Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Wow, talk about tension! Ryan's here? Seems to be having a fair amount of trouble adjusting, but he'll manage...if Speed doesn't kill him first. and H-man's back in charge. I never really liked Stetler...who does? *holds up wine glass* Cheers, Geni! You made my night.
 
Aw man, she makes my night every night! You should read the where Missy prays! Miami style!

Alena: *runs to driver's seat of Hummerhome* Hmm...*turns key*

Hummerhome starts up

Missy/JC: *look at Alena* NO!

Alena: *grabs broom, hits gas pedal*

JC: *runs* NO!

Missy: *puts hands together* Our H, who art in Miami, hallowed be thy name. Thy kingdom come, thy will be done, on Earth as it is in Dade-County...

Hummerhome swerves out of Garage, onto road

JC: Stop! Stop driving!

Hummerhome bounces over fire hydrant

JC: *screams*

Alena: *giggles*

Missy: Give us this day our daily crime fighting skills and forgive us our sins as we forgive those who trespass into the Crime Lab...

Hummerhome swerves into traffic

JC: TO THE LEFT!

Alena: *turns wheel*

JC: TO THE RIGHT!

Alena: *turns wheel*

JC: THE OTHER RIGHT!

Alena: *turns wheel*

JC: LEFT! RIGHT! LEFT! RIGHT!

Alena: HEE! *turning wheel*

Hummerhome bounces onto causeway

Missy: *eyes closed* Lead us not into the ocean but deliver us from the evil Delko child...

JC: STOP PRAYING! THIS IS NO TIME TO BE PRAYING!

Missy: What? Oh. My bad.

Alena: Bridge go up! *claps*

JC: BREAK! PRESS THE BREAKS!

Missy: We're going to die. We're going to die. We're going to die. Oh man we're so dead.

Alena: *jams on breaks with broom*

JC: *screams*

Hummerhome slides across bridge, and stops as the bridge panels rise

JC: *stares out window*

Missy: *clutches chest*

Alena: Bridge go boom?

JC: No bridge no go boom. Bridge is fine. No crime scene here today. No way. Nope.

Alena: *giggles*

JC: ...Let's get her away from the steering wheel.

*wipes tear away* I memorized that prayer... :lol:

Welcome to Miami Chris miami! Engoy the board!
 
Oh geez, all of that happened in the First RT? :lol: Well I'm glad I made your dad laugh, Hunter. :)

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Hummerhome, CSI Garage, One week later

Horatio: *stares at Hummerhome*

Missy: We kind of...Took 'er out for a spin.

Horatio: ...

Missy: And there's some puke inside but DON'T WORRY we put sawdust all over it.

Horatio: ...

JC: And we made sure to get the blood out of the curtains.

Horatio: What? Why was there blood in the curtains?

JC: I cut my lip on the can opener and Missy made me laugh.

Horatio: Did anything else happen to it?

JC: I overflowed the toilet.

Horatio: *wide-eyed*

JC: And then Megan hit a bump and well, the rest is history I guess.

Horatio: *drops to knees* MY HUMMERHOME!

JC: What is this, your third...Fourth Hummerhome?

Horatio: Try ninth.

JC: Ouch. It gives that 'What's in your wallet' expression a little more meaning.

Missy: Look, I found a crack in the side panel. *touches Hummerhome*

Horatio: NO! N-

Hummerhome front left wheel rolls off and slams into the wall

Horatio: ...

Missy: Oh. It's a good thing we didn't go driving again.

Horatio: *eye twitches*

Trace Lab

Speed: *walks in* ...

Ryan: *looks up* Hey bud.

Speed: What are you doing?

Ryan: Working.

Speed: Is that beef jerky?

Ryan: I got hungry.

Speed: ...You can't eat in here.

Ryan: Why not? I won't spill.

Speed: Look at this mess. *walks around* Do you know how much work it takes to clean this place?

Ryan: Yeah I've seen you do it five times already. I clocked you at three hours.

Speed: *frowning* This is not your lab.

Ryan: Nor is it yours my chipmunk-cheeked friend.

Speed: I am not your friend.

