Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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[note- hope you saw the earlier review. Sorry, I didn't catch that post. Sorry people. It was ALL fantastic Geni]
*jumps up and down* Come to LA, Delko! Stay with me! Pick me up and take me back to Miami and make me a super-duper CSI! *jumps*
(This is just forpages 8-9. I'll get to 10 later)
Great job! I love happy Speed, I love everything! Keep up the great work, and I'll read page 10 now (won't write a grand review though...tired)
:D Thanks!
-Lilly
p.s.- And I LOVE goofy Ryan. Just don't make him too goofy.
 
cainesugar, a few posts up Sissi told us not to quote the entire RT anymore. So I think she'd appreciate it if you took the quotes out of your review ;)

Geni, that's...sad!
 
Old lady: Who needs ma stories when I can sit outside and watch all the fun happen right before ma eyes?
:lol: :lol:

Ooh, poor Timmy. *huggles* I'll help cheer him up! But really, I can't blame Anni.
 
agreeing with you completely Megan...Can't blame Anni at all but poor Speed :( *joins quene to comfort Speed*
Just when I thought that everyone was going to turn out all loved up and Happy...including you Colton-holding out for you....now this :( :(

By the way LOVED the old woman at the end...lighten the mood so well :D
Update soon Geni
 
EDITED because you didn't read my previous post when i said to not QUOTE THE ENTIRE STORY!!

What you did was some kind of Spamming so next time, i will give you an OFFICIALWarning
 
Not to be rude and all but I don't think we want to Piss off Sissi, I do recall the fact that sissi has asked us not to quote a million things on the thread and the more we quote things the more space it takes and then geni can't fit as many of her lovely updates and I am sure she would love to. I know she loves all our reviews but we also wouldn't want the thread getting locked because people are quoting every possible thing.

On a happier note, I can't wait for another update like I said before I can't wait to see where you are going with your story line but I am sure when we find out it will be most exciting and amazing and awsome .... and all other good words that my brain can't think of rate now.

(still can't believe that we had to scrub the hummerhome with toothbrushes though.... wait .... that would take a long time so are we still scrubbing the hummerhome with the toothbrushs??? ... I am so confoosed!!!!)

And now that I am over the shock of Anni taking the ring off and taking off in the hummer, I do hope they can find a way to work everything out I mean, they haven't exactly had a long run and all with their marriage (don't think i spelt that right) and Anni was in the asylum for a bit, I don't know bout everyone else but I certainly hope that they can resolve their issue.

LOL and poor H babysitting Alena and Ethan at the same time, although he did a good job getting ethan under control after he pulled his little stunt, and of course lets hope that jess and eric don't get too lost and all so that we have to go and rescue them .... or worse they get them selves in some sort of peril that they will definitely need rescueing from.

*sigh* alright I am done my review thingy now that I am more awake and not distracted

Can't wait for more!
 
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Trace Lab, 9am, next day

Calleigh: *walks in* Hey did you process the Trace from the gun?

Speed: *staring at table*

Calleigh: ...Tim?

Speed: *looks at Calleigh* Yeah. *hands over paper*

Calleigh: Thanks. *grabs paper* ...Acrylic.

Speed: Someone broke a nail.

Calleigh: A woman.

Speed: Well you said the wife was missing, right?

Calleigh: Yeah.

Speed: I can't believe you're still working this case.

Calleigh: Things have gotten in the way.

Speed: Why don't you just store the case away and leave it alone. Who cares that an old fat guy was killed.

Calleigh: *lifts brow* Are you okay?

Speed: I'm fine.

Calleigh: You're not fine.

Delko: *walks in* Hey the Hummerhome's almost ready.

Calleigh: Oh good!

Delko: What's his problem?

Calleigh: There's always a problem with him.

Speed: *takes off gloves, leaves*

Calleigh: ...Something I said?

Delko: *shrugs*

Aid facility

Room 24

Speed: *walks in*

Katie: *brushing hair* What are you doing here?

Speed: Why do I ever help you?

Katie: Uh...Because underneath that hard and gruff exterior lies a sensitive teddy bear?

Speed: No. Because you'd be utterly helpless without me.

Katie: Wow, you sure think highly of yourself.

Speed: You would be dead right now if it wasn't for me.

Katie: You ever think maybe I've never needed you? That I could do things on my own?

Speed: Anni left me.

Katie: What? *puts down brush, walks over*

Speed: Yeah.

Katie: Why?

Speed: Because of you.

