Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Muaha. :devil:

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New York, 6pm

Warehouse

Josh: *sitting in chair*

Guy: *pistol whips Josh*

Josh: AH!

Guy: Oh come on don't be a pansie.

Josh: How would you feel if I pistol whipped you in the face?

Guy: *punches Josh in the face*

Josh: OW!

Guy2: *grabs smoking metal rod out of fire* This boy's got a mouth on him.

Josh: Yeah most human beings do. Unless of course you didn't mean it literally. You don't look like a literal guy.

Guy2: *jabs rod into Josh's arm*

Josh: AHH!

Kayleigh: *walks in* Stop.

Guy2: *steps back*

Josh: *looks at Kayleigh*

Kayleigh: I hope you're enjoying yourself here.

Josh: Oh yeah it's been a blast.

Kayleigh: Funny you should mention that. This entire building is rigged to explode in approximately ten minutes. So you have some talking to do.

Josh: I don't know what you mean.

Kayleigh: 35 million dollars of mine went missing from a bank in Miami. 35 million...Is the amount of pieces that are going to fly off your body in ten minutes if you don't tell me where my money is.

Josh: I thought you just wanted to kill me.

Kayleigh: I am going to kill you.

Josh: So kill me.

Kayleigh: I want my money first.

Josh: What, so you can take over New York with your organization?

Kayleigh: You're in my way, Josh.

Josh: You don't have to do this.

Kayleigh: I have no choice.

Josh: You always have a choice.

Kayleigh: *laughs* Did you learn that from your boyfriends or the cop school?

Josh: *frowns*

Kayleigh: You knew this would happen.

Josh: I promised my wife and daughter I'd come home.

Kayleigh: Well the manner that you'll be returning might be a little different.

Josh: How can you be this heartless? You were the one who would go to the stables and rides the horses and feed them. You were the one who would bring stray cats home and feed them milk. You were the one who saved me from dad countless times when he was drunk.

Kayleigh: Well guess what little brother, I'm not running around with a bunch of horses and stray cats.

Josh: You loved nature, you loved kids, you loved your family.

Kayleigh: I don't anymore.

Josh: Don't do this, Kay.

Kayleigh: You have eight minutes to tell me where my money is.

Josh: I don't know.

Kayleigh: You're lying.

Josh: I have nothing to do with your money.

Kayleigh: There are two ways we can do this.

Josh: Either way I die right, so I might as well tell you?

Kayleigh: That's one choice. Or you can die and not tell me and then I'll go down to Miami and I'll kill your wife, and I'll kill your children.

Josh: *looks at door*

Kayleigh: *turns around*

Guys point their guns at the door

Kayleigh: Hold your fire. *smiles* Big brother, it's nice to see you.

Speed: *walks over* Go to hell.

Kayleigh: Nice of you to join us. Now I can kill two idiots with one bomb.

Speed: We're no threat to you.

Kayleigh: You are.

Speed: I don't want your business. I don't want anything to do with New York anymore.

Kayleigh: Where's my money?

Speed: I don't have your money and neither does Josh.

Kayleigh: Are you saying Dade Mutual lost 35 million dollars?

Speed: No.

Kayleigh: *walks over* Timmy, I'm not a bad person. I just want my money.

Speed: And you're willing to kill Josh over it.

Kayleigh: Someone has to die.

Speed: Kill me instead.

Kayleigh: *smiles* How heroic.

Speed: It's not heroic it's stupid. You should be laughing in my face.

Kayleigh: *pulls device out of pocket* My men in Florida have been watching you, Timmy.

Speed: So?

Kayleigh: *sings lightly* I know something they don't know.

Speed: *frowns*

Kayleigh: This device gives out small electrical currents. It's a neat little thing they put in those hand-shake zappers. Only this one gives a little bit more of a kick.

Speed: What's your point.

Kayleigh: My point? *laughs* My point is this. *presses button, shoves device into Speed's chest*

Speed: AHH!

Kayleigh: *smiling* It's too bad there are a million things that can kill you, the bomb should be the least of your problems.

Speed: *leans on Kayleigh's shoulder*

Kayleigh: Hurts, doesn't it?

Speed: *groans*

Kayleigh: *presses button*

Speed: *screams*

Kayleigh: *laughs*

Josh: STOP IT!

Kayleigh: You see what happens when you don't listen to me?

Josh: Kayleigh stop!

Kayleigh: *pulls device away, steps back*

Speed: *falls to floor*

Kayleigh: Looks like you boys have about five minutes before this place blows. Make the most of it. *leaves*

Guys follow

TBC.................
 
O_O

NO GENI I HATE IT WHEN YOU DO THIS I hate it when you do cliffhangers, it's not fiar and it makes me type all crasz==zy because Icna't wait fore the next pdate and it's dfiving me insane and I hate these nails because they're not helping me type this review in anywa waypossible and OMG GENI UPDATE SOOOON I want ot know what happens to Josh and speed and I SWEAR IF YOU KILL JOSH I WILL BE ANGRY HAAHHAA GENI UPDATE You're driving me insane, just look at my typing@ lol Kayleigh is a bitch! omg! AHHHHHHHH I need to kinow what hpapanes! UPDAT$E SOON! lol...........please excuse the typing, I'm high off of sugar and I'm excited lol
 