Ryan: Hey what does this button do? *presses button*

Machines start beeping, paper flies out of printers

Ryan: WHOA! WORLD WAR THREE IN HERE!

Speed: TURN IT OFF! TURN IT OFF!

Ryan: HOW!

Speed: PRESS RESET!

Ryan: WHAT?

Speed: THE RESET BUTTON! PRESS THE RESET BUTTON!

Ryan: WHAT ABOUT THE PRESET COTTON?

Speed: NO THE RESET BUTTON!

Ryan: I DON'T HAVE BUTTONS ON MY SHIRT!

Speed: PRESS THE RESET BUTTON!

Ryan: WHAT'S A RESET BUTTON!

Speed: THE BLUE ONE!

Ryan: WHICH MACHINE!

Speed: ALL OF THEM!

Ryan: *presses buttons*

Noise stops

Ryan: Good as new.

Machines start making higher-pitched sounds

Ryan: *covers ears* AH!

Speed: GET AWAY FROM THE MACHINES!

Ryan: WHAT?

Speed: GET AWAY FROM THE MACHINES!

Ryan: WHAT?

Speed: I SAID GET AWAY FROM THE MACHINES!

Ryan: WHAT?

Speed: GET AWAY FROM THE MACHINES!

Ryan: WHAT?

Speed: *making hand motions*

Ryan: *shrugs, shakes head*

Speed: GET OVER HERE!

Ryan: NO, I DON'T WANT ANY BEER!

Speed: I SAID GET OVER HERE!

Ryan: WHAT?

Speed: WHAT?

Ryan: WHAT DID YOU SAY!

Speed: I SAID-

Machines stop beeping

Speed: GET AW-...*clears throat* Get away from the machines.

Ryan: Why?

Speed: *blank stare*

Delko: *walks in* Hey I heard some noise in here, s-

Speed: *hugs Eric* Oh my God get him out of here.

Delko: ...Why are you hugging me?

Speed: Home sweet Eric Delko. My bestest friend on the entire planet.

Delko: Are you on drugs?

Speed: *points to Ryan* Get him out.

Delko: Why?

Speed: Because you're my best friend.

Delko: Oh.

Speed: GET HIM OUT! GET HIM OUT! GET HIM OUT!

Delko: Alright! Alright! Ryan, I think Calleigh wanted to see you anyway.

Ryan: Sure. *leaves*

Speed: *sigh*

Delko: You okay?

Speed: I am now.

Delko: Can you stop hugging me now?

Speed: What? *lets go* Nothing happened, I didn't touch you.

Delko: Yeah you did, you hugged me.

Speed: I...No, it wasn't a hug. I tripped.

Delko: ...Into my arms.

Speed: Yeah.

Delko: On purpose.

Speed: No by accident.

Delko: ...

Speed: ...

Delko: *looks around*

Speed: *looks down at floor*

Delko: ..Alright awkward.

Speed: Yeah.

Delko: *walks away*

Speed: *walks away*

Ballistics

Ryan: You wanted to see me?

Calleigh: *smiling, writing things down* How are things?

Ryan: ...What do you mean?

Calleigh: Around here.

Ryan: Fine.

Calleigh: *stands up straight* No trouble?

Ryan: Well I don't think Speedle likes me very much.

Calleigh: *crosses arms* Did you talk to him about it?

Ryan: No, he hates me. And he'll probably beat me up.

Calleigh: How are you gettin' along with Eric?

Ryan: Just fine.

Calleigh: Good.

Ryan: So is this why you called me down here?

Calleigh: No, I was lookin' over the case, and found this. *lifts object*

Ryan: What is that?

Calleigh: It looks like piece of a trigger.

Ryan: From a gun?

Calleigh: It was found on the floor of the boat by Eric, he didn't know what it was, so it was kicked back to me.

Ryan: Guns don't usually lose their triggers.

Calleigh: No they don't, which is why we need to find the rest of the gun.

Ryan: The victim wasn't shot.

Calleigh: I think I know where the gun is.

Ryan: *lifts brow*

Autopsy

Alexx: *covers body with sheet*

Calleigh: *walks in smiling* Hey Alexx, back from the bahamas already?

Alexx: *smiles* I can only take so much heat.

