Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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(just a little note-I don't HATE Ryan....just not a fan but like I said I'm willing to be proved wrong!!!)..............................................................................................................

Ok its true I've tried to finish but can't without this.....
UPdate soon Geni :D
 
I still can't get enough of this....

Calleigh: You're wearin' a name tag sweet pea.

Ryan: *looks down at jacket*

Calleigh: Most newbies take that off after a while.

Ryan: Eric said I needed one.

AND Wolfe making an idiot of himself! More Geni, when can we get more?
 
^^ I'm also a Wolfe fan, I really like Ryan.
Please, one more RT before...*checks time of departure and time taken to get to airport and extra time and calculates* six o clock!
Lora, you don't like Ryan? I never knew. H is still my favorite. *high-fives Lora* More soon! :D
 
speedfanatic05 said
But the brother/sister hug was the right way to end the scene... I think, however, that Kayleigh needs to spend some time in the padded room

Couldn't agree more. ;)

Speaking of Padded room, Horatio is going to need some when he finds out that Katie JC Megan and Missy took his beloved Hummer home.

Oh he knows, he's just saving his anger for when they get back. :p -- Assuming they don't destroy the Hummerhome.

Just what I needed for a ending to a crappy day, Something to lift my mood! Thanks Geni :)

I'm glad I could help. :D

I thought i was going to choke on my Dr Pepper. I should've been warned,... not to drink while reading...

Ooh scary, I was drinking Dr. Pepper when I wrote that chapter. :lol: Although it was diet vanilla cherry Dr Pepper or something.

And oh gosh... Ryan? We have to deal with him? I prefer to stay away from him...far far away... Tell me again, just why did Calleigh have to get canned? And stetler, did I detect a slight smidge of humanity in his words? No?

Yes, we'll have to be 'dealing' with Ryan for a while. :p I'm not sure I'd call it dealing though, more like 'reading chapters where he's present' :lol:

And Calleigh was canned essentially to bring in Ryan. But no worries, she'll be back. And like Carly said, there were reasons to fire Calleigh. A few of the reasons which would be because Stetler is 1) an ass and 2) it takes away the attention from him since he's the one who decided to get creeper on Riley. He'll get his anyway.

Dutchie said
YAY he's alive! And yay he's...kind of...dumb. But cute dumb. And you're wrong you know, flattery can get you everywhere :p

:lol: I guess it depends on the person. :p

*runs from mob of angry speed fans*

Ah, we're not a mob. We're just....Protective. :p

saraholic said
I hate Ryan, Geni. So yes, he is that bad. He takes Speed's place and now Calleigh's. He is definitely someone I'd like to tackle and beat the crap out of. ;) :lol:

All will be well again, since Calleigh will be back to work. Horatio will have to get Stetler in a corner for that to happen, since now he has plenty of dirty to turn the tables back on Monsieur Rick. ;)

speedfanatic05 said
Speed is such the teddy bear... He makes it like he doesnt like children, when in reality, he loves them! Just makes the pot that much sweeter!

It does! :) And he still hasn't fully admitted he loves kids. Oh, the team will get it out of him sooner or later, lol.

And I'm itching for another trip on the Hummer home? Must be that live each day as if it may be your last thing going on. Hummerhome... about that, have they come back to Miami yet?

They haven't returned yet, but they shall be back in time to fear Horatio's wrath, lol.

cainesugar said
Love Ryan...fill me in, who did he kill and who tried to kill him? Please make him a good guy...I love Ryan...he's really great, Colton!

He was partnered up with Stuart Otis after he went to jail. Now, the reason he went to jail the first time is because I completely forget but I will go search it up. But anyway, he and Stuart had kidnapped Anni out in the front of the building and they went out to the Everglades to kill her. But, Stuart didn't think Ryan was a good enough killer I believe, so Ryan shot Stuart and killed him.

Right now he's a good guy. We all know what it was like to get Colton back, and we didn't think he was a good guy right? ;) Things change! Now, I'm not saying Colton is any way similar to Ryan, but the situations are.

Love everyone! GREAT UPDATE! I can't beleive I won't be reading any more RT for a week...please send me, telepathically, RT updates.