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DON'T KILL THEM! DON'T KILL THEM! man I was all set to have a relaxing evening, maybe have a few RT laughs, and when I see it highlighted on my computer screen, I'm all, "yay!" and then I read this and start screaming!
I guess in an odd kind of way it was exciting. Like one of those movies you watch where you know the good guys are gonna win and yet when they have them dangling over a pit of lava you're screaming and praying and hugging you pillow. And now, I don't know what to expect from you, so you know I'm doing more than that! I'm going nuts, and like Wyoming I'm sugar high and excited and sooo hoping you won't kill Speed and Josh because I've already seen Speed "die" a million times on television, don't do this...
But keep up the excitement! Great update anyways.
O_O

NO GENI I HATE IT WHEN YOU DO THIS I hate it when you do cliffhangers, it's not fiar and it makes me type all crasz==zy because Icna't wait fore the next pdate and it's dfiving me insane and I hate these nails because they're not helping me type this review in anywa waypossible and OMG GENI UPDATE SOOOON I want ot know what happens to Josh and speed and I SWEAR IF YOU KILL JOSH I WILL BE ANGRY HAAHHAA GENI UPDATE You're driving me insane, just look at my typing@ lol Kayleigh is a bitch! omg! AHHHHHHHH I need to kinow what hpapanes! UPDAT$E SOON! lol...........please excuse the typing, I'm high off of sugar and I'm excited lol
SAME AS WYOMING! SAME THING 10000000000000%. Don't kill them, please don't kill them... *rocks in corner, sucks thumb, rambles on about spiders, evil guy and evil guy2, and explosions*
UPDATE SOON, before I lose my sanity forever! (and before Hunter comes in here and writes a kick-ass review that makes mine lok like a pile of whatever's left from that place after it explodes.)
Hey...is H gonna come in before the place explodes, grab Speed and Josh, run out and say 'Burn Baby Burn'? Oh wait that's Superman. How about SuperH?!
Just update soon. Like, now? As you can see I'm going nuts here. :eek:
 
..Seriously I need to magically fix my computer somehow because i'm missing out on a lot!!!. FIrst of all awwwww Riley called me mom. And whoa I was kinda rude but hey she connected with me. Take that....people. lol. And um...Speed can't die. Just because he has a heart condition and he has stubbly wubbly and he just can't die! lol. Update soon!
 
I'm going to echo what everyone else has said... DON'T KILL Josh and SPEED!!!! I mean, really...please dont. I should've known when the little devil thingy was the only thing you remarked, that it wasn't going to be good. But to shock Tim???? That Kayleigh is really a biatch, I wish some one would jump in and smack her ass down ( ahem, there's that subtle hint of my psychotic break :lol:.... )now... I have to ask...


Carly: She was hanging over the toilet bowl.



ahem, what is that about?



and....

Riley: He's married to another woman. Has this whole other life, and my mom's alone.



I'm sorry!!! :( But we love each other!!!!!


I do have to say that Riley is doing her thing as a semi CSI...that must run in her blood or something :)


Great updates Geni! Hanging on the edge of my seat for more!
 
:lol: Holy geez.

KATIE! *huggles you*

Anni! *also huggles you* And yeah, you sounded a teeny wee bit psychotic in your post about Kayleigh. :lol: No worries, we're all a little crazy or we wouldn't be here. :p

And the Katie being sick thing was her genuinely being sick...Which is weird because I always seem to have a plan.

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Warehouse

Josh: *struggling in chair* Tim! Tim get up! Ah crud. I hate these stupid situations. *sigh* Why couldn't I have married Ernie and spent my life in my parents' basement? But OH NO I had to move to Miami, fall in love with the most beautiful woman on the planet, have the most beautiful children on the planet, and get tied to a chair to be BLOWN UP! Well Josh you sure did it this time. I mean, not only are you bad at selling hand cream, but you're bad at SAYING YOUR LAST WORDS BEFORE THE WHITE LIGHT SHOWS UP! Wait...Does it show up or does it just happen? I'll have to ask Tim. Wait, I can't. He's probably DEAD. Great, I'm sitting with the dead body of my stupid brother. This is fun. DON'T YA WISH OUR FAMILY VACATIONS WERE LIKE THIS!

Delko: *runs in* Josh!

Josh: DELKIPOO! I mean...Delko!

Delko: *stops running* What?

Josh: Nothing, nothing, keep running.

Delko: *runs*

Jess: *runs in* We found a bunch of cords near the roof.

Josh: Yeah this place is rigged to explode in about four minutes.

Delko: *kneels beside Speed* What happened to him?

Josh: Kayleigh electrocuted him.

Delko: What? Why?

Josh: I don't know but he's out cold.

Delko: *rolls Speed over* Hey, Speed, wake up. *leans head near Speed's face* He's still breathing. Good. *grabs Speed* Jess, untie Josh.

Josh: How did you find us?

Delko: GPS on your phone.

Jess: *untying Josh*

Josh: Is he okay?

Delko: I don't know.

Jess: Ugh these ropes are HOPELESS.

Josh: Well it would be SUPER great if you could get them off in less than four minutes.

Jess: Eric, get Tim out of here.

Delko: I can't leave you here.

Jess: Well it's going to take a while for me to get Josh free and in the meantime you have to get Speed out of here so GO.

Delko: Are you sure you'll be done before this place explodes?

Jess: Yes so go!

Delko: *grabs Speed* Come on buddy.

Delko runs, dragging Speed along

Jess: *untying Josh*

Josh: Hurry up, hurry up.

Jess: I am, shut your face.

Josh: Don't tell me to shut my face. You should shut yours. More rope untying less jabbering.

