Road Trip! The Final Frontier.

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Prison bus, correctional facility

Delko: *shines flashlight* So nobody saw what happened?

Calleigh: The driver said he was too busy concentrating on the heavy traffic.

Delko: And the guards?

Calleigh: They didn't notice anything unusual. The only time visibility was compromised inside the bus was when they passed through an underpass during rushour.

Horatio: *walks onto bus*

Delko: A bus full of murderers.

Horatio: Our suspect pool, just got more interesting.

CSI Garage, Hummerhome

Katie: *slams beer onto table*

Lora: *swigs beer*

Jenna: Well this is relaxing.

Katie: *leans head against window* Y'know what I blove about this place? The AIR CONDITIONTHINGER.

Jenna: I can't believe you got blasted at noon.

Katie: I'm Katie.

Jenna: *lifts brow*

Lora: That's really the only answer you need.

Carly: *walks in* Hey, Colton's lookin' for you.

Katie: HOLY! You just sounded southern!

Carly: I'm Australian.

Katie: Yeah but you were like. HOLY.

Carly: Is she drunk again?

Jenna: *nods*

Lora: *looks in purse* ..Katie did you steal my pain medication?

Katie: *stacking pills* No.

Lora: *frowns* I can see the pills.

Katie: Hehe, they look like Fred Flinstone. YABBA DABBA DOO!

Carly: Who bought the beer?

Katie: I did with my fake ID.

Carly: Katie, you're over 21.

Katie: Yeah but they don't know that.

Lora: So when are we going on a road trip?

Carly: When Horatio says we are. Right now he's investigating Trevor's death.

Katie: I DIDN'T DO IT!

Carly: I hear we're going to Mount Everest.

Lora: What? I can't hike with a broken leg.

Carly: You're staying at basecamp with the goats.

Lora: Well this sucks.

Jenna: Can't you die up at Everest?

Katie: Yeah can't we climb a tree or something?

Carly: No.

Katie: Okay, can I climb a tree?

Carly: Go for it.

Katie: *runs to the door, falls down steps*

Lora: She's getting better at this.

Katie: I'M OKAY! *holding head*

Jenna: Hun, you're bleeding.

Katie: No no, it's cool. I won't even feel it until I get sobered up.

Wachovia Financial Centre

Lori: So this is where you work.

Scott: *pushes elevator button* Yeah.

Lori: You know, we're supposed to be at the restaurant with everyone else across the street.

Scott: This'll only take a minute.

Lori: I realize you have to keep an eye on your cubicle but why drag me in on this?

Scott: You followed me, remember?

Lori: Yes because you almost got run over by a bus on the way up.

Scott: If I had crossed the street at the lights, the staff would have seen me.

Lori: You're insane.

Scott: *smiles* That's the idea, right?

Lori: *rolls eyes*

Scott: *steps off elevator*

Lori: *follows* I can't believe there's a basketball court downstairs.

Scott: Everyone in Miami knows this building has one. How long have you been here?

Lori: I wasn't raised here. Does that help?

Scott: Not really.

Lori: The tallest building I'd ever seen was the Torre Colpatria. It had 50 floors or something and it did not have a basketball court. *looks out window* I hate heights.

Scott: *opens desk*

PD--Interrogation room

Horatio: Officer, can you tell me what you saw on the bus?

Cop: I didn't see anything.

Delko: Did you hear anything?

Cop: It was loud. You know how roudy they can get.

Horatio: Mhm. Was anyone sitting with the victim?

Cop: He was at the back of the bus. It's just a long bench at the back so he could have had maybe 3 or 4 people sitting with him.

Delko: What, and you don't carry a manifest?

Cop: I didn't think anyone was going to be murdered on the bus.

Horatio: Well you thought wrong, didn't you.

Cop: *looks at Horatio*

Delko: *stares at Cop*

Cop: Why does it matter? He was a criminal.

Horatio: He was also a human being.

Cop: Not from what I heard.

Horatio: Excuse me?

Cop: The inmates talk. I guess they think if there's a cage blocking us from them that we won't be able to hear what they're saying. Before we left, your victim seemed pretty buddy-buddy with a couple of them. They kept saying how it was all in effect. Apparently your victim had quite a vendetta against the City of Miami.

Horatio: Explain please.

Cop: He kept saying how he could take down Miami in one fell swoop if he wanted too, you know, arrogant asswipe stuff. I guess he was going for publicity and a reputation so he could build an army and rob the city blind.

Horatio: Who was he talking to?

Cop: Hell if I know. I transport them, not babysit.

Horatio: *nods*

Ballistics Lab

Horatio: *walks in* Ma'am.

Calleigh: *smiles* Good to see you on your feet. When I spoke with you on the phone, I didn't realize you were interested in coming back so soon.

Horatio: Well crime doesn't take a day off.

Calleigh: True. Speaking of, I went to see Alexx. Cause of death was exsanguination from stab wounds.

Horatio: Multiple?

Calleigh: *opens folder* That's what I thought at first but look at how close together they are.

Horatio: *tilts head* The distance is the same between each wound.

Calleigh: And it's hard to do that with a knife or a shank.

Horatio: So we're looking for one weapon containing multiple sharp ends.

Calleigh: A small weapon. These wounds aren't more than an inch long but did the job on his carotid artery.

