"Thinking Of You" and EDeN fic :)

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  1. beautifuldisaster

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    Ok here's a new story for all you EDeN fans! Hope you enjoy it! :)

    Chapter 1

    Ding. The elevator made the sound as Natalia walked off of it. She walked straight over to the front desk and signed in. She was dressed in black pants with a red shirt on and red heels to match.

    "Who's that?" Eric said nudging Ryans arm and pointing his head into Natalias direction.

    "I think her name is Natalia. She's the new DNA specialist." Ryan said putting his hands in his pockets.

    "Really?"

    "Yea." Ryan said as Natalia walked over to them.

    "Hey."

    "Hey." Eric and Ryan both said at the same time.

    "My name's Natalia." Natalia said as she stuck her hand out to Eric for him to shake it.

    "My names Eric." Eric said as he shook her hand.

    "And I'm Ryan." Ryan said as he took out his hand sanitizer after he shook her hand.

    "Well, I guess I better get going. I have to find the DNA lab." Natalia said smiling at Eric.

    "Well, if you would like me too, I can give you a tour of the place. Sometimes it can be overwhelming at first." Eric said smiling back at her.

    "Thanks, I would like that. I'm just gonna run to the bathroom really fast and then we can start the tour."

    "Ok." Eric said as he watched her walk to the bathroom.

    "I can give you a tour if you would like." Ryan mimicked in a girly tone after Natalia disappeared.

    "Ryan..." Eric said turning around and making a fist.

    "I'm just kidding man." Ryan said throwing his hands up in defense.

    "That's what I thought." Eric said as he put his hand back down.

    "So what do you think of her?" Ryan said crossing his arms.

    "I think, she's a nice upgrade." Eric said putting his hands in his pockets.

    "A nice upgrade?" Ryan said as he saw Natalia walking back over.

    "Oh, man, here she comes. I'll go so you can give her that "tour" of yours." Ryan said as he patted Erics back as he walked passed him.

    "I agree with you though man." Ryan called as he turned a corner.

    "What was that about?" Natalia said as she looked back at the corner that Ryan turned from and then back at Eric.

    "Nothing." Eric said as he let out a chuckle.

    "Ok so are you ready for your tour?"

    "Ready as I'll ever be." Natalia said as she turned on her heels and started walking with Eric.


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  2. GregNickRyanFan

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    "a nice Upgrade". hehe. Cute. Love the friendship like moments between the guys. And Ryan pulling an Adrian Monk with the hand sanitizer tickled me.
     
  3. Michya

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    Looking good...the guys already gossiping about her. :lol:
     
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    looks really good! update soon!! please!
     
  5. beautifuldisaster

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    Heres an update! :) Hope yall like it!

    Chapter 2

    After Eric gave her a tour of everything he headed to the break room with her.

    "And this is personally my favorite room of all of them...the break room." Eric said opening the door and letting her walk in first.

    "Well, I think this will personally be my favorite room as well." Natalia said as she turned around to face him.

    Eric smiled at her before breaking the silence.

    "Can I ask you a question?"

    "Yea sure."

    "Do you have a um, boyfriend?"

    "I have an ex husband, but no not a boyfriend. Why?"

    "Well, you're just really pretty and I was just wondering." Eric said as he shrugged his shoulders.

    "Are you flirting with me Mr.Delko?" Natalia said as she stepped closer to him.

    "What if I am?" Eric said as he stepped closer to her. By the time Eric took a step closer to her they're faces were inches apart. Eric slowly lowered his head to where his lips were inches apart from hers.

    "I don't think this would be the appropriate place Mr. Delko." Natalia said as she whispered and looked up at him. She then leaned her face into him and kissed him on the cheek and started walking away.

    "Hey..." Eric said as he turned and watched her walk.

    "What?" Natalia said turning around.

    "You can't do that."

    "Do what?"

    "Kiss me on the cheek. That's not right."

    "Eric, I said it's not the appropriate place or even probably the time."

    "Well, where can I meet you so it can be the appropriate place and time?!"

    "Is this how you get girls to go out with you?" Natalia said placing her hands on her hips.

    "Only beautiful ones." Eric said smiling at her.

    Natalia smiled back at him.

    "And on that note I'll see you tomorrow." Natalia said smiling and turning on her heels and leaving.

    "Ugh." Eric said as he ran his fingers through his hair.

    "Whats wrong man?" Ryan said walking through the door.

    "I hate her."

    "You hate who?" Ryan said as he walked to his locker.

    "Natalia."

    "I thought you like her?" Ryan asked feeling confused.

    "I do like her. I hate her for making me like her."

    "Oh, I got ya. Well just think tomorrow you get to see her again."

    "Yea thanks for reminding me."

    "Anytime."

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  6. GregNickRyanFan

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    Love flirty Eric and Natalia playing hard to get. :)
     
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    I'm just catching up! Just finished reading the last fic. I'm really lovin' this one so far....nice "first meeting". :D
    I hope Natalia continues to play hard to get......hehe, make'im beg.

    Ryan's hand sanitizer :lol:
     
  8. Michya

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    Oh haha...Natalia and Eric are both so flirty and naughty! Ryan is having fun teasing too. :lol:
     
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    Here's an update! Hope yall enjoy it! :)


    Chapter 3

    The next day Natalia got there early and walked into the breakroom to find Eric in there.

