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emily i cant believe you read my mind that warrick's going to solve this... i'll try...

s: i cant be?
w: it says jenna
n: sara and i look at it like a million times
w: fresh eyes helps
s: your good
w: just good
s: okay your the greatest
w: would you like to buy me breakfast
s: okay
n: what about me (with cheese green smile)
s: (hesistant) yea.. 'key
w: and any one can guess who is it from
s & n : hans
w: correct! i'll call vega and get warrant and while waiting will eat my choice right sarbear
s: war told you not to call me that... okay will eat
n: i'll put the eviden box away meet you guys at my car
w: why are we taking your car
n: because i'm driving
w: sara
s: i'm not getting to that. so where to war
w: the new thai food near the aladin
s: ok, meet you guys in there.
n: your not riding with us
s: need to get somethings from my locker.
w & n: okay will put the evidence box to the vault.
as they went their separate ways, sara thinking to her self why would grissom give that look again, he knows we're done and why i cant get what nick said that he loves me. im confused. as she head to the parking lot she saw the nick and warrick waiting by her car.
s: why are you still here
w: you might run out on us
n: what he says.
s: okay get in.
 
haha. great minds think a like, cocoa!
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Warrick, Nick and Sara head to the restuarant; Nick driving, Warrick in the passanger seat and Sara in the back. when they get there, they have their meal and whips out of there, eager to get back and get their warrant from Brass. When they get back, they head start to Brass to get the warrant. Brass hands it to them and tells them he's tagging along, just incase their little visit doesnt go as planned.

The three CSIs pile back into Nick's SUV and Brass heads to his car, and they're off. They get back to the location and notice that there's not car in the driveway. Either way, they head up to the door and knock on it, hoping for a friendly answer.

B: Mr. Green, it's the police, open up..
-no answer-
B: *knocks again* Mr. Green... open up..
-still not answer-
B: *knocks a third time* It's the police, open up!
-still no answer!-
N & W: *look at each other*
B: *turns to the CSIs* no answer...
N: well, i guess we'll just invite ourselves in then?
B: *smiles and nods his head as he reaches down and grabs his gun* Nick and Warrick follow suit.
S: *reaches for her gun*
N: *looks over at Sara* what are you doing?
S: *looks up at Nick* going to help.
N: *shakes his head* no..
S: um... yeah.
N: *starts to get irritated* no, sar, just wait out here.
S: *gets mad too* you're not my fucking mother Nick. i'm a grown woman.
N: ... you're staying here.
S: what the hell! i'm coming in.
W: *gets in on the fight before it gets violent* sara, it would be a smart idea to stay here.
S: *turns her death gaze to warrick* why would that be..
W: because. you've already been through alot.... and...
N: *butts in* i can't risk lossing you again! *turns around and walks up to brass, who's ready to bust down the door.
W: *eye brows shoot up!*... wha... what he said *walks over to Nick and Brass*
S: *standing there in complete silence; not arguing anymore*
N: *really mad* MR. GREEN, OPEN THE FUCKING DOOR OR WE WILL!

-still no answer-

N: *whispers* let's go..
B: ok...
Brass busts down the door and jumps inside, gun drawn. Nick and Warrick follow, Sara staying behind, still trying to realize what Nick said.
B: LIVING ROOM'S CLEAR!
W: KITCHEN'S CLEAR!
N: BEDROOM CLEAR!

Sara hears 'clear' echo through the whole house, not realizing that a car has pulled up behind her. Gun not drawn, she lays her kit down and stands there, completely oblivious of the man larking up behind her. As she's about to move, she feels a hand clasp over her mouth and pull her close to his body. Trying to scream, Sara kicks and yells, attempting to get Nick, Warrick and Brass to hear her. As she feels a sharp blade rest on her neck, she quiets down.

the man: Shut up bitch! you're mine now. so, follow me and i won't kill you... yet.
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haha, thought i'd put a spin on our little SITUATION. The killer has Sara; Nick, Warrick and Brass are inside looking for that man. what will happen next?! HAHA:p
 
ooh my god emily more drama...
i'm a little stump. i'm fresh out of ideas.
someone better continue this. emily,smile, liz, or sf01 can continue.
 
lmao:p it's crazy!! i'll try and come up with something....
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Nick, Warrick and Brass check the rest of the house, not finding a single living thing inside. The join back in the livingroom, saying exactly what they found; nothing. As they put their guns away and head out side, they hear tires squeak and an engine roar. Nick turns to Warrick, confusion on his face. As he steps out side the door, he notices Sara's kit on the ground, but no Sara to be seen.