Horatio: So we're talking about extensive force as well.

Calleigh: How did an inmate get a weapon aboard the prison bus from the PD?

Horatio: That...is a very good question. *walks away*

Police Department

Tripp: *flipping through pages*

Horatio: Hey Frank, you have a minute?

Tripp: Sure H. What do you need?

Horatio: I need a log of all the people sent to the correctional bus this morning and their personal effects.

Tripp: I'll go get it. *walks away*

Horatio: Thank you.

Two minutes later

Tripp: *places down box* Here's the personal effects and here's the list. *hands over paper*

Horatio: *looks down at paper*

Tripp: *opens box* We got uh, shoelaces, clothing, bubble gum, jewelery, b-

Horatio: Wait a second, did you say jewelery?

Tripp: Yeah. They're from some goth kid who liked to blow stuff up.

Horatio: Goth kid...may I see the jewelery please.

Tripp: Sure. *lifts out jewelery* A spiked collar thing, arm bands, nose ring...

Horatio: *lifts collar*

Tripp: My ex-wife tells me men are dogs but that's taking it a little too literal.

Horatio: Did you perform a search before he went on the bus?

Tripp: Of course.

Horatio: Cavity search?

Tripp: We don't do cavity searches. Prison does.

Horatio: *nods* Thank you. *walks away*

Interrogation room

Calleigh: *sits* Jonah, I know you were on the prison bus with Trevor Saunders.

Jonah: So? Doesn't mean I killed him.

Calleigh: The police officer witnessed a conversation between the two of you concerning a plan Trevor had to 'rob Miami'. Do you know what that was about?

Jonah: I don't know. He was spouting off a bunch of stuff about how he stole guns and explosives and he was going to do all this stuff. But he was in prison, y'know? How was he going to do all of that?

Calleigh: Did he have any affiliates?

Jonah: He was part of the same gang as me.

Calleigh: Gang.

Jonah: Yeah. The Hellraisers. I know, it's kind of cheap but we're working on the name. Trevor thought it up.

Calleigh: So you knew him personally.

Jonah: I just joined. He was like a god, I wasn't going to just up and talk to him. *smiles* But he started talking to me.

Calleigh: *looks at Jonah's hand* Interesting ring.

Jonah: *looks down* Oh yeah, that's the gang's ring. It's a devil with spikes coming out all over its head.

Calleigh: How did you manage to get it past our people?

Jonah: I hid it...somewhere. Look, I'm not going to go to prison without some kind of street cred. When people see this ring, they'll know I'm not some bitch. It actually um...fell out on my way into the bus. I found it lying on the floor when we got to the prison. But I swear, I didn't kill the guy.

Calleigh: May I borrow it?

Jonah: Why?

Calleigh: To confirm your story.

Jonah: *lifts brow* If it'll help. I guess.

Miami, Hallway

Horatio: *shifts positions*

Calleigh: *walks over* There was blood on the ring. Valera's running it now.

Horatio: So Jonah looks very good for the murder.

Calleigh: He claims it fell when he got onto the bus. Anyone could have picked it up. And the way Trevor was talking, it's no surprise someone had enough of him.

Horatio: The statement mentions explosives. You guys didn't find any explosives, did you?

Calleigh: Just some fire crackers.

Horatio: How big was the hold?

Calleigh: It was about 4 meters long and 2 meters wide.

Horatio: Big enough for explosives.

Calleigh: Well they were gone by the time Katie and Colton got there.

Horatio: So where are they now and who's using them?

Delko: *runs over* H!

Horatio: *turns around* Yeah Eric.

Delko: You gotta come see this. *runs into lounge*

Horatio: *looks at Calleigh*

Calleigh: *lifts brow*

Lounge

Horatio: *stares at television*

Calleigh: That's the financial building downtown.

Delko: News says it was bombed just a few minutes ago.

Horatio: *frowns*

Delko: I guess that's where Trevor's explosives went.

Horatio: At least three banks, the Dade Community foundation, Canadian Consolate, various other foundations and investment groups. Perfect place to rob Miami blind.

Delko: I guess if they were going to go for blind, they should have picked something more subtle.

Horatio: Gear up.

Wachovia Financial Centre

Lori: *stands, dusts self off* What the hell was that?

Scott: *holding onto desk*

Lady: *runs out of room screaming*

Guy: *ducks from falling beam*

Lady2: *holds arm*

Lori: *looks out broken window* ...Wow.

Lady2: Is everyone okay!

Guy: I'm okay.

Lady3: What happened?

Guy: I don't know. It felt like an explosion.

Lady3: I can hear popping sounds. Are those gunshots?

Guy: I think so.

Lady3: Someone call 9-1-1.

Guy: *picks up phone* ...It's dead.

Lori: Anyone here have a cellphone?

Lady3: I didn't bring mine today.

Lori: Scott, do you have a cellphone?

Scott: *covers eyes*

Lori: *looks outside* I think the pedestrians down there have it covered. They're all on their phones.

Lady3: What do we do?

Guy: We should go downstairs. C'mon, everyone to the elevator.

Lady3: *runs to elevator*

Scott: *lifts head* I wouldn't do that.

Guy: Why the hell not?

Elevator door opens

Guy: *looks down* ...Hey, how come the elevators are off?

