A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love

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  1. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    awwww they're so sweet :) And totally naughty of course :devil:
     
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    You'll sleep now"! said Stella, to an already sleeping Mac. "Love a man that listens", she said to herself as she walked out the room.

    "Sorry about that Angel's, now let's get you dressed, and ready for our outing".

    Once Stella had the twins all ready to go shopping, she left Mac a note where she would be.

    Mac woke up three hours later to silence.

    "Where is everyone"? Mac said to himself.

    Walking into the kitchen he found the note on the fridge.

    "My Sexy man"!
    "The kids and I went shopping, and then over to the park for some play time. "We'll see you when we get home". "Love Stella", xoxo.

    "Hmm!! said Mac. "I'll get myself cleaned up and head out to meet them".

    Just as Mac was getting ready to head out, the phone rang.

    "Hello"! said Mac.

    "Mac it's Danny, it seems Marybell just showed up at home".

    "I'll meet you there Danny", I'm on my way".

    Once they got to the house and knocked, Marybell answered the door.

    "Hello"! "can I help you"?

    "Yes"! "I'm Det.Mac Taylor, and this is Det.Messer". "By chance are you Marybell"?

    "Yes I am", "Is there a problem Sir".

    "We'd like to ask you some questions about your sister Karen", said Mac.

    "Sure, what questions"?

    "May we come in and talk"? asked Mac.

    "That's not a good idea, my mom isn't home, and I don't think she'd like it too much".

    "Okay, then". "Can you tell us why you made a complaint with Campus Security, concerning your sister Karen being harassed by Alpha-Beta's", asked Mac.

    "Oh that"!, "It was nothing, really". "They were trying to hit on her, so I ran to security to get help, but by the time I got back, they had left".

    "Okay"! "Can you also tell me why you and your sister haven't been in school for the past month"?

    "Sure, we took time off, my sister went with some friends on a trip".

    "Do you have their addresses or phone number's"? asked Mac.

    "No I don't". "She should be back within the week".

    while Mac continued questioning Marybell, Danny could have sworn he smelt decomp.

    "Excuse me Mac"? said Danny.

    "What is it Danny"?

    "We need to go", thank-you for your time Marybell, we'll be back later", said Danny.

    When Marybell shut the door, Mac yelled at Danny.

    "What the hell was that about Messer"?

    "Listen Mac, I smell Decomp", we need a warrant".

    "Christ"! "Why didn't you say so"?

    "What and tip her off"?

    "You're right Im sorry Danny". "Let's go get the Warrant
     
  3. nattybatty55

    nattybatty55 Nadalaholic

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    Love more soon please...

    I loved the note!!
     
  4. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    When they went to see the Judge about the warrant, they were informed he wouldn't be back till morning.

    "Now what Mac"? "Ya wanna try another Judge"?

    "No"! Judge Manning owes me a favour", he'll guarantee us the warrant". "You need to remember, we have nothing that proves she's killing these guys".

    "So what now then"?

    "Now we go home and relax until morning". "We'll secure the officers their for the night".

    When Mac got home, Stella was no where to be found.

    "What is the little Vixen up too now"? Mac said to himself.

    He knew she was home, because the stroller was in the garage. then he remembered, he still had one Payback up on her.

    "Oh Stella, my little Vixen"! "Our we playing Payback Stella time"? "Come out , come out, where ever you are". "Stella", "Mr.Jolly is ready for you".

    *SILENCE* nothing but silence.

    "Oh well, maybe she didn't take the stroller", he said to himself. "May as well make myself useful and mow the lawn".

    As he headed into the shed to get the Mower, someone locked him in.



    "What the he...........

    "Don't speak" , said the voice, as she wrapped a satin cloth around his mouth.

    Once she completed that task , she tied his arms and legs together and pushed him against the cold cement.

    When Stella mounted herself on top of him, he could see fire in her eyes.

    "Oh my, what's this"? Oh"! does Mr. Jolly want to play".

    Stella used her mouth and removed Mac's belt with her teeth. Then she unsnapped his clip, as she stroked her tongue over his tight hard body.

    "Hiss"!!!! Could be heard from Mac's in take of breath.

    "You like that Mr.Jolly, you like the way Stella, posseses her big huge man". "So hot, and sexy, so damn Yummy".

