Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Awww...wow...Stetler had all that cocaine...serves him right. I'm glad he's caught now. :)

Oh wow...I'm glad Calleigh's ok. :) And she said things between us were "good." That's all I need to be ok until the next update. :D

Update Soon Geni. :D!!!
 
Oh good Calleigh is Ok. Close one there.

Yay, Horatio is so smart. He figured out that Stetler had the cocaine and where he hid it because he's smart. Colton, can't you at least like RT Horatio? He's the reason Stetler's under arrest. I can sleep easy now, since Super-H has saved the day. At last.

Love the awkward convo between Speed and Calleigh...they're not together very often anymore. I have a few uquestions. What happened to:
Ryan
Avery
Riley
California (I'm assuming Riley is in CA :lol:)

I guess I'll have to wait and see. You're almost through another thread, Geni. :eek: Wow, time flies. Didn't we just finish 7? It's because you're such an amazing writer and you have so many fans.

Glad you got a kick out of my art, thanks for the idea, I was sitting there thinking of CSIM wondering what to do and it was like *pop* RT! :D Can't wait for more! Thanks!
 
Thanks Anni. :D

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Love the awkward convo between Speed and Calleigh...they're not together very often anymore. I have a few uquestions. What happened to:
Ryan
Avery
Riley
California

Ryan is around and I promised that I'd bring him back. :p (Okay so I promised over MSN but...Well now I'm promising here. :lol:)

Avery is working the night shift and she doesn't play a substantial role in the story aside from being there when Josh had the realization about himself. (By the way, Josh will be back too)

Riley is still in California (Fresno to be exact) and I'm not sure we'll see her anytime soon, but the gang will be on their way back to California definitely in this thread.

And whew, it's true, we are almost on another thread! I'm kind of happy that some of y'all are reading the previous threads because a lot of the time someone will bring up something from a previous thread that I can reference to in the current thread, or sometimes y'all will remember what the RT was like when it was actually um...Better than this. :lol: Kidding, lol.

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Miami Lab, two hours later

Ryan: *runs over* I heard you were shot.

Calleigh: I'm fine.

Ryan: Can I have a picture?

Calleigh: *stops walking* Of what?

Ryan: The wound. I have a collection.

Calleigh: ...When did you have a collection of bullet wounds?

Ryan: Ever since my uncle Ron trespassed in a hunting area down in Alabama.

Calleigh: And what satisfaction do you get from these...Pictures. Do you see saints in them or something?

Ryan: I study them. To learn what kind of wounds are close range, long range, how much gunpowder and the size of the calibre.

Calleigh: You do realize the wound snaps back because skin is an elastic surface, right?

Ryan: I have pictures of the bullets too.

Calleigh: *nods slowly* Well mine was a ricochet so you don't need a picture, it's nothing.

Ryan: Actually I have a ricochet batch too.

Calleigh: ...Of course you do.

Ryan: So can I get a picture? *lifts camera* It'll help with research.

Calleigh: Well if it'll help. *lifts shirt*

Delko: *walks over*

Ryan: *snaps pictures*

Delko: *smiles*

Calleigh: *looking down at stomach*

Ryan: *snapping photos*

Delko: Did I...Interrupt something?

Calleigh: *pulls down shirt* It's for research.

Delko: *laughs* Right. Just...Don't mind me, I was passing through.

Ryan: Relax Eric, it's for my collection.

Delko: You have womens' abs collections?

Ryan: Ha ha, funny. I have a bullet collection.

Delko: Oh. Well you didn't need the whole ballistics expert, you could have found plenty of bullets downstairs.

Calleigh: *laughs* Bullet wounds, Eric.

Delko: Oh I heard about that.

Calleigh: Yes and I am perfectly fine.

Delko: Good.

Calleigh: I heard you got called to Stetler's house.

Ryan: Ooh is it full of voodoo dolls with red hair and cabinets full of black hair dye? I bet he has a mean tie collection.

Delko: Nah, just a lot of cocaine.

Calleigh: You're kidding.

Delko: We have him for now.

Calleigh: What do you mean for now?

Delko: We have to prove that Colton had nothing to do with it.

Calleigh: Why would Colton have anything to do with it?

Delko: I'm sure he doesn't.

Calleigh: Where is he?

Delko: He's around. I have to get to the layout room and print the cocaine packages.

Calleigh: You need any help?

Delko: I have it covered.

Calleigh: You sure?

Delko: *smiles* Yes, Calleigh I'm sure. *walks away*

Calleigh: Okay! But let me know what you find out!

Ryan: You don't know of anyone else who has bullet wounds would you?

Calleigh: Go check with Tim. *walks away*

Trace Lab

Speed: *doing paperwork*

Katie: How's Anni? How's Anni? How's Anni?

Speed: She's fine.

Katie: Good. So how's Lori?

Speed: Fine.

Katie: Is that all you ever say?

Speed: I'm busy.

Katie: Oh so you can say that too. Bravo, Speedle.

Ryan: *runs in* Hey Speed can I take pictures of you without your shirt on?

Speed: *lifts head*

Katie: *stares at Ryan*

Ryan: It's for research.

Speed: No.

Ryan: But you've been shot.

Speed: So?

Ryan: I have a bullet wound collection and I need some nice juicy scars to add to it.

Speed: *frowning*

Ryan: I could draw sketches if that's okay.

Katie: OH! Get a pen.

Ryan: *grabs pen*

Katie: Okay he has two on his chest, one below his rib, another one in his left side, a small one on his shoulder, and two in his leg but those were from grazes.

Ryan: *writing* Okay, so what came before chest?

Speed: *looks at Katie*

Katie: What?

Speed: You memorized my scars?

Katie: You also have a couple on your back from my na-

Speed: *clears throat*

Katie: Nothing. Your back is fine.

Ryan: *writing* Okay good. I got all of them. Just to be clear, the ones on your back are-

Speed: Non-existant.

Ryan: Gotcha. Okay thanks man. *leaves*

Speed: *continues paperwork*

Katie: *taps on desk with nails*

Speed: *looks over*

Katie: *taps faster*

Speed: *looks back at paper*

Katie: *sigh*

Speed: *writing*

Katie: *taps table with nails*

Speed: Can you stop that please?

Katie: Sure.

Speed: Thank you.

Katie: ...

Speed: *writing*

Katie: WHEW!

Speed: *frowns* What.

Katie: Sorry I was just remembering something.

Speed: *closes file* You know what? I work a lot better on my own.

Katie: I'll be quiet, I swear.

Speed: Why don't you go bother someone else...Someone who tolerates you.

Katie: You know, you used to love me once.

Speed: Yeah once is the key word. I wonder how hammered I was to ever be in love with you.

Katie: *stares at Speed*

Speed: *grabs files*

Katie: *smiles* Yeah, yeah I know what you mean. *laughs*

Speed: *opens files*

Katie: You know, because all those years were SUCH a waste of time! *laughs* What were we thinking? Gosh you just put years of a 'relationship' into perspective there, great job!

Speed: Mhm. *flips page*

Katie: *laughing* Remember that time we were in the restaurant and you said that you loved me and you would kill and die for me? OH MY LORD rib-splitting, really! *laughing* Or or OH and that same night we ran under the little house thingy on the beach because it was raining and you kissed me and told me you'd always protect me, WHAT A JOKE HUH? Sheesh talk about a comedy right there, haha.

Speed: *looks at Katie*

Katie: *smiling*

Speed: You've made your point. *goes back to paperwork*

Katie: *smile fades*

Speed: *flips page*

Katie: ...If there's one thing you're good at, is hiding your emotions so you could be doing this because you just don't care, or you do care and you don't want to lead me on, that's fine. But at least afford me the decency of the truth.

Speed: *looks at Katie* The truth is I'm married.

Katie: *nods*

Speed: So I can't say anything.

Katie: Why? No one else is here, it's not like she's going to find out what you're thinking. I'd just like to know so I can either stop trying to be nice to you, or avoid you.

Speed: *closes file* I wasn't lying that night. Is that good enough for you?

Katie: Maybe. Do you think it's possible to love two people at once?

Speed: Yes.