Calleigh: *laughs*

Ryan: *hiding behind door*

Calleigh: *looks back* It's alright Ryan, come on in.

Ryan: *walks in slowly*

Calleigh: Do you have something for me?

Alexx: As a matter of fact, I do. *lifts container*

Ryan: What is that?

Alexx: That, is a gun.

Ryan: ...It doesn't look like a gun.

Alexx: Stomach acids did a number on it.

Ryan: Stomach acids? You mean he swallowed it?

Alexx: In pieces.

Ryan: That's impossible.

Alexx: Honey, in this job we learn that anything is possible.

Calleigh: *smirks* So were you able to find an identification number on the gun?

Alexx: *tilts head*

Calleigh: Right, my job. *grabs container* Thanks Alexx. *walks away*

Ryan: *staring at body*

Alexx: You okay baby?

Ryan: Yeah. Yeah, I'm good. *runs out*

Halls

Katie: *walking*

Carly: *looks up from work station, runs out into hall* Katie!

Katie: *looks over*

Carly: What are you doing here?

Katie: I came here to resign.

Carly: What's going on? Where were you?

Katie: I'm getting some help.

Carly: Oh. Is there anything I can do?

Katie: No.

Carly: You're sweating, are you okay?

Katie: I'm fine.

Carly: You sure?

Katie: Yeah. Where's Horatio?

Carly: I saw him a while ago near the locker room.

Katie: Thanks. *walks away*

Carly: ...Friendly girl.

Locker room

Katie: *walks in, stops*

Speed: *opens locker*

Delko: So are we going for a beer after work?

Speed: Is that the most manly thing you could think of?

Delko: Well, you did hug me.

Speed: Let it go.

Delko: I can't.

Speed: Eric, knock it off.

Delko: Well your brother w-

Speed: Eric, I'm not Josh.

Delko: Noted. *walks to door* Hey Katie. *walks out*

Katie: *nods*

Speed: I thought you'd be getting some help.

Katie: I am. *walks over* At least I think I am.

Speed: You want to talk about it?

Katie: *shakes head*

Speed: As a friend?

Katie: *looks down at floor* I'm sorry.

Speed: For what?

Katie: I haven't been myself lately.

Speed: I hadn't noticed.

Katie: *laughs* Yeah thanks. That makes me feel a whole lot better.

Speed: Are you okay?

Katie: *wipes forehead* Yeah, it's just hot in here.

Speed: *reaches up into locker*

Katie: *flinches*

Speed: ...You sure you're alright?

Katie: *nods*

Speed: *grabs keys*

Katie: *twitches*

Speed: *looks at Katie*

Katie: *crosses arms*

Speed: *closes locker*

Katie: *shivering*

Speed: I thought you said it was hot in here.

Katie: It was.

Speed: And now it isn't.

Katie: *twitches*

Speed: *angry sigh*

Katie: What.

Speed: It's not just the alcohol, is it.

Katie: What are you talking about?

Speed: Empty your pockets.

Katie: No.

Speed: I'll do this myself if I have to.

Katie: *frowns*

Speed: Do you have anything in your pockets that could harm me, or yourself?

Katie: No.

Speed: *reaches into Katie's pockets*

Katie: *shakes head*

Speed: *pulls out bottle*

Katie: *grabs at bottle*

Speed: *steps back*

Katie: Give it back.

Speed: Do you know what this is?

Katie: Yes I know what it is, I bought it.

Speed: Did you know this could kill you?

Katie: That's kind of the point.

Speed: Katie, why are you doing this?

Katie: Hey man, you did it.

Speed: It almost killed me.

Katie: Wow, just like everything else. Can I have that back now?

Speed: *hands over bottle*

Katie: You're not going to arrest me?

Speed: I can't.

Katie: Why?

Speed: Because I didn't see anything.

Katie: *stares at Speed*

Speed: How's your bank account?

Katie: Empty.

Speed: How much more of that do you need?

Katie: *laughs* You tell me.

Speed: *nods* Don't go out tonight, I'll get it for you.

Katie: What? Why?

Speed: Where are you staying?

Katie: A place downtown.

Speed: I'll be there in three hours.

