Ooh lots of magnificent reviews. 
No worries, Anni! Your review now is just as kick ass. Then again, I haven't seen the other one, but nonetheless, it's really great.
:lol: Hunter
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Delko/Jess' house, 5pm
Delko: *walks in*
Jess: *cooking dinner*
Delko: Hey.
Jess: Hey.
Delko: Where's Alena?
Jess: She's in the backyard.
Delko: What are you cooking?
Jess: Dinner.
Delko: ...For everyone?
Jess: No, I thought I'd eat an entire pot roast on my own. *puts pot on table*
Delko: Look, I know we didn't really have the chance to talk since you got back, b-
Jess: No, you know why we haven't had the chance to talk? Because you were at work and then you came home and went upstairs while I slept down here.
Delko: I-
Jess: I thought maybe we'd be able to feel something for each other since I got back seeing as I almost died but OH NO.
Delko: What are you talking about?
Jess: What's wrong with us?
Delko: Nothing.
Jess: *stares at Eric*
Delko: What?
Jess: *throws towel onto table* Do you still love me?
Delko: Yes.
Jess: Then why don't you show it?
Delko: Um, it's kind of a two way street here. You haven't given me the time of day in over a year.
Jess: Maybe I would if you didn't always work until 1 in the morning. You're a DAY SHIFT CSI!
Delko: I had overtime.
Jess: Overtime. So that's what they're calling it these days.
Delko: Yeah, that is the term they use for working over your time. Overtime.
Jess: You know what Eric, nevermind. *walks into kitchen*
Delko: *follows* What do you want? You want me to pin you down on the bed? You want me to massage your feet? You want me to bring flowers or something? Because I have no idea what you want from me.
Jess: How about a husband.
Delko: *frowns*
Alena: *runs in crying*
Jess: *looks at Alena* What now.
Alena: MOMMA!
Jess: *picks up Alena* What's wrong?
Alena: *crying* A big bee chased me.
Jess: *sigh*
Delko: Jess, we need to work this out.
Jess: I know.
Alena: *sniffs, wipes eyes*
Jess: *hands Alena to Eric* I'll set the rest of the table, we'll talk about this when she's asleep.
Delko: Sure.
Alena: Da.
Delko: What.
Alena: Look at my bruise. *extends arm*
Delko: Where did you get that?
Alena: I ran into the door.
Delko: *laughs* Well at least we know you're related to me.
Jess: *walks back over* What happened to our marriage?
Delko: Uh...I thought we were going to discuss this later.
Jess: I want to know now.
Delko: I didn't think there was anything wrong with it.
Jess: We sleep in seperate rooms and there's nothing wrong with it?
Delko: Hey I didn't kick you out of the bedroom.
Jess: *angry sigh* Men.
Delko: *puts Alena down* Men? You think all men are the cause of your problems?
Jess: What problems?
Delko: You tell me. You're the one who's making a big fantastic deal out of it. What is your problem?
Jess: We're just not as in love as we were before.
Delko: *looks down at floor*
Jess: What?
Delko: ...I'm willing to work hard at this marriage. I don't want to end up like...
Jess: I know. Me too.
Delko: *hugs Jess* I love you.
Jess: I love you too.
Alena: *playing with forks* Ew.
Josh/Carly's house
Carly: *walks in* ...Holy..Crap. What happened to my house? JOSHUA SPEEDLE!
Josh: *runs downstairs* Carly! Hey, what are you doing here?
Carly: I live here. What the hell happened to my house? Why is there crayon all over the walls and paper on the floors and food everywhere?
Josh: Uh...I don't know.
Carly: *frowning*
Josh: What?
Carly: Where are the kids?
Josh: Cait's at a birthday party and Ethan is next door playing with the neighbors.
Carly: So why is my house still a mess?
Josh: Well technically it's my house.
Carly: *glares*
Josh: Actually I was just about to clean it.
Carly: Where were you all day?
Josh: I was here.
Carly: And you didn't stop them from ruining my house?
Josh: They're kids.
Carly: I KNOW THAT! THAT'S WHY YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO STOP THEM!
Josh: I didn't want to yell at them.
Carly: You are their father.
Josh: So?
Carly: *blank stare*
Josh: I don't like to raise my voice.
Ethan: *runs in*
Carly: ETHAN!
Ethan: *stops running, stares at Carly*
Carly: Get over here.
Ethan: *walks over*
Carly: What did you do to my walls?
Ethan: ...Colored them.
Carly: Why?
Ethan: *shrugs*
Carly: You don't know why?
Ethan: *shakes head*
Carly: Josh, you get to punish him.
Josh: Oh come on, boys will be boys.
Carly: Does that saying usually mean something where you come from?
Josh: I'll clean the walls.
Carly: No you won't, Ethan will. He's going to work his little fingers to the bone until my house is spotless.
Josh: No.
Carly: Excuse me?
Josh: I'm not one of the children, Carly.
Carly: *grabs Ethan* Come on, you're going to clean.
Josh: *steps in front of Carly* No he's not.
Carly: Every action has a consequence.
Josh: You're not going to do the same thing that you did to Lori when she was here.
Carly: Get out of the way.
Josh: No.
Carly: So you just want to let our kids run wild.
Josh: That's not what I said.
Carly: Then what?
Josh: I think you just need to lay off on the power trip for a while. Our son is a human being, he's not a dog.
Carly: I know that. *lets go of Ethan*
Josh: Ethan, go to your room, we'll come talk to you later.
Ethan: *runs upstairs*
Carly: *sigh* I'm sorry.
Josh: It's okay.