Jess: Jabbering is ALL I DO!

Josh: Yeah well shut up.

Jess: You shut up.

Josh: You shut up!

Jess: LET'S BOTH SHUT UP!

Josh: DEAL!

Jess: I can't believe you kissed me.

Josh: That's not shutting up.

Jess: You took advantage of me. I should sue you.

Josh: Yeah go ahead and sue me. I'm pretty sure no judge would prosecute.

Jess: Why?

Josh: Because you know you liked it.

Jess: *GASP* You jerk. *slaps Josh in the back of the head*

Josh: OW!

Jess: No way I'm untying you now. Save yourself.

Josh: NO! Jess! Wait I take it back!

Jess: Hey you're being a jerk. I should let you blow up.

Josh: Okay if I blow up, you're going to regret it.

Jess: Nah, I think I'll sleep pretty well at night.

Josh: I have a little girl and a little boy!

Jess: ...Crud. You suck, you know that? *unties Josh* Come on, we have to go.

Josh: Wait, wait.

Jess: What?

Josh: Thank you.

Jess: For what?

Josh: ...Untying me. What else?

Jess: Right, right that. Yeah because I'm the super hero. Alright run ahead and I'll be right behind you.

Josh: *runs*

Jess: *runs*

Outside

Delko: Come on man, breathe.

Josh: *runs over* What's wrong?

Delko: He's not breathing.

Josh: I thought you said he was.

Delko: He was, and now he isn't.

Josh: So make him breathe.

Delko: I'm a CSI not a doctor.

Josh: Eric, do something!

Delko: Like what! You want me to slow dance with the guy? I don't know what to do!

Josh: Me neither!

Building explodes

Delko: *covers head*

Josh: *ducks*

Dust settles few minutes later

Delko: ...Jess? Where's Jess?

Josh: She was right behind me.

Delko: What do you mean right behind me?

Josh: I hate it when people ask that! The only thing I can do is say "she was right behind me" again and hope you get it through your head if I used a different tone!

Delko: Where is she?

Josh: I don't know, go look.

Delko: Call an ambulance, I'll go look inside.

Josh: Ambulance for what?

Delko: Your brother you snack pack! *runs away*

Josh: I am not a snack pack. Okay uh...*presses on Speed's chest* Breathe! Ah crap I suck at this. *grabs cellphone, dials*

Near blown up warehouse

Delko: Jess! *pulls pieces of wood from floor* Jess! JESS! *looks down at ground* ...Tire tracks? What? *walks along path* ...More tracks...JOSH! *runs back over*

Josh's position

Delko: Josh, did you see an SUV here?

Josh: Yeah when they took me here.

Delko: It was parked about 500 feet from the warehouse and the marks lead out to the road.

Josh: Well yeah they drove away.

Delko: Jess isn't in the building as far as I can see. So she's either been blown to a billion pieces or they have her.

Josh: ...I should have let her go first.

Delko: You let her go second?

Josh: She said she was right behind me!

Delko: Well she isn't anymore!

Ambulance is heard

Delko: Wow they're quick.

Josh: Yeah well SHUT UP.

Delko: YOU SHUT UP.

TBC..................
 
Oh good! They're not dead! But OH NOES what happened to pretty little moi? Well, apparently I'm blown to a million pieces, or taken by someone in an SUV by some bad guys. What I was surprised at though was that I was so ready to let Josh die even though it was Eric's fault in the first place lol. Eric doesn't seem too worried about me......how nice lol. Man, I hope they cherce-moi toute de suite! lol Update soon!
 
Geni, nice new icon by the way. :D
THANK YOU for not killing them and for having Jess and Delko save them and for being funny about it and not even commenting on my strange little rambling outburst there and for...everything else.
But don't hurt Jess! (So, Wyoming, you're Jess. Sorry, I'm a bit new to RT) And also- it was nice to have Horatio not save that day for once...not that I don't mind H saving the day constantly...
Well, update soon. At least I'm breathing again. Thank you for the update!
:D And you don't have to update soon, we fans have already worked you hard enough. :lol: Thanks!!!
 
....Leave for a couple hours and i MISS everything!


Horatio: *walks over* You process?

Carly: Yeah. The print was completely destroyed.

Horatio: We need something else.

Carly: Well how about the body? We haven't found that.

Horatio: Take Katie and Anni with you.

Carly: Um...They're not around.

Horatio: What do you mean not around?

Carly: Katie's at my place and she's a little under the weather, and I haven't seen Anni all week.

Horatio: How about Eric?

Carly: He's in New York with Josh.

Horatio: ...Speed?

Carly: He called in sick for the rest of the week and he's using his vacation time.

Horatio: Well we can't have Calleigh working the case.

Carly: Colton's not in either.

Horatio: Where is he?

Carly: I don't know.

Horatio: Why is everyone gone?

Carly: I tried calling him five times. He's not answering his cell.

Horatio: JC and Missy?

Carly: They're busy taking care of Alena.

Horatio: It seems everyone has something to do these days.

The place must be empty! With crickets...cricketing. *cricket crickets*


Horatio: ...Alright. But if she makes one mistake, just one, she's out.

HA!

Carly: You're going to help me.

Riley: It smells in here.

Carly: That's blood.

Riley: See ya. *turns around*

*scoffs* Wuss.

Riley: What, besides the pile of blood?

Bu, wha, a PUDDLE, not a PILE. Tcha, like c'mon.

Riley: How do you people do this job?

