Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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THANK YOU COLTON! *hugs saraholic* At least SOMEBODY punched Ryan!

Speed and Anni were in the shower together... ;) Hey, i have daydreams of H and me in their too. *silence* Too much information. *runs off...*

*...yet still posts it. :devil: *

SHE CALLED HIM FREAKING TIMOTHY! Horatio in Heaven! What's wrong with this lady?!

Ok, and Delko and the teddybear. What the heck happened to Snuffles? :lol: Maybe i should read the other threads after 1... (By the way, review of thread 1 gonna be coming up sometime. :devil: )

Thanks for the update! *hugs Geni* :D
 
*huggles Ryan with no shirt on* What? :rolleyes: Am I the only one who likes Ryan here? *not looking at Geni*

That was a...weird but funny update :lol: I laughed so hard when the sprinklers went on. That's just so cool.
 
Thanks for the wonderfully awesometastic reviews everyone. :D

I should have more later-on today. :)
 
ooh... it does too :lol: I thought it was more fo a shocked look but then again I could be wrong... and yay for more updates later-on :D
 
what great updates geni ... gosh i have been so busy I had to catch up again but meh whatever something to do on a cold day. Speed really isn't getting along with annis mom is he, mindya she is a pretty big snob .. i don't much like her either. Haha and jess and delko taking off in a volvohome ... isn't those things like the size of a van maybe a little bigger???
Horatio babysitting was funny too, at least he got ethan to listen and straightened him out a little too. It was almost as though carly and josh never punished him for he grotesqe ( i don't know how to spell that) behavior.
Now honeslty i have never herd of someone haveing to clean a carpet with a toothbrush that would take so long ..... EWWWW missy put the toothbrush in her mouth with carpet cleaner on it ... cant that stuff like poison you or something?
Anyway great updates as always from one of the most wonderful writers i know! I must say ur fic keeps me falling off the chair and splitting ribs laughing and constantly feeling like i am really there. U have a great way of putting emotion into ur fic that makes it so real!!!
Can't wait for more!
 
Me neither! I want to post my review of the upcomeing part, and of thread 1 in my 1000th post! Yuppers, it's the next one. :) I'm sitting on 999 right now.
 
*huggles Lora* :D

And ah, you don't have to review the first thread. :lol: Then again, it's still RT chapters. :p

*sigh* I kind of miss the good ol' days.

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Aid facility

Katie: *hands over menus* Alright, this evening will be chicken sandwhiches and tomato soup. Orville...Stop playing with your shirt.

Orville: What are you, the waitress?

Katie: No, I'm the helper. You need help, remember?

Orville: Why?

Katie: Honey you're a tweaker.

Orville: Oh yeah.

Katie: *places menu on table*

Orville: Why are you here?

Katie: Same reason you are...Except I stopped twitching last week. Sheesh.

Orville: *narrows eyes*

Katie: Anyway, what kind of drink would you like?

Orville: Beer.

Katie: There is no beer here.

Orville: You rhymed.

Katie: I have a talent for that. Water it is.

Speed: *walks over* So you're a waitress now.

Katie: *turns around, runs after Speed* TIM! *jumps onto Speed, hugs him*

Speed: *coughs* Well you seem to be in a good mood.

Katie: *hugs tighter*

Speed: Breaking ribs.

Katie: Sorry. *lets go, hops down onto floor*

Speed: You look good.

Katie: I guess I really wanted to pull myself up out of the depression gutter.

Speed: Yeah.

Katie: So how have you been?

Speed: Fine. How about you?

Katie: Well, sometimes I remember why I'm here and it kind of gets me down, but I mean, almost three weeks and I feel great.

Speed: You have quite a few more to go.

Katie: Yeah but maybe I'll be out before then.

Speed: Maybe.

Katie: *stares at Speed*

Speed: ...What.

Katie: You seem yourself.

Speed: *lifts brow* What are you talking about?

Katie: Nevermind. So are you guys leaving in the Hummerhome yet?

Speed: Not until you get out.

Katie: How sweet.

Speed: Well it just doesn't seem quite the same without you.

Katie: *smiles*

Speed: So what are you up to?

Katie: I'm giving out menus for dinner.

Speed: They have you working here now?

Katie: I'm just helping.

Speed: *nods*

Katie: Oh great, there's people outside too. Come on.

Speed: Alright.

Outside, in the rain

Katie: Guys, come on it's raining out here. Chloe you're going to get a cold.

Chloe: I'm fine.

Katie: You can't eat out here.

Chloe: Ugh, fine. *walks inside*

Speed: Lovely girl.

Katie: She's taking things hard.

Speed: A lot of people are.

Katie: Yeah.

Speed: *grabs Katie's hand*

Katie: *smirks*

Anni: *runs over* KATIE!

Speed: *lets go of Katie's hand*

Katie: *turns around* ANNI! *hugs Anni*

Anni: *hugs Katie* Look at you all in the rain and stuff!

Katie: *laughs* It's good to see you.

Anni: *lets go* So how have you been?

Katie: Oh fine, I was just handing out menus.

Anni: FUN! I wish I had menus to toss around!

Katie: Here, have some.

Anni: *grabs menus* LET'S GO PLAY RESTAURANT!

Katie: YAY!

Katie/Anni run off

Speed: *angry sigh, follows*

Inside building

Anni: Man this is so fun. I feel like a waitress at Jenny Craig.