Katie: Oh you are not going to pin this on me. What did you do? Cheat on her? Gamble away all of your life savings? Set the apartment on fire?

Speed: Love you.

Katie: ...Oh. Well that's a whole different ballgame there Mister Miami.

Speed: Stop calling me that.

Katie: You love that.

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: Right...When we were married.

Speed: We have to fix this.

Katie: Fix what? We care about each other, big deal.

Speed: Apparently that's a huge problem with Anni.

Anni: *walks in* What's a huge problem?

Speed: *turns around*

Anni: I knew I'd find you here.

Speed: I was just talking to her.

Anni: Yeah, it's obvious.

Katie: Anni, nothing has happened between us.

Anni: I believe you.

Speed: Oh and you don't believe me.

Anni: I'm not mad, Tim. Like I said, I understand.

Speed: Why that's why you left me.

Anni: I might have been a little upset last night, but I never meant to leave you out there. I'm sorry.

Speed: I know why you did it.

Anni: You guys care for each other, I get it. It's just that...I don't want to seem like a third wheel in all of this.

Speed: You aren't. If anything, I'm the third wheel. You two have been friends longer.

Anni: ...Yeah but I've never slept with her.

Speed: You haven't slept with me either.

Katie: *smirks*

Anni: ...Smooth, Speedle.

Speed: Sorry.

Anni: *slaps Speed*

Speed: Ow.

Hummerhome

Missy: *bouncing on seat* I WANT TO GO! I WANT TO GO!

JC: *running back and forth* I WANT TO GO! I WANT TO GO!

Megan: *rolls toy Hummer across the table* Won't get fooled again, don't get fooled again NO! NO! BA! BA! BA! BA! BA!

Carly: *sings* Ba ba black sheep have you any wool, yes sir, yes sir, three bags full.

Everyone: *looks at Carly*

Carly: All of the "ba's" made me think of it.

Missy: Can we go now?

Carly: We can't go until Katie gets back.

Missy: But she's taking forever! Stupid drugs! *kicks garbage pail*

Megan: Violence isn't the answer.

Missy: Girl you haven't been on this team long enough.

Megan: Yeah it shows, I know. Maybe I should shoot a kitten or something.

Missy: Are you CRAZY?

Megan: Fine bad example! Sue me!

Missy: *grabs pen* What's your lawyer's number?

Megan: I don't have one.

Missy: Oh you just made a BIG mistake.

Megan: *nods slowly*

Horatio: *runs in* WE'RE BUSTING KATIE OUT!

JC: What? Why?

Horatio: I want to go.

JC: We all do.

Horatio: Good, let's kick it.

Delko: *runs in*

Calleigh: *runs in*

Ryan: *runs in* So what do you want me to do?

Horatio: Close the door and buckle up.

Carly: Oh man, you're letting him stay?

Horatio: Yes.

Missy: Hey what about your kids?

Carly: Josh has all of them. Let's blow this popsicle stand.

Jess: *runs in* DON'T LEAVE WITHOUT ME! *falls down*

Horatio: *turns key* WON'T GET FOOLED AGAIN!

Missy: We already sang that.

Horatio: Ah man. You always beat me to it.

TBC................
 
Not to be rude and all but I don't think we want to Piss off Sissi, I do recall the fact that sissi has asked us not to quote a million things on the thread

Yes but this is thread one, if i just started talking about how funny how everyone was expecting Speed to hotwire, out of the blue, you wouldn't know wha i would be talking about. You following?


Hunter, wow...Could you please edit that post? All those quotes just killed me to have to scroll through.

Grab the bar on the side and just slide down. :lol: Wohat do you want me to to/. Delete it? *everyone opens their mouths* I get it i get it.... I think you can live with it for just this page. This page is gonna be done soon too.

Let's just put this behind us, i was just estatic. 1000 posts, a ridiculously long post, me. It all fits. :lol:

OK, to Geni's part! :p


Katie: Oh you are not going to pin this on me. What did you do? Cheat on her? Gamble away all of your life savings? Set the apartment on fire?

Speed: Love you.

Cute. :rolleyes:

Ok, are Missy, JC, and Meghan high or something? Because i haven't heard the black sheep nursery rhyme in years/

They didn't beat you to the song Horatio....ok well they did. But you can beat them by cranking it up on the stereo. :devil: :lol:

Good part Geni! :D
 
HOly hell I've been gone a long time. BUt now I have a new computer and i'm back baby! Anyways I had a lot to catch up on but that's ok because it was all a good read.

