Nick Song Fic Ch #8 - "Angel"- Now up!

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Okay, so a little bit about my story Everlasting Love......how did I come up with the idea? I don't really know...it evolved as I wrote I guess. I initially had Riley working the scene with Nick but I remembered how Riley reacted in Miscarriage of Justice to the suicide victim and didn't really want that to overtake my story so instead I went and made Wendy a CSI.

I just thought Nick needed some love in his life and he'd probably need a little prodding by Catherine.
 
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Hehe..there's a story behind my story;)

I just went through a situation like Mandy where I had befriended a guy who whined about his love life and then just after the song choice was published I found he was dating someone and I was pretty heart broken, so I decided to put my heart into this story, only with a happier ending.:)

Ironcially, my friend just got dumped.:guffaw: However, he knows better now than to come crying to me.
 
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Well I had the fortunate luck of having my song choice chosen, that helped a ton. One line in the song stood out and that was "at the mercy of a girl," all I could thing about was the episode Turn, Turn, Turn. The rest simply fell inot place.

As far as the Nick/Mandy contection...I like them together. They fit in an odd way, if that makes sense. I could see a down to earth, ruggedly handsome, right is might type of guy, finding a connection with a quirky, warped sense of humor, attractive woman. Is Mandy a goddess, no, is Nick an Adonis, no. Like I said for me they fit.

That's my story and I'm sticking with it.....

Take Care All,

Kelli
 
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When I read the lyrics the smut thought hit me too, but I've been trying to write some Nicky smut for . . . I don't know . . . probably a good nine months. The few lines of lyrics that I put at the top of my story were what really hit me first (following the smut of course ;) ). For me the girl was most obviously Cassie and the rest of it just kind of flowed from there. It was really easy to write in that way and I was really pleased with how it turned out.

And now very anxious for the next one!
 
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I don't know how I came up with mine. I just read the lyrics and it just came to me. I decided to make it "insert your ship choice here" so everyone could enjoy it better cause I know not everyone ships the same pairings. :)
 
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I love hearing how people were inspired!

Well, the line that stood out for me was the one I used in my story. 'I'm just a slave here at the mercy of a girl'. I knew I wanted a sex club in my story :D. The bath scene was something I'd already had my head, in a vague sort of way. And I knew I wanted to try and write the story in a different tense from my usual.

Somehow it all came together and became a dream sequence, so I took some time to come up with the various things and people appearing and what they all meant. And trust me, every single little detail in it has a meaning.

I'm glad Jacqui picked up on the use of blue throughout, because the butterfly and the blue were the two most important elements of it.

So, the dream *does* have an interpretation and I might write a new chapter to reveal some of it.

Just a little random note of something interesting, but the person in the bath is NOT the person in the bed :D But, like I said I'm probably going to write a new chapter to reveal some of the meaning.

I definitely wanted to leave the identity of Nick's partner up to the reader, because firstly, ships are pretty personal to the reader and secondly, if I had made it MY ship everyone would have known I wrote the story :lol:.

Thank you everyone who read and liked my story.

Now, I'll have the new pages and review links up this weekend. If anyone is publishing their story elsewhere i.e FFNet, please PM me and I'll include your link.
 
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PrincessJ88 said:
Okay, so a little bit about my story Everlasting Love......how did I come up with the idea? I don't really know...it evolved as I wrote I guess. I initially had Riley working the scene with Nick but I remembered how Riley reacted in Miscarriage of Justice to the suicide victim and didn't really want that to overtake my story so instead I went and made Wendy a CSI.

I just thought Nick needed some love in his life and he'd probably need a little prodding by Catherine.
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Princess, I'm glad you decided to join this round, and I hope you keep writing with us! I loved all of the stories, but yours was one of the ones this time that I found myself really, really enjoying.:) Nice job!
 
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Well... you just need to take a look at FF to find out that the authors of the stories are revealed :lol:

So about my story... The only thing I really know how I wrote it is the title :lol: But of course I got the idea for that one after finishing my songfic... Took the title from another song called "Crying In The Rain" by A-ha... I love the atmosphere of that song and it perfectly fits the mood of my story.

It's a pretty thoughtful one again and I really hate that... because I wanted to try something else... something different then the last time... but I was in a pretty bad mood the time I wrote this story and I guess my sadness is somehow reflected in the story...

Had really big problems with the song at the beginning of this challenge because my mind was on a place where songs like that don't fit... thought even about leave this round out... but while writing "Crying In The Rain" I somehow found a deeper sense in the story, more then just the thing I first thought about while reading the lyrics...

I had big grammar issues with that one, even more then in my last one and I really like to thank my beta for her great work :thumbsup: I know I would have never been able to write anything without you :) And big thanks for the girls who ecouraged me to even start writing... girls you know who you are, Thank you :thumbsup:


speedystokesgirl said:
Oh, by the way, the Mary Jane in the story is NOT me. I don't have brown hair and blue eyes, I have auburn (brown/red) hair and green eyes. Smokey can contest to that! :thumbsup:
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Oh I know you didn't wanted her to be you, but you can't change the fact that she somehow is :) You wrote the story and everyone writes something about herself into a story... otherwise stories wouldn't touch us the way they do. So even you're determind to say that she's not you because she does not have your hair or eye colour... somehow she's you anyway ;) Great work by the way :thumbsup:



And well I wasn't that bad with my guesses :lol: Myfuturecsi I knew "Driving Blindly" was yours, as did so many of us :) And I also guessed Jacqui, KFK, egeria and Smokey right...next time I'll get you all :p
 
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Myfuturecsi I knew "Driving Blindly" was yours, as did so many of us
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Hehehe..I know..I'm so predictable. But with the next one, I'm going to surprise everyone.

Oh and the 'muffin' joke has a source. I was listening to the radio while writing this and the song 'Poker Face' by Lady Ga Ga came on and there's a line about 'bluffin with her muffin', so I took that and worked into my story.
 
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I was right on my guesses too, although Miss Sink the Ships (aka Smokey) threw me with her almost-but-not-really Nick/Catherine pairing.

This was a really great round. I think there are some authors who showed improvement. Personally I find reading others' work inspiring and also instructive - where others find inspiration and how they interpret the characters' actions, and then how they portray that, can be really enlightening. That is the point of our challenge, and I found that was really true this round! Really great job, girls!

Oh, and something I meant to mention before, when someone posted something pasted directly from Word... When I posted Nightmares here, I copied it out of Word and pasted into Notepad. That way there was no funny business and I could still write in Word.

ETA: That was my 301st post! Woot!! I'm a police officer now!
 
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Congrats on the upgrade Jacqