CSI:Miami Road Trip #11: We Ain't Comin' Home

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APL Manhattan Miami, office

Scott: *writing*

Bob: *walks over* Your father's in reception. Do you want me to get rid of him? I hear the Sahara's a nice vacation spot for snakes.

Scott: *lifts head* He's here?

Bob: Yeah.

Scott: *sigh* I'll take care of it. *stands*

Bob: You want me to beat him up for you? I think I could take him.

Scott: *walks away*

Bob: *looks back* What? I could.

Reception

Henry: *leaning against counter*

Scott: *walks over*

Henry: *smiles* My boy. I knew I'd find you down here.

Scott: I thought you didn't want to see me again.

Henry: Oh we all said some stuff we didn't mean. Listen, your mother just posted bail and was released thanks to a good friend of mine so-

Scott: Mom got out.

Henry: Yes. And we want to have dinner with you tonight at your place. How would you like that?

Scott: *sigh*

Henry: Although you will have to clean your wife up. Oh, she doesn't have HIV or anything does she? I don't want to get any diseases from the food.

Scott: *stares at Henry* Why don't I invite her parents along as well. I'm sure they'd...love to meet you.

Henry: I hope they know how to conduct themselves at a formal dinner. Now Scotty, you'll need to pick up some Perrier Jouet for your mother. It's her favourite champagne.

Scott: Mother shouldn't be drinking at all.

Henry: Don't make a bunch of hooha over minute details. Let her have what she wants.

Scott: Of course. Whatever Mom wants, Mom gets.

Henry: That's the spirit. Oh and put your wife in something nice, something that leaves a little bit to the imagination *smiles* if you know what I mean. Huh?

Scott: Oh yes.

Henry: Good. *walks away*

Bob: *walks over*

Scott: *smiles, waves* I hope your elevator crashes to the ground.

Henry: *looks back* What was that? I didn't catch you.

Scott: *smiling* Can't wait for dinner.

Henry: See you tonight! *leaves*

Scott: *frowns*

Bob: Any chance I could tag along?

Scott: *shakes head, walks away*

Gables Estates, house, bedroom, 6:30pm

Lori: I'm not wearing that.

Scott: It's just a dress.

Lori: I'm not going to cater to what your father wants.

Scott: Actually, he wanted you in something a bit sluttier.

Lori: Wonderful.

Scott: It's just for tonight and besides, your parents are here so it's not like you're all alone.

Lori: Why did you invite him?

Scott: He invited himself.

Lori: You're such a pushover. *puts on earrings* I swear, if he calls me 'Trailer Trash' one more time, I'm going to beat his First-Class face in. And I hope you sent Steph to Josh's place, I don't want your mother within a thousand feet of her.

Scott: I did. *lifts dress*

Lori: *frowns* I'm doing it for you, not for them. *grabs dress*

Scott: Thank you.

Dining room, 7:23pm

Doris: Speedle...that name is familiar. Do I know your mother?

Speed: Yes.

Doris: *taps chin* Did we attend the same highschool?

Speed: I doubt it.

Doris: Just as well. *looks at Katie* ...Charmed.

Katie: *lifts brow*

Lori: Why don't we all have a seat. Scott's prepared a wonderful dinner.

Doris: *looks at Lori* Scott's cooking? No no no, that should have been your job. Scotty works very hard to provide for you, the least you could do is please him.

Lori: *frowns* Oh believe me. I'm well-versed at pleasing men.

Speed: *grabs Lori's shoulder* Let's sit.

7:40pm

Doris: All the girls at the country club were so glad to see me again. I have to tell you, prison is certainly not up on creature comforts. It was a dreadful place. There were lesbians there.

Henry: How awful.

Doris: Cruel and unusual punishment is more like it. *looks at Lori* Napkin on your lap, dear.

Lori: *frowns, slides napkin into lap*

Doris: *looks at Katie* You said earlier you were White, not Speedle. Why is that?

Katie: ...Tim and I are divorced.

Doris: How shameful. No wonder your daughter is mentally ill.

Lori: *stabs chicken with knife*

Doris: Children need a stable foundation. It's why Scotty's well-balanced.

Scott: *staring at plate*

Henry: It's interesting how two people come to be together. My Scotty was on vacation, *looks at Speed* your daughter was in Miami, th-

Scott: I wasn't on vacation.

Henry: *looks at Scott*

Scott: I was in therapy.

Henry: *lifts brow* That's impossible. My son doesn't need therapy.

Scott: I met Lori in a Psychiatric and Rehabilitation facility on Miami Beach.

Henry: What the devil are you talking about? Is this some kind of joke?

Scott: No.

Doris: Scott, you're confused. You were visiting your unstable wife.

Scott: I was actually there before she arrived. I'd been there for over 6 weeks.

Doris: ...Why? You had a perfect life.

Scott: *scoffs* Right. *digs at potatoes*

Henry: Your wife is feeding you lies again, isn't she. She's brainwashing you into believing these hideously false stories. *squints* Is she drugging you?

Doris: Before you know it, she'll have you in a cult.

Katie: No one's in a cult and Lori's not drugging or brainwashing anyone.

Doris: Perhaps you're the one that started this whole thing. Surely your daughter wouldn't have turned out so terribly had you been a competant mother.

Katie: ...Excuse me?

Doris: Now my Scotty is left to pick up the pieces. *looks at Scott* Isn't that right? You've had to take precious time out of your life to teach her how to be a proper woman. A controlled woman.

Lori: *staring at table*

Katie: Lori doesn't need anyone to 'control' her and I don't think Scott's doing that.

Henry: We all know if my son wasn't here to make sure she's behaving herself, she'd be out there like a jungle animal.

Katie: HEY. *stands* Y-

Speed: *grabs Katie's arm* We're not making assumptions about your family and we would appreciate the same, if you wouldn't mind. Now let's move on.

Henry: What do you do for a living? Waste management?

Speed: *stares at Henry* ...Police officer, actually. I'm also a Crime Scene Investigator and so is Katie.

Henry: I see they're letting just about anybody on the force these days.

Doris: *giggles, drinks champagne*

Scott: They help people and they love what they do.

Henry: Admirable. It's a shame they couldn't help their own.

Katie: We're supposed to be moving on. Remember?

Henry: Sweetie, women don't tell me what to do. Okay? So just zip the lip until you're spoken to.

Katie: I can say whatever the hell I want to whomever the hell I want. You're no exception.

Henry: What did I just say?

Speed: You and I are going to have a very big problem in a minute if you don't back off.

Henry: Mind your manners at my son's table.

Speed: Good advice. You should take it.

Lori: *rubs forehead*

Henry: You remind me of all those prison guards. They think just because they wear a badge, they can say and do whatever they like to even the highest ranking members of society such as myself.

Speed: I didn't realize murderers were considered high up on the societal food chain.

Henry: Exterminators eliminate pest problems and they're the heroes but I rid the world of human pests and I'm suddenly a murderer.

Speed: You killed someone. Yes, you're a murderer.

Henry: I'm not sitting in a jail cell, am I?

Speed: Just because you have a good lawyer and friends, doesn't make you innocent.

Henry: Tell me something, were you imprisoned for beating your lovely ex-wife here?

Speed: *stares at Henry*

Henry: I thought not. And how about buying your daughter all the drugs in the world when she needed them? Don't consider yourself better than I am. And before you ask, I know all this because I still have connections, especially in Florida.

Speed: Really. Even retired judges?

Henry: Of course.

Speed: *nods* That's interesting.

Henry: Why?

Speed: The judge who put you away for murder was killed recently. But you wouldn't know anything about that, right?

Henry: What you're implying is preposterous.

Speed: I'm sure we'll find out for sure.

Henry: Doris, this dinner is over. *grabs Doris' hand* We're going back to the hotel.

Doris: Wait wait. *grabs champagne bottle* I'm taking this.

Henry: It's been a pleasure.

Henry/Doris leave

Speed: What an ass.

Katie: *places hand on Scott's cheek* You poor boy.

Scott: *sigh* That actually went a lot better than I was expecting.

TBC.............................
 
Ugh...the MOST horrible parents on the planet! What I would've given for that to turn into a family death match. Henry and Doris need a reality check in the worst way. Poor Scott...he's gotta call these people parents. I can't believe Lori didn't take care of things her way.

Awesome update!
 
OMG! Scott's parents need to burn in HELL! they are downright mean and evil!

I was really waiting for Speed to punch Scott's dad in the face...hell I'd do it.

Great update Geni!

Can't wait to read more :D
 
Hee! Thanks for the reviews!

:angel:

A small one!

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Gables Estates, house, bedroom, 11pm

Lori: *tosses dress* Well that was fun.

Scott: *throws shirt into basket* Yeah.

Lori: ...They were really like that when you were growing up?

Scott: *nods*

Lori: What did you do to get away from it all?

Scott: I read. Focused on school.

Lori: What about friends?

Scott: *lifts eyes* ...The first friend I ever really had was Bailey.

Lori: *nods*

Scott: ...I do miss her.

Lori: Me too.

Scott: *sits on bed*

Lori: *walks over, sits* You know, she was really pulling for us too.

Scott: *smiles*

Lori: If only she knew how far we've come.

Scott: Yeah.

Lori: You know...*lowers head* your dad was right about one thing.

Scott: *looks at Lori*

Lori: You keep my head on straight.

Scott: I happen to think you're doing just fine on your own.