Carly: Someone has to do it.

Riley: *sigh* This place is gross.

BOO. HOO.

Riley: Man you guys do this for a living?

Carly: Yeah.

Riley: That's pretty cool.

Isn't it?!? *jumps up and down for no reason*

Delko: Good. And you know...Since Josh isn't here..

Jess: *slaps Eric*

Delko: Ow.

Jess: *winks*

Delko: *wide-eyed*

:lol: :lol: :lol: /5 *laughs ass off*


Delko: NO! No, see *laughs* No. I think and this is just speculation, but women who are stuck in a hotel room alone with a strapping young and incredibly hot gentleman don't need naps.

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: /5 Aw man, i can't stop laughing! Good one Geni!


Riley: He's an ass, no wonder why.

*crosses arms stubbornly* Yeah, well, SO ARE YOU!


Riley: I'm not good at this. I don't even work for you, I should just leave this to Carly.

Horatio: I'm that intimidating huh?

Riley: Yes sir.

Ha ha, YEAH! *squee* I love it when Horatio does this kind of stuff...

Horatio: If we're going to find whatever made those scuff marks we have to go back to the scene so grab your camera and meet me in the Hummer.

*squee* Love it!!

I can SO see Speed saying that too!


Josh: *sitting in chair*

Guy: *pistol whips Josh*

Aw man, when i was a kid, guess what i thought the term 'pistol whip' was? Oh yeah, i thought it was a handgun on the end of a whip! :lol: Man, when your a kid, you'll believe ANYTHING. :lol: Well except Santa, i knew he didn't exist. Wait...how did i get onto this topic? *scratches head*

Josh: How can you be this heartless? You were the one who would go to the stables and rides the horses and feed them. You were the one who would bring stray cats home and feed them milk. You were the one who saved me from dad countless times when he was drunk.

AWW! That's great! Kinda like what i do! ....except the stray cat thing and druck dad thing. :D

New York, 6pm

Warehouse

Josh: *sitting in chair*

Guy: *pistol whips Josh*

Josh: AH!

Guy: Oh come on don't be a pansie.

Josh: How would you feel if I pistol whipped you in the face?

Guy: *punches Josh in the face*

Josh: OW!

Guy2: *grabs smoking metal rod out of fire* This boy's got a mouth on him.

Josh: Yeah most human beings do. Unless of course you didn't mean it literally. You don't look like a literal guy.

Guy2: *jabs rod into Josh's arm*

Josh: AHH!

Kayleigh: *walks in* Stop.

Guy2: *steps back*

Josh: *looks at Kayleigh*

Kayleigh: I hope you're enjoying yourself here.

Josh: Oh yeah it's been a blast.

Kayleigh: Funny you should mention that. This entire building is rigged to explode in approximately ten minutes. So you have some talking to do.

Josh: I don't know what you mean.

Kayleigh: 35 million dollars of mine went missing from a bank in Miami. 35 million...Is the amount of pieces that are going to fly off your body in ten minutes if you don't tell me where my money is.

Josh: I thought you just wanted to kill me.

Kayleigh: I am going to kill you.

Josh: So kill me.

Kayleigh: I want my money first.

Josh: What, so you can take over New York with your organization?

Kayleigh: You're in my way, Josh.

Josh: You don't have to do this.

Kayleigh: I have no choice.

Josh: You always have a choice.

Kayleigh: *laughs* Did you learn that from your boyfriends or the cop school?

Josh: *frowns*

Kayleigh: You knew this would happen.

Josh: I promised my wife and daughter I'd come home.

Kayleigh: Well the manner that you'll be returning might be a little different.

Josh: How can you be this heartless? You were the one who would go to the stables and rides the horses and feed them. You were the one who would bring stray cats home and feed them milk. You were the one who saved me from dad countless times when he was drunk.

Kayleigh: Well guess what little brother, I'm not running around with a bunch of horses and stray cats.

Josh: You loved nature, you loved kids, you loved your family.

Kayleigh: I don't anymore.

Josh: Don't do this, Kay.

Kayleigh: You have eight minutes to tell me where my money is.

Josh: I don't know.

Kayleigh: You're lying.

Josh: I have nothing to do with your money.

Kayleigh: There are two ways we can do this.

Josh: Either way I die right, so I might as well tell you?

Kayleigh: That's one choice. Or you can die and not tell me and then I'll go down to Miami and I'll kill your wife, and I'll kill your children.

Josh: *looks at door*

Kayleigh: *turns around*

Guys point their guns at the door

Kayleigh: Hold your fire. *smiles* Big brother, it's nice to see you.

Speed: *walks over* Go to hell.

Kayleigh: Nice of you to join us. Now I can kill two idiots with one bomb.

Speed: We're no threat to you.

Kayleigh: You are.

Speed: I don't want your business. I don't want anything to do with New York anymore.

Kayleigh: Where's my money?

Speed: I don't have your money and neither does Josh.

Kayleigh: Are you saying Dade Mutual lost 35 million dollars?

Speed: No.

Kayleigh: *walks over* Timmy, I'm not a bad person. I just want my money.

Speed: And you're willing to kill Josh over it.

Kayleigh: Someone has to die.

Speed: Kill me instead.

Kayleigh: *smiles* How heroic.

Speed: It's not heroic it's stupid. You should be laughing in my face.

Kayleigh: *pulls device out of pocket* My men in Florida have been watching you, Timmy.

Speed: So?

Kayleigh: *sings lightly* I know something they don't know.

