*

Scott: OOF!

Lori: It changes the focus.

Scott: *holding face, leaning against table*

Lori: Now, considering you're not a 90 pound woman, you'll probably find this next one a lot more useful for incapacitating your attacker. It's also great for stealth purposes. Get over here.

Scott: *walks over*

Lori: *steps behind Scott, grabs his windpipe, squeezes*

Scott: *grabs at Lori*

Lori: *twists Scott's head, covers his face*

Scott: *falls to knees*

Lori: *lets go*

Scott: *coughs*

Lori: And if for whatever reason the target hasn't passed out or it hasn't proved fatal, come back with *lifts knee against Scott's temple* a blow to the side of the head while they're down. You can do it with your knee or *lowers knee, lifts side of fist against Scott's head* your hand.

Scott: *looks at Lori*

Lori: Next, y-

Scott: No no no. *stands* Stop.

Lori: Why?

Scott: I appreciate your knowledge but it's hurting a lot more than it's helping at the moment. *rubs windpipe*

Lori: Try it on me now. The first one I taught you.

Scott: No.

Lori: Yes. *stands behind Scott, reaches forward, grabs the back of Scott's head*

Scott: Lori, stop.

Lori: *pushes forward* You'd better relieve the tension before your neck breaks.

Scott: *flips Lori*

Lori: *falls onto floor*

Scott: *turns around*

Lori: *smiles* Very good.

Scott: Lori, this is dangerous. *takes Lori's hand*

Lori: *stands* Nonsense, I know what I'm doing.

Scott: You need to be licensed to teach this kind of thing.

Lori: But we haven't even gotten into defense against weapons yet.

Scott: Why don't we tackle something in my area of expertise first. *points to stove* That sauce.

Lori: Can't we just order a pizza?

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Lori: Ugh. *walks over to stove*

TBC.....................
 
HAHAHAHAh Self Defense by Lori Finch...I shudder to think .... It's a good thing that Scotty's rough and rugged where it counts, lol. Lori was kicking his ass though... At least she's got some good pointers. Go figure, being a killing machine actually pays off...

Excellent update!

ps...I knew Lori would want to bitch slap Kimmy...She better not be caught out on the street. :D
 
I still think Lori should kill Kim... hahaha

That was probably one of the most equally sexy and educational scenes... I like it. :)

Great update! :D
 
:lol:

Thanks for the lovely reviews! :)

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Miami Crime Lab, Reception

Riley: *steps up to desk*

Woman: May I help you?

Riley: I'm looking for Tim Speedle.

Woman: What case is this regarding?

Riley: Oh, no. I'm not here about a case. He's my biological father.

Woman: *stares at Riley* ...I'll need to see some ID.

Riley: *hands over wallet*

Woman: *looks down* Riley Levine.

Riley: Uh, actually it's Harrison. I used my mother--well my adoptive mother's maiden name for my business and it kind of stuck. *laughs* LA's a crazy place.

Woman: Uh huh. *grabs phone, presses buttons* Have a seat.

Riley: Right. *walks over to bench, sits*

15 minutes later

Speed: *walks around corner*

Riley: *stands, smiles* Tim Speedle?

Speed: Yeah.

Riley: *extends hand* Riley Harrison.

Speed: *places hands in pockets* What can I do for you?

Riley: *lowers hand* You don't remember me?

Speed: *stares at Riley* ...You, you're...Riley, Riley?

Riley: *smiles*

Speed: *extends hand* It's...uh, it's good to see you. How are you?

Riley: *grabs Speed's hand* I'm doing well. *lets go* I was here a little while ago promoting my clothing line and I decided to come back and visit someone but I see she's no longer here so I thought why not visit Tim. I'm already all the way out here, y'know? I hope I'm not out of line.

Speed: No, not not at all. I appreciate you coming down here. I was definitely...not expecting it but it's a nice surprise.

Riley: *laughs* Well I like to keep people on their feet.

Speed: Why don't we take a walk.

Riley: Sure.

Atrium

Speed: *sits*

Riley: *sits*

Speed: The last time I saw you, you were...

Riley: *smiles* A kid?

Speed: *nods* Yeah.

Riley: After we last spoke, I went to live with my adoptive mother's sister. *scoffs* Well, maybe I shouldn't call her 'adoptive', considering y'all didn't exactly volunteer me for adoption.

Speed: *looks down at floor*

Riley: Anyway, I finished school and got to go to university and shortly thereafter, I started my own clothing line and business. It's been quite successful here in the US.

Speed: I'm happy to hear things worked out for you.

Riley: I've been fortunate. *lowers head* But to tell you the truth, I have an alterior motive for coming here.