N: *immediatly gets worried* Sara...?!
W: *looks down at Sara's kit, jacket and gun* what the hell?
N: *runs around to the side of the house* Sara!!!
B: *takes out his cell phone*
W: *looks up at Brass* what are you doing?
B: *motions to his cell* phoning a special girl.
W: *gets confused until he hears a ringing sound come from the bushes. he walks over to the bushes and finds Sara's cell. He opens it* hello...
B: *smiles* hey sweety.
W: *rolls his eyes as he walks over to Brass* did she drop this?
B: *closes his phone* Knowing Sara; no. She wouldn't let something like that fall from he grasp.
Warrick and Brass look over at the side of the house, where Nick suddenly pops out of. opposite side of where he was.
N: WHERE THE HELL IS SHE?! SARA!!! *tear forms in his eye*
W: Nick... *holds up the cell phone*
N: *walks over a grabs the cell phoen from Warrick's hand* Is... is this...
B: Sara's. yeah. *shakes his head*
N: *looks over at Brass* She's been kiddnapped.... *whips the tear from his eye*.. again.
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The August heat was becoming even more unbearable as Sara lay tied in the back of a black truck. Her mouth, hands and feet were all tied, making it impossible for her to get help or get out. The blind fold over her eyes didn't help much either.

As Sara felt the car ease to a stop, her heart started pounding harder then ever. The engine cut and a door opened a closed, making Sara start to sweat even more then she was before. The antisapation rose as she lay there, waiting for something to happen; she was thinking more along, bad. As she finanlly heard a door open and a cold breeze sweep across her face, she felt a hand slowly glide down her body, ending at her legs. what was he doing?

the man: Miss... Sidle.
S: -silent-
man: welcome to your prison...

and with that, the man grabbed Sara's waist and hauled her over his shoulder. Sara whimped at the pain that spiked through her body, and tears filled her eyes.

S: *screams through the fabric, binding her mouth* Nick!! *snobs*
man: your little friend can't help you now; you're mine, Miss Sidle, and i'm going to enjoy every moment of it.
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lol:p daarrkk... hope you guys can continue from here!
 
You are scaring me, emily. You better get Nick to save her. She is in love with him now, she just said it. Hurry up, please.
 
yes you are scarry emily and nickngrissom you should join in...

n: *cursing a lot* i shouldn't ask her to stay behind
w: not your fault nick, its mine to if i did not encourage you to let her behind.
b: guys instead we mopped here we should look for more clues i'll call vega and a few officer and the rest of the team
n: this cant happen again she *sobbing* just got out from
w: ordeal, she's a tough girl
b: this is different we cant tell what can hans do to her..
w: dont say it. jim sara is one of my best friend cant loose her
n: me too,
b: okay so the tire tracks and i think that a gas leak
w: okay i'll take pictures and wait for the rest of the team and officer
n: i cant wait i'll go
w: *grab nick's arm* no man we need to wait
n: we cant the oil leak might dry up and we might missed it
w: it could be tampered with other vechile that step on it.
b: okay the grissom, greg, cath, sofia, vega and some officer will be here soon.
w: okay
n: let go warrick
w: no will wait when an officer come will go, ok
n: okay
b: okay look at here
n: what do you got?
b: a cabin picture that was purchase yesterday
w: what?
b: and a picture of jenna being held.
n: we need to go
b: they'll be here soon...

while sara tries to strunggle and to get let the tight bond to loose she saw some movements and moaning. even she tries to talk or scream it cant be heard. she hope that she will be saved soon.

b: they are here..
g: what happened
w: we left her outside
gs: *punching warrick* how stupid are you
n: not his fault it mine
gs: *punch nick to* i hate you both
g: *booming angry voice* enough we better get along and find her now
sofia sc: okay will split
c: split?!
sc: one group follow the oil leak and others search any thing about this guy hans green and talk to the benant maybe they know the locatation of the cabin.
v: no need we have the address now it is on the top of the tv.
g: so what are we waiting for lets go
v: i'll stay here in case i comes back
b: i dont think he'll be back.
v: how do you know?
n: just trust him
w: we do.
v: okay will go i'll call chopper and ambulance just in case
lets move out.