I shall try. :p I can't wait for you to come back! Have fun. :)

And I'm sure we won't always like all the characters. I think it makes for some great dialogue in the chapters and adds some more substance to it. Then again, I could be completely way off. And besides, it's just a fic. ;)
 
Okay so now that i finally caught up after three days of lying in bed with one heck of a cold not able to move for fear of coughing fits i come back to some of the most wonderful updates and then my puter didn't want to cooperate and i only had like a few mins to read some at school *sigh... takes a deep breath* anyway great heart pounding gut wrenching edge of seat action geni and I can't wait for more .... and HECK YES gurls only road trip got to love when we do that and now we are drunk agian ... lol wonder what sort of trouble we will get ourselves into this time lol. Oh dear and Horatio isn't there to get us out of trouble this time lol. Can't wait for more .... whoa i have to work today ....I'm jaci i'll be ur hostess for this evening ... okay wow shouldn't of had that coffee lol...
Anyhoo great writing as always and can't wait for more !!!
 
Ah, we're not a mob. We're just....Protective. :p
*fake coughs* Yeah...I caould say the same thing with me and Horatio...

By the way, i found these screen caps from 'Rio'.

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And i made this. :D

brothers.jpg
 
Those are some great pictures. ;)

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Next day, halls

Ryan: *walks over* Hey I was looking for you. You didn't page me. The lab tech girl had to tell me where you were.

Delko: I got an ID from the victim. His name's Oscar Martinez. He owns the boat in the marina, and he's an ex captain.

Ryan: In the military?

Delko: Boat captain.

Ryan: So did you find the knife?

Delko: Actually, that's going to be up to you.

Ryan: What do you mean?

Delko: You're going back to the boat to find it.

Ryan: ...You think the killer left it there?

Delko: I don't know, go find out. *walks away*

Ryan: ...Aye aye.

Trace Lab

Anni: *walks in* Hi.

Speed: *looking through scope*

Anni: You certainly left early this morning.

Speed: I had work.

Anni: You didn't even have breakfast.

Speed: Normally I don't.

Anni: Did I do something wrong?

Speed: Nope.

Anni: What are you workin' on?

Speed: A case.

Anni: Oh...Because that never happens.

Speed: *lifts head*

Anni: ...

Speed: Your mother called.

Anni: ...My..My mother?

Speed: She called your cell this morning. She asked who I was.

Anni: Oh...

Speed: I said I was your husband, and apparently she's never even heard of me.

Anni: She's old.

Speed: You didn't tell her you got married.

Anni: ...My parents and I have never had the most solid relationship. I didn't know I was obligated to tell them everything about me.

Speed: I'm your husband. You don't think I would have, I don't know, come up in a family conversation in the future?

Anni: Why are you getting so uptight about this? I was going to tell them.

Speed: Are you ashamed of me or something?

Anni: No.

Speed: *crosses arms*

Anni: It's just...My parents always expected me to marry this rich clean shaven respectable man. You know, a laywer or a doctor, or the head of a company. I ran off from Texas to Canada.

Speed: So I'm not exactly what they have in mind.

Anni: No.

Speed: Well they're coming to Florida for their anniversary and they want to meet me.

Anni: What?

Speed: Yeah.

Anni: No...I...Why?

Speed: I don't know.

Anni: You don't understand, I can't see them again.

Speed: I'm sure it won't be so bad.

Anni: They're the most conservative people on the planet. I'm the exact opposite. It'll be like a hippie sitting at a table with the King and Queen of England.

Speed: ...England doesn't have a King.

Anni: The point is it'll be the most uncomfortable encounter ever.

Speed: You're not a hippie.

Anni: *frowns*

Speed: You also don't look very happy.

Anni: I'm not.

Speed: Don't worry about it.

Anni: Easy for you to say, your dad is dead and your mom might as well have alzheimers.

Speed: That's low.

Anni: *sigh* I'm sorry.

Speed: Anni, you'll be fine.

Anni: Can we run up to Canada?

Speed: No.

Anni: Ah man.

Speed: *looks at door*

Woman: ANNI!

Anni: *turns around* ....MOM...Hi...What are you doing here so early? I thought you would have driven here.

Mom: I flew, dear. We have our own helicopter.

Anni: Of course...

Mom: *hugs Anni* It's so good to see you honey.

Anni: I thought you would be in tonight.

Mom: Oh nonsense, I wasn't about to sit in the car with your father all day.

Anni: ...Great.

Mom: So where's your husband? I want to meet him.

Anni: He's...Not here.