TBC.............
No worries, Anni! Your review now is just as kick ass.
Then again, I haven't seen the other one, but nonetheless, it's really great. :lol: Hunter
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Delko/Jess' house, 5pm
Delko: *walks in*
Jess: *cooking dinner*
Delko: Hey.
Jess: Hey.
Delko: Where's Alena?
Jess: She's in the backyard.
Delko: What are you cooking?
Jess: Dinner.
Delko: ...For everyone?
Jess: No, I thought I'd eat an entire pot roast on my own. *puts pot on table*
Delko: Look, I know we didn't really have the chance to talk since you got back, b-
Jess: No, you know why we haven't had the chance to talk? Because you were at work and then you came home and went upstairs while I slept down here.
Delko: I-
Jess: I thought maybe we'd be able to feel something for each other since I got back seeing as I almost died but OH NO.
Delko: What are you talking about?
Jess: What's wrong with us?
Delko: Nothing.
Jess: *stares at Eric*
Delko: What?
Jess: *throws towel onto table* Do you still love me?
Delko: Yes.
Jess: Then why don't you show it?
Delko: Um, it's kind of a two way street here. You haven't given me the time of day in over a year.
Jess: Maybe I would if you didn't always work until 1 in the morning. You're a DAY SHIFT CSI!
Delko: I had overtime.
Jess: Overtime. So that's what they're calling it these days.
Delko: Yeah, that is the term they use for working over your time. Overtime.
Jess: You know what Eric, nevermind. *walks into kitchen*
Delko: *follows* What do you want? You want me to pin you down on the bed? You want me to massage your feet? You want me to bring flowers or something? Because I have no idea what you want from me.
Jess: How about a husband.
Delko: *frowns*
Alena: *runs in crying*
Jess: *looks at Alena* What now.
Alena: MOMMA!
Jess: *picks up Alena* What's wrong?
Alena: *crying* A big bee chased me.
Jess: *sigh*
Delko: Jess, we need to work this out.
Jess: I know.
Alena: *sniffs, wipes eyes*
Jess: *hands Alena to Eric* I'll set the rest of the table, we'll talk about this when she's asleep.
Delko: Sure.
Alena: Da.
Delko: What.
Alena: Look at my bruise. *extends arm*
Delko: Where did you get that?
Alena: I ran into the door.
Delko: *laughs* Well at least we know you're related to me.
Jess: *walks back over* What happened to our marriage?
Delko: Uh...I thought we were going to discuss this later.
Jess: I want to know now.
Delko: I didn't think there was anything wrong with it.
Jess: We sleep in seperate rooms and there's nothing wrong with it?
Delko: Hey I didn't kick you out of the bedroom.
Jess: *angry sigh* Men.
Delko: *puts Alena down* Men? You think all men are the cause of your problems?
Jess: What problems?
Delko: You tell me. You're the one who's making a big fantastic deal out of it. What is your problem?
Jess: We're just not as in love as we were before.
Delko: *looks down at floor*
Jess: What?
Delko: ...I'm willing to work hard at this marriage. I don't want to end up like...
Jess: I know. Me too.
Delko: *hugs Jess* I love you.
Jess: I love you too.
Alena: *playing with forks* Ew.
Josh/Carly's house
Carly: *walks in* ...Holy..Crap. What happened to my house? JOSHUA SPEEDLE!
Josh: *runs downstairs* Carly! Hey, what are you doing here?
Carly: I live here. What the hell happened to my house? Why is there crayon all over the walls and paper on the floors and food everywhere?
Josh: Uh...I don't know.
Carly: *frowning*
Josh: What?
Carly: Where are the kids?
Josh: Cait's at a birthday party and Ethan is next door playing with the neighbors.
Carly: So why is my house still a mess?
Josh: Well technically it's my house.
Carly: *glares*
Josh: Actually I was just about to clean it.
Carly: Where were you all day?
Josh: I was here.
Carly: And you didn't stop them from ruining my house?
Josh: They're kids.
Carly: I KNOW THAT! THAT'S WHY YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO STOP THEM!
Josh: I didn't want to yell at them.
Carly: You are their father.
Josh: So?
Carly: *blank stare*
Josh: I don't like to raise my voice.
Ethan: *runs in*
Carly: ETHAN!
Ethan: *stops running, stares at Carly*
Carly: Get over here.
Ethan: *walks over*
Carly: What did you do to my walls?
Ethan: ...Colored them.
Carly: Why?
Ethan: *shrugs*
Carly: You don't know why?
Ethan: *shakes head*
Carly: Josh, you get to punish him.
Josh: Oh come on, boys will be boys.
Carly: Does that saying usually mean something where you come from?
Josh: I'll clean the walls.
Carly: No you won't, Ethan will. He's going to work his little fingers to the bone until my house is spotless.
Josh: No.
Carly: Excuse me?
Josh: I'm not one of the children, Carly.
Carly: *grabs Ethan* Come on, you're going to clean.
Josh: *steps in front of Carly* No he's not.
Carly: Every action has a consequence.
Josh: You're not going to do the same thing that you did to Lori when she was here.
Carly: Get out of the way.
Josh: No.
Carly: So you just want to let our kids run wild.
Josh: That's not what I said.
Carly: Then what?
Josh: I think you just need to lay off on the power trip for a while. Our son is a human being, he's not a dog.
Carly: I know that. *lets go of Ethan*
Josh: Ethan, go to your room, we'll come talk to you later.
Ethan: *runs upstairs*
Carly: *sigh* I'm sorry.
Josh: It's okay.
TBC.............