Scott: To direct idiots to the stairs.

Guy: *looks over* Hey you know what your problem is? You think you know everything. The second you got here, you started at a higher wage, you got all the promotions and I'm pretty sure the boss had a crush on you but that doesn't mean you know everything.

Scott: Then please, find the exit for us.

Guy: I will. *walks over to door, pushes it* ...It's bent.

Lady3: The blast sure felt close.

Guy: There's a bank two floors below this one. Maybe it was a robbery.

Lori: Explains the gunshots.

Guy: And who the hell are you? You don't work here.

Lori: I'm on a field trip.

Guy: *looks around* How do we get out?

Lady3: The firefighters will take care of us. They know what to do.

Guy: Yeah. I mean, how tall are their ladders?

Scott: 9 storeys.

Guy: What?

Scott: I said 9 storeys.

Guy: But...we're on the 55th.

Scott: Exactly.

Guy: *walks over to broken window* HELP! HELLLLP!

Scott: *sits in chair, covers forehead*

Lori: *kneels* Hey. Are you okay?

Scott: *exhales* When they said I should confront my demons, I didn't imagine this.

Lori: Kind of unlucky huh.

Scott: What would your worst nightmare be?

Lori: *looks down at floor* Probably...locked in a room with a bunch of decaying corpses.

Scott: *looks at Lori*

Lori: Don't even ask.

Scott: *nods*

Guy: Hey! Hey! I see firetrucks! There's dozens of them heading this way. WE'RE SAVED! Oh oh and cops too, lots of them. *lifts brow* What kind of cop drives a Hummer?

Lori: *lifts head* Hummer? What Hummer? *runs to window*

Guy: Right there.

Lori: Great.

Downtown Miami

Horatio: *closes Hummer door* What do we have gentlemen?

Cop: From what we can tell, two banks were bombed and the men inside have guns. One of the staff members upstairs called rescue and said she found one body and a gun on the floor.

Horatio: So they were stupid enough to blow themselves up.

Cop: Bombs aren't the most idiot-proof devices.

Horatio: *smirks* Very true. Okay, let's get a confirmation of how many people are up there.

Cop: Yes sir.

Horatio: Chief.

Chief: *walks over* Yeah Lieutenant.

Horatio: How stable is this building?

Chief: Depends what kind of explosives they were using and what combinations. I have to tell you, Lieutenant, we don't get a lot of high-rise fires in Miami and when we do, the frames haven't been blasted to smitherines.

Horatio: I understand.

Financial Building

Lori: *leaning against wall* It's starting to get a bit dusty in here.

Guy: Should we smash open another window?

Lady3: Yeah, I can barely breathe.

Scott: No. We have enough air.

Lady3: I have asthma. It might start to act up.

Scott: Then we should be figuring out how to get downstairs.

Guy: Again with the all-knowingness. What are the odds we won't run into giant hole in the building and fall to our deaths? How do you know there isn't a giant fireball below?

Scott: Because the floor isn't hot.

Guy: What?

Scott: There's no fire directly below us because the floor isn't heating up. Would you like me to repeat everything I say or is simple english good enough?

Guy: I graduated from MIT at the top of my class. I also attended two years at Harvard. Don't patronize me.

Scott: Congratulations. I went to a community college and I still make more money than you.

Lori: Boys, let's put away the measuring sticks.

Guy: Why? You feeling overshadowed by my superiority?

Lori: *looks at Scott* And I'm the one with a therapist.

Scott: *smirks*

Guy: Okay, look, why don't we just try and bust the door down.

Lady3: How?

Guy: Let's use the desks.

Lady3: They're bolted to the floor.

Guy: So we're out of options.

Scott: We could climb down the elevator shaft.

Everyone: *looks at Scott*

Scott: What, I can't suggest anything?

Lori: Okay, come on. *stands, walks over to elevator*

Guy: You're crazy. *stands* What if we fall?

Scott: *stands* Don't fall.

Elevator shaft

Lady3: *coughing*

Scott: *climbs down beside Lady3* You okay?

Lady3: Just a lot more dusty down here is all.

Scott: You can make it. Just try to take normal breaths.

Lady3: *nods*

Scott: Lori!

Lori: *shines flashlight down* Yeah!

Scott: I think there's an open door just a few meters from here!

Lori: Perfect!

Guy: Where did you two meet anyway?

Scott: I'm on the same field trip.

Guy: For what? I don't remember the company sending anyone out on a field trip.

Scott: Get a better salary. *climbs down*

Guy: *frowns*

Inside empty room

Lori: *climbs in* Okay, what floor are we on?

Guy: 52nd. I think we bypassed one of the blown banks.

Scott: Start looking around for a cellphone or something.

Guy: So we can call for help?

Scott: So we can start identifying to them who we are in case we don't make it out.

Guy: That's morbid.

Lady3: I think I found one! *picks up cellphone* AH!

Everyone: *looks over*

Lady3: OH MY GOD HE'S DEAD!

Scott: *looks at floor*

Guy: *covers mouth*

Lady3: He's been shot or something, he's all mangled! Oh my God. *covers eyes*

Scott: *nods* Check if he has a wallet or something.

Lori: The whole building's a crime scene. I don't think we should touch anything aside from what we need to.

Scott: Yeah, good idea.