    "Morning." Natalia said as she walked in.

    Eric didn't say anything. Natalia walked over to him.

    "Hey." Natalia said standing right in front of him.

    Eric again didn't say anything. Natalia got aggravated and walked over to her locker. Eric then put the paper down and watched her walk over to her locker and stand there. She looked better today than she did yesterday he thought to himself. She was dressed in a teal low cut shirt with white pants on and teal high heeled shoes to match and her hair was curled.

    "Do you have colored heels to match every shirt you wear?" Eric said looking her up and down her back side.

    "What if I do?" Natalia said turning around.

    "Nothing. It doesn't matter." Eric said sitting up in his chair.

    "Sure it doesn't." Natalia said as she turned back around and started digging in her purse.

    Eric stood up and walked over to her trapping her between her locker and him. He wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her against him. He dug his face into her neck and kissed it. She let her head fall back onto his shoulder. Everytime he kissed her neck, small, light moans escaped her lips. He turned her around and rewrapped his arms around her waist. He pushed her up against her locker kissing her hard and long. He then picked her up and walked her over to the couch turning so she would be on top of him. He slid his hands under her shirt and caressed her skin. After a few moments Natalia separated.

    "Too fast." She said as she hopped off of him and stood up.

    "What do you mean too fast?" Eric said with a confused look on his face.

    "Eric, we've on known eachother for 1 day, and here we are making out with eachother, at work. I've gone through alot these past few years and I don't know if I'm ready for another relationship."

    "Do you feel it?" Eric said as he got off the couch and walked over to her.

    "Feel what?" Natalia said letting out a chuckle and a half grinned face.

    "When we kiss, do you not feel it? When we touch, do you not feel it?"

    "Are you talking about the spark that you feel when someone touches or kisses you?"

    "Yea. I mean cause I don't know bout you but yesterday when you walked over to me I wanted to take you right then and there and make love to you." Eric said blushing at his statement.

    "Really?"

    "Yea. I mean I have never in my life been more intrigued by a woman before. Whatever you have is what I want, what I am looking for in a woman."

    "Wow. No one has ever told me that before."

    "Well then let me be the first and the last."

    "Eric...I just don't know. I like you, I mean I really like you, but I just would like to take things slower if that's ok."

    "We can take it as slow as you want as long as I can see you."

    "Ok." Natalia said as she walked over to him and kissed his cheek.

    "But one thing..." Eric said as he grabbed her hand before she could walkaway.

    "What?"

    "You can't just make out with me and then kiss me on the cheek."

    "Are you serious?"

    "Heck yes. I wish every girl kissed me like you just did."

    "When in that case I'll make sure no other girl can compare." Natalia said as she walked over to him and wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed his lips.

    Natalia separated and started to walk out.

    "Thank you." Eric called after her.

    "Yea, yea, yea." Natalia said walking out the door.



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  10. GregNickRyanFan

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    Aww, Eric... what he said was so romantic. :)
     
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    Makes me think this is how things went off-screen between S4's 'Three-Way' & 'Payback' :devil: :lol:
     
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    Update! Hope everyone had a safe and happy Easter! :) Hope ya'll enjoy!

    Chapter 4

    Later on that day. Eric walked into the DNA room.

    "I prefer you in regular clothes more than that white lab coat." Eric said walking over to Natalia and kissing her.

    "And I would prefer you not kiss me here." Natalia said kissing him back.

    "Sure you would." Eric said smiling down at her.

    "So what about dinner tonight?" Eric said after a little while.

    "You mean like go out and get something to eat?"

    "Well, yea."

    "Is this like a date?"

    "I guess."

    "So now I'm your girlfriend?"

    "I thought you were this morning in the breakroom." Eric said laughing.

    "I know. I'm just kidding."

    "Oh ok."

    "Where are we going?"

    "Is Italian ok?"

    "Fine with me."

    "Ok. I'll see you at 6."

    "Ok."

    "Oh forgot to tell you this morning but you look absolutely beautiful today." Eric said kissing her and grabbing her butt before he left.

    "Thank you." Natalia said as she swatted his hand and laughed.

    "Anytime." Eric said letting out a chuckle and leaving.

    After Eric left Natalia bit her lower lip wondering how she could ever find someone like him. He was perfect in so many ways. And she had no clue how she landed on this star but she did and she wasn't about to let go.

    Later that night Eric went to Natalias house to pick her up. Eric knocked on Natalias door. Natalia opened it up.

    "Hey." Natalia said as she smiled at him.

    "Hey. You look amazing." Eric said as he couldn't believe what she looked like. The way she pulled off white shorts and a low cut lime green quarter length sleeve shirt and sandles was beyond him.

    "Thanks. You don't look so bad yourself."

    "Thanks."

    "Are you ready to go?"

    "I think so."

    "Ok." Eric said as he laced his hand in hers and walked her to the passenger side door.

    Instead of going to Italian, he took them to the beach instead.
     
  14. GregNickRyanFan

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    Hehe they are so cute. :lol: at him grabbing her behind. Naughty, naughty. :D
     
  15. Michya

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    Woah, I think they both need to slow down, or by Chapter 7 we will have the babies. :lol: Kidding. :p
     

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