Speed: Oh?

Riley: It's been a long time and...I want to finally get to know my real parents while I still can. I guess being in Miami a little while ago pushed me to realize it could be a possibility. I-I mean if that's okay with you.

Speed: *stares at Riley* ...Absolutely. Yes.

Riley: *smiles* Oh good. You have no idea how many times I rehearsed that in the car on the way here. Thank you.

Speed: *nods*

Riley: ...Is my mother still...in the picture?

Speed: Katie and I are divorced. But we're still friends. In fact, she works here part time.

Riley: You remarried?

Speed: That's right.

Riley: Do you have anymore kids?

Speed: Lori. She's a few years younger than you.

Riley: Damnit I knew it.

Speed: Excuse me?

Riley: I met Lori. *laughs* The way she reacted when I said your name...the way she spoke, how she looked...and it was almost as if she knew who I was. I should have said something but she got too plastered before I could. I left her my number but she never called.

Speed: Yeah communication isn't her thing.

Riley: *smiles* Oh but she was a sweet girl. Bit of a temper though.

Speed: *nods* Sounds about right.

Riley: Tell me more about my mother.

Speed: ...Would you like to meet her?

Riley: *smiling* You think it would be okay?

Speed: It would keep her busy.

Riley: Awesome! Let's do it!

Speed: I'll go get her. *stands*

Riley: Great.

Speed: *walks away*

Riley: *straightens out hair*

20 minutes later

Katie: *walking, whispering* She'd better not be another screwup.

Speed: She's not.

Katie: She better not be ugly either.

Speed: Quiet.

Riley: *stands, smiles* HI!

Katie: *blinks*

Speed: Katie, this is Riley Harrison.

Katie: *stares at Riley*

Speed: Good luck. *walks away*

Riley: *grabs Katie's hand* It's so great to meet you. I-I mean we've probably met, 'cause you carried me for 9 months and everything but oh gosh, I'm sorry I'm rambling here, I'm just so excited to see my birth mother. You look even more beautiful than I imagined.

Katie: *lifts brow* You sure you're my kid?

Riley: *laughs* Yes. Please, sit.

Katie: *sits on bench*

Riley: *sits*

Katie: Tim told me a little bit about you, what you've been doin' and stuff.

Riley: Are you both police officers?

Katie: Speed's a cop. I'm...well I'm a CSI, sort of. I specialize in forensic database recovery.

Riley: Oh wow that sounds really interesting. So you're the person they go to, to find e-mails and child porn and stuff.

Katie: Pretty much.

Riley: How did you get into the field?

Katie: Well I studied data recovery in college and joined up with the team about a year after that. That's when I met Tim.

Riley: *smiles* And you two fell in love.

Katie: *laughs* Uh, I'd say I did before he ever batted an eye at me but yeah, we got together a few months after we met. Married a year after that and had you.

Riley: Y'all must have been devestated when you thought I'd died.

Katie: I was. Tim um...he didn't talk much about it. I think your disappearance hit him pretty hard. He's never really been the same since.

Riley: How so?

Katie: He started drinking pretty heavily. And there was a lot of substance abuse as well. Our marriage wasn't exactly rainbows and kittens as you can guess.

Riley: *nods*

Katie: But nowadays, he's...he's a little closer to the person he was when we first met.

Riley: He seems very nice.

Katie: *laughs* I guess it depends on your definition of 'nice'.

Trace Lab

Speed: *staring through microscope*

Anni: *walks in* Hey, Eric wanted me to pass this along.

Speed: *grabs folder* Thanks.

Anni: What are you workin' on?

Speed: Evidence.

Anni: Obviously. *sits in chair* I heard Katie finally met up with Riley.

Speed: Mhm.

Anni: Katie's really lucky. First Lori came back and now Riley's back.

Speed: Uh huh.

Anni: Kind of makes me wish Jake was still out there.

Speed: *adjusts scope*

Anni: ...Couldn't we at least try?

Speed: *lifts head, pulls folder over*

Anni: *snatches folder*

Speed: *looks at Anni*

Anni: *stares at Speed*

Speed: *nods*

Anni: *smiles* Seriously?

Speed: *smirks* Yeah.

Anni: *smiling, hugs Speed*

TBC............................
 
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Oh wow... Riley's really aiming high, wanting to meet Speed and Katie. She seems grounded at least... At least she's not going in with an expectation, she was prepared for anything, which was a good thing. I'm glad that it's happening the way it is.

And SWEET! Speed and Anni are trying for a baby. I think Speed's really lost for Anni, but its cute to see. I think this time, the same mistakes won't be made.