    Deeper and deeper Stella went into his soul, until the screams of passion could be heard through his sealed mouth. Moving back up, she undid the satin cloth from his legs, arms and mouth.

    "Sooooooo!!!!!! "How was your day"? asked Stella with fire burning her eyes.

    "It was nasty", but you just made it wickedly devilish", said Mac.

    "Good, getting up Stella said , "I'll see you later Mac, I need to start dinner".

    "WHAT"!!!! Hey Stella, were you going you little vixen". "I haven't Smexed you yet".

    Mac got up quickly with his pant around his ankle and grabbed his wife before she got out the door, and pushed her into the wall, pulled down her pants and Smexed her full , until she screamed and scratched his back, his shoulders his butt.

    "OWWWWE!!!!! said Mac, in heated passion, "Damn you Stella, damn you", Mac said over and over until he emptied himself into her soul.
     
  5. nattybatty55

    nattybatty55 Nadalaholic

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    Loved it, it oviously full of passion and you showed it very well!!
     
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    -_-; aw man, i totally am late for this fic! :D do write more! XD
     
  7. nattybatty55

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    I started reading this fic in the middle of page 4 so I had to read alot!!
     
  8. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Thanks for the feedback. It's greatly appriciated. :) I'm glad you're enjoying it, You'll find Mac very horny in my version's and that's the way Stella likes her Horndog, Mr.Jolly. :lol: :lol: :lol:
     
  9. MacsGirlMel

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    She loves pushing the meter :devil: More soon!
     
  10. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Hey MEL and fellow readers, this will be my only post till about 6pm Canadian time. I have to work :(


    "Feel better hun"? asked Stella.

    "Better then better love, why you want more of the Horndog"?

    "I don't think so, I've had more then enough of Mr.Jolly and my Horndog".

    "While you get supper ready, I'm going to get my babies", said Mac.

    Mac ran up the stairs into the Nursery, and found his twins trying to sit up.

    "STELLA"!!! yelled Mac. "Come here quick".

    Stella ran into the room, and seen Mackenzie trying to pull herself up into a seated position.

    "Oh my"! "Look at her try, said Stella, as she walked over and braced Mackenzie's back to help her sit up.

    "Ahahahha!!!! said Mackenzie giggling. "Ahahha!!

    "Sounds like dada", said Mac.

    "Yeah right"! "Wishful thinking Mr.Taylor". "It will be mama first".

    "Dream on love, Dada, is easier, you'll see". As he walked over and picked up Michael.

    "Isn't tht right Michael", "Say dada". "Say dada".

    Michael giggled a deep , at his daddy being silly.

    "Come on dada"! "Let's take them down to eat".

    After they had them seated in the highchairs, Mac fed Mackenzie, while Stella fed Michael.

    While Mac, was spooning food up towards Mackenzie's mouth, she spit her tongue out on him, and sure enough Mac got covered with baby food.

    "Thanks Mackenzie, said Mac. "Why you do that to daddy" Mackenzie giggled.

    "Oh Mac! look at you, said Stella, as she wiped off his shirt.

    (phone rings)


    "I'll get it love"!, said Mac. "Hello"?

    "Mac"? It's Flack. "I've got the warrant if you're ready".

    "I'll be right there", did you call Danny"?

    "Yeah, he's on his way".

    "Okay, no one does anything until I get there". "We don't want to spook her".

    "Stella, I have to go love, I'll be home soon". "I love you".

    "I love you too Mac". "Bye".

    After Mac kissed his wife and the twins he left.
     
  11. MacsGirlMel

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    Have fun...will wait eagerly for your next posts.
     
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    ^ my... this thing is addictive. :lol: post soon. ^__^
     
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    When they arrived back at Marybell's place, no one was home again.

    "Where is the officer that was posted on this house,"? Mac asked Flack.

    "I'm not sure, there is his car".

    As they searched around he was no where to be found.

    "Mac"! called Danny. "I really smell decomp, coming from that house".

    "Okay, Flack, break the door down".

    Once they got inside they almost gagged. They could smell rotten flesh.

    "Start searching"! said Mac.

    As Danny got to the freezer he opened it and found the body of the dead officer and Karen, Marybell's sister.

    "Auh!! "Christ Mac"! "What the hell".

    "Someone call Hawkes and get him down here", said Mac.

    Just as Danny closed the freezer again, the officer came out of the room, carrying jars of male organs.