Guy: Y'all are acting like it's normal to see dead people everywhere.

Lori: *dials phone*

Scott: Who are you calling?

Lori: Horatio.

Scott: Who's Horatio?

Lori: *puts phone up to ear*

Downtown Miami

Horatio: *answers phone* Caine.

Delko: *walks up*

Horatio: ...*looks at Eric* Mhm.

Delko: *lifts brow*

Horatio: And you're okay...alright. No no, we're doing everything we can from down here....okay. I'll let them know. *closes phone*

Delko: Who was that?

Horatio: Apparently Lori and three other people are on the 52nd floor.

Delko: How?

Horatio: They were supposed to be at a restaurant across the street when one of the men she was with decided to grab something from his office.

Delko: Are they alright?

Horatio: So far. Where are we with hazmat?

Delko: They're upstairs now. The Chief also just told me the building's safe. It's just a matter of getting everyone on the top floors downstairs which should be easy once the fire's contained.

Horatio: Good. So Trevor started a gang of thieves whose plan was to rob Miami directly.

Delko: Ambitious plan. So who killed him?

Horatio: We still have yet to find that out. Calleigh's working on it with the rest of the team.

Delko: *nods*

Horatio: And Eric.

Delko: Yeah H.

Horatio: We're going on vacation after this.

Delko: *laughs* I hear ya.
 
Wow!! awesome update SC:) I'm loving all the excitment, and poor Katie banging her head:lol:.

Katie: *runs to the door, falls down steps*

Lora: She's getting better at this.

Katie: I'M OKAY! *holding head*
:guffaw:I love Lora's line

So many great parts SC, I can go on all day. But great, great update. Can't wait for the next chapter;):)
 
Awesome update, Geni! I love the action that you've supplied, and the fact that Scott is doing so well under the current circumstances- well, that's a miracle in itself. And Lori is doing well too, keeping calm, trying not to kill people, etc, etc.... :guffaw:

I can't wait for more!
 
Hehe Drunk Katie. :D

Cop: STOP RESISTING!
Katie: STOP BEING GAY!

:lol:

Thanks for the reviews everyone. :)

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Downtown Miami, few hours later

Horatio: Where are we with suspects?

Calleigh: The gunmen inside are all dead. One of them was a convicted bank robber who was out on probation. He's also part of the gang Trevor started.

Delko: Darwinism at it's best.

Horatio: Indeed. How many people have escaped the building?

Delko: Close to 2200.

Horatio: Any sign of Ms. Henderson.

Delko: She's by the ambulance over there.

Horatio: Thank you. *walks away*

Ambulance

Lori: *sitting, holding arm*

Scott: *touches Lori's face* You okay?

Lori: I'm fine. *pulls head away* I was hit by falling glass, not a bomb.

Horatio: *walks over* Lori?

Lori: *looks over* Hey.

Horatio: *tilts head* How are you doing?

Lori: I'd be doing better if Miami was a normal city.

Horatio: *nods*

Scott: *extends hand* Scott Finch.

Horatio: *grabs hand*

Lori: He works in the building. We actually met at the Happy House.

Horatio: ...I see. Well, nice to meet you.

Scott: *nods* Same to you, Lieutenant.

Horatio: *stares at Scott*

Lori: ...Do you two know each other or something?

Scott: *looks down at ground*

Horatio: Not exactly.

Lori: Not exactly how.

Horatio: I've heard of this young man. His family are huge contributors to the NYPD. His father's even a Supreme Court judge whom I've had the opportunity to meet with several times.

Lori: *looks at Scott*

Horatio: I understand you've turned yourself around.

Scott: For the better I hope.

Horatio: *smirks* Well, I'm glad you're both okay. I'll be with those officers over there if you need anything. *walks away*

Lori: *rolls eyes* Great.

Scott: Excuse me?

Lori: *shakes head* Nothing. *hops off ambulance, grabs onto bumper* Ugh.

Scott: *grabs Lori's arm* You have two sprained ankles. I don't think you should be jumping around.

Lori: *pulls arm away* How did you not get hurt? If I recally correctly, the plate glass window fell on everyone. *hobbles*

Scott: *smiles*

Lori: *glares* What.

Scott: Nothing, it's just, it's like watching an awkward foal getting up for the first time. It's quite humorous.

Lori: Ha. Ha. You know, this is all your fault.

Scott: Oh?

Lori: Yeah. You made me follow you.

Scott: *laughs* I didn't make you do anything.

Lori: I wasn't going to watch you get run over by traffic because you're stupid.

Scott: Gee, I didn't realize you cared.

Lori: I don't care. But y'know, it would have been a scene and I wouldn't get my lunch.

Scott: How unfortunate for you.

Lori: I know. *knee collapses* GOD DAMN! Come on!

Scott: *walks over, grabs Lori's hand*

Lori: *pulls hand away* I can do it. *stands*

Scott: You're very frustrating to deal with, you know.

Lori: Mhm. One of my best qualities.

Scott: You need to start letting people get close to you.

Lori: *lifts head*

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Lori: *swallows* ...Um, you mean...like how close you are to me right now?

Scott: I haven't moved.

Lori: ...

Scott: I think someone over there wants to see you.

Lori: *sigh* Huh?

Scott: *points* Over there.