Awesome update Geni!
 
Tune in next week for another Episode of LORI FINCH ! I'M GONNA KICK BOOTY! Next week Lori wil be teaching scott a Pivet 4 take down only mastered by the WWF's Finest wrestlers! Damn Lori just beat the shit out of Scott! For a min. I thought she might have some snarky remark for him like, you better damn well remember that your married to me and I will kick you ass if you even look at her the wrong way! Lol! but I guess she trust him.

On the flip side!

Yeah Rileys back! I think she alot like Katie with all her excitment and being all hyper to meet her mother. At least shes come back and is will to be reaquanted with them. Now if we can just get her and Tom together things will be normal again! lol! In a purely Speedle kinda way.

I really Don't know if a baby is gonna suvive being in the Speedle house! It might look good in the sort sence but long term I'm afraid that its another disaster waiting to happen!

Great update Geni!
 
Thanks for the reviews! :) :adore:

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Miami Lab, 9pm

Katie: *walks over* Um hi. Our daughter is nuts.

Speed: *lifts head* Which one?

Katie: The first one.

Speed: What happened?

Katie: She's just so...intense. She wanted to know my whole life story and then she wanted to know yours and then she didn't shut up about her own.

Speed: She's excited.

Katie: At least Lori got tired of me after 10 minutes. This girl doesn't stop. *slumps into chair* Yeesh. So Anni told me you guys are gonna have a baby.

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: Uh oh, you're not?

Speed: Does Anni have to tell you everything?

Katie: Well yeah. It's something to rub in my face. *smiles* But I find comfort in the fact that we never really had to try for kids -- you couldn't get enough of me. *winks*

Speed: *shakes head, pulls papers over*

Katie: *looks at watch* Anni's probably waiting.

Speed: Mind your own business, Katie.

Katie: Pfft, you don't really want a kid, Tim. You're just doing it to shut her up and get some ass at the same time.

Speed: Actually, I'm doing it because maybe this time...things will turn out differently.

Katie: You mean you'll actually care about this one?

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: You've screwed up with every child you've ever had, what makes you think this'll be any different?

Speed: It just will be.

Katie: *stares at Speed*

Speed: *writing*

Katie: ...I really don't think you'll ever be the father you want to be.

Speed: *stops writing*

Katie: *stands, walks away*

Speed: *staring down at paper*

Condo, dining table, 2 weeks later

Anni: *poking at food*

Katie: *chewing on peas*

Speed: *drinking water*

Lori: So...we all look happy this evening.

Katie: Oh we're pleasant. How's New York?

Lori: Rainy but otherwise great.

Katie: Having anymore kids?

Speed: *frowns*

Lori: *looks at Scott* I guess we'd like to...eventually.

Katie: That's good. Scott's a great father. Unlike some people.

Speed: *staring at Katie*

Anni: *sigh*

Katie: He's not an asshole. And he actually cares about his own children. He doesn't go and have more kids with his flavour of the year because she told him to.

Anni: *frowns*

Lori: Is there something going on between the 3 of you that we don't know about?

Speed: No. Eat your dinner.

Lori: *picks up fork*

Katie: Showing off his less than adequate parental skills I see.

Anni: *slams knife onto table* Would you stop already? Tim and I are having a child and it's none of your business how, when and why so suck it up.

Katie: You're just trying to show me up to prove he loves you more.

Speed: Whoa, hold on a second. Katie, you were the one that encouraged me to talk to Anni about this kid thing.

Katie: Yeah well I didn't think you'd actually agree to it! You're such an idiot! You were supposed to realize that you'd end up making all the same mistakes and that you should rectify the ones you made with your CURRENT children! Ie: LORI and RILEY. Not the fruits of Anni's womb!

Anni: Why can't you just accept that Tim and I want a life and children of our own? OH wait, that's because you can't let him go! A baby from me would mean he'd pay less attention to you and your kids, right? You've got such an obsessive mentality and it needs to stop.

Katie: You're probably too dried up and wizzled to have a kid anyway.

Speed: Katie, that's enough.

Katie: Either that or Tim can't get it up anymore. Maybe it's both. Hey Lori, what do you think?

Lori: I think I need an aspirine.

Katie: If he has a kid, you'll go on the back burner. Everything will become Anni and the kid and you'll be forgotten about until he manages to kill that one.

Lori: Mom, it really doesn't matter to me.

Katie: You know, when we divorced and you were still living with me, he never paid a penny of child support. Not to mention when I moved away when I was pregnant with you because he rearranged my face. I guess he figured the black eyes were payment enough, right?

Speed: You could have gone to court to get the money.

