Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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I know a guy named Willy, we go way back. :lol: Used to cause havoc at school together. :lol:

*gaspage* Ghostbusters! *starts singing the theme song* That's gonna be stuck in my head now, thanks Geni.

Lilly, congrats! You kick Ryan in the jewels, Speed stands up for you, you argue with him and win and now this. ->
Ryan: He has a six year old girl.

Lilly: Call the Coast Guard.

Ryan: *rolls eyes* Armando has a six year old girl.

Lilly: Call Homeland Security.

Ryan: Will you cut it out?
:lol: Love it, just love it. Anyone picking on Ryan, i like. Even jsut for those few moments. :D Thanks for the update Geni!! *hugs*
 
i loved it when ryan said "or I'll remove it for you."
i think that was hilarious!!
and Lily is very sarcastic!
(sry if im kinda late!)
 
Wow geni .... that was a very powerful last chapter, the fact that willy was, what i can assume depressed and angered by the fact that his wife couldn't have kids, to make him frame his best friend and take his only daughter, being his only memory of his wife that died of brain cancer and then tried to frame him again to get him out of the way, that is just so low of that guy. What I want to know, is the fact that his wife couldn't have a child what angered him to attack her, or was there another deep seated reason for that? If ryan hadn't investigated that case, they may have never actually caught the proper guy and poor armando would of gone to jail again for something he didn't do.
Congrats on such powerful chapteres, I can't believe how u can put these things together geni!!! I can't wait to see more of how anni and speed are doing with little jake, and i can't wait to see how ryan and lori's relationship blossoms over time, and hopefully without speed getting in the way, that or katie.
LOL
Can't wait for more!!!
 
Thanks for the reviews. :D

And as always, everything's up for interpretation. :p

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Warehouse

Ryan: *knocks on door*

Armando: *opens door* Yes?

Ryan: Willy's been arrested.

Armando: *stares at Ryan*

Ryan: His wife was an acomplice so she'll be serving time as well.

Armando: What about Els-

Ryan: You're listed as next of kin.

Armando: *smiles*

Ryan: She's with Child Services right now but they'll get you to fill out the paperwork.

Armando: Thank you sir. Thank you so much. *shakes Ryan's hand*

Ryan: Not a problem.

Armando: You have...No idea how much this means to me.

Ryan: Well maybe you can get your life straightened out now.

Armando: I will.

Ryan: Good luck.

Armando: *nods* Thank you.

Ryan: *walks away*

Near Hummer

Lilly: So how did it go?

Ryan: I think he'll be all right.

Lilly: So I guess this is what the job's all about, huh.

Ryan: One part of it.

Lilly: He looked so happy over there.

Ryan: Well for a long time he was the one who got screwed and now he's going to be the one breathing freely.

Lilly: Not all stories have a happy ending you know.

Speed: *walks over* No, but it makes us stronger.

Lilly: *looks at Speed*

Speed: You guys did well.

Lilly: I'd say all in a day's work but this doesn't just feel like a job anymore.

Speed: It's not supposed to. It's not just a paycheck.

Lilly: *nods* Well I'll see you guys back at the lab. *leaves*

Ryan: Thanks for letting me run with it.

Speed: You're a good CSI.

Ryan: Just a good one?

Speed: Don't push it.

Ryan: *nods* ...*lowers head* Um...I realize you're probably going to beat the crap out of me and this probably isn't the best place to bring it up but...*lifts head* This case made me think about everything I have and don't have and well, all the things I take for gr-

Speed: Just get to the point.

Ryan: Lori and I are getting pretty serious.

Speed: Serious as in R-Rated stuff or something like fifth date.

Ryan: She's actually staying at my place.

Speed: So all of the above.

Ryan: None.

Speed: *nods*

Ryan: She's staying with me because she's waiting for a flight out of Miami but...We always have so much fun when we're together.

Speed: And you call that serious.

Ryan: I'm not really sure what to call it. We're just happy when we're together.

Speed: Well I'm glad the case shed some light on...Whatever wasn't well-lit before. So I'll see you tomorrow.