Speed: *frowns*

Kayleigh: This device gives out small electrical currents. It's a neat little thing they put in those hand-shake zappers. Only this one gives a little bit more of a kick.

Speed: What's your point.

Kayleigh: My point? *laughs* My point is this. *presses button, shoves device into Speed's chest*

Speed: AHH!

Kayleigh: *smiling* It's too bad there are a million things that can kill you, the bomb should be the least of your problems.

Speed: *leans on Kayleigh's shoulder*

Kayleigh: Hurts, doesn't it?

Speed: *groans*

Kayleigh: *presses button*

Speed: *screams*

Kayleigh: *laughs*

Josh: STOP IT!

Kayleigh: You see what happens when you don't listen to me?

Josh: Kayleigh stop!

Kayleigh: *pulls device away, steps back*

Speed: *falls to floor*

Kayleigh: Looks like you boys have about five minutes before this place blows. Make the most of it. *leaves*

Guys follow

BITCH! I CAN'T DESCRIBE IT IN ANY OTHER WORDS!! YOU HURT JOSH (no biggie :lol: ) BUT TOUCHING SPEED?!?! YOU ARE GOING TO GET IT!

*brutally beats Kayleigh and shoots her face repeatedly*


*wipes blood off hands* And it''l get even MORE nasty when you TRY to hurt Horatio...


Josh: *struggling in chair* Tim! Tim get up! Ah crud. I hate these stupid situations. *sigh* Why couldn't I have married Ernie and spent my life in my parents' basement? But OH NO I had to move to Miami, fall in love with the most beautiful woman on the planet, have the most beautiful children on the planet, and get tied to a chair to be BLOWN UP! Well Josh you sure did it this time. I mean, not only are you bad at selling hand cream, but you're bad at SAYING YOUR LAST WORDS BEFORE THE WHITE LIGHT SHOWS UP! Wait...Does it show up or does it just happen? I'll have to ask Tim. Wait, I can't. He's probably DEAD. Great, I'm sitting with the dead body of my stupid brother. This is fun. DON'T YA WISH OUR FAMILY VACATIONS WERE LIKE THIS!

*laughs ass off* And i though I had problems!


Delko: *runs in* Josh!

Josh: DELKIPOO! I mean...Delko!

Delko: *stops running* What?

Josh: Nothing, nothing, keep running.

:lol: LOL, that was hilarious!!


Josh: How did you find us?

Delko: GPS on your phone.

GOD i love it when those things actually come in handy!


Delko: Your brother you snack pack! *runs away*

.....Snack pack?? C'mon, i know your not made out of time but you can come up with a better taunt and insult than THAT!


Delko: Wow they're quick.

*scoffs* YEAH RIGHT. THAT ladies and gentlemen, can ONLY happen in movies, tv sitcoms, and fanfics!

ANYWAYS, can you please update soon Geni? I would like to see how Kayleigh dies....
 
Aw man, when i was a kid, guess what i thought the term 'pistol whip' was? Oh yeah, i thought it was a handgun on the end of a whip! Man, when your a kid, you'll believe ANYTHING. Well except Santa, i knew he didn't exist. Wait...how did i get onto this topic? *scratches head*
I swear your reviews are almost as funny as this fic! :lol: I get a kick out of you too!
Yes, update soooon. :D OK, sorry, I'll stop giving you a hard time. :)
 
Hey no i enjoy the reviews of...my reviews. :lol: Sorry if i'm stealing you thunder Geni... :lol:

Aw man, i've had plenty of those moments when i was a kid. Like when 2 people got married? When the preist says "You may now kiss the bride", and they kiss? I thought THAT was the kiss that made the lady pregnant! :lol: And then a couple years later i found out the REAL truth... :lol:
 
You're not stealing my thunder. :D

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Hospital, 10pm, New York

Delko: Doctor, how is he?

Doctor: ...

Delko: ...Doctor?

Doctor: We were able to get his previous charts faxed over from Miami. They showed stress in his heart muscles. Was he on any medication?

Delko: ...I wouldn't know.

Doctor: You said he was electrocuted.

Delko: Yeah.

Doctor: For how long?

Josh: *walks over* It was maybe half a minute.

Delko: Is he dead?

Doctor: No. He's perfectly fine.

Delko: What do you mean?

Doctor: We revived him using CPR and we took his vitals. There appears to be no heart failiure at all.

Josh: So the shock to the chest actually...Helped his heart.

Doctor: It's been known to happen in some cases.

Josh: He's not dying?

Doctor: He actually wants to leave.

Josh: Are you discharging him?

Doctor: We'd rather keep him here overnight for observation but if he leaves, we can't stop him.

Delko: Can we see him?

Doctor: Sure.

Delko: *walks into room*

Josh: Thank you Doctor.

Doctor: No problem. *walks away*

Hospital room

Delko: Hey.

Speed: *grabs badge*

Delko: You look...Great for someone who just got electrocuted.

Speed: Where's Jess?

Josh: We don't know.

Speed: Did the building blow up?

Josh: Yeah. Jess was still inside as far as we know.

Speed: What do you mean as far as you know?

Delko: I found tire tracks.

Speed: *nods*

Delko: Are you okay?

Speed: I'm fine, why?

Delko: You just look...Great.

Speed: *blinks* ...You've said that.

Josh: You'll have to thank Kayleigh when we find her.

Speed: I'm not going to thank her for anything.

Josh: She saved your life.