as they drive out nick and warrick cant help to blame themselves. as if they are raising against time. warrick called brass to tell that they should not put their sirens on in case hans to run away. so they did.
as sara to free her self she heard a moaning again she hope that jenna will be okay.
hans falls aspleep in his room he has no way of knowing he'll get caught.
as nick and warrick car and the rest approach the cabin, nick partically jump out of the passenger side without letting it stop, and by instict he look at the basement widow and saw sara tied up and alive and across her saw jenna almost naked and lots of blood.
he walk to brass and told them to go in, in silence.
n: i'll go the basement with warrick, brass, greg and we need medics.
everyone nodded and they do the job.
nick turn the knob of the door and luckily its unlock
b: no nick i'll go first
n: okay
b: okay clear
n: we need to go to the basement
b: vega go upstairs
v: okay
n: *open the door to the basement and flick the switch* sara
s: tries to scream
n: your okay sweetie.
w: glad your alive girl
gs: i think we need to untie her first.
w: yeah greg will go to jenna
gs: okay
while nick tries to untie sara loose rope,
n: *smirking* are you trying to escape
s: *nods* she cant talk because of the gag
n: ooh sorry *removes the gag*
s: thanks for saving me again
n: my pleasure
s: hugs nicks.
w: we need to go the medics.
b: sara i'm sorry
s: its okay
n: we should get them to the medics
w: *scream* we need medics now.
 
well done cocoa!!
ps: i love to scare people!! lmao:p
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As Nick helps Sara to her feet, Greg rushes over to Jenna, who's obviously unconcious, blood rushing down her head. Greg starts to untie the 15 year old untill he heards and sudden bump from up stairs.

W: *looks down at Greg* keep untying Greg. *pulls out his gun* me and brass will head up stairs. *turns to Brass* k?
B: *pulls out his gun* yup...

Warrick and Brass head up stairs to give Grissom, Catherine, Sophia, and Vega back up to find Hans. Greg continues to untie, butterflies still fluttering in his stomach. The only sound keeping him sane was the sound of Nick and Sara talking beside him.

N: Sar, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to...
S: *puts her finger over Nick's lips* no... it's ok.
N: *smiles* so... we're good?
S: *smiles back* we're great.
N: that's good..
Greg: *smiles at his co-worker's obvious chemistry* *says under his breath* kiss her Nick...
N: *smiles, hearing what Greg said to himself* *pulls Sara into a hug* you ok?
S: *smiles* I'm fine.
Greg: *shakes his head* come on nick!
N: *looks staight into Sara's eyes*
S: *looks back*

As Nick and Sara about to kiss, they suddenly hear a gun shot echo through the basement as a bullet passes through the space in between Greg and Nick.

Greg: HOLY SHIT! what the hell was that.
N: *pulls Sara closer* i'm not sure.

suddenly, a voice echos through the basement, startelling the three.

the voice: Who are these people Sara...
N: *turns to Sara, eyes widen* sar,
Greg: *frozen in place*
the voice: Who are those people up stairs?
S: *swallows hard* the... police.
the voice: now why would you want to bring them around.

They suddenly hear Brass yell 'clear' a couple times and foot steps echo through the whole up stairs. they're completely oblivious that the person they're hunting for, was now found them.

N: *turns around to where the voice is coming from* who are you?!
the voice: *closes the door to go upstairs and walks down the stairs* I, Mr. Stokes, *pulls out his gun* am your worse nightmare.
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W: where the hell is he?!

the six looked all over the house, trying to find where Hans was but with no sucess. irritated and tired, Warrick sits down on the couch in the livingroom.

Gris: I'm not sure. Where's Sara? she should of come up by now...
Brass: and Nick, Greg and Jenna. They having a little party in the basement or something?

Suddenly, the six hear a siren echo from the outside. Catherine rushes to the door to meet the paramedics and guides them to the basement door. As she grabs the door knob, she tries to open it. the knobs doesn't budge. Catherine looks back at Grissom, who has confusion over his face.

C: was the door locked when we opened it?
B: noo..
C: did you close it when you came up?
W: *walks over to where everyone is* no...

Everyone's eyes widen as they hear a familar scream from the basement.

Gris: Sara...
Sophia: They're still down there....
Warrick: and i think someone else is down there too...
C: holy shit!