Katie: Do you think it's wrong?

Speed: What do you think?

Katie: I think...Maybe some people are meant to be with someone else and you can't help who you love. It's only wrong when the feelings aren't true.

Speed: *stares at Katie*

Katie: ...I should be going. *stands, leaves*

TBC................
 
Ryan: *runs in* Hey Speed can I take pictures of you without your shirt on?
Wow, good thing I read the bit with Calleigh. :lol: Anyone else would have been a little...confused. That was very funny. And the new ones are just as good or better, more action, same amount of comedy. But also, more seriousness. Like Katie's convorsation with Speed. Poor Katie, Speed needs to realize she misses him and loves him and he doesn't exactly respect that.

How is Anni? How long has it been? There are so many characters, it's hard to keep track of who's doing what at what time and how much time has passed. :D But it was great to hear from Ryan again. Love that guy, he's like a skinny little nerd who just tags along.

Can't wait for more, thanks Geni! :D It's so amazing that you've done this for so long and still manage to satisfy us rabid RT fans. :) Thank you!
 
Oh thank God everyone’s ok. Well, Calleigh did get shot but it wasn’t serious so everything’s fine. But man, how did she not notice? Calleigh must be Iron Woman or something. :lol: But I hope she’s ok emotionally, I mean, getting shot is a big deal.

Yes, burn on Stetler! You stupid man, you thought you could outwit THE Horatio Caine? Oh you naive little man, don’t you know Horatio’s been empowered by the CSI Gods? Tut tut, but he’s finally going to jail! *jumps up and down* Serves him right! :D

Ok, Ryan’s collection is a tad bit… creepy. I mean, sure I understand why but… still… he’s got photos of people with holes in them at home… *shudder* But I found it hilarious that Katie memorized all of Speed’s wounds (he got hurt a lot, didn’t he?) Ohh, speaking of which, the Speed/Katie/Anni love triangle is coming out again. Katie has a very valid point about being in love and false feelings of love, and I can’t wait to see how this one turns out.

Yeah, I’ve been reading the earlier threads, and while I did, I found this little gem:
Katie: And then when our little girl discovers boys and alcohol, you'll have to bail her out of jail.
I was like “Whoa, that just happened!” Except that it was drugs and not alcohol. :lol: But I’ve noticed that your writing has improved from the first thread; you’ve gotten more used to this story that you’ve created, and it allowed you to go further with it. Great job as always Geni; I’d say “the plot thickens” but I always say that. :rolleyes:
 
I was reading Thread 1, and I loved how you added all the characters in. I loved the whole CSI: Pensacola thing, the Speed and apple juice, everything. It's very different now, I remember the first time I read your fic I was giggling so hard my friend asked if I was okay mentally. Then she read it and laughed too. Now I'm more used to the hilarioussness, and I can sort-of keep my laughs to myself. Except for when theres a really funny part. Which is often. Oh oh, teacher walking this way. :D

The plot's thicker than pork chop, now I guess, bird_of_flame (can I call you Nicole? Everyone can call me Lilly BTW). :lol: Wow, can't wait for more. Thanks as always, Geni. I always say 'can't wait for more' and then think I wrote a really good review and then read everyone else's and think 'oh I forgot this and that!' and am like o_0. Whoops. :lol: Anyway, that's enough of my rambling.
 
I've only been gone a day and Calleigh and Speed are being shot at and Rick Stetler is found with cocaine, and now Ryan is wanting to photograph all of Speed's scars for his collection!

I feel sorry for Lori, to me she seems very lost and confused...I mean one minuted Speed and Katie are laughing and joking around and the next minute she sees her dad doing the exact same with Anni who is having his baby. It must be mixing her up as Speed, Katie and she were a family at one time and it must be confusing for her to see her dad with a new wife and baby on the way maybe she feels she is not a part of his new family and is doing anything just to get her dad's attention and that she's not daddy's little girl anymore.

At least Lori knows that her dad missed her very much and that he loves her...but for her is it enough? I thought that when Speed said "you're still daddy's girl" was really sweet it's as if they finally connected again as father and daughter no matter if there is a new baby on the way or not.


great suspense as usual Geni keep it up and I'm glad Anni is okay.
 