Katie: ...No cops?

Speed: No.

Katie: I have to talk to Horatio.

Speed: Come back tomorrow.

Katie: No, I-

Speed: You have ten seconds to get out of here or I arrest you.

Katie: ...

Speed: Go.

Katie: *turns around, leaves*

TBC..................
 
Raises eyebrow.... ahum.. what the heck is going on with Katie??? Is she on drugs? And I know why Speed is helping her, deep down, he cares about her. I just hope that he doesn't do anything stupid.


The entire scene with the hummerhome had me in stitches. I couldn't stop laughing at the thought of Horatio's eye twitching at the sight of his beloved hummerhome which I have to say, nine??? What kind of bank is Horatio pulling in?

And can we say Slaphappy hilarious? That is exactly what the scene was in the trace lab... Ryan and Speed...Oh my god.. I hit the floor at that! And then Speed hugging Eric!!! Simply fantastic!

Great update, Geni!


oh and ps... yeah, Hunter, my hands slipped earlier. I just saw that I typed Huner... crazy me... :lol:
 
hmm what sort of drugs has katie been taking.... that definitely doesn't sound good at all. I am totally on the ed...*falls off chair* ... edge of the chair...
Can't wait for more
 
ok Speed-what are you doing?????
Katie what are you doing taking drugs?? the stench of trouble is around again....
Delko: You okay?

Speed: I am now.

Delko: Can you stop hugging me now?

Speed: What? *lets go* Nothing happened, I didn't touch you.

Delko: Yeah you did, you hugged me.

Speed: I...No, it wasn't a hug. I tripped.

Delko: ...Into my arms.

Speed: Yeah.

Delko: On purpose.

Speed: No by accident.

Delko: ...

Speed: ...

Delko: *looks around*

Speed: *looks down at floor*

Delko: ..Alright awkward.

Speed: Yeah.

Delko: *walks away*

Speed: *walks away*
Delko: So are we going for a beer after work?

Speed: Is that the most manly thing you could think of?

Delko: Well, you did hug me.

Speed: Let it go.

Delko: I can't.

Speed: Eric, knock it off.

Delko: Well your brother w-

Speed: Eric, I'm not Josh.

Delko: Noted. *walks to door*
:lol::lol::lol::lol::lol: *then remembers housemates are asleep....silent*:lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol:.....
what can i say other than-pure genuis Geni....pure comic genius

can't wait for more.....even tho i know i have to-D'OH :D

update soooooooooooon Geni :D :D
 
Me and Speed have something in common. We don't like Ryan. :lol: If Speed beats Ryan up, I shall bow at his feet and kiss them. Or maybe I'll just be very thankful. :lol: I love how stupid Ryan is in this, but imo, it isn't just this. ;) *runs from the angry Ryan Fans* :lol:

Update Soon. :D
 
ALRIGHT NOW YOU ALL READ THAT BEFORE POSTING:

I'm being annoyed (and actually not only me) with some of the posts in here: i know you like the story, we all do actually but i can't stand people who keep quoting the all story in order to review it cause:

1) It's useless
2) It's boring to read
3) It disturbs the others members who don't even know where the story starts
4) and the most important of all: IT DISTURBS ME :D

Since i don't have time to edit every post which match with my description, next time i will see one i will just EDIT it, so don't be surprised if you see empty posts in here.

I guess you all get my point so from now i won't accept any apologize.

Sissi
 
JC: And then Megan hit a bump and well, the rest is history I guess.
:eek: :eek: :eek: I... got to drive the hummerhome? :D :lol:

Anyone else think Speed is gonna get in trouble for helping Katie??
 
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CSI Garage, Hummerhome

Megan: I can't believe Horatio made us clean the floors with toothbrushes. This is carpet.

JC: Hey, stop standing around, you're not finished.

Megan: You can't clean this with a toothbrush.

JC: Sure you can. I put the carpet cleaner on the end of this here rotating toothbrush with tongue cleaner. It's excellent for scrubbing.

Megan: *frowns*

Missy: *sticks toothbrush in mouth* Hey it's kind of tingly.

Megan: *grabs toothbrush* Don't stick that in your mouth.