Ryan: Yeah.

Speed: *walks away*

Ryan's condo, 7pm

Ryan: *walks in*

Lori: *runs over* You have to see this.

Ryan: What am I seeing?

Lori: *smiles, grabs Ryan's hand* Come on.

Balcony

Ryan: What am I looking at?

Lori: Those two people are totally making out on the beach.

Ryan: Most people would call this an invasion of privacy.

Lori: Yeah but look at that big wave.

Ryan: *looks at ocean*

Ocean slams into ground, two people are soaked

Lori: *laughs* I've seen that happen to five people. You'd think people wouldn't sit so close to the tide but they never seem to learn.

Ryan: *stares at Lori* I guess not.

Lori: *looks at Ryan* Have fun at work?

Ryan: Yeah.

Lori: *smiles* I made something for you.

Ryan: You did?

Lori: Mhm. Come on. *grabs Ryan*

Kitchen

Lori: *hands over cupcake*

Ryan: What's this?

Lori: Yours.

Ryan: Why does it have a candle in it?

Lori: It's your birthday tomorrow. I thought I'd get you something but seeing as I don't have money, this seemed appropriate.

Ryan: It's...Lovely.

Lori: Make a wish.

Ryan: *staring at candle* Alright.

Lori: *smiling*

Ryan: *blows out candle*

Lori: What did you wish for?

Ryan: I can't say or it won't come true.

Lori: *rolls eyes* You don't actually believe in that stuff do you?

Ryan: *places cupcake on table* Lori, have you found any flights out of here?

Lori: I looked online today.

Ryan: And?

Lori: There isn't anything available for the next week.

Ryan: You said that last week.

Lori: The airport blew up. Why, you wanted me out of here? Because I can find a hotel.

Ryan: I thought you didn't have money.

Lori: Right.

Ryan: You can stay, don't worry.

Lori: *hugs Ryan* Thanks.

Ryan: No problem.

Lori: *lets go* So what's on TV tonight?

Ryan: I haven't checked.

Lori: I heard there was this crime show on about a bunch of people solving crimes. Sounds uber fun!

Ryan: *laughs* I bet.

Lori: Come on mister CSI guy, you should be interested in that kind of thing.

Ryan: Well once you do it all day, seeing it on TV kind of takes the fun out of it.

Lori: I bet I can solve the crime before you can.

Ryan: Doubtful.

Lori: Ooh is that a wager?

Ryan: You don't have money.

Lori: *laughs* Somehow that keeps comin' up.

Ryan: *sits on couch, turns on TV* Well then maybe you'll have some by the end of the show.

Lori: *sits on couch*

Ryan: OH! The Exorcist is on!

Lori: NO! No, Ryan come on.

Ryan: Hey this is way better.

Lori: No, Ryan this movie freaks me out.

Ryan: Oh I didn't know that.

Lori: I told you that three days ago.

Ryan: You'll have to get over your fear of it someday.

Lori: No way. Little girls with spinning heads are creepy.

Ryan: Oh look, the armoir is coming toward the mom on its own!

Lori: *hides head in Ryan's chest* Come on, it's not funny.

Ryan: OH EW! Her head just twisted half way!

Lori: RYAN!

Ryan: *laughing*

Lori: *hiding face* Please turn it off.

Ryan: No way. You're going to sit through this.

Lori: You're mean.

Ryan: Alright fine, I'll change it. *clicks button* Happy?

Lori: *lifts head* Oh thank God. A fabric softener commerical with puppies.

Ryan: They could be posessed puppies.

Lori: *slaps Ryan*

Three hours later

Ryan: *looks at watch* Whoa, I have work tomorrow.

Lori: *sigh* Don't go.

Ryan: I have to go to work.

Lori: No...I'm comfy. Don't get up.

Ryan: I can't sleep on the couch.

Lori: Sure you can.

Ryan: Sitting up?

Lori: Hey horses can sleep standing up.

Ryan: I'm not a horse. *stands*

Lori: *stands* Okay but I'm not tired.