First of all what is up with me taking a cue from Speed and doing drugs? But hey I guess even I have to leave The Queen of the Spider people aside everyonce in a while and go for the Queen of the secret cloud police...ok I can't remember what I said a few chapters back but still.

And Ryan's back? You just can't keep people dead can you Geni? Eh thats ok it brings a long good drama and we all know Katie's a drama whore.

I'm glad that Jess and Alena are ok and that there all in one piece because it wouldn't be a road trip without Jess and her Double D's and the little kiddo's.

I may be a little dense because i'm a blonde and we all know Katie has her brain farts but how are we supposed to know what our favorite parts are if we don't quote. I will admit a TON of quoting does get a little overwhelming but we can't even quote something little?

Anyways you have truly out done yourself, Geni. Like you always do. Great job. Keep up the great work sweetie.
 
Okay, now , does this mean that it's being worked out, or are we in limbo? Ah, love on the RT, it's full of surprises. And Horatio behind the wheel, means more hysterical laughs. I really can't wait for the next update because I really want to know the resolution of the saga of Speed / Katie/ Anni... Such a thrilling triangle :D

Can't wait for more... Great job

Oh PS... WELCOME BACK KATIE!!!! I missed you so much! :D
 
Thanks Lora. :) Congrats on the 1000 posts by the way.

And Katie's back! :D *Huggles*

And Colton, you haven't been forgotten!

Anni, it hasn't quite been worked out yet, but you'll see what I mean anyway, lol.

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Hummerhome, on the road, two hours later

Katie: *sitting on couch* I can't believe you busted me out of there.

Calleigh: Ah you're fine.

Katie: *lifts brow* They didn't think so.

Calleigh: We think so.

Missy: This is so much fun. None of this made sense and YET WE DID IT!

JC: I feel like a million bucks!

Missy: You don't even have a million bucks.

JC: I feel like twenty bucks!

Missy: Better.

Calleigh: So where are we off to?

Horatio: Louisiana.

Calleigh: OH GOOD! I'm from there!

Horatio: We'll be staying in an insane asylum.

Speed: Is that supposed to be a joke? Because it isn't funny.

Horatio: Relax, it's abandoned.

Speed: Not funny.

Katie: Um...I don't want to stay in a big scary happy home.

Anni: Me neither.

Jess: How did we get back from California so fast?

Delko: Oh I drove back when you were asleep. No biggie.

Jess: *frowns*

Carly: Okay that doesn't make sense.

Katie: It's a fic! It doesn't have to!

Carly: What?

Katie: ...Nevermind.

Josh's house

Josh: Alena! Get back here! Ethan! Put that fire out!

Cait: Daddy they're not listening.

Josh: *sigh* I know.

Cait: What do ya want me to do?

Josh: Just...Be a good girl.

Cait: Okay. *grabs Ethan* Come on, sit here at watch some tv. *turns on tv*

Ethan: *watches tv*

Cait: *puts Alena on the couch* Watch.

Alena: *watches tv*

Cait: Okay, done.

Josh: ...How did you do that?

Cait: I dunno.

Josh: Man I love you.

Cait: *smiles* YAY.

Josh: *sits on couch*

Cait: *jumps up onto couch*

Josh: So how was your day at school?

Cait: It's saturday, daddy.

Josh: Oh right. Sorry.

Cait: Sheesh.

Josh: *laughs*

Cait: Uncie Timmy said you used to be gay.

Josh: *blank stare*

Cait: He said that means you used to love boys.

Josh: ....

Cait: Why did you love boys?

Josh: Uh...Well sweetheart, if there's one thing you need to learn about life, is that it's okay to love anyone.

Cait: It is?

Josh: Yes.

Cait: But...Boys can't have babies.

Josh: You know what? I think it's time for dinner. Want to help me make it?

Cait: Yup!

Kitchen

Josh: *opens cupboards*

Cait: So how come you love girls again?

Josh: Uh...Like I said, it doesn't matter who you love, as long as you love them.

Cait: Oh. What's sex?

Josh: *drops pots*

Cait: *looks down at pots*

Josh: Where did your mother go again?

Cait: Road trip.

Josh: Oh great...She left me here alone...With my nine year old child and this topic.

Cait: *smiles*

Josh: It's not really something you need to know yet, Cait.

Cait: Why?

Josh: Because I don't explain things very well.

Cait: Oh.

Josh: Excuse me for a second. *grabs phone, dials*

Hummerhome

Missy: GIVE IT BACK!

JC: NO!