Speed: *lifts brow*

Anni: He's in Aruba.

Mom: Oh what's he doing there? I just spoke to him on the phone this morning.

Anni: He left this morning. He's the head of a very very...Very big company. Lots of money flying around.

Mom: I was looking forward to meeting him.

Anni: Why?

Mom: I want to see what my Annigale married.

Anni: ...Mom that's not my name.

Mom: That's what it says on your birth certificate.

Anni: So where's Dad?

Mom: He's parking the car. My goodness there is impossible parking around here.

Anni: How did you even find me?

Mom: Your husband told us where you worked. Personally, I can't stand these dirty places.

Speed: Well, actu-

Anni: Mom, I think you would be more comfortable in a very large hotel somewhere.

Mom: Your father and I are staying with you. Have your butler pick up our things when we get there.

Anni: Butler?

Mom: You...Do have one, don't you?

Anni: Yes! Of course I do.

Mom: Where's your address?

Anni: Uh....It's...

Speed: She owns the Hotel Intercontinental. You should be fine there.

Anni: Yeah, um...Tim here's the butler there.

Speed: What?

Anni: *smiling* He's very good at his job.

Mom: Then what's he doing here?

Anni: He knew you were coming here, and he decided to drive you to the hotel himself.

Speed: *frowns*

Anni: Get going.

Speed: *stands*

Mom: That's very nice of him. Alright, I'll be outside. But don't be too late, because this sun is dreadful on my skin. *leaves*

Anni: *turns around* I'm so sorry.

Speed: Does that mean we have to stay at the hotel?

Anni: Just until they leave.

Speed: I am not going to be their butler.

Anni: Oh come on! I wouldn't ask if this wasn't important.

Speed: You didn't ask, you recruited.

Anni: Yeah but...Please?

Speed: Fine. But you'll have to tell them the truth eventually.

Anni: I will.

Speed: *leaves*

Anni: *sigh*

Atrium

Stetler: Horatio.

Horatio: *looking out window*

Stetler: How's the new kid?

Horatio: You're not here to check up on him.

Stetler: No. As a matter of fact I'm here about Miss Duquesne.

Horatio: She is a police officer, you will address her as such.

Stetler: Fine, Detective Duquesne. I might have been a little quick to fire her.

Horatio: Need I remind you, I can have you fired as well.

Stetler: What for?

Horatio: Did you really think I wouldn't find out about your conversation with Riley? This is why you're apologizing for firing Calleigh so quickly, isn't it?

Stetler: I'm at my last bone with the department, Horatio.

Horatio: That's unfortunate.

Stetler: I can't make another mistake.

Horatio: Mistakes are all I see from you Rick.

Stetler: I give you your CSI back, you keep the kid, and in turn you promise to look the other way if the department asks you any questions about me.

Horatio: A tempting offer.

Stetler: We both win.

Horatio: *nods* Alright here's what's going to happen. You get Calleigh her job back, wipe her record clean as well as Colton's. Then I will decide if I keep Ryan Wolfe, and I will decide whether or not to toss your name around the department again. Sound good? I thought so.

Stetler: ...You're the boss.

Horatio: *walks away*

Stetler: Oh and Horatio.

Horatio: *turns around*

Stetler: Thank you.

Horatio: Don't thank me yet Rick. *leaves*

Stetler: *frowns*

Marina

Manager: So, what are you lookin' for?

Ryan: *looks around* The murder weapon.

Manager: How long is this going to take? I need this slip.

Ryan: Sir, could you just wait outside please?

Manager: You didn't answer my question, boy.

Ryan: It's going to take as long as it takes sir.

Manager: You know, the killer probably took it with him.

Ryan: It doesn't change what I have to do here.

Manager: You guys have been lifting and printing for almost two days. I think you have all the evidene you're gonna get.

Ryan: *kneels, shines flashlight over couch*

Manager: What is it?

Ryan: *reaches between cushions*

Manager: It's probably just a remote or something.

Ryan: *pulls out bloodied knife*

Manager: ...

Ryan: *looks at manager* You're not going to get your slip back for a while.

Manager: Pfft, yeah well that's what I get for putting my tax dollars in for your job. *leaves*

Ryan: *places knife on couch, grabs camera*

Calleigh: *walks in*

Ryan: *looks up* Detective. Hi, what are you doing here?

Calleigh: I just came to see how you were doing.