Ryan: You look tired.

Lori: You made me watch a scary movie. I'm not tired.

Ryan: You hid your face and it was only two minutes.

Lori: That's all it took.

Ryan: I never pegged you to be scared of anything.

Lori: *shrugs* Guess it just never came up.

Ryan: Okay well I'm going to bed.

Lori: I'll be out here. I'll try not to run up your electric bill too much.

Ryan: Thanks. *walks into bedroom, shuts door*

Lori: *sits on couch*

TBC.................
 
Aww Lori and Ryan are so cute together! And Ryan, posessed puppies? OMG THAT WOULD BE THE COOLEST SCARY MOVIE! I can totally picture it. You need to copyright that Geni. *plots to steal puppy idea*

And I'm glad that case is closed and Armano has his life- his daughter- back. My first case, closed. And no, it's not just a job, it's a liftime commitment to serve and protect! I got a compliment from Speed! This day couldn't get better. Well, it could have been me in lori's place. And I would have made Ryan stay on that couch... :devil:

Anyway, they're so cute together. They're really made for each other, they both aren't really expected to go together, but they do, they're like the exiled couple. :lol: Like if they were sent off the island but had each other. Wait...what island?

I'm going nuts Geni! It's these RT people, they're rubbing off on me and I haven't even been in the same room as them! Update sooooooooon! :D
 
Lori and Ryan... never thought i would say this...but AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwww. How cute are they, and Ryan has a set on him, telling Speed up front whats been going on. That Ryan isn't half bad...*checks temperture* did I say that?

Lily is awesome... I can't say that enough:D

I noticed that Speed said his line, but with a twist. It's not just for a paycheck now...it actually means something. Glad he found that out! ;)

Excellent work, Geni!
 
Speed: You're a good CSI.

Ryan: Just a good one?

Speed: Don't push it.

:lol: I love it, Speed's favouring Lilly. :D She's only been there for a couple days, Ryan's been there for years, and by the looks of it; Lilly's liked more. :D

The Exoricist was actually a crazy-ass movie, i don't blame Lori. But the gore was good. :lol: (THAT sounded weird...)

...not too sure of the commerical though. The only commericial i've seen with animals in it is the tiolet paper with the kittens flopping all over the place.

Thanks for the update Geni! :D
 
*crosses arms* Nope nope nope not liking it. You can't make me! lol. Oh man for a second there I thought Lori was going to call Ryan Mister Miami and I was like"*gaspage* That's her father's nickname! He can't use that because that would be weird and...uncomfortable."

Anyways awww its a happy..almost reunion for Armando and Elsie. And ha! I knew the job wasn't just a paycheck for Speed. He can't fool me.

Speed: Serious as in R-Rated stuff or something like fifth date.

Ryan: She's actually staying at my place.

Speed: So all of the above.

Ryan: None.

Oh man Geni! No matter what kind of chapter it is. Whether its short, long, dramarific or humorus you always find some way to crack me up. That whole R Rated line was just *sighs* funny stuff. Update soon please.
 
that was such a cute chapter. I think lori keeps saying there is no planes cause she actually doesn't want to leave cause she has found someone to be a companion and someone to love and in return be loved back. They are such a cute couple.... can't wait for more!!!!!
 
OH, that poor Armando guy...that Willy guy sure is an ass. *shakes fist* Aww, go Lilly! Our little CSI is growing up...and I still like Ryan *nods* Mmhmm. He and Lori are just so cute! Hee. Lori so doesn't want to leave ;) Hm, the Exorcist? Never seen it, don't particularly want to *shudders* I mean, I can deal with scary movies most of the time, but theres always that one that completely freaks me out...

anyways, please update soon!
 
Wow Geni must be busy. Haven't had an update in a while. Bu that's ok Geni! We can wait, you must be busy or stressed or both or something. :lol: Find some time to listen to Bach or something. :lol:
 
I'm taking this time out to look around...:lol: Hope everyone is doing fine! And Geni, I will be around, don't worry... ;)
 
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