The paramedics rush back to their vehicle and pull out a wedge, hoping it'll work to open the door.

B: hurry! the bastards down there!! and now we have more then two victums.
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the man: *gun pointed at Greg* move to the wall skinny man.
Greg: *nods his head, deciding not the make an agrument over him not being skinny*
the man: *moves his gun point to Nick* now you. Move to the back wall.
N: *grabs Sara and moves to the back*
the man: *grabs Sara's arm* just you.
N: *looks over at Sara* No. I'm not leaving her side.
Greg and Sara: *eyes widen*
the man: *laughs* you do what i say, or you're going be at her feet.
S: *whispers in Nick's ear* do what he says, Nick, please.
N: *looks over at Sara* no, Sara. I'm not going to let him lay a hand on you.
S: Nick, please...
the man: * puts his gun point on Nick's fore head* yes Nick, please.
S: *makes Nick loose his grip on her* go...
N: *kisses Sara on the cheek and moves back to where Greg's standing*
the man: how cute. *grabs Sara's arm* now you can watch me have my fun with her.
N: *eyes widen* DON'T TOUCH HER!!
the man: *grabs Sara's head and kisses her on the lips* to late...
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HAHA! put another spin on it. sorry... had a little fun there. hope you guys can continue!
 
Nick will never that nutso man touch Sara. I have never picture Greg punch Warrick and Nick, they big men, they will beat Greg to the plum. I hope Brass and teams save them or shoot the man or Sara kick him or stomp him on the foot.

I will write soon you get done this story. We need to pick up the new name for our Snickers Thread soon.
 
haha:p i'll try to make something happen!!
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A scream rang up and passed through the door, entering into the ears of the people up stairs. The scream seemed to burst energy into the paramedics as they started to bang harder and harder on the door, trying to allow access to the basement.

W: *starts to get irritated* come on! *grabs one of the metal poles the paramedics have and starts banging the door down*

Warrick creates a hole in the door and throws the pole to the ground. He puts his arm through the hole and reaches down to the door knob, attempting the unlock it. Suddenly, he hears a 'CLICK' and smiles form on everyone's face. Catherine reaches down and grabs the door knob, turning it and pushing it in. Guns drawn, they head down.
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N: GET YOUR HANDS OFF HER YOU BASTARD!!

the man lets his hands wonder all over Sara's body, making Sara scream with every disgusting rumb he gave her.

N: SARA!!!
the man: shut up, Stokes. *moving his aim to Nick, getting the gun point off of Sara's head*
N: *tears rolling down his cheeks as he moves closer to the pair* just... let her go. please, *sniffle* take me instead! please!!
the man: *moves his aim back to Sara's head* take another step, and i'll do more then just touch her..
N: *stops immediatly* Don't...
the man: *moves in a kisses Sara's neck*
N: *closes his eyes in disguist, as the tears start to burn his eyes*

Greg's breathing start to get heavy. He didn't speak, all he did was stay against the wall in silent, praying that they would all get out alright.

As the man starts to head south on Sara's skin, a sudden 'Bang' causes all of them to stop in place. The yells of the team echo through the whole basement. Startelled, the man pulls Sara under the stairs and looks back at Nick.

the man: you say anything *points the gun at Sara's head* she dies.
N: *whips the tears from his face and looks at Sara* *takes a deep breath* ok. *looks back at Greg* Greg, get over here.

The rest of the team comes running down the stairs, miraciously not falling. Guns out, they see Nick and Greg untying Jenna.