Near Hummers

Katie: LORI! BABY! WAZZUP! *waving wildly*

Lora: *grabs Katie's hands* For the last time, stop hitting me with your stupid hands.

Near ambulance

Lori: *covers eyes*

Scott: She doesn't seem overly concerned.

Lori: That's because she's plastered. *shakes head* I can't believe they let her out in public.

Scott: They let you out in public.

Lori: Oh I'm laughing so hard on the inside right now you have no idea.

Scott: *smiles*

TBC....................
 
Lori: That's because she's plastered. *shakes head* I can't believe they let her out in public.

Scott: They let you out in public.

*Giggle,snort*, Great update Geni:lol: Can't wait for the next installment;)
 
:D

Thanks for the reviews!

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Near Hummer

Katie: WOOO! You're okie dokie! *hugs Lori*

Lori: *rolls eyes*

Katie: *lets go* HEY. Wait, what in the Miami were you doing out here? You're supposed to be locked up somewhere like a crazy.

Lori: Interacting with the real world is part of treatment.

Katie: You just said a whole bunch of big words that I didn't understand. What exactly is this 'real world'? Sheesh.

Speed: *walks over* Hey I just got a call, what's going on down here?

Lori: Mom's drunk.

Speed: No, with you.

Lori: Oh. Yeah, I was kind of in the building up there. But it's cool, I had Scott with me.

Speed: *narrows eyes* Who's Scott?

Lori: ...A man.

Katie: Is he hot?

Lori: *looks at Katie* Mother.

Katie: Well, is he?

Lori: *frowns* He's over there with the police giving his statement.

Katie: *looks over* OH MAN. Wait, which one is he?

Lori: *sigh* The only one not wearing a uniform.

Katie: OH! Heeeey he's pretty. Who's that guy he reminds me of? *slaps Speed* Who's that guy?

Speed: I don't know what you're talking about.

Katie: You know. That guy! Um...*bites lip* ...the one in that movie with the things. *snaps* C'mon I know this one. It was on Jeopardy last night.

Scott: *walks over* Hey Lori, I'm going to head back to the house.

Katie: JOSH DUHAMEL!

Scott: *looks at Katie* Excuse me?

Katie: Whoo boy, she picked a good one.

Lori: *frowns* We're aquaintances.

Katie: Yeah right.

Scott: Uh, I don't mean to pry in on an obvious family affair but it's true. We're just aquaintances.

Katie: So when are you gonna ask her out?

Lori: He's not. Mother, I don't mean to be rude but shut the hell up.

Katie: Hmph.

Scott: Anyway, it was nice to meet you all and everything but..well, actually I didn't really meet any of you.

Katie: *extends hand* My name's Katie. *grinning*

Scott: *nervous smile* Scott.

Katie: Teehee.

Speed: *shakes Scott's hand* I'm Tim. The father.

Lori: *covers eyes*

Scott: Nice to meet you sir. Look, I've really got to head back now. I'll see you all later. *walks away*

Katie: Hm he needs a nice southern drawl to him.

Lori: *walks away*

Speed: *shakes head*

Katie: What?

Near restaurant

Lori: *runs over* I sincerely apologize for their behaviour.

Scott: No worries.

Lori: They're just...a little weird. Everyone on the team is a little weird. *scoffs* Makes them kind of cool sometimes, actually.

Scott: They must love you very much.

Lori: Depends on your definition. So uh, how are you doing with all of this? The whole building thing, I mean.

Scott: *shrugs* I wasn't really paying much attention to the building.

Lori: *stops walking*

Scott: *looks back, stops walking* What.

Lori: What were you paying attention to?

Scott: Getting out.

Lori: No flashbacks, crazy insane terrors...shaking limbs? Nothing?

Scott: Maybe a little.

Lori: You did a pretty good job getting everyone out, you know. I appreciate it.

Scott: You're welcome. *starts walking*

Lori: Besides the whole PTSD angle, does your family have a history of depression or mental illness?

Scott: *lifts brow* No.

Lori: Have you ever wanted to be a police officer?

Scott: No.

Lori: Are you an undercover anything?

Scott: *looks at Lori* No.

Lori: Drug dealer?

Scott: No, look, I'm just a regular guy. What's with the interrogation?

Lori: Just curious.

Scott: *nods slowly*

Lori: You don't have any..obscure children running around do you?

Scott: *frowns*

Lori: Sorry, sorry.

TBC......................


Now onto the road trip. :devil:
 
Awesome....Yay, road trip:lol:

Great update Geni, you know, I'm really loving Scott. I can almost hear how he would talk. It's most likely deep, but to the point. I can feel this strength about him.

*Is he going on the Road Trip?*:)
 
Awesome updates! I really love Scott, he's cool. Even cooler , Lori's interrogation of him to make sure he's ah...suitable. And Katie....ah...good times, good times.

For Scott's sake...lol...ah, never mind, all's fair in love and road trips!


Excellent work, Geni!
 
:lol: I liked Lori's interrogation... too funny. Very true that they are a weird team... haha. I like it. :)

Awesome job!
 
*Is he going on the Road Trip?*:)

He won't be. :) But there are a lot of others who are so yay. :D

Thanks so much for the reviews!

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Hummerhome, 7pm

Horatio: Okay people, let's hit it.

Colton: Please don't ever say that again.