Speed: And she may have killed Jess.

Delko: How did you even know we were there?

Speed: I could hear you, I wasn't dead.

Delko: Oh.

Josh: *hugs Speed*

Speed: *lifts brow*

Josh: *hugs tighter*

Speed: Dude...What are you doing?

Josh: MY BIG BROTHER IS OKAY! *starts to cry*

Speed: *rolls eyes*

Delko: Can I have a hug too?

Speed: *frowns* No.

Delko: Ah man.

Josh: *sigh* Okay man don't ever die.

Speed: I don't think anyone can keep that promise.

Josh: *lets go* I love you man.

Speed: Can we just go before this turns into bad chick flick?

Josh: Sure. *wipes eyes*

Delko: I'll go start the rental car. *leaves*

Outside of Hospital, few minutes later

Speed: *walks over* Hey.

Delko: Hey.

Speed: You want another coffee or something?

Delko: No, I'm fine.

Speed: Alright well I might as well get to the point then. What's wrong and don't say nothing.

Delko: ...It's Jess.

Speed: Yeah, and?

Delko: She's probably dead.

Speed: Let me stop you right there. First of all, CSIs never say 'probably', and secondly she's not dead.

Delko: How do you know?

Speed: She's smart. Smarter than you.

Delko: *shakes head* What does it matter? She's better off without me. Our marriage has been nothing but a giant pile of crap. It was great at first, but we just grew apart so much in the first year. It's like we don't love each other anymore.

Speed: You love her.

Delko: Loved. She didn't make it out of that explosion.

Speed: You don't know that.

Delko: Where in the hell would she have gone? You think she just ran away and didn't tell me? She's dead!

Speed: You said there was tire tracks. Maybe Kayleigh took her before the building exploded.

Delko: Yeah right.

Speed: What do you want me to say?

Delko: I don't know. *throws cup onto the ground* I'm just tired of playing this same game over and over again. When the hell is this going to end?

Speed: ...When is what going to end?

Delko: Don't you ever wish you could just go to the bahamas with your wife and just live there without a care in the world?

Speed: The bahamas aren't exactly the safest place to live, because of all of th-

Delko: You know what I mean.

Speed: Eric, life never goes the way we want it to go. Why do you think Visa was invented?

Delko: You're not making me feel any better.

Speed: I'm not trying to.

Delko: Come on man, you've been through a lot. Everyone around you seems to come face to face with impending doom so tell me something, anything I can do. How can I keep going?

Speed: I don't have the answers, Eric. If you want to find out the meaning of life, go to a church or sit on a mountain top. Hell, watch Oprah, she seems to have it all figured out.

Delko: *shakes head*

Speed: ...I respect you Eric.

Delko: *looks at Speed*

Speed: You're a better man than I am, and no matter where Jess is, she's always been lucky to have you. *grabs keys from Eric* I'll go start the car. *walks away*

TBC..................
 
You're not stealing my thunder.

Ok thank God because i don't want to piss off a Mod... :lol:


Delko: Doctor, how is he?

Doctor: ...

Delko: ...Doctor?

Doctor: We were able to get his previous charts faxed over from Miami. They showed stress in his heart muscles. Was he on any medication?

Delko: ...I wouldn't know.

Doctor: You said he was electrocuted.

Delko: Yeah.

Doctor: For how long?

Josh: *walks over* It was maybe half a minute.

Delko: Is he dead?

Doctor: No. He's perfectly fine.

Delko: What do you mean?

Doctor: We revived him using CPR and we took his vitals. There appears to be no heart failiure at all.

Josh: So the shock to the chest actually...Helped his heart.

OMG i was thinking that. *silence* REALLY. I'm not kidding! I was going to mention it in my daily review but i forgot! Please beileve me. *more silence* Argh! Fine!

Josh: MY BIG BROTHER IS OKAY! *starts to cry*

*scoffs* Pansy.

OMG is this me? You nearly die and now i'm scoffing??? *slaps self* I'm sorry Josh!! *hugs*

Delko: I don't know. *throws cup onto the ground* I'm just tired of playing this same game over and over again. When the hell is this going to end?

Speed: ...When is what going to end?

When the HELL are you going to hunt down your sister??


Speed: ...I respect you Eric.

Delko: *looks at Speed*

Speed: You're a better man than I am, and no matter where Jess is, she's always been lucky to have you. *grabs keys from Eric* I'll go start the car. *walks away*

*first time ever: Silence from Hunter*

Thanks for updating Geni, but you can slow it down now, i'm hittin' the hay. Night ya'll. *waves, guns hummer*
 
Wow.........I wasn't expecting the whole Speed thing, that's good though, the whole shock to the heart actually did him some good. Yay for Speed!

As for Delko, not so good lol. Poor baby is all......stressed I guess. Man, he doesn't have much faith in me does he? lol poor baby *huggles him* I hope I'll be back soon lol......if I come back that is......no one knows if I died or not! lol. Man, I wonder what Alena will say, my poor baby girl is gonna grow up without a mommy! *cries* lol Update soon My darling Geni :D
 
Ha! Hunter I finally made you go silent. My work here is done. :lol: J/k.

Jess! Your poor little fake RT baby girl. *sniff*

*****************

New York hotel room, 10:30 pm

Josh: *sits on bed* So where'd Tim go?

Delko: *reading tv guide* He went to go get a cot. Apparently sleeping in the same bed as your little brother is weird.

Josh: No it's not. My parents used to put us together when we were little and on vacation. That way they spent less money on hotel rooms.