Missy: IT'S MY PEN YOU PEN STEALING FIRE BREATHING DRAGON!

JC: I AM NOT A DRAGON!

Cellphone rings

Speed: *grabs phone*

JC: NO I WANT TO SCRIBBLE FOR A WHILE!

Missy: NO IT'S MY TURN!

Megan: You guys stock pile guns in the closet and you don't bring more than one pen?

Speed: *opens phone* Yeah it's Speed.

Miami

Josh: Help me, help me, help me, help me.

Speed: With what?

Josh: Cait.

Speed: What's wrong with Cait?

Josh: She just asked me THE question.

Speed: Oooh. I have no idea what you're talking about.

Josh: THE question, Tim.

Speed: ...She wants to marry you?

Josh: No! You know that thing that parents have to go through.

Speed: ...Ulcers?

Josh: No, she asked me about that word.

Speed: Ooooh. What word?

Josh: THAT word.

Speed: Okay let's jump onto the same page for a minute. What word.

Josh: The one that starts with an S and ends with an X. It has a an E in the middle.

Speed: Oh good lord, Josh.

Josh: What?

Speed: You're so juvenile.

Josh: What do I do? I don't know how to give THE TALK.

Speed: Stop giving emphasis on everything.

Josh: Sorry. Didn't you have to do that with Lori?

Speed: ...No I think she pretty much learned all of that on her own.

Josh: Oh. How about Holly?

Speed: Josh, just tell her the truth.

Josh: You're no help.

Speed: You're welcome.

Josh: Yeah yeah yeah. *hangs up phone*

Cait: Who was that?

Josh: No one.

Hummerhome

Missy: *smacks JC*

JC: *starts to cry*

Horatio: Okay children, let's stop hurting each other for five minutes.

Hummerhome hits a bump

Katie: AH! *falls backwards*

Horatio: Oops, we bottomed out.

Calleigh: Stop hitting all of the potholes.

Horatio: I can't, this is four wheel drive. I can do ANYTHING.

Anni: *frowning*

Katie: *sitting on Speed's lap*

Speed: *stares blankly* Alright this is one hundred percent not my fault.

Anni: *glares*

Katie: Haha...Um...

Anni: GET OFF OF HIM!

Katie: Good deal. *stands*

Anni: *grabs Speed by the hair* You love ME, you got that? ME!

Speed: Yes dear.

Katie: *sits in dinette* Colton, there you are.

Colton: Here I am. I wasn't forgotten, nope I wasn't.

Anni: *slaps Speed*

Speed: OW! What was that for?

Anni: You glanced at Calleigh.

Speed: So?

Anni: YOU JUST GLANCED AT MISSY!

Speed: Good God, there are more women in here than men, I don't really have a lot of options will you calm down?

Anni: Sorry. I'm just a little territorial. I should have mentioned that.

Horatio: You know what's fun? Staying quiet.

Calleigh: That's not very fun.

Horatio: Sure it is. You get to breathe through your nose, and listen to the rustling of the curtains via the A/C.

Calleigh: ...

Miami, after dinner

Cait: Daddy, can we get a puppy?

Josh: Uh, no.

Cait: Why?

Josh: They're messy.

Cait: I'll take care of it.

Josh: That's what they all say until it craps all over the floor and I have to clean it up.

Cait: Oh. Can we get a cat?

Josh: Those shed.

Cait: ..Parrot?

Josh: Too loud.

Cait: Mouse?

Josh: Too diseased.

Cait: Rhino?

Josh: Too big.

Cait: Lion?

Josh: Sweetheart, enough.

Cait: Sorry.

Alena: *screams*

Ethan: *cackles*

Josh: Ethan, leave Alena alone.

Ethan: *frowns*

Josh: Now.

Ethan: *rolls eyes*

Alena: Ha.

Ethan: *punches Alena*

Alena: *starts to cry*

Josh: *stands, grabs Ethan*

Ethan: *screams*

Josh: Go to your room, right now.

Ethan: NO!

Josh: NOW!

Ethan: Ergh! *kicks Josh*

Josh: You want a kick in the butt? Is that what you want? Because I'll be more than happy to bruise your keister.

Ethan: *runs upstairs*

Josh: *sigh*

Alena: *sniffs*

Josh: *walks over* Are you okay?

Alena: *nods*

Cait: Ethan's sitting on the stairs daddy.

Josh: *turns around*

Ethan: *frowning*

Josh: ...

Ethan: *smirks*

Josh: Ethan, what did you do?