Missy: *coughs* Blech, tastes bad though.

Megan: It's carpet cleaner.

Missy: Yeah but it smells good, why doesn't it taste good?

Megan: ...It's carpet cleaner.

Missy: Oh.

JC: *grabs window cleaner* Hey we're almost finished.

Missy: Um, we just started. We haven't even gotten to the rooms.

JC: We didn't go in the rooms.

Missy: Well this place hasn't been cleaned in eons.

Megan: This is just great. I join the team and end up cleaning giagantic buses. I hope I'm getting paid for this.

Missy: Yeah, I don't think so.

Megan: What? Why not?

Missy: You think Horatio's really going to pay us after we destroyed it?

Megan: I didn't do anything, it was you two.

JC: You're the responsible one.

Megan: Nonsense.

JC: UNnonsense.

Megan: That's not a word.

JC: See? You're also smarter.

Missy: Alright my fellow Americans, let's finish this thing.

Megan: ...We're all Canadian.

Missy: *looks around* ...Oh hey, we are. Oot and aboot eh? Shiver me beaver timbers eh?

Megan: Stop it.

Missy: Sorry...Eh.

Ballistics lab

Ryan: *looking through microscope*

Horatio: *walks over* Mister Wolfe.

Ryan: Hey.

Horatio: What are you working on?

Ryan: Calleigh wanted me to look for an identification number on the gun that Alexx pulled out of the vic's stomach.

Horatio: He swallowed a gun.

Ryan: In pieces. Someone was angry with him.

Horatio: You find his wife?

Ryan: Not yet.

Horatio: Where's Calleigh?

Ryan: Looking for his wife.

Horatio: *blinks* Alright, what can you tell me about the gun pieces?

Ryan: Looks like a .45 caliber gun.

Horatio: Anything distinctive?

Ryan: ...What besides the fact that it's been doused in stomach acids?

Horatio: Correct.

Ryan: Nothing, I haven't even found a bullet.

Horatio: ...Bullet.

Ryan: It's a gun, wouldn't there have been a bullet in the chamber?

Horatio: Interesting observation.

Ryan: Thanks. *points to scope* So for now, we don't have much until we can find the bullets. Alexx is still looking over the body.

Horatio: Good work.

Ryan: *smiles*

Horatio: *walks away*

Ryan: *looks down at table* Smooth, Mister Wolfe, smooth.

Halls

Jess: Hey Eric!

Delko: *turns around* Hey, I thought you were at home with Alena.

Jess: She's in the lounge with Cait.

Delko: You left her with a Speedle? She'll be dead by the time you get back there.

Jess: *laughs* I have a question for you.

Delko: Fire away.

Jess: How would you feel about a little vacation?

Delko: ...No kids?

Jess: *smiling*

Delko: I like that idea, a lot. Wait, I won't be alone, right?

Jess: No, I'm going with you.

Delko: Oh good. Where are we going?

Jess: I was thinking we could go to California, spend a few days on the beach, walk around Hollywood...

Delko: *laughs*

Jess: What?

Delko: You want to go all the way to the other side of the United States to do the same thing we do in Miami.

Jess: There are more celebrities in California.

Delko: So basically you'll go running around while I'm in the hotel room marinating.

Jess: Of course not. There are a lot of things we can do together.

Delko: *smiles* Oh really.

Jess: *rolls eyes playfully* Well, at least I think there are a few things.

Delko: Where will Alena stay?

Jess: She's staying with Horatio, he already agreed.

Delko: H? You asked him?

Jess I brought it up, he offered. You trust him, don't you?

Delko: Yeah of course I trust him, but I never pictured him to be the babysitting type. What's he going to do, buy her some shades and help her learn to drive a Hummer?

Jess: I'm sure he wouldn't do that.

Delko: I don't know, he makes to-do lists.

Jess: He does?

Delko: Yeah and they're a little insane. How do you think he got the first Hummerhome made up?

Jess: You guys were in on that plan?

Delko: Well he didn't tell us about it until we got outside. Our very first Hummerhome was pewter.

Jess: What about the second one?

Delko: Black. But I think that one fell through the ice or...Sunk to the bottom of the ocean or something.