Katie: *laughs* Uh it's not quite the same.

Anni: Here's your MENU! *puts menu on table*

People stare at Anni

Anni: Oh lighten up.

Speed: *walks over* Anni, a word?

Anni: Sure babe. Talk to you in a sec, Katie.

Katie: Alright.

Corner of room

Speed: We need to leave.

Anni: Why?

Speed: Because.

Anni: ...Because why?

Speed: She's doing fine, we can leave.

Anni: We're her friends.

Speed: I know that.

Anni: We have an hour to visit her and you want to leave?

Katie: *walks over* Hey come on, I have to give you a tour.

Anni: Sure!

Katie: *grabs Speed's hand* Come on.

Speed: *backs up* I think I'll just go wait in the Hummer.

Katie: Why?

Speed: Because it's fun to sit in a Hummer on a rainy evening.

Anni: Why are you acting like an anti-social child?

Speed: I'm not.

Anni: She's trying to show us around the place.

Speed: So go.

Anni: You're coming too.

Speed: I don't really want to.

Katie: Why not? What's the big deal Mister Miami?

Speed: *laughs*

Katie: *lifts brow*

Anni: *narrows eyes*

Katie: ...Why are you laughing?...And blushing?

Speed: It's...Hot in here? You know there's probably a reason they don't let visitors in here regularily.

Katie: ...

Anni: Go sit in the Hummer.

Speed: *leaves*

Katie: *looks at Anni*

Anni: *shakes head*

Katie: What?

Anni: He still loves you.

Katie: ....Really. Are you mad at me?

Anni: It's not your fault. I'm going to go talk to him. We'll be back tomorrow.

Katie: Alright.

Anni: Bye. *leaves*

Katie: ...Bye.

Outside

Anni: *opens Hummer door*

Speed: *steps out*

Anni: Spill.

Speed: I'm sorry I don't know what happened back there.

Anni: You still love her.

Speed: *looks down at ground*

Anni: Look, I understand. She was your first real love, and you two have this thing. Like a history.

Speed: It doesn't matter. You're my wife and I love you and I don't want to hurt you.

Anni: Do you love her?

Speed: No.

Anni: Tim...

Speed: Fine, yes. But it doesn't mean I'm going to do anything, and it certainly doesn't mean that I don't love you.

Anni: I don't think you've ever stopped loving her.

Speed: ...I feel terrible about it.

Anni: It's okay. I completely understand.

Speed: I've tried a million times to forget about her, to stop dreaming about her, to stop caring about her, and I can't. I don't know what to do.

Anni: ...

Speed: *shakes head* I'm so sorry.

Anni: ...Have you been unfaithful?

Speed: No.

Anni: I want the truth.

Speed: That is the truth.

Anni: Man I thought for a second you were going to yell "YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH!" But you didn't.

Speed: *stares at Anni*

Anni: Sorry, not the time.

Speed: I haven't been unfaithful. I swear.

Anni: *nods* Okay. It's not that I don't trust you, but people have gone down this route with you before.

Speed: I know.

Anni: She loves you, you love her...

Speed: No, out of the question. I'm not leaving you for her. Ever.

Anni: We can't stay married if you're going to be thinking about her all the time. What happens when she gets out? We'll be in the Hummerhome and maybe you two get a little close for comfort.

Speed: No.

Anni: I can't stay married to someone who loves another woman.

Speed: You think I want to do this to you? You think I enjoy ruining people's lives? I wish to God she didn't exist. I wish that I had met you first!

Anni: I'm sorry Tim.

Speed: Anni, don't do this.

Anni: *takes off ring*

Speed: Anni....N-

Anni: *drops ring, gets into Hummer*

Speed: Anni!

Hummer drives off

Speed: Son of a bitch!

Old lady sitting on park bench in the rain, knitting

Old lady: Who needs ma stories when I can sit outside and watch all the fun happen right before ma eyes?

Speed: *looks at old lady*

TBC.............
 
OMG!!!! I'm literally falling out now... I cant breathe.. WHAT ARE YOU DOING, ANNI!!!... * takes a deep breath*...Okay now... * hits self on the head with really big notebook*. I understand the reasoning behind it all, I mean it's a big waste of time to stay married under those conditions, but...It's Speed... And he was actually happy for a moment... *sigh*... I... can't ... believe.. it... *falls on the floor*

Aside from my heart attack, glad that Katie is doing better!

*goes to cry in a bucket*

Awesome update, Geni... Now , I have to know what happens next...*thud*

Excuse me while I pickup my face off the floor.... :(
 
OMG! How sad!!! *hugs Anni* Welcome to the Club Med of Tension. In the corner in the soda fountain. The tissues...well...they're pretty much everywhere. Through those doors is the pool. It's quite relaxing. ;) :lol: Sorry....Poor Anni though. :(

The last two lines were such a great way to break the tension with a joke. :lol: It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. Such seriousness and then a comedic scene in the middle to relieve tension. :D Yes Geni, I positively compared you to Shakespeare. :D

Update Soon. :D

On a OT Note: I think that is the longest review I've ever wrote. :lol:
 
OMG anni just ... like what .... happened i mean ya thinks are complicated and all but it clearly shows that speed wants to be with anni or he woulnd't of stayed with her through out the fact that she was in an asylum and all. I can't wait to see where ur going with this geni!
 
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