Ryan: You were fired.

Calleigh: *smiles* You know, you've already told me that.

Ryan: Do you really think it's appropriate to be here then?

Calleigh: *shrugs* I haven't touched anything.

Ryan: You shouldn't be in an active crime scene.

Calleigh: With all due respect, you're just a newbie.

Ryan: Well with all due respect ma'am, you were fired.

Calleigh: *smile fades* ...

Ryan: You should leave. *snaps picture*

Calleigh: You're kicking me out of the crime scene.

Ryan: It's the rules.

Calleigh: *looks around*

Ryan: *places knife in bag*

Calleigh: *walks further inside* So, there's arterial spray on the ceiling.

Ryan: *looking down at couch* I thought you were leaving.

Calleigh: *smiles* I'm just observing.

Ryan: *stands, turns to Calleigh* Well observe, outside.

Calleigh: *looking at ceiling* Your victim wasn't stabbed in the neck, was he?

Ryan: No, just the stomach and chest area.

Calleigh: Well...For this to happen, he would have had to be stabbed in an artery, more specifically, and artery in the neck.

Ryan: So?

Calleigh: I think you have two victims.

Ryan: I just looked over this scene top to bottom. There's nothing else here.

Calleigh: Then you missed something. I mean, you just found the murder weapon, right?

Ryan: Yeah.

Calleigh: That means you're not finished.

Ryan: *frowns*

Calleigh: *smiling*

Hotel Intercontinental, suite

Mom: Whew look at that view.

Anni: Yeah it's great.

Speed: *places suitcases on floor*

Mom: Thank you dear. *hands over a five dollar bill*

Speed: ...Keep it.

Mom: Nonsense, don't spend this all in one shop.

Speed: *looks at Anni*

Anni: Actually, I've invited Tim here over for dinner.

Mom: Oh! Good, does he cook too?

Anni: *laughs* He sure does!

Speed: *frowns*

Anni: I'm sure he can make us something, right?

Speed: ...Yes ma'am.

Anni: ...HAHA wow...He's never called me...Ma'am before. *smiling*

Mom: Then what does he call you?

Anni: Um...Anni.

Mom: That seems a little personal considering he's your employee. Okay, go play with your money now. Maybe you can...Buy a razer or something.

Speed: *glares*

Anni: *laughs* Mom, that's really funny. It is.

Speed: I'll be back with the rest of the luggage...Ma'am.

Anni: *giggles*

Speed: *leaves*

Anni: Oh MAN it's cool when he calls me ma'am. He has to start doing that more often.

Mom: You know, if I didn't know better, I'd say you had a little thing for him.

Anni: Me? No. No way. I would never.

Mom: I see the way he looks at you honey.

Anni: ...You do?

Mom: Your father used to look at me that way when we were teenagers. He certainly swept me off my feet when I was younger.

Anni: *smirks*

Mom: Let's get me settled in.

Anni: Sure.

TBC...............
 
Mom: Oh! Good, does he cook too?

Anni: *laughs* He sure does!

Speed: *frowns*
I love Speed! Ah God I miss him...anyways, I love Speed and Anni and the whole mom thing (ugh) and I love Cal checking up on Ryan and I LOVE HORATIO AND STETLER! GREAT FRAKKIN' JOB! I loved how Horatio just told him off, said 'don't thank me yet' and made his own deal...GREAT! You capture our lovely H sooooo well.
Great update...my last *sniff* See you when I get back, and keep up the fantastic work...look forward to reading RT when I get back. *huggles RT crew* Bye Geni and Lora and Colton and Carly and Anni and Katie and JC and Missy and everyone else (sorry if I missed anyone...)! :) *huggles for all*
 
Ryan: *walks over* Hey I was looking for you. You didn't page me. The lab tech girl had to tell me where you were.

Delko: I got an ID from the victim. His name's Oscar Martinez. He owns the boat in the marina, and he's an ex captain.

Ryan: In the military?

Delko: Boat captain.

Ryan: So did you find the knife?

Delko: Actually, that's going to be up to you.

Ryan: What do you mean?

Delko: You're going back to the boat to find it.

Ryan: ...You think the killer left it there?

Delko: I don't know, go find out. *walks away*

Ryan: ...Aye aye.

....DAMMIT! He's not acting stupid anymore!

Anni: You didn't even have breakfast.

Speed: Normally I don't.