Lori: *smirks*

Scott: *leans over, kisses Lori*

Lori: *closes eyes*

Scott: *stands, walks over to bathroom*

Lori: *sigh*

Biscayne Park, house, 11:30pm

Tom: *staring at television*

Anni: *walks over, sits* Still awake?

Tom: Yeah.

Anni: I could have come with you to Jersey.

Tom: *shakes head*

Anni: ...You want to talk about it?

Tom: *lies head on Anni's shoulder*

Anni: *wraps arm around Tom*

Tom: I wish I could have done more. I feel like I'm the one who ultimately pulled the trigger.

Anni: It's not your fault.

Tom: *sigh* ...You know how many times I tried to kill myself and almost succeeded?

Anni: *shakes head*

Tom: She makes one mistake and she's gone. One accident.

Anni: Doesn't seem very fair.

Tom: She was a good person.

Anni: *stares at television*

Tom: Maybe this is my punishment.

Anni: *looks at Tom*

Tom: Maybe losing all these people is what I deserve for being an asshole my whole life.

Anni: I don't believe that.

Tom: It's just a matter of time. I'll end up losing you too.

Anni: You'll never lose me, Tom.

Tom: *wraps arm around Anni*

TBC..................................
 
Poor Tom...he's got so much guilt on him. I hope he can confide in Anni- she's a great listener and a tremendous pick me up. He shouldn't shoulder the blame all by himself, it will ruin him...

Oh awwwwwwww...memories! They really rock...LOL Bailey. I miss her too, and yes, she would've been astonished at where they are now.

Awesome update!
 
Well I have to say that was a great dinner! The chicken was tasty! The potatoes were excellent, and the wine was tremendous! Oh, and that battle royal right in the middle of the main course between the Speedles and the Finches! Hell that was more entertaining than the Dinner show at the Dixie stampede ! Hell all we needed was three rings, a bull whip and a tight rope walker and we would have had the Lion tamers at the Barnum and Bailey Circus!

I'm shocked that Katie didn't dive across the table and take out that jackass and his bitch! Hes got his coming and Speeds gonna make sure he gives it to him! I really wanted to see him lay him out right in the middle of the dinning room table!

Figures old drunk ass Doris would take the booze when she left out! Damn lush! Shes gonna get hers too!

Poor Tom hes starting to think about things since his sister died ! Note to Tom you need to start trying to live your life and quit blaming yourself for everyone elses short comings ! You have a good life if you will just live it ! Stop being such an ass whole with everybody ! Be Happy for once in your life!

Great update Geni!
 
Geni! Great update.
Poor Tom...he feels so guilty. I hope he doesn't push Anni away.

Lori & Scott are so adorable. :)

Can't wait to read more
 
Thankies so much for the reviews! :D

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APL Manhattan Miami, next day, 1pm

Scott: *grabs paper from printer*

Tom: *walks in*

Scott: *lifts head, smiles* Detective Grey, how are you?

Tom: Want to go for a beer?

Scott: *smile fades* ...Beer. With me. You want to have a beer with me.

Tom: Why not?

Scott: Uh...okay. Right now?

Tom: If you have time.

Scott: I do. *stands*

Tom: *walks away*

Scott: *lifts brow*

Bar, across the street

Tom: *drinks*

Scott: Are you on duty?

Tom: Bereavement leave.

Scott: *nods*

Tom: *places beer on counter* You aren't having one?

Scott: I'm not much of an alcohol guy.

Tom: This is defeating the purpose. Get a beer.

Scott: *sighs, looks at Bartender*

Bartender: *hands over beer*

Scott: Better?

Tom: Yeah.

Scott: What's all this about?

Tom: Anni's out having lunch with everyone and their babies so I thought why the hell not.

Scott: ...You don't have friends at work.

Tom: *looks at Scott*

Scott: Right.

Tom: *looks back ahead, drinks*

Scott: I get the feeling this isn't just because you have nothing else to do.

Tom: *shrugs* Everyone's out and you're going to keep my ass out of trouble.

Scott: *stares at Tom*

Tom: *looks down at counter*

Scott: Were you thinking of doing something stupid?

Tom: Look, and I mean this in the most heterosexual way...I don't want to be alone. So sit there and drink your beer.

Scott: *nods slowly*

Tom: Don't try to fix me, alright?

Scott: Noted.

Tom: *drinks*

Scott: *looks down at bottle*

Tom: *fiddles with napkin*

Restaurant, 1:48pm

Anni *laughing*

Katie: You totally should have been there, Anni. I think you would have popped him in the face.

Anni: And Tim didn't do anything.

Katie: No, I think he was too angry to even move.

Cellphone beeps

Lori: *looks down at phone* ...Will you excuse me? I have to take this.

Katie: Sure.

Lori: *stands, walks away*

Katie: So how's Tom?