Of course you can call me Nicole Lilly (pretty name btw), I don’t mind at all. And yeah, isn’t the plot just so thick? Well, you know what they say: when you have a pork chop, pull out a steak knife! :devil: This is usually the part where I pull out munchies like Doritos or caramel popcorn *munches on goodies*

Oh man, thread one was awesome! I have the whole thing saved on my computer. I try not to read it at school only because I would burst out laughing in the middle of lecture and people would give me weird looks. :rolleyes: :lol:

Anyways, can't wait to see what you pull out of your bag of tricks Geni!
 
Oh..okay...ah, Geni, I'm actually glad you brought the whole thing with Katie and Speed out cause now, I'm anxious to find out how he really feels! You've definetly caught my attention with their last conversation. I wonder if that really puts things in perspective for Speed, and what he would do with what he now knows /feels. You've got me waiting on the edge of my seat here. Great drama!


Ah, Ryan... well, in order for me to just be dignified, I won't stoop to the level I was going to with him... aw what the heck... That was just plain ah, creepazoid of him. Ever heard of pictures in books, Ry? You know those big things with spines and nice colorful pics???... But I have to say, it was hilarious when he ran into Speed and asked for him to take his shirt off. To be a fly on that wall... :lol:

Fantastic as always, Geni!
 
*glares at Ryan* :lol: at him asking for a shirtless Speed. :lol: I love that embarrassment. WTG Geni! :D But between Speed/Katie...awwwwwkwarrrrrrd. ;) Loved the update. :)

Update Soon. :D
 
^^ Thanks. Me too. I cut a plate in half trying to cut pork chop once. :lol: At a party. :lol:
Oh, Anni, I so agree about Ryan/Speed. :D That was amazinly funny. And Ryan's such a geek, that made it even funnier. I imagine big, burly Speed against little stringbean Ryan. Squash Ryan. :lol: Not really.
Oh man, I'm going nuts. Can't wait for more Geni! I keep sneaking on the computer to read fics.
 
bird_of_flame, I have the first five threads saved on my computer because of the topic pruning that goes on. I don't want to lose them. :eek: I was thinking of putting them on my MP3 player though, because it holds file documents and I have a lot of spares. (Actually I have 5 spares at day and only 7 blocks so you can imagine where my boredom spawns from)

calleighspeedle I like your observations about Lori. She seems to be the odd one out in Speed's little triangle and family. It also seems like she's been cast aside in the midst of everyone else and because she's been gone so long, she feels forgotten. (Well that's along with everyone else's take on her too :))

And YAY I have Anni on the edge of her seat. :D *hugs* And ah, Ryan isn't so bad. I'm sure he'll mature and...Throw out the bullet wound collection someday, but then again it might help him too, lol.

And while we're on the subject about the RT characters, this story has been going on for two years and eight threads. Now I've decided we need to put some faces to the names. So I was on The Sims 2, and decided to paint the picture of what my mind was seeing when I wrote these characters. Now, it's not the most accurate and it isn't supposed to be to everyone's actual physical characteristics, but this is how the characters would somewhat look. :p I have yet to create RT Colton, JC, Missy, Megan, Ethan, Cait, Jess. BUT I did a few.

So here they are, because I obviously have no life. :lol:

Alena Delko -- I wanted her to have longer hair but the program is crap so whatever.

RT Carly
RT Anni
RT Katie
Lori

ETA: RT Colton :lol: Even though Carly and I have always pictured him with blonde spikey hair. :p

And I promise I will have a chapter up soon. :D
 
Those are awesome! Ha! I have red hair.. and blue eyes... I WIN! ( i have drab brown hair and brown eyes..)The others are awesome as well...Lori Speedle, badass total badass! And alena is so cute!!! I think you did a great job on us! Loved Carly as well!!!
 
Gorgeous, Geni. Alena is soo cute! I can't wait to see everyone, make Ryan ands H good looking. And Speed. Everyone looks great, Lori is the little rebel, isn't she? Can't wait for more, as always. Thanks!
 
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