Ethan: *runs back upstairs*

Josh: *follows*

Upstairs, Josh's room

Ethan: *lights match*

Josh: Ethan, stop.

Ethan: *throws match onto bed*

Match touches bed covered in vaseline, catches on fire

Josh: *grabs Ethan* Are you insane!

Ethan: *laughing*

Josh: *picks up Ethan, runs downstairs*

Kitchen

Josh: *sets Ethan on floor* Cait, take him outside and grab Alena.

Cait: Why?

Josh: Just go.

Cait: *grabs Ethan and Alena, runs outside*

Josh: *grabs fire extinguisher, runs upstairs*

Outside

Cait: *turns around*

Ethan: *pushes Alena*

Alena: *falls over* NO! *starts to cry*

Cait: *smacks Ethan* Knock it off.

Ethan: OW. *rubs head*

Alena: *crying*

Cait: *kneels* You okay?

Alena: *hugs Cait*

Cait: It's okay, he's just mean.

Ethan: *kicks grass in Alena's face*

Alena: *screams*

Cait: HEY! Stop it.

Josh's room

Curtains catch fire

Josh: Ah! *points extinguisher at curtains*

Fire spreads to armoir and then wallpaper

Josh: *backs up* Oh crap.

Fire engulfs room

Josh: *backs out of room* Um...Well this is a dilly of a pickle.

Smoke fills the hall

Josh: *coughs* Oh great. *coughing*

Outside

Cait: *looks at house* Why isn't he out yet?

Alena: *shrugs*

Ethan: HA.

Cait: *runs back to house*

Ethan: *pushes Alena over*

Alena: *screams*

Inside house

Josh: *coughing, drops fire extinguisher down the stairs*

Cait: *crawls into house* Daddy! Daddy where are you!

Josh: *falls over*

Cait: *crawls upstairs* Daddy! Daddy!

Josh: *closes eyes*

Cait: Daddy! *crawls over to Josh* Daddy, are you okay? *pokes Josh* Daddy?

Josh: *coughs*

Cait: Daddy I'm gonna call 9-1-1 okay? *grabs Josh's cellphone, dials* ......Yup, I need some firemen here pronto. Um, somewhere in Coconut grove....The house that's on fire. It's gonna be easy to find. Okay? Okay. *drops phone* Come on daddy, we have to go.

Josh: *reaches for Cait*

Cait: *grabs Josh's hand*

Josh: *squeezes Cait's hand*

Cait: ...Daddy?...Come on we have to go. *drags Josh down the stairs* Ugh! You're so heavy. You gotta stop eating so darn much. *coughs*

Sirens are heard

Cait: *coughs* Oh good daddy, *coughs* The firemen are here.

Josh: *whispers* Cait...

Cait: What?

Josh: *coughs* Get...Out.

Cait: Why?

Josh: Go.

Cait: Okay daddy. *runs downstairs, out of house*

Beams fall, wood cracks

Josh: *flinches*

Wood crashes onto floor

Firemen run in

Outside

Cait: *grabs Alena, walks across street* You'll be safe over here, okay?

Alena: *nods*

Ethan: *runs over* Ha.

Cait: Why'd you do that?

Ethan: *shrugs* It's fun.

Ambulance pulls up, paramedics get out and run into the house

Cait: *stares at house*

Inside house

Fireman: *grabs Josh* Come on.

Josh: Wh-Where are my kids. *coughs*

Fireman: They're outside, they're safe.

Josh: *coughing*

Fireman: Try to breathe normally.

Josh: *frowns*

Outside

Fireman: *runs out* They'll take you.

Paramedic: *grabs Josh*

Roof collapses, firemen grab hoses

Josh: *lays on gurney*

Cait: *runs over* Daddy! Daddy are you okay?

Josh: *coughing*

Paramedic: *hands over oxygen mask* Put this on.

Cait: Is he okay?

Paramedic: We'll figure that out.

Cait: *starts to cry*

Josh: *opens eyes, looks at Cait*

Cait: *crying*

Josh: *takes off oxygen mask* It's *coughs* okay, Cait.

Cait: *looks at Josh*

Josh: I'll be okay.

Cait: *nods*

Paramedic: Put this back on please.

Josh: Yeah.

TBC......................
 
I am so giddy tonight and I can't stop laughing now. Such a subtle way to add me in. ;) :lol: And OMG! JOSH! NO!!!!!!!! I don't like Ethan. :(

UPDATE SUPER ULTRA SOON! :D
 
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