Delko: It's still weird. You're an adult.

Josh: We're brothers.

Delko: Yeah and it's weird.

Josh: *throws pillow*

Delko: OW.

Speed: *walks in*

Delko: Did you get a cot?

Speed: They were out.

Delko: ...How can they be out of cots?

Speed: Ask them.

Delko: Looks like you're stuck in the same bed as your brother.

Speed: No, I'm getting a bed for myself.

Delko: So Josh gets the floor?

Josh: Not fair!

Speed: *sigh* Fine, Josh sleep in the bed. I'll have the floor.

Delko: You can sleep on the coffee table.

Speed: ...Yeah because everyone's doing that nowadays.

Delko: *gets under covers* Well goodnight all.

Josh: *pulls covers over self in other bed* G'night. *turns off lights*

Speed: *frowns*

Delko: Speedy, I can sense you frowning.

Speed: *throws pen*

Delko: OW.

Speed: *sits on coffee table*

Josh: Tim, stop breathing so heavily. I can't get to sleep.

Speed: That's Eric.

Delko: Sorry, I snore loudly.

Speed: *crosses arms*

Josh: Tim, I can hear the fabric of your shirt moving. Quiet it down a little more.

Speed: *rolls eyes*

Josh: I can see the whites of your eyes and now I can't sleep.

Speed: Roll over.

Josh: I am. *rolls over* Hey this side's comfy too. It's like I'm on a cloud.

Speed: *looks around*

Delko: Man I can't even hear myself think. Close your eyes Speed!

Speed: SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT! UP!

Delko: *sits up* I'm not the one making all of the noise.

Josh: Oh great now I'm up. *sits up*

Speed: I should have stayed at the hospital.

Delko: But you're fine.

Speed: I know that.

Josh: You can sleep at the foot of the bed if you want.

Speed: I'm not a dog. *grabs keys*

Delko: Where are you going?

Speed: I'm going to sleep.

Delko: In the car?

Speed: Yeah, the car Eric. *leaves*

Delko: Grumpy when he's tired huh.

Josh: I wouldn't know, I'd usually be asleep by now.

Mansion, one hour later

Speed: *knocks on door*

Mama: *opens door* TIMMY! What are you doing in New York!

Speed: Hey mom.

Mama: My boy! My boy is back! Why are you here?

Speed: Business.

Mama: Where's your nice friends you brought over before?

Speed: They're in Miami.

Mama: How come you aren't in a hotel?

Speed: What, you're going to kick me out?

Mama: *laughs* I'd never kick you out. Come in!

Inside house

Mama: I found Josh's eyelash curler by the way, it was between the couch cushions.

Speed: That's great mom.

Mama: Come here you. *hugs Speed* ...Something feels different. *lets go* You've been putting on muscle. *laughs* That's my little boy!

Speed: I'm not little mom.

Mama: No you're very handsome. And so smart. I'm very proud of you.

Speed: Thanks.

Mama: I'll make you some cookies so you'll warm up!

Speed: You don't have to do that.

Mama: Of course I do. You need some food.

Speed: I'm fine.

Mama: *waddles into kitchen* I'll make you some soup.

Speed: *walks over* Really, I don't need anything.

Mama: I'm your mother Timmy, I know what you need.

Speed: *nods*

Mama: So how's your pretty wife? Katie, I think her name is?

Speed: She's fine.

Mama: How are the kids?

Speed: Fine.

Mama: How many do you have again?

Speed: Three girls.

Mama: Oh! Knowing you, I bet they're spoiled!

Speed: Pretty much.

Mama: I'm going to bake some cookies in the morning so you can take them back with you.

Speed: No, don't. You don't need to.

Mama: *puts pot onto stove* Oh, I have a new job.

Speed: Really.

Mama: I'm a maid upstate for these rich people. They're really nice people. I'll be selling the house and moving in with them.

Speed: Dad's money ran out?

Mama: Slowly, but surely my dear. Monetary things never last forever.

Speed: *nods*

Mama: C'est la vie. *laughs* It took me four days to memorize that. I was never good with languages.

Speed: You did great, mom.

Mama: *smiles* Such a sweetheart. Although you shouldn't frown so much honey, you don't want to wrinkle.

Speed: Good advice.

Mama: *waddles over* My beautiful boy. *strokes Speed's face* It's good to see you again.

TBC.............

*************

Miami Lab halls, Two days later

Calleigh: *smiles* Hi.

Riley: *walking* You again.

Calleigh: I just wanted to see what you're up to.

Riley: You mean you want to stick your face in this investigation. Carly warned me about that.

Calleigh: I don't want details, I just want to know how it's going.

Riley: You are no more guilty than you were yesterday.

Calleigh: ...I'm not guilty at all.

Riley: Doesn't everyone say that?

Calleigh: Yes, normally.

Riley: *nods*

Calleigh: So what's in that picture?

Riley: *stops walking* Evidence.

Calleigh: What evidence?

Riley: A chair, happy?

Calleigh: Where did you find it?

Riley: None of your business.

Calleigh: *reaches for folder*

Riley: *pulls folder away*

Calleigh: Give it.

Riley: Get your own.

Calleigh: I would but it's in your hand.

Riley: Bite me.

Calleigh: Gross.

Stetler: *walks over* What's going on here ladies?

Calleigh: *stares at Stetler*

Riley: Who the hell are you?

Stetler: *laughs* Is she serious?

