Update! Hope ya'll enjoy! Chapter 28 3 years later. "Eric." Natalia said from the kitchen but got no answer. "Eric." Natalia said walking out of the kitchen and finding Eric watching tv. Natalia picked up a pillow and threw it at him hitting him straight in the face. "Ow." Eric said still looking at the tv. "Um, can you come help me with lunch?" "I'm watching this. I will when it goes off." "Ugh, you're so aggravating." Natalia said as she threw her hands in the air and walked back into the kitchen. "Why am I aggravating?" Eric said getting up and walking behind her. "You never help with anything." Natalia said as she cut the sandwhiches in half. "I do help with everything." "Name one thing you've helped with lately." Natalia said turning to him and placing her hands on her hips. "Well there's..." Eric started but couldn't think of anything. "Yea, that's what I thought." Natalia said as she walked over and handed him a hand towel and then walked up stairs. Eric let out a sigh and walked and sat back down and watched tv. A months passed and Natalia had left the house and found someone that Eric found out about. After a few weeks of that Eric wouldn't talk to Natalia. Natalia had even told Eric when she was with him all she could think about was Eric and that she didn't love the other man. One morning Natalia woke up and walked downstairs to see Eric sitting at the breakfast table looking through papers. Natalia tried to break the silence so she spoke up. "Morning." Natalia said as she walked down the stairs. "Avery get your backpack you're gonna be late for school." Eric called up the stairs not looking up. "Eric..." "Eric, come on, this has got to stop. Please will you yell at me or argue with me anything is better than not talking." "You're right." Eric said turning and look at her. "I just want you to understand what I'm saying." "I do. Really I do and you're right. I'm not arguing with you." "Yea but it's not about being right." "But it's true. We can't live like this, it's not good for us. Especially for the kids. I mean thank God Ayden is in that foreign exchange program across seas." "Well you know I was thinking that maybe once Avery goes to school this morning maybe you and I can spend the day together and really get a chance to talk everything out because you can say what you need to say to me because I need to hear it." "That's not what I had in mind." "Oh, oh ok. Well I know this isn't gonna be easy, I know that. I was thinking maybe we could see a marriage counselor. You know there's some really good ones and I could make some phone calls and find someone great." "I made a phone call, to my lawer. You should make one too...cause I'm filing for a divorce." "Eric you have no right to be ending our marriage like this." "There's nothing you can do about it." "Yes there is, that's not true." "Listen it is over." "What's over?" Avery said as she came walking down the stairs. "Honey you're gonna be late for school and I'm not writing any tardy excuses today." Natalia said as she looked at Avery. "Well, I can't find my blue jacket." "I know where it is. I'll get it." Natalia said as she headed towards the laundry room. "You guys are fighting." Avery said as she stood in front of Eric. "I'm not gonna lie to you honey." "And not just today." "I'm sorry. It's not alot of fun for us either." "I don't get it, you still talk to eachother but it's not the same anymore. What happened?" "Lots of things." Eric said taking his daughters hand in his and kissing it. "You don't even sleep in the same room anymore. This is bad." "This is bad. Your mom and I are having problems." "But you'll fix them?" "I'm not really sure that I can." "Got it." Natalia said walking back into the living room. "Have a great day." Natalia said kissing her daughter on the cheek. "Bye daddy." Avery said kissing her dad on the cheek. "Bye baby." Eric said as he watched his daughter walk out the door. "What did you tell her?" Natalia said looking at Eric and pointing to the door.
"A months passed and Natalia had left the house and found someone that Eric found out about." I had serious difficulties in understanding this sentence. lool i thought she had abandoned their home:wtf::lol: for some man. but then when I continued reading I realized that she betrayed him ... (sorry for any English mistake)
Wait...Nat did what? I don't like bad/OOC Nat. Is it me or this sort of resembles Nat's role on AMC? :lol:
I actually took the story from that! I thought it would be a different twist then all the other story lines. Hope that is ok!