Katie: Oh so it's MY fault you were a deadbeat.

Speed: Fine, you want the money? I'll pay it. How much do you want?

Anni: Tim-

Speed: No. I'll admit that I made mistakes and I should have manned up to support my children. So how much is it going to take? I'll cut you a cheque right here.

Katie: 5 grand.

Speed: 5 what? Lori was barely living with you when you left me!

Katie: Yeah well she stole a lot of my stuff and since you were the one that sent her to Colombia, you're responsible for the way she turned out.

Speed: That's bullshit.

Katie: Yeah. It is. Why are you perfectly fine with messing up my kids but you want Anni's to be the epitome of awesome?

Lori: Mother, knock it the fuck off and just let Dad and Anni be happy! If they want to start a family, that's their right. Leave them alone already.

Katie: *looks at Anni* I hope your kids all come out contorted and retarded.

Anni: *stands, leaves*

Lori: *places napkin onto table, walks away*

Katie: Yeah! Run away! The IQ points at the table just raised!

Speed: Why can't you just STOP!

Katie: NEVER!

Speed: I'M SICK OF THIS! I ALREADY TOLD YOU I CAN'T FIX THE PAST!

Katie: *stands* THE SECOND YOU KNOCK HER UP, YOU'LL FORGET IT EVER HAPPENED!

Speed: *stands* HOW CAN I FORGET SOMETHING YOU BRING UP EVERY FIVE MINUTES! *grabs Katie by the shirt*

Katie: DON'T TOUCH ME!

Scott: *steps between Katie and Speed* Chill out.

Speed: *looks at Scott*

Katie: *frowning*

Speed: *steps back*

Upstairs, bedroom

Anni: *crying*

Lori: *wraps arm around Anni*

Anni: Why does she always do this!

Lori: I don't know.

Anni: *sniffling* She had her chance, she had her family. It's my turn! With my husband!

Lori: *sigh*

Speed: *steps in*

Lori: *looks at Speed*

Speed: *nods*

Lori: *stands, walks away*

Speed: *walks over, sits*

Anni: *sniffing* Why-why would she say all those nice things and then turn it completely around?

Speed: She's upset that she's not the entire focus. She's kind of like Lori sometimes...well, unstable Lori.

Anni: *cries harder* I want her out of my home!

Speed: *wraps arms around Anni*

Anni: *lies head on Speed's chest, crying*

Downstairs, kitchen

Lori: *drags Katie over*

Katie: Hey, watch it. This shirt's new.

Lori: You need to stop this.

Katie: *rolls eyes*

Lori: I'm serious. This is getting ridiculous. You need to stop crawling all over Dad and get a life.

Katie: You hate Anni and now you're on their side?

Lori: I don't hate Anni.

Katie: You did when she and your father first got together.

Lori: Yeah. I was 16. Of course I was angry that my father was screwing some woman other than my mother. But I got over it and now Anni and I are cool.

Katie: Betrayer.

Lori: Grow up and leave him alone.

Katie: No.

Lori: Then don't expect to see me again 'cause I've had it. I mean, I've been stuck between this pathetic obsession for years and I can't even begin to imagine how Anni's feeling. *walks away*

Katie: HEY! GET BACK HERE!

Living room

Katie: *runs over* I have EVERY right to see my granddaughter! You can't keep her from me!

Lori: *picks up purse* Bye Mom.

Scott: *opens door*

Lori: *walks away*

Katie: SCOTT!

Scott: I'm sorry. I hope you get some help. *walks away*

Katie: UGH! *runs over to purse, lifts out gun*

TBC..............................
 
:wtf:...*lifts out gun???* Has Katie lost her mind??? She's being way harsh, it's like she's out for blood now. Why is it that she just can't accept that it's over between them, both had made mistakes, and neither one can take part in this toxic relationship. Ugh...Katie went there when she told Anni that she hoped the kid came out contorted and retarded...Hell hath no fury apparently...

I really do feel bad for Anni, to once have had such a great relationship with Katie to be reduced down to this...It sucks! But it makes for great drama!

Excellent update, and seriously...a cliffhanger???:lol:
It only means one thing... I'm desperate for an update!:p
 
See I told you If you try to bring a new Baby into the Speedle house it will be bad jew Jew! Whoo Katie why don't you tell Anni & Speed how you really feel about them, and lets not suger coat it ether! At least Lori & Scott were Smart enough to Exit stage right because it looks like Katies fixin to turn somebody from a rooster to a hen with one shot!

I just hope Speed can get the gun away in time and knowone gets hurt further! Maybe super Scott can come back because he left something save the day!

Great update Geni!
 