Calleigh: I wouldn't know.

Stetler: I'm Rick Stetler.

Riley: Congratulations.

Stetler: IAB.

Riley: I don't know what that is.

Stetler: Internal Affairs...I make sure no one screws up...

Riley: Well then go find someone who's screwin' up, chump.

Stetler: Let me start with you. Insubordination.

Riley: *laughs* That's funny because I don't work for you.

Stetler: Give me that file.

Riley: Why?

Stetler: Because I said so.

Riley: Oh I'm shaking. Let me take this moment to scream in horror.

Stetler: Detective Duquesne, who is this girl?

Riley: Girl? You still live with mommy don't you?

Calleigh: Her name's Riley.

Stetler: Let's take a walk Riley.

Riley: I don't think so. I usually skip around aimlessly with department store looking cardboard cut-outs on the second date.

Stetler: You. In my office. Now.

Riley: *rolls eyes* If you say so.

Calleigh: *shakes head*

Stetler's office

Stetler: You should be escorted out of here by security.

Riley: Who are you, the Pope?

Stelter: No, I'm a superior which means you have to respect your superior, ergo, me.

Riley: You sure think highly of yourself.

Stetler: *crosses arms* Sit in the chair.

Riley: *sits*

Stetler: *sits on desk* You have a problem with authority, don't you?

Riley: I'd hardly call you an authority.

Stetler: I bet you have no problem with Horatio Caine.

Riley: Now him I do trust.

Stetler: Why?

Riley: He has an honest face. You don't, ergo, I don't trust you.

Stetler: Don't mock me. I can have you arrested.

Riley: For what?

Stetler: You see, you don't actually work here officially. You're working a case even though before that you were brought here on vacation. So now you're suddenly a CSI?

Riley: *stares at Stetler*

Stetler: Pretty big promotion.

Riley: Wow there must be a lot of people in line for your job. Get paid to be an ass, now that's living the life.

Stetler: You know Riley, I like you. You have a personality.

Riley: You don't. I guess we cancel each other out.

Stetler: You're the kind of person IAB could use.

Riley: Five minutes ago you were about to arrest me.

Stetler: I will aresst you...Unless you help me out.

Riley: With what.

Stetler: You're...A very pretty girl. *touches Riley's leg*

Riley: *frowning*

Stetler: But if you don't help me out, guess what happens.

Riley: ...

Stetler: Meet me here after work. You can go.

Riley: *leaves*

Stetler: Hmm I wonder what degree of evil cackle will be good enough? Ha. I'll have Horatio Caine woven into my evil plan by dinnertime.

Lab halls

Riley: *walking*

Carly: *walks over* Hey.

Riley: *looking down at folder*

Carly: Blood came back, it's female. Trace did too, it's a polish type of substance. I haven't figured out what brand.

Riley: *nods*

Carly: Man things just keep happening around here. I mean, Calleigh's suspected for a murder, I just found out this morning that Jess is missing in New York and everyone just got back. I can't believe they aren't looking for her. Of course Horatio wanted them back here so they had to return but still...Jess was one of my friends and now she's somewhere in New York and I don't know if she's dead or alive.

Riley: *flips page*

Carly: ...Riley...

Riley: Yeah.

Carly: You haven't said anything.

Riley: Nothin' to say I guess.

Carly: You've always got something to say.

Riley: *shakes head*

Carly: Did Stetler get to you too? OH great. Now I have no one to gossip with about him.

Riley: Is mom here?

Carly: She's still at my place? Why?

Riley: I need to talk to someone about something.

Carly: You can tell me.

Riley: No, I can't.

Carly: Why?

Riley: *looks around* Is Horatio here?

Carly: No he's in the field.

Riley: Great.

Carly: Tim's here though. Just got back this morning, he should be in the Trace lab.

Riley: *walks away*

Carly: You're...Welcome.

Trace lab

Riley: *walks in*

Speed: *doing paperwork*

Riley: *stops at table*

Speed: *flips page*

Riley: ...

Speed: What.

Riley: ...Mom's not here.

Speed: No, she's not.

Riley: Can we talk?

Speed: Go ahead.

Riley: I don't want to bother you or anything...

Speed: You aren't.

Riley: You seem busy.

Speed: I am.

Riley: Rick Stetler made a pass at me and then threatened me.

Speed: *looks at Riley*

Riley: ...

Speed: *stands, takes off gloves*

Riley: What are you doing?

Speed: *leaves*

Riley: Whoa, what are you doing! *runs*

Stetler's office

Stetler: *looking at nails* Hmm, I wonder if I should paint these black to match my jackets.

Speed: *walks in* Son of a b-

Door slams

Riley: *runs to door* What are you doing!

Crashing heard inside office

Riley: *looks around* Oh great.

Inside office

Stetler: Get your grubby hands off of me!

Speed: *shoves Rick against wall* Listen to me you little worm, if I catch you near my daughter again this is the last window you're ever going to see. Understand?

Stetler: I-

Speed: Do you understand?

Stetler: I could have you fired.

Speed: Fire me.

Stetler: *frowns*

Speed: *lets go, leaves*

Outside of office

Speed: *grabs Riley* Come on.

Riley: Where are we going?

Speed: Are you alright?

Riley: I'm fine. You want to explain to me why you almost killed him in there?

Speed: If murder wasn't illegal in this state I would have.

Riley: Wonderful.

Speed: You're going to stay at Carly's house for now.

Riley: ...Alright.

TBC..............
 
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