Update! Know its been awhile and I'm sorry! Hope ya'll like it! Chapter 29 "Like she doesn't already know." "Oh come on, you and I need to talk this out first." "The kids need to be told." "No they do not, cause it's not gonna happen. I'm not gonna give you a divorce." Eric stood up and walked up stairs with Natalia following. "I'm not gonna allow you to destroy our lives and our kids lives." "I'm gonna destroy our lives?" Eric said turning around to face her in their room. "Come on, you fight this divorce it's only gonna make it longer, dirtier, and more expensive." "Do you see what you're doing? God, do you even hear yourself? You hold grudges like this, it's all or nothing with you." "No this time you've commited adultry without even sleeping with a guy." "No, I am commited to you and commited to this marriage." "I don't believe you." Just then the door flew open and Natalia and Eric came downstairs. "Mom guess what?" "You missed the bus?" "I'm sorry." "Ok, go jump in the car and I'll be there in a minute." "Ok but hurry." Avery said as she started to walk out and as Natalia started walking back to Eric. "We are not finished here." Natalia said grabbing the keys off the counter. "Oh yes we are." "No we're not and when I come back we're gonna finish it." Natalia said as she walked towards the door. Eric picked up the phone and started to call someone. "Hey it's Eric. Come to the house, it's about Natalia." Eric said and then hung up the phone. 20 minutes later Natalia arrived back home. "Avery's so upset." Natalia said walking up to Eric. "I know, it's better in the long run though." "What are you talkin...I just had to reassure her to calm her down." "Do us all a favor Natalia please, do not give them false hope ok? You will crush them in the end." "Would you listen to yourself, please? How can I convince you that I am not giving up on this marriage, Eric?" Just then the doorbell rings. "I'm not gonna get it cause I'm not expecting anybody, so I don't care who it is." Natalia said as she ran her hand through her hair. "I'll get it." Eric said as he got up slowly and started walking to the door. "Ugh, geeze you're impossible, so impossible." Natalia said as she practically sprinted to the door. As she opened the door she saw a face she thought she would have never seen again. "What are you doing here?" "I don't know, your husband called me." The man said as he walked into their house. "I called him to come and get you. Take her. She's yours." Eric said looking at the man, while the man, whose name is Zack, and Natalia looked at him. "You're just gonna throw me around like I'm some sack of dirty laundry that you wanna dump?" "Ahh, dirty laundry, thats funny verbatum. Actually I called Zack to kick this to the next level. We're getting a divorce." "No, like hell we are." Natalia said as she placed her hands on her hips. "God knows why she's fighting so hard to stick with me when she wants to be with you, I called you to do what I can't do, get her outta here." Eric said as he made the hand movement of leaving. Natalia breathed in a sigh and rolled her eyes to keep the tears from falling. "Well, since we're all being blount here, I do love you wife..." Zack started but got interupted. "Please don't do this, don't..." Natalia said as she placed her hands together in a praying position. "No, it's alright. I loved her from the moment I met her, a few years ago and I thought she loved me too. And then her whole life came rushing back, old life, old memories and she was missing you." Zack said looking at Eric. Natalia placed her hands in her back pockets as she listened to Zack talk. "Then you showed up again." "Yea. Never stood a second chance. Not that I didn't try. I did fight for her. And I kept fighting but she told me not too. Told me to back off. Because she doesn't want to lose you. She said good-bye to me. I lost her, to you. If you don't believe that then you're gonna push her away. Then you're just a fool."
now i'm lost.:guffaw: SO LOST:guffaw: years? in the last chapter when you say Nat had left home...how long? I thought it had been something of a night or something like that. but I may have misunderstood because English is not my 1st language.
Maybe you should put in more of your ideas and give a different spin as its too similar to AMC. Hehe!
Update! Sorry it's been so long! And I'm gonna add my own stuff, I just wanted to do this to get me thinking of what else I could do cause I was kinda stuck, so I just let this get me through until I could think of something else. Hope that's ok! Hope ya'll enjoy!!! Chapter 30 "If I'm a fool, then so be it." Eric said as Natalia let out a breath that she had felt like she had been holding in for hours. "Look take her to you dream casino, your future mother in laws house, I don't care just get her outta here." "I'm not going anywhere Eric." Natalia said as her voice sounded like she was gonna cry. She ran her fingers through her hair and turned back towards Zack. "Is there anything I can do for you?" Zack said facing her. "No, I just um, I'm so sorry that you got brought into this and I...can you go please?" Natalia said as Zack walked out of the door Natalia following and shutting the door behind him. "Gone ok? He's gone and I didn't go with him. Does that tell you what you wanted to know?" "You're gonna hook up with him later..." "Oh my God..." "The cemetary, the casino..." "Got an answer for everything right?" Natalia said as Eric kept naming off other places. "Got an answer for me and for Zack, answer me this then please, what was that whole big performance about? Was that some form of a test? Did I get and A for not going with him? Did you honestly think that Zack was gonna jump at your offer and drag me out of here like some sort of caveman?" "This is not a test Natalia, this is real life, ok? Our marriage is over." Eric said as Natalia let out a sigh. "You know, I always knew you had it in you to be cruel Eric, this is..." Natalia started but got interupted. "I'm being cruel? I, I'm the cruel one? Would you go take comfort in another mans arms, and this time you have my blessing." Eric said as he pointed to the door. "You want your divorce Eric? You just got it." Natalia said as someone knocked on the door. "Natalia hi...." "What brilliant timing you have Laura, he's all yours." Natalia said as she stormed out of the house slamming the door. "What was that about?" "We're getting a divorce." "Eric...." "I don't wanna hear it." Eric said putting his hands in the air. "You need to hear it. Natalia has been trying to get things back on track with you and all you do is push her away. She loves you Eric." "Can we just talk about the fundraiser please?" "Sure." A few months later they had the fundraiser for the school across seas that their son was going too. Eric walked up stairs in the hotel to find Natalia in a room by herself. He opened the door scaring her. "I'm sorry I didn't mean to startle you." Eric said walking in. "Oh uh no, I just, you caught me trespassing, I was snooping around and I came across this, I mean who knew they had fantasy rooms here kinda bizarre, don't you think?" "Depends. Is this a fantasy you shared with Zack?" "So you did over hear us talking outside Zacks office? And you know that Zack and I were together in Georgia?" "In a room, just like this one." "Yea, yea, and um, I'm don't, I'm sorry I didn't tell you, I didn't even know how to begin to tell you, I didn't know where to start..." "You had alot going on. You know me having memory loss, me not wanting to be there for you and the kids, when you left for your moms, I had alot going on. Then Zack came here....not the best time to tell me about your affair." "Well, I just want you to know that there's, I mean I don't feel anything for him anymore, I don't, I mean that's the real reason I didn't tell you, because that was over so long ago, so it doesn't even make sense..." "Natalia, don't explain it to me please, I saw Zack leave. Now stop lying to me. Tell me the truth."