Jess: Oh.

Delko: Anyway, what were we talking about?

Jess: I just so happen to have rented us a vehicle.

Delko: Is it expensive?

Jess: *hands over brochure*

Delko: ...Volvohome. What the hell is that?

Jess: A motorhome.

Delko: A...Volvo.

Jess: Motorhome.

Delko: Volvohome.

Jess: Yeah.

Delko: We are so not cool.

Jess: Oh come on, it was the cheapest thing that didn't have roaches crawling up through the toilets.

Delko: But...Volvo?

Jess: What, you wanted an Escalade?

Delko: They make those?

Jess: No, it was an example.

Delko: Oh.

Jess: Come on, let's go pick it up.

Delko: Whoa whoa, we're leaving right now?

Jess: Yeah I packed for you.

Delko: Why?

Jess: Because you don't know how to pack for yourself.

Delko: I do so.

Jess: Okay the last time you packed for yourself there was an abundance of tighty whities and teddy bears.

Delko: So?

Jess: You need clothes to take with you.

Delko: I know that.

Jess: Let's go.

Delko: I have to at least tell H.

Jess: He already knows.

Delko: ..You thought of everything.

Jess: *grabs Eric's hand* Let's go.

Delko: But what about t-

Jess: Tedderton Jay Bearbell is already there.

Delko: Oh good deal.

Trace Lab

Speed: *doing paperwork*

Cait: *peers from behind door*

Speed: *looks up at door*

Cait: *hides behind door*

Speed: You're either in or you're out.

Cait: *walks in* Hi uncle Timmy.

Speed: Hey.

Cait: What are ya up to?

Speed: Work. What are you up to?

Cait: I was looking after Alena.

Speed: And why aren't you in there right now?

Cait: I got bored. She fell asleep. GUESS WHAT!

Speed: What.

Cait: My birthday is in one month.

Speed: Good.

Cait: I'm gonna be nine years old.

Speed: *nods*

Cait: *places hands behind back, rocks back and forth*

Speed: *flips page*

Cait: Guess what.

Speed: What.

Cait: Mum found a photo album in the attic.

Speed: Good.

Cait: Yup, I brought it here.

Speed: *nods*

Cait: Wanna see?

Speed: I'm really busy right now.

Cait: *runs over with photo album* Too bad. *puts book on table*

Speed: *looks at Cait*

Cait: *opens page* Look! It's me.

Speed: I know.

Cait: *flips page* Look! It's mum.

Speed: I know.

Cait: *flips page* Look! It's that rock I named Bob.

Speed: That's very nice.

Cait: *flips page* Look! It's my teddy.

Speed: *sigh* Are you finished?

Cait: Yup. *closes book* Guess what.

Speed: What.

Cait: Mum took me shopping yesterday. Guess what I bought.

Speed: What.

Cait: You're supposed to guess.

Speed: ...I don't know.

Cait: Gosh uncle Timmy you sure don't know how to talk to kids.

Speed: Enlighten me.

Cait: You're supposed to say "Did you get a new pair of jeans?" And I'm supposed to say "Yes I did!"

Speed: *blank stare*

Cait: But ya missed out.

Speed: My loss I guess.

Cait: Did you know I can count up to infinity?

Speed: No.

Cait: Wanna hear?

Speed: No.

Cait: You sure are crabby. Daddy says you're crabby because you don't get enough in the sack. I don't know what that means but then I asked for some ice cream and we went out for ice cream.

Speed: Tell your dad he's a knob.

Cait: Okay. Mum said you're crabby because you have low self steamers.

Speed: I think the word you're going for is self-esteem.

Cait: What does that mean?

Speed: It means your mom is also a knob.

Cait: I'll tell her. Katie used to say you were crabby because you hate human beings.

Speed: Well Katie's insane, so don't listen to her.

Cait: Okay. You know what I think?

Speed: I guess you're going to tell me anyway.

Cait: I think you're crabby 'cause you need a hug.

Speed: *grabs casefiles* I don't need anything.

Cait: Everybody needs something.

Speed: You're nine, you shouldn't be acting like Ghandi.

Cait: I'm eight.