B: Nick, Greg....
N: *looks up* yeah...
B: *looks around* are you guys ok?
N: ya... *turns back to the body, looking quickly over at Sara under the stairs*
W: we heard screaming, man.
Greg: *jumps right in* that was Jenna. She started freaking out and stuff. but then she all the sudden stopped. *looks over at Nick, getting a reassuing smile*
Gris: *gets infront of Brass* where's Sara?
N: *looks over at Sara and then over to Greg* she's.... in the bathroom.
Gris: in. the. bathroom?
N: coo..collecting evidence. *points over to a door, not really sure if it's actually a bathroom or not*
Gris: *walks over to room, but the door knob doesn't turn* Sar, sweetie... open the door.
N: *shakes his head, disgust at Grissom calling Sara 'sweetie'. tears start to form in his eyes, but he doensn't let them fall.* it's... it's locked?
Gris: *turns around* yeah... what the hell is going on Nick?
N: *takes a deep breath* Warrick, you try openning it.
W: *looks down at Nick.*
N: *looks up at Warrick, giving him helpless eyes*
W: *walks over to where Grissom is and tries to open it, but doesn't succeed* It's looked, man. Sara! Open the door!
N: *stands up* what the hell. *walks over the where Grissom and Warrick are* *as he walks past them and tugs on the door, he whispers* he's down here; under the stairs. he has Sara.... at gun point DAMN DOOR! Sara, open the door! It's Nick. shoot the bastard. i can't do anything. think of something, please! *turns back around and heads back over to Greg and Jenna*.
W: *gets what Nick's saying and sees the two at the cornor of his eye* well, she probably just dones't want distractions. So, you two got it?
Greg: *looks over at Nick, confusion on his face*
N: *notices Greg's look* yeah, we got it. no worries.
W: *nods his head* ok, let's get back up and find Hans.
C: Warrick...
W: *grabs Grissom and walks over to the rest of the team* come on. he could be on the run and we have to catch this bastard.
B: ok... should i stay down?
N: *looks over a the man, seeing the man shake his head 'no'* No, we're good Brass. really. i'll get Sara out of the room.
B: *puts his gun away* ok... just yell if you need anything.
Greg: can do.

The team follows Warrick upstairs, confused and worried at the same time. Warrick brings them upstairs and tells them what Nick said; a plan already brewing in his mind.
 
ooh my god emily great agst.

good job nicky boy as the man show himself and sara still at his mercy and on gun point licking her face.
gs: *taking a deep breathe* please let sara go
the man: *stepping in the light* and why should i ? continue to kiss sara and touch her
gs: she's just a girl, if you want to kill anyone take me
n: no greg take me instead, 'cause hans life without her is not worth living for
h: that so sweet self sacrifice dont work here
n: if you want money i can give you that

hans*eyes got wide and he loosen the grip on and
sara took the opportunity to hit the ribs of hans with her elbow and grope his wrist to release the gun it drop to the floor while nick and greg ready to charge to take him down and greg start to scream.... warrick heard it
w: lets go
b: right behind you
when they reach the basement nick is beating hans to death and greg tries to sooth sara of the pain.
b: break it up *pulls nick aside and pulls out his handcap to put on mr, green*
w: get him out of here
g: sara sweetie sorry *proceeded to hug her*
s: hugs him back
n: *feel hurt* but still ask are you okay
s: yeah *release hug from grissom and hugs nick* thank you
gs: what about me
s: *walks over to greg hug and kiss him on the chee* greg should bring jenna up to check her
n: and i think should to.
s: *nods head* yeah i guess i should get patch up with this scratches.

after a long 3 day shift and the case was solve sara has a week off and she ponder with her own delima about who she will choose and how she'll bring herself to this. it is her first night off and she can't help that she want to have nick around her again. to tell him that she's falling for him more and more. the more she denied it the more the feeling gets stronger. she and grissom broke up and it ended more than a week now. and no one know only her and him. she needs to tell nick before its to late.
she needs a plan.
 
after carefully planning that morning she drives around and park her car at nick building. she sits there and ponder what she's gonna say. she gather enough courage to get out of the car walk to the front door and race to nick door to knock.
n: *looks at the peep hole to see sara and open the door* hey
s: hey
n: every thing okay
s: yeah, i.. mean would like to have breakfast with me?
n: *surprise yet happy and smile broke in* are you asking me out
s: *blushing* would you like that
n: very much
s: so that's a yes *still blushing*
n: *jumping for joy* yes it is definetely a yes.
s: lets go then
n: lets so where you taking me
s: anywhere you want
 
aww... that's cute. sorry i didn't post before.. i didn't know what to do:p haha..

ok, so are we going to continue this or start a new scenario? any ideas?
 
i think we should start a new scenario.
for an idea i want sara's parents kinda plan for her to have an arrange marriage and she ask nick to pretend to be her husband. what you think.
 
well, sara only has one parent and she's kinda a crazy... so what about Nick's parents? like, i don't know maybe Nick's having a get together at his house and his parents think he's married or something, and he's not. so, he asks Sara, (who he told his parents he married) to come on along and back him up. something like that?
 
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