*scoffs*, who does?

Seriously, i think Geni is watching us. (Ooo...) So many things from the fic have happened in my life! Like this!


Anni: They're the most conservative people on the planet. I'm the exact opposite. It'll be like a hippie sitting at a table with the King and Queen of England.

Speed: ...England doesn't have a King.

Eh probably does. You know, everything kept secret...


Anni: *turns around* ....MOM...Hi...What are you doing here so early? I thought you would have driven here.

Mom: I flew, dear. We have our own helicopter.

Anni: Of course...

Oh God.... What's that one called? The...the....i can't think of a smart-ass comment for that one. I'll be back on that one later.


Mom: That's very nice of him. Alright, I'll be outside. But don't be too late, because this sun is dreadful on my skin. *leaves*

...It's called a tan.

Stetler: Horatio.

YESS!! THANK YOU GENI!


Stetler: Fine, Detective Duquesne. I might have been a little quick to fire her.

No! Really?? *punches in face*

Horatio: Need I remind you, I can have you fired as well.

Stetler: What for?

Horatio: Did you really think I wouldn't find out about your conversation with Riley? This is why you're apologizing for firing Calleigh so quickly, isn't it?

*rubs hand together* Oh ho ho...!


Stetler: I can't make another mistake.

Horatio: Mistakes are all I see from you Rick.

I am SO gleeful right now!


Horatio: *nods* Alright here's what's going to happen. You get Calleigh her job back, wipe her record clean as well as Colton's. Then I will decide if I keep Ryan Wolfe, and I will decide whether or not to toss your name around the department again. Sound good? I thought so.

Stetler: ...You're the boss.

YEAH HE IS! BETTER BE GROVELING AT HIS FEET!


Stetler: Oh and Horatio.

Horatio: *turns around*

Stetler: Thank you.

Horatio: Don't thank me yet Rick. *leaves*

Stetler: *frowns*

YEAH! HA!

Calleigh: *walks in*

Ryan: *looks up* Detective. Hi, what are you doing here?

Calleigh: I just came to see how you were doing.

Ryan: You were fired.

Sorry to spoil your fun! Your not needed anymore... :D


Ryan: You shouldn't be in an active crime scene.

Calleigh: With all due respect, you're just a newbie.

Ryan: Well with all due respect ma'am, you were fired.

Calleigh: *smile fades* ...

Ryan: You should leave. *snaps picture*

Calleigh: You're kicking me out of the crime scene.

Ryan: It's the rules.

Calleigh: *looks around*

Ryan: *places knife in bag*

Calleigh: *walks further inside* So, there's arterial spray on the ceiling.

Ryan: *looking down at couch* I thought you were leaving.

Calleigh: *smiles* I'm just observing.

Ryan: *stands, turns to Calleigh* Well observe, outside.

Calleigh: *looking at ceiling* Your victim wasn't stabbed in the neck, was he?

Ryan: No, just the stomach and chest area.

Calleigh: Well...For this to happen, he would have had to be stabbed in an artery, more specifically, and artery in the neck.

Ryan: So?

Calleigh: I think you have two victims.

Ryan: I just looked over this scene top to bottom. There's nothing else here.

Calleigh: Then you missed something. I mean, you just found the murder weapon, right?

Ryan: Yeah.

Calleigh: That means you're not finished.

Ryan: *frowns*

Calleigh: *smiling*

Oh boy i want to punch him like i do Stetler right now....

GO CALLEIGH! YEAH! WOOT WOOT!


Mom: That seems a little personal considering he's your employee. Okay, go play with your money now. Maybe you can...Buy a razer or something.

*fake british accent* Oh DO shut up.

Great part Geni! More of Stetler and Horatio i hope! :)
 
*gasp* Ryan's alive! I never thought I'd see the day. :lol: I have read this story on and off and I think it's hilarious! I'm always laughing when I read it. Great job, Geni! (And you get extra points for not actually killing him. :p ;))
 
Okay, I really have to ask, what the heck is up with me????? Why am I putting Speed through this??? I'm proud to have him. The truth will come out though, I just hope that it won't be a bad thing. Good thing Speed is taking this all in good humor. I hope.

Stetler is basically on the fence. Good on Horatio for taking control of the situation, now he has Calleigh back, and *sigh* Wolfe. Maybe, it won't be so bad. I stress maybe, because well,he kidnapped me. Wonder how Speed will feel about that?