Speed: Whatever.

Cait: You know what makes me feel better?

Speed: What.

Cait: Cartoons and ice cream.

Speed: Of course.

Cait: What makes you feel better when you're sad?

Speed: Nothing.

Cait: Then...How can you ever be happy?

Speed: I was happy once.

Cait: When?

Speed: At home, a few years ago.

Cait: Why?

Speed: Well, I was sitting in bed reading, when Holly ran into the room and jumped onto the bed. She wanted to read what I was reading. So you know what she did?

Cait: What?

Speed: She ran her finger across every sentence, even though she didn't know what the words meant. I was so proud of her. I never knew something so precious could ever be made from two people.

Cait: Ah...But how did that make you happy?

Speed: *smirks*

Cait: *shakes head* I'll never get grownups. *jumps off chair, runs out of the room*

TBC...............
 
YES! An update!!! How cool are you , Geni??? I can answer that, ridiculouso cool!!!... (yes, I am insane, I embrace insanity...) Alright, alright..., getting to the nitty gritty...

:lol: YOu know, I could believe that Horatio commissioned the three culprits to clean his hummerhome, with a toothbrush no less!!! I thought I would die...

But not as much when I read the in between with Jess and Eric. Tedderton Jay Bearbell , :lol: :lol: :lol:... And Eric being a less than stellar packer... Whitey tighties...*loses breath* I got to remember to breathe when I read the RT!

And that last scene was so awwwwwwwwwwwwww, again, I felt as if I was going into a diabetic coma with all the sweetness there. She is very inquistive and ah... blunt. As if Speedles can be any other way.

For some reason, Eric and Jess in Hollywood has me grinning insanely. Wonder what they are going to be up to...

Awesome update, Geni! ;)
 
Cait's adorable and Josh and Delko have resolved their tension. Now it's just me and Carly in our tension-filled worlds. :lol: Unless I missed where Carly's tension was resolved of course. :lol:

Update Soon. :D
 
Cait's adorable and Josh and Delko have resolved their tension. Now it's just me and Carly in our tension-filled worlds.
I think you mean Jess and Delko...unless Josh and Eric had more fun in New Yrok than we thought ;) :lol:

Awwww, I love Cait, she so adorable...and so Australian! I still think it's absolutely adorable how she says 'mum' istead of 'mom' :lol: Aww, Poor Speedy. Holly was so cute...well, at least he seems to be smilimg/smirking again. Thats always a good sign.

...Tedderton Jay Bearbell? Oh Delko *shakes head* not another one. Seriously, Alena is going to outgrow teddy bears before he does. Hm, that would be weird... :lol: But yay! they're going to Calfironia to work out their issues. Good for them! Now it is just me and Colton *pats Colton on the back*...and I don't mean me and Colton together, I mean, me and Colton with our repective partners :lol:

But *gasp* they trusted Horatio to look after Alena? :eek: Ok, I know he's supposed to be the saviour of all children and everything, but how do they know that he won't give her to another psycho murderer lady? :lol:

please update soon!
 
ALRIGHT NOW YOU ALL READ THAT BEFORE POSTING:

I'm being annoyed (and actually not only me) with some of the posts in here: i know you like the story, we all do actually but i can't stand people who keep quoting the all story in order to review it cause:

1) It's useless
2) It's boring to read
3) It disturbs the others members who don't even know where the story starts
4) and the most important of all: IT DISTURBS ME

Since i don't have time to edit every post which match with my description, next time i will see one i will just EDIT it, so don't be surprised if you see empty posts in here.

I guess you all get my point so from now i won't accept any apologize.

Sissi

...Wow. you must hate me.

(And i had a whole review of thread 1 to post...)

Geni, why hasn't Horatio shot anybody? :lol:

And who's Tedderton Jay Bearbell? What happened to Snuffles? (Oh yeah, i know about Snuffles... :lol: )

Horatio is baby-sitting Alena! OMG, next thing we know, she'll be calling him uncle! :lol:

Nine hummerhomes....wow. Horatio is f'ing rich. :lol:

Well, since i can't quote, my reviews will be quite bland. :( Thanks for the updates Geni!
 
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