Poetry, Anyone?

She makes no sense
She has no direction
She stares at the mirror
At her dishevelled reflection

She makes no sense
She has no ideals
She spits at the mirror
She hates how it feels

She makes no sense
She has no will
She closes her eyes
Until the world stands still
 
I love your poem :D


This is for you, Mia:

I hear your thoughts like they were words
Softly spoken to my face.
Behind blue eyes m y heaven lies,
Your mind is still my favorite place.
 
Aww, baby. Love you :D (and your poem of course)

Okay, this one's old. Hope I haven't posted it before :p

You stare into her eyes full of intensity
So intense infact that it scares you
She is longing desperately
For something
The sparkle betraying her neutral expression
Her stonecold face
Lighting up with a flicker of life
And passion
And the need to be seen
Reading her has always been hard
Keeping you wonder
Who it is her longing is directed at
What it is her hope yearns for
And for the blink of an eye
You dare asking yourself if it’s you
And whether you could give
Everything
Take
Everything
To chance the opportunity
For both of you to become happy
 
Awesome thread!!
I love poetry!!
I've write quite a lot of things myself...it helps me actually, I tend to think more than I should so writing helps me putting my thoughts in order...
My first language is Spanish so I probably have some mistakes but somehow I like writing in English more than writing in Spanish ...I just love the language! :)


Perfect Day
Today can be a perfect day
Just if you want it to be
Don’t blame others for your sorrow
If you make it count for you, it can be

Sometimes it looks impossible, unreachable
Well, it isn’t, nothing you need really is
Close you eyes, make a wish
I you believe in yourself you can make it real

Don’t waste time, don’t waste hope
Time will run unless you make it go slow
Open you eyes, let the sun come in
Life is yours, own it and make it live

Never loose tears for something lost
You would get tired, you would not see
Don’t look back to the things you’ve done wrong
That won’t change, ,so really, think about it, what’s the point?

Life is wonderful, life is good
Don’t fool yourself you know is true
Make it happen, it deepens on you
Who cares if you don’t have a clue?

Don’t waste happiness, don’t waste dreams
The world would disappear if you are controlled by your fears
Open your wings if you want you could fly
Beauty would be gone if you don’t admire
Nothing is going to happen just by chance
You’ve gotta work for what you want

Just need to believe just need to let yourself go
Time will run unless you force it to go slow


I hope you like it! :) *blush*
 
Well I've only written one poem so far. I attend a poetry competition with it and I won so I suppose it's pretty decent :p To be honest I'm surprised that I still have it..

Statement of Love

Love, it's impossible to ignore nor to describe.
It brings sorrows but with the right person by your side these sorrows become bearable.

Without regret or remorse I look into your beautiful soul and make a promise to myself to never let anybody hurt you.

Love me for me who loves you, just the way you are.

From a devil, soon to be falling down earth, resting in your sweet arms.

:devil:
 
~ For Rainy ~

I watch as you sleep
silent and beautiful
And I stir you to smile
with tender kisses
while I wait for you
to come to your senses
I watch as you turn
to let me see
the child-like expression
you wear when you're sleeping
with your pouty lips
and your uncombed hair
You are perfection
you are my heaven
The image I want to wake up to
Every day
 
^^That was cute! I like it! :)

Another one of mine...it's not good but ...oh well


Here I am, crying
I can’t seem to stop
Tears just keep falling
From my eyes, from my heart

I can’t forget that image
And it’s killing me inside
Why did I have to see it?
Why does it hurt so much?

I can’t stand it, I don’t know
Why would anyone do such thing?
Don’t they know,
She’s a blessing in this world?

People talk, talk without knowing
Her eyes shine, her soul burns
And just a few seem to see
She’s an angel from above

It’s so hard to see her suffering
It’s so hard to see her tears
Whenever that happens
It’s impossible not to bleed

Look at her, lightening everything up
Beyond words, beyond human
Smiling every day to life
Perfection made into a woman

So keep talking, keep whispering
I don’t care can’t you see?
If she’s not worth of admiration
I don’t know who would be
 
^^I think that would make great lyrics for a song. :)

@Mia: You brought tears to my eyes when you read it to me, but you already knew that :)
 
Chills

It's like a soft breeze crossing through my face
if only to chill me for a second through the hot day that won't seem to fade
to cool me down as i'm getting heated
allowing me to stand there and loose my thoughts

Then it rings, and I have to run
to the other end
so far from that cold chill
and i want to burst
with tears as i wipe that beat of sweat from my forehead
but they don't understand
that breeze won't leave

I want to stand in that position for all of eternity
and smile as I see all those children run across the street
and laugh at those girls over there laughing for no apparent reason
and stop, think, and listen to the all noise of the day.

But you don't know what this is about
and you never will
you don't understand what this poem means
only i do, in my heart, in my mind

as I lose it when you're near.


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That was.. a poem that had no meaning, but as I finished it, it ended up having a meaning to me. Something so deep that I just don't know how to explain it.
 
Jorja_Rain said:
^^I think that would make great lyrics for a song. :)
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Agreed, I like it, Patricia.

gsrLOVE, I like the vibe of your poem.

Keep writing, everyone.

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I just wrote this one. It was intentionally written for the fanfic poetry thread but since I didn't include names or specific situations it could just as well be a regular poem, hence I decided to post it here, too.

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When I sleep alone at night
I see you in my dreams
I wonder what you're thinking of
and what my heartache means

I wish that you would hold me
I wish that you were here
You might not even miss me
and that is what I fear

What we shared was brief and sweet
but was there more to it?
I'm afraid I fell for you
and I can not forget

You are always on my mind
Your beauty so devine
This should have worked out differently
but I can't turn back time

So here I lie in bed alone
with memories of your smile
If only we had had more time
If only for a while
 
Whore (am I aloud to say that???)

The girl that all the Guys talk about
The other girls despise her
Yet they all want to be her
The one the guys want more than anything
She gets noticed
She gets all the attention the other girls want
She not pretty
But she wears enough make up
She’s too skinny
But her short skirts distract the eye
Jealousy in the eyes of the girls
Lust in the eyes of the boys
She walks in, all eyes on her

..What is she hiding?
What secrets infest her heart?
Why is she SUCH a whore

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Sorry if thats terrible, i wrote it awhile ago, and i just found it!
 
To my soon to be wife

The gentle touch of sunlight
Stroking my skin
The warm glow filling my body
That is how you make me feel

You're the thunderstorm
That makes my heart go wild
And your're the wind
That takes me into heaven

The raindrops are the tears
I now finally dare to cry
Opening myself and showing you
But most of all, tears of missing you

You're a force of nature
That has overwhelmed me so
Nature is wild and pure and true
As is my love for you.
 
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