    "What the F*** is this"? asked Flack. "Jesus this girl has problems".

    "You're telling me" , said Danny. "Could you imagine how much that must of hurt".

    "Mac"! , yelled one of the officer's, We found something you should read".

    When Mac got into the bedroom, he was given a diary.

    "Dear Diary".

    "They raped my sister, they held her down and raped her while she screamed,
    no one would help", no one believed me, when I asked for help.

    "I came back and found her dead, they had killed her, smothered her to death , as they were raping her, stealing her virginity and her soul".

    "Payback will be mine , they will all die at my hand". "All of them, will suffer, like my sister suffered". "I vow to you Karen, you will be avenged".

    As Mac read further along, she named each Alpha member in her diary, and the ones she had killed were crossed off.

    Once Hawkes arrived , Mac told him to stay with the bodies until the haulers got there.

    "Let's go Danny, It's time we find out what's going on with this girl and the Alpha-Beta's.

    By the time they got to ther Alpha-Beta house they were not there".

    "Check the Football Field and talk to the coaches, find out where these guy's are". "Oh and Flack"? "When you find them, arrest them all".

    "Now what are we going to do Mac, asked Danny.

    "Now we put out an all points bulletin for this girl". "She couldn't have gotten far".

    After Mac and Danny left to go back too NYPD, Marybell was watching Flack through the bushes.
     
  14. nattybatty55

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    No not Flack !!

    I'm loving horny mac :devil:
     
  15. MacsLovlyAngl

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    (NYPD)

    When they got back Sid was waiting for them.

    "What have we got SId"?

    "Well the officer was shot in the chest, we recovered his own bullet from his chest".

    "What about the sister Karen"?

    "This is were it gets intersting". "She was smothered with multiple hands, I found at least four sets of prints on her mouth, wrists and ankles". "This Has to be the worst rape, I've ever seen". "I mean this girl was violated, everyway you can imagine". "I can only imagine how much she must have suffered". "she has vaginal tearing up and around the cervix, and her pelvic bone has been cracked". "I also found semen in the anal tracked and in the throat".

    "I'm telling you Mac, this is the first case that has ever floored me".

    "Did you send everything to trace"? asked Mac.

    "Yeah! It's being processed as we speak". "Mac"?

    "Yeah Sid"?

    "Catch these sick bastards, will you".

    "I will Sid, don't worry".

    "Danny, can you imagine the strength this girl must have, to be able too carry her sister all the way home". "I think we need to go speak with the mother".

    As they left Danny said to Mac.

    "Hey Mac, . "Let's just hope she keeps some of them alive for us". "the girl has really lost it".

    "She hasn't lost it Danny, If you witnessed what she witnessed, you'd understand it's not insanity, It's guilt, the guilt of being able to save her sister".

    Just as they were heading out the door, NYPD officer's were bringing in the mother.

    "Excuse me Det.Taylor"?

    "Yes"!, "You must be Marybell's mom"?

    "I am, could you please tell me what is going on"?

    "Sure, come into my office and we'll talk".

    "Your daughter is in alot of trouble". "She's killed 4 University student males".

    "Are you talking about Marybell"?

    "Yes, your daughter".

    "I'm sorry but my daughter has been missing for 5 months now". "She disappeared from school one day, Karen took it really hard".

    Mac looked confussed. "can you tell me who this is in this photo"?

    "Sure, that's Karen, they were twins you know, did everything together". "No one could tell them apart, except for me".

    "Listen, would you come down to the morgue with me please, I need you too look at a body".

    "Det.Taylor", "What are you trying to tell me"?

    "I'm sorry, we may have found your daughter Marybell".

    As they walked down to the morgue, Sid was waiting with the body.

    "This is Sid, he did the autopsy on your daughter".

    When Sid pulled back the sheet, she screamed, NoOOOOooo!!!!!! Not my Marybell, Oh not my baby".

    Once they got her settled down, Mac explained what had happened to her deceased daughter, and what her other daughter Karen had been doing.

    "My God"! said Karen's mom, "I'm so sorry, about what's been happening". "We need to find my other daughter".

    "Could you tell me why she would take Marybell's name"? asked Mac.

    "I'm not sure"! "I guess that's something you'll have to ask her when you find her".

    "We are working on it, we have officers out looking for her". "why don't you go home and get some rest, we'll call you if anything changes".
     

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