Ah yes the evil cliffhanger. :devil: :lol:

Thanks so much for the reviews!

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Condo, upstairs

Katie: *runs in, lifts gun*

Speed: *looks over, stands* What the hell are you doing?

Katie: *pulls trigger*

BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM

Outside

Lori: *opens car door, looks up*

Scott: *turns around*

Lori: Oh my God. *runs up to condo*

Inside condo

Anni: *screaming, holding side*

Speed: *shoves Katie against wall* WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!

Katie: *drops gun, slides down wall*

Speed: *runs over to Anni*

Anni: *looks down at hand*

Speed: *grabs sheet, covers Anni's side*

Anni: UGH!

Lori: *runs in*

Speed: Lori, get her out of here.

Lori: *looks at Katie*

Scott: *runs over*

Speed: Scott, call 9-1-1.

Scott: *pulls out cellphone*

Parkinglot, condo, 2 months later

Speed: *opens Hummer door*

Anni: *shifts feet over*

Speed: *takes Anni's hand*

Anni: *steps down* Ugh. *holds side*

Speed: You okay?

Anni: *nods* Yeah, I *winces* I just have to get into a groove here.

Speed: Maybe the doctor should have waited a little while longer to release you.

Anni: I don't think I'd be able to take another 2 months in that hell hole. Rehab this, exercise that, ick.

Speed: *smirks*

Anni: OH but some good news. In a few more months, we can try for a kid. Turns out, Katie sucks at shooting.

Speed: I kind of wished she'd had my trigger finger because then you wouldn't have been in any pain at all.

Anni: *smiles* C'est la vie. Where is she anyway?

Speed: She was able to convince the DA that she was under extreme emotional duress. Basically, she had a breakdown so all she's had to do was a 4 week psych evaluation and some sessions with the department psychologist.

Anni: *nods*

Speed: *grabs Anni's arm*

Anni: *walks up steps*

Speed: *places key into door*

Anni: *grabs onto Speed*

Speed: *looks down*

Anni: Ugh, sorry.

Speed: It's okay. *pushes door open*

Inside condo

Speed: *leads Anni to couch*

Anni: *grabs onto couch, sits*

Speed: *sits*

Anni: *looks at watch* Don't you have work in an hour?

Speed: I took the week off.

Anni: *lifts head*

Speed: *pulls table over, lifts Anni's feet*

Anni: *stares at Speed*

Speed: *places pillow under Anni's feet* What would you like for lunch?

Anni: Uh...how does Burger King sound?

Speed: *looks at Anni*

Anni: I've been stuck with cruddy hospital food.

Speed: *smirks* Burger King it is. *hands over cellphone* I'll be back in 30. Call me if you need anything.

Anni: I kind of need to go to the bathroom.

Speed: *nods* Then that will be my first stop. *takes Anni's arm*

Anni: *smiles*

Brooklyn, brownstone, bedroom, 9am

Scott: *staring into mirror, trimming beard*

Lori: *walks over, looks at Scott*

Scott: You need it?

Lori: The razor?

Scott: The bathroom.

Lori: What the hell are you doing?

Scott: Trimming.

Lori: What are you wearing?

Scott: Clothes.

Lori: *lifts brow* ...Jeans...leather bomber jacket thingy...stubble? Where's my nerdy businessman husband? *looks down* Mm, nice jeans too.

Scott: *places razor onto counter* I'm only stopping by the office for a minute.

Lori: Why, you going to be late for the fashion show?

Scott: *smiles* I'm going shopping.

Lori: For what?

Scott: A barbeque.

Lori: Why?

Scott: So we can barbeque.

Lori: Don't you need a backyard for that?

Scott: We have a backyard.

Lori: We do?

Back door

Scott: *opens door*

Lori: *stares out* ...It's um...

Scott: A fixer-upper. I'm going to head over to the hardware store and order in some wood.

Lori: Why?

Scott: So I can build a deck and a shed.

Lori: *blinks* You know how to build stuff?

Scott: Well, it'll be a learning experience. *places hands on hips*

Lori: *looks at Scott*

Scott: *staring out into backyard*

Lori: You're so cute.

Scott: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *smiles*

Scott: You don't think I can do it?

Lori: *smiling* Hell it don't matter to me, I'll still get to see you out in the heat without a shirt on. Take all the time you need.

Scott: Ha. Ha.

Lori: *ruffles Scott's hair* Okay, head on out. Steph and I are going grocery shopping.

Scott: Good luck.

Lori: Hey, I used to engage combat forces from neighboring militias, I think I can handle a shopping trip with my own daughter. How hard could it be?

TBC..................................
 
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