Anni: *sigh*

Outside, parkinglot

Lori: *opens truck door, stares down at phone*

Man: *walks up, covers Lori's mouth*

Lori: *lifts eyes*

Underground bunker, 4pm

Man: *pulls bag from Lori's head*

Lori: *blinks*

Light swings overhead

Lori: *looks around* ...I take it this isn't a belated baby shower.

Man: *lights cigarette*

Lori: Listen, if we're going to conduct this interrogation in silence, at least give me a hint as to what I'm supposed to be giving you.

Man: *throws lighter onto table*

Lori: Can I have a cigarette too, then?

Man: *slams fist into Lori's face*

Lori: AH! Jesus! What the hell's your problem?

Gavin: *leaning against wall* Should we have tied you to a bed first?

Lori: *looks at Gavin*

Gavin: *steps over, smiles* Afternoon.

Lori: *rolls eyes*

Gavin: *tightens gloves* Here we are again.

Lori: Yeah, I remember how this goes. You begin to interrogate me, grow a heart and let me go, then you wear your badge like you've never done anything wrong.

Gavin: *slides chair over*

Lori: So go ahead, ask away.

Gavin: *sits*

Lori: If you just wanted to hang out, you could have used less rope.

Gavin: *waves hand*

Man: *opens door, drags Steph in*

Steph: *crying*

Lori: *looks at Steph*

Steph: MOMMA! *reaches out*

Lori: *looks at Gavin*

Gavin: *staring at Lori*

Lori: *frowns* Is this your idea of a sick joke?

Gavin: *looks at Man*

Man: *pulls out gun, pushes it against Steph*

Lori: You wouldn't hurt her.

Gavin: *stands, walks over to Steph*

Man: *looks at Gavin*

Gavin: *takes gun, cocks it*

Lori: Very funny.

Gavin: *pulls trigger*

BAM

Steph: *screams*

Lori: WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!

Gavin: *shoves Steph*

Steph: *falls over, crying*

Gavin: *tosses gun*

Man: *catches gun*

Steph: *holding leg*

Gavin: *walks over* Now. Where were we.

Lori: *staring at Steph*

Gavin: *grabs Lori's face* Pay attention.

Lori: *looks at Gavin*

Gavin: Now that we're clear you're not sitting in this chair for shits and giggles, I want you to listen to me very carefully. I want an answer to my question and I want the correct one or I'm gonna blow your little girl's face clean off its stem.

Lori: *staring at Gavin*

Gavin: Where's Vargas.

Lori: *lifts brow* Who?

Gavin: What did I just tell you?

Lori: I don't know what the hell you're talking about. And what is this? You're a cop by day, professional hitman by night?

Gavin: Carlos Vargas. Colombian heroin smuggler.

Lori: Texas sure has interesting ways of catching criminals. Do you torture all of your informants?

Gavin: *looks at Man*

Man: *pulls out gun*

Gavin: *nods*

Man: *points gun at Steph*

Lori: WAIT! Wait.

Gavin: *looks at Lori*

Lori: I...might have crossed paths with him at some point years ago. I think.

Gavin: You think.

Lori: I don't exactly keep track of everyone I've ever met and I certainly don't go out of my way to remember my past in the greatest of details.

Gavin: Remember.

Lori: *blinks* I...I-

Gavin: *shakes head, walks over to Steph*

Lori: I DON'T KNOW! I think...I think maybe, I heard he was dead? I think he's dead.

Gavin: *turns around*

Lori: Plane crash. It was on the news.

Gavin: Plane crash.

Lori: Yes.

Gavin: Then this is not your lucky day.

Lori: *stares blankly*

TBC...............................
 
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*Breath seizes in my body*.....OMFG!! GAVIN that PR**K! I'm so distraught right now, I don't know what to say....HE SHOT STEPH! For that alone, he deserves a swift kick in the face and then a bullet to the brain. OMG...Poor Steph and Lori...And no one knows that they are missing. GASP...QUICK GENI! What's going to happen????

AWESOME update!
 
Oh Shit ! "Runs to the roof and throws on the Bat signal and turns it around in a circle!" I sure hope the dynamic due arn't wasted in that bar! Lori needs help! Stephs been shot! OMG ! "runs to the back door and throws Jazzy & Rags out and tells them to go find Scott & Tom and tell them that Lori is tied up and Steph is hurt!"

Great update Geni !
 
WOAH! What just happened here...WTF!

Poor Stephie...

Tom & Scott getting a beer...woo hoo! Nothing like a good old bromance to spice things up!

Can't wait to read more Geni!
 
Holy crap, we're at 1000 posts already. :eek:

Thanks so much for all the reviews, they always brighten my day and keep my love for writing alive. :) I hope that y'all will continue to follow along for the next thread. :D Thanks again for reading!

Onward to the new thread!
 
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