Horatio: But I saw it on a commercial for Mountain Dew. Isn't that what all the cool kids are saying?

Heather: First of all, you're not a kid nor are you cool. Secondly, you shouldn't be getting your tag lines from a Mountain Dew commercial. It's embarassing.

Horatio: I didn't realize you felt this way. Does everyone think this?

Everyone: Yes.

Horatio: Oh. But I thought I was rather 'cool'.

Lora: When you put rabbit ears around the word cool, it makes you not cool.

Horatio: What exactly constitutes cool?

Calleigh: *opens glove compartment, pulls out dictionary*

Jenna: You have a dictionary in there?

Calleigh: Yep. It's for whenever we play Scrabble so Eric doesn't make up words. Okay, the definition of cool is...slang for excellent, fashionable, hip, and was first used after World War ll but popularized in the 40s and has stood the test of time, unlike other words like rad or far out.

Horatio: Oh far out, I know that one.

Delko: What's the definition of definition?

Jenna: Won't the dictionary explode?

Lora: Only if you look up the word dictionary.

Calleigh: Definition. The act of...defining. Well, that was pretty useless.

Speed: Are we seriously doing this? Aren't you guys supposed to get drunk and run around naked?

Katie: I'm still drunk if that counts.

Horatio: I've taken out all of the alcohol and you are all assigned a budget.

Katie: WHAT! NO! YOU'RE SO NOT COOL.

Jenna: We've established that.

Horatio: I want less incidents by drunkards.

Katie: HEY. We are not drunkards. We're delightfully obscene.

Ryan: So what budget are we getting?

Horatio: Well, since we need to fix up the Hummerhome, I've decided to let you guys in on it. We're going to be stopping at the local shopping centre and you're each getting 100 dollars. Spend wisely.

Carly: Can we buy food?

Horatio: No food.

Katie: What? Ah damn. *scribbles paper*

Colton: What are you doing?

Katie: Making a list of everything I'm going to buy.

Colton: *grabs paper* Balls of yarn, a disco light and condoms...okay I get the disco light and ...maybe condoms but why balls of yarn?

Katie: I want to make mittens. We're going to Mount Everest.

Horatio: Actually, it turns out it's the wrong part of the season. We're going to have to go to the mountains in the United States. We can hike up one of those.

Katie: Can I still make mittens?

Calleigh: Do you know how to knit?

Katie: ...Knitting? No one said anything about knitting. What do you think the condoms are for? Rubber mittens.

Speed: I don't even want to know how that works.

Horatio: No condoms.

Katie: Ugh, Horatio, I'm running out of room to scratch things out. Seriously.

Carly: Well I know what I'm getting. A new television.

Ryan: That's going to cost more than 100 bucks.

Carly: Screw the budget, I've got money in the bank. Alamony baby.

Ryan: If you can't play the game fairly, don't play at all.

Heather: What are you going to buy with your money?

Ryan: Giant headphones so I don't hear anything at night. And whoever makes all that noise with their significant other, you know who you are.

Jess: Eric and I haven't shared a room in forever.

Katie: Colton and I weren't together the last time we were here.

Anni: I sleep a lot.

Speed: I don't sleep at all.

Lora: So who makes all the noise?

Ryan: Let's check the security tapes.

Everyone: *looks at Ryan*

Ryan: What?

Jenna: You're TAPING us? EW. *slaps Ryan*

Ryan: OW! No! Slap Horatio! He had 'em installed, remember?

Horatio: It's true. But that was strictly for security purposes and they aren't installed in the bathroom.

Speed: But they are in the bedrooms.

Horatio: If you weren't doing anything, you have nothing to worry about.

Ryan: *pulls out laptop* Let's see.

Everyone: *piles around laptop*

Ryan: *typing*

Heather: Get there faster Ryan, get there faster!

Everyone: *looks at Heather*

Heather: Oh you know what I mean. Grow up.

Ryan: Ugh, stupid Mac. *punching keyboard* IT FROZE.

Calleigh: Ctrl Alt Delete.

Ryan: I can't, it's a Mac. *cries*

Anni: Threaten it with Vista.

Ryan: Oh, it's working again.

Anni: Man I am good.

Ryan: *opens program* We will now know once and for all who is keeping Ryan Wolfe awake!

Heather: I didn't realize Ryan Wolfe spoke about himself in the third person.

Ryan: *clicks mouse* Okay. All is good in Jess' bedroom...everything's good in Colton's room....*squints* Why is Katie under her blanket with a flashlight?

Katie: I was..eating Cheez-its.

Speed: Sure you were.

Katie: *slaps Speed* Shut up.

Ryan: Everything's kosher in Carly's abode...as well as Heather, Jenna and Lora's room.

Heather: Why do we get to share a room? Are we like the probies of the Road Trip world?

Ryan: *gasp* I FOUND IT!

Jenna: WHO IS IT! WHO IS IT!

Ryan: IT'S HORATIO!

Everyone: *GASP*

Horatio: What? That can't be right.

Heather: Ew..he's having a dream.

Ryan: *puts ear up to computer* ...About Stetler.

Everyone: EW!

Horatio: Hey! I can't control my dreams! And every once in a while, I get a weird one.

Lora: *stares at Horatio* You're sick.

Wal Mart

Jess: *picks up teddy* Aw, remember these? Those were the days.