And, my mom is such a high minded someone. I didn't know I came from money. Wonder if she will hand some down....hmm... At least we know that she was human once ( the little reminicing was great). I really can't wait to see how this plays out!

Great as always! Update soon! ;) :D
 
great update geni it was a great pick me upper after getting fired this afternoon. Can't wait for more awsome updates keep up the great work *hands over a pepsi*
 
I'm glad you liked the chapter cainesugar. :D Be safe on your trip away from the boards. :)

Hunter, there will definitely be more H/Stettie interaction. ;)

sandersidle, nice to see you in here. :D *grabs my extra points* :p

Anni, I can't wait to see how it plays out too!

*grabs pepsi from Jaci.* ;)

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Hotel Intercontinental

Anni: So how's the food?

Mom: Wonderful! Your butler is very good.

Anni: So where's dad?

Mom: He found the poker tables downstairs, I'm afraid he won't be joining us dear.

Anni: Of course he's at the poker tables...That would be him.

Mom: You haven't touched your sautéed mushrooms.

Anni: Um...I never really liked mushrooms, the butler should have known that.

Mom: Well bring him in here.

Anni: *rings bell*

Speed: *walks over*

Anni: I don't like mushrooms.

Speed: You...Don't?

Anni: No.

Speed: ...I guess I was a little nervous about this.

Mom: Nervous? You do this for thousands of clients a year. You should know what the people request. Cook her another plate of something else.

Speed: ...

Mom: Get to it. Right now.

Speed: *grabs plate* I'm sorry.

Anni: No, it's okay.

Speed: Your mother wants me to get you another plate.

Anni: ...Okay.

Speed: *walks away*

Anni: Mom you are so insensitive.

Mom: He should know his job by now.

Anni: *shakes head*

Mom: So how long have you lived in Florida?

Anni: A while. I can't really remember how long.

Mom: Your hair's longer than I remembered.

Anni: Well that's what happens. Hair grows.

Mom: You have more freckles too.

Anni: The sun.

Mom: You don't wear glasses anymore?

Anni: I always hated them, you know that.

Mom: Did you get those contact things everyone's getting?

Anni: Yeah.

Mom: Good. They bring out your beautiful eyes.

Anni: Thanks.

Mom: So how long have you and your husband been married?

Anni: Long enough, mom.

Mom: Is he handsome?

Anni: *laughs* Uh, you could say that.

Mom: What do his parents do?

Anni: Um...Well his mom owns a mansion up in New York, and his dad was part of a big...Company.

Mom: You two must have a lot in common.

Anni: Not at first.

Mom: What do you mean?

Anni: Well it took him a while to warm up to me.

Mom: So when are you having children?

Anni: ...I'm not.

Mom: You have to have children.

Anni: Why?

Mom: You must become a mother.

Anni: We decided not to have children.

Mom: That's absurd. I want grandchildren.

Anni: *sigh* Maybe I don't want any kids.

Mom: Sure you do.

Anni: I don't.

Mom: You'll never get through life with that attitude.

Anni: *frowns* Wow here we go again.

Mom: What do you mean?

Anni: This. You're always expecting me to do the same things you did. I don't want to be you.

Mom: I'm not asking you to be.

Anni: You never ask for anything. You demand, and you take.

Mom: I'm successful.

Anni: Yeah well I'd rather stay honest.

Mom: What's that supposed to mean?

Speed: *walks over*

Mom: Just set it down in front of her.

Speed: ...Yes m'am. *puts plate down*

Mom: And get her a new napkin. That one is horrid. And tuck in your shirt, that's not professional attire.

Speed: *stares at Anni's mom*

Mom: I hope you washed your hands before you started to cook. Who knows what kind of germs you people carry in with you from Mexico.

Speed: *frowns*

Anni: Mom, he's not from Mexico.

Mom: Well the way he's dressed you would agree with me dear.

Anni: *rolls eyes*

Speed: Anything else this evening?

Mom: Yes, I'd like some champagne. Something expensive.

Speed: Sure.

Mom: Oh, and bring out the second course.

Speed: ...Second...Course?

Mom: Is it not finished yet?

Speed: It doesn't exist yet.

Anni: Mom, I think this is enough for me to eat.

Mom: Rubbish, you need to put some meat on your bones. Make a salisbury steak and green beans.

Speed: ...