Delko: Ah yes. Ted E. Bear was my favourite. Of course along with Sniffles and Snuggles. And okay, Teddington was cute too.

Jess: ...You actually remember all of those?

Delko: They were like my children.

Jess: I see.

Delko: Speaking of..

Jess: No. Eric, I'm not going through this again with you.

Delko: You want a family, right?

Jess: I guess.

Delko: How can you say that? It should be pretty cut and dry.

Jess: It's not.

Delko: This is so childish. Stop making this about some stupid excuse of 'you're too immature' because you know damn well that isn't the case. We had a kid before and I was great with her. I think your problem is you don't want to go through it all and lose another one.

Jess: *throws teddy to floor* We're not having this conversation.

Delko: Why don't you want to talk about her?

Jess: Because! It was my fault, okay! I don't deserve another child, I screwed everything up with the first one!

Delko: You didn't screw up. It was just bad luck.

Jess: *shrugs* If I hadn't left, she'd still be alive.

Delko: *stares at Jess*

Jess: And I don't want to be reminded of it. *walks away*

Delko: *looks down at teddy bear*

Electronics Department

Anni: I want that one. *points*

Carly: It's 4000 dollars.

Anni: Yeah and I want it.

Carly: Do I look like an ATM?

Anni: What happened to 'I've got money'?

Carly: Money, not money.

Anni: Man I wish we still had those millions.

Carly: How about this one?

Anni: That's pink and has The Little Mermaid on top.

Carly: It's your style.

Anni: It's 30 dollars.

Carly: Fine, how about that tv?

Anni: It's more like an iPod.

Carly: It's big.

Anni: You Aussies have a warped sense of size.

Carly: *frowns* Maybe you should be using your own money.

Anni: OH I WANT THAT WATERBED! *runs across the store*

Carly: *lifts brow* How's she going to fit that in the Hummerhome?

Bedroom section

Anni: *flops onto waterbed*

Salesman: *smiles* Hi, how are you?

Anni: Fine and dandy. I want this waterbed.

Salesman: A great choice. That's 999.99.

Anni: I'll give you 100 bucks.

Salesman: Um, this isn't a car dealership ma'am.

Anni: *sits up, starts to cry*

Salesman: *looks around*

Anni: *crying* I'm dying of brain cancer and and and *sniffles* This is the last bed I'll ever own. *balling eyes out* Do you know what it's like to lie in bed and know that you might never leave it? This bed is special, I can feel it. I need this bed so when I die, I'LL HAVE SOMETHING REALLY TACKY TO LEAVE BEHIND! *crying*

Salesman: Okay! Okay! 100 dollars.

Anni: YES.

Pharmacy

Lora: *climbs behind counter*

Jenna: What are you doing?

Lora: Getting some more pain medication for my leg.

Jenna: Um, that's stealing.

Lora: No, I'm borrowing.

Jenna: You'll give it back?

Lora: No but borrowing has a nice ring to it. Stealing always seems so..criminal.

Jenna: No wonder why.

Lora: Help me distract the staff.

Jenna: By doing what?

Lora: Uh...throw a tantrum or something.

Jenna: I'm not going to throw a tantrum so you can steal prescription drugs.

Lora: Fine, then just stay on the lookout for the pharmacist.

Jenna: Shouldn't he or she be behind the counter?

Lora: I sent him searching for scented bandaids.

Jenna: *lifts brow* They don't make scented bandaids.

Lora: And it should make his search very time-consuming. AHA! Found it.

Jenna: I think there are security cameras.

Lora: It's Wal Mart. How much money do they spend on crime fighting? *hops over counter*

Pharmacist: *walks over* ..What were you doing behind the counter?

Lora: I dropped my mood ring.

Pharmacist: You're not wearing a ring.

Lora: Yes, I couldn't find it.

Pharmacist: Why are you holding a pill container?

Lora: Oh this little thing? This is - *kicks Pharmacist* RUN!

Jenna: *screams, runs*

Clothes Section

Heather: Try this on.

Ryan: No, I don't want to look gay.

Heather: *rolls eyes* For the last time, a sailor outfit will not make you look gay.

Ryan: I didn't know Wal Mart sold these.

Heather: They're very popular, trust me.

Ryan: You sure?

Heather: Yes. It's very chic nowadays. Now go put 'em on.

Ryan: ...Okay. I trust you. *grabs clothes, walks into changeroom*

Few minutes later

Ryan: I'm not coming out.

Heather: Ryan, you're not gay.

Ryan: No no, I mean out of the changeroom. This looks stupid. I look like a lollipop kid from a twisted Old Navy commercial.

Heather: It's the style.

Ryan: Fine. *walks out*

Heather: *snaps picture*

Ryan: *wide-eyed*

Heather: I FINALLY have something to put on Facebook!

Ryan: I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THIS TO ME! LOOK AT ME!

Everyone in the store: *looks at Ryan*

Ryan: YES. I AM A SAILOR. LAUGH IT UP. *covers self, runs into changeroom*

Heather: Hehe. *rubs hands together*

Psych Facility

Lori: *sits, opens soda*

Therapist: *walks over* Lori, hello.

Lori: Hey.

Therapist: Mind if I sit down?

Lori: Go ahead.

Therapist: *sits* Thank you. So I understand you had quite a day.

Lori: Not really. It's kind of normal for me.

Therapist: I see. What kind of days were like this?

Lori: *rolls eyes* Where do I begin? My whole life's chaotic.

Therapist: And how does that make you feel?

Lori: Chaotic.

Therapist: See, what I'd like to touch upon is your feelings. You haven't been very forthcoming up to this point and I think it's imperative to your treatment that you open up. Get some things off your chest.

Lori: I don't really have anything to spout off.

Therapist: I think you use this as a defense mechanism. Perhaps you felt vulnerable at one point in your life and that caused you some sort of pain, whether it be physical or emotional. So you shut people out in order to feel secure.

Lori: You get into this all the time at supper?

Therapist: You won't come to private meetings. It makes me think you don't want help.

Lori: I'm here, aren't I?

Therapist: Yes, I suppose that's a start. You have been participating with the group activities. But I think you still need some private sessions.

Lori: I don't see how talking will help me.

Therapist: It's not just about talking. It's about finding a stronger 'you' and recognizing that person, trusting that person and dealing with your demons.

Lori: *laughs* Right.

Therapist: You should try to keep an open mind.

Lori: *rolls eyes* Alright. Whatever you want, if it'll get me through dinner quickly. My primetime television is on soon.

Therapist: Fair enough. Have you made any friends here yet?

Lori: I've met a few people. Some of them have some pretty whacked-out stories too.

Therapist: I understand you and Mister Finch were both involved with the dreadful events this afternoon.

Lori: It wasn't dreadful. Just bad luck.

Therapist: Did you feel scared?

Lori: Why would I be scared?

Therapist: Perhaps you felt your life was theatened.

Lori: Maybe it was, maybe it wasn't. I mean, I could get hit by a car or a train tomorrow. Doesn't make my life and more or less threatened.

Therapist: True. Have you always thought this with all the traumatic experiences in your life?

Lori: Life is traumatic. *eats spaghetti*

Therapist: Maybe. Hm, can you remember the first frightful experience in your life? Or maybe the one that had the most impact. One where you were truly scared and vulnerable.

Lori: *looks down at spaghetti* I guess uh, when I was about 7. No one around me was speaking English; all the other kids were speaking in Portuguese and Spanish, same with the adults. I remember...crying for my mom for hours. It was like screaming at the top of your lungs in a room full of deaf people. After a while, one of the men got tired of hearing me cry so he ripped off all my clothes in front of everyone and beat me until I wet myself. And then he laughed at me.

Therapist: *nods*

Lori: So after that, I stopped crying. And it's something I rarely do now.

Therapist: How do you feel toward the man who did that to you?

Lori: Hatred...fear...confusion.

Therapist: Explain the confusion.

Lori: *scratches brow*

Therapist: It's okay. We can stop here for today.

Lori: *nods*

Therapist: You're doing great. *stands, walks away*

Lori: *staring into plate*

Scott: *walks over, sits* What was all that about? You getting some extra private time with the shrinks?

Lori: ...

Scott: You okay?

Lori: *pushes plate aside, lays head in arms*

Scott: ...Are you crying?

Lori: *sobbing*

Everyone: *looks over*

Scott: What did I say?

Guy: She get some rotten noodles or somethin'?

Scott: I don't know. *stands, walks over to Lori, sits* Hey, whatever the shrink said to you, I'm sure it's not your fault.

Lori: *lifts head, crying* No, see, that's the thing, it's not my fault. I'm not bad or wrong! I should be able to feel what I feel without being punished for it and right now, the only one punishing me is me.

Scott: Uh...what did they put in your spaghetti?

Lori: *laughs*

Scott: Well, I suppose if you were going to have a nervous breakdown, this is the place to be. *grabs spaghetti, starts eating*

Lori: *looks around*

Everyone: *staring at Lori*

Lori: You know what? I don't care that I have mascara all over my face and in the spaghetti -

Scott: *looks down at spaghetti*

Lori: because I don't need to fade away in the corner and become some unbreakable lock. So go ahead and stare at me like I'm naked because underneath it all, we all are.

Scott: *confused face* What?

Lori: HA.

Everyone: *staring*

Lori: What, did you expect me to make sense? I'm in a psych facility.

TBC.......................
 
Great update Geni. LMAO at the Horatio/Stetler dream.:lol:

Anni and her waterbed, I loved the salesman line
Salesman: Um, this isn't a car dealership ma'am.
:lol:

Poor Eric, *snuggles him*

The scene with Lora and her scheme for getting pain medication was great. Especially the "I sent him for scented band-aids:lol:

The scene with Ryan and just the image of it made me LOL.

And yay for more Lori and Scott.:)
 
To say that this was hilarious, is a mild understatement! This was waaaaaaaay beyond hilarity...it was madcap! WalMart...it will never be the same after Ryan and his foray into fashion( sailor boy- instyle?) :guffaw: :guffaw: :guffaw: Larceny at the pharmacy? ... :guffaw: Ryan taping everyone....:eek:

Horatio dreaming of Stetler...(crickets).....that's not funny, that's disturbing:D

Anni's pity party to get a water bed...:wtf: A little bratish, but still:guffaw:

Geni, you've raised the bar , yet again on the trip. I cannot wait to see what else they get into! Excellent work!
 
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