Mom: *rings little bell* There's your bell, go do it.

Speed: *leaves*

Anni: *covers eyes* Mom, that was so rude.

Mom: He's a servant.

Anni: He's a human being.

Mom: Do you regard all of your employees the same way?

Anni: *staring at plate* ...I treat everyone equally.

Mom: That'll be your downfall.

Anni: Right.

Speed: *standing behind wall*

Mom: You know, you should really live like we do.

Anni: And how is that exactly?

Mom: Like royalty.

Anni: I'd hardly call you royalty.

Mom: I'm not the one who's dressed in rags.

Anni: Yeah well sorry I don't have the budjet to buy fur.

Mom: You need to cut that attitude with me. When did you get such a mouth?

Anni: Nevermind, mom.

Mom: And how come your nails aren't manicured? You should take care of your nails. And maybe get your hair done, it's just not up to par.

Anni: I like my hair.

Mom: Well I liked it shorter.

Anni: I like it longer.

Mom: You should wear heels too. All women need to wear heels, I've always taught you that.

Anni: I can't walk around crime scenes wearing heels.

Mom: Alright, I'll call your boss and discuss the uniform for your work.

Anni: No, don't.

Mom: Maybe he can cut your hours too, you have more wrinkles than I remember.

Anni: What?

Mom: You're getting old, dear.

Anni: Wow, thanks for the encouragement.

Mom: Have you ever thought about plastic surgery? It'll fix everything.

Anni: Nothing needs to be fixed.

Mom: You need implants in your breasts and some botox.

Anni: Why?

Mom: You should at least look like more than trailer trash.

Anni: *looks down at table*

Speed: *walks in carrying plate*

Mom: Oh good, just put the plate right here.

Speed: Here's your second course, ma'am. *drops plate in Anni's mother's lap*

Anni: *lifts head*

Mom: *looks down* What did you do!

Speed: You want some wine? *pours wine all over her*

Mom: STOP! WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH YOU! *stands* You should be fired!

Speed: Oh I'm sorry, did I ruin your overpriced dress?

Mom: *glaring*

Speed: Don't ever talk to my wife like that again.

Mom: Your WHAT! You two are married?

Anni: *stands* Mom, I should have told you.

Mom: You married a butler?

Anni: He's a cop, actually.

Mom: *looks at Speed* Scum.

Speed: Bitch.

Mom: UGH. *walks out of room, slams door*

Anni: ...

Speed: Are you okay?

Anni: ...I can't believe you did that.

Speed: I'm s-

Anni: *kisses Speed*

Layout room

Delko: So, how's our case?

Ryan: I don't remember you doing anything.

Delko: *laughs*

Ryan: I found the murder weapon.

Delko: Great, did it have blood on it?

Ryan: Yeah a lot of blood. I sent the knife to DNA.

Delko: Great, so what's this?

Ryan: Calleigh found arterial spray on the ceiling.

Delko: What was Calleigh doing there?

Ryan: She was checking up on me.

Delko: *smirks* How'd you do?

Ryan: ...Is she always like that?

Delko: Like what?

Ryan: Does she always stick her nose into things?

Delko: *laughs* Yeah. That's her.

Ryan: She's like a giant ray of sunshine.

Delko: *lifts brow* So she's happy.

Ryan: All the time? It's annoying. *sigh* Anyway, I photographed the blood and swabbed it. I sent the samples over to DNA.

Delko: Looks like we might have had another victim.

Ryan: You find anything that might lead us to the killer?

Delko: I printed the door handle to the boat, and ran it through AFIS. *hands over paper* Daniel Sawyer.

Ryan: *looks at paper* He was charged with breaking and entering in 2006.

Delko: No indication of robbery in the boat.

Ryan: Maybe he got surprised on his B&E adventure and improvised.

Delko: Great, let's run with it.

TBC.................
 
Wow....go Speed! That was great, I love how Speed stuck up for Anni, especially because Anni's mom? Not so nice. Ryan and Delko? I'm kinda starting to like it actually, he hasn't done anything for me to not like him, so I guess all is good. I hope to see a return of Anni's mom though, would be some nice continuity for the future :p

Great update, can't wait to see more!
 
what a great update lol and i am so glad u like the pepsi *pulls out cookies, chips, cake and pepsi for everyone* hey we are all having a good time now we need food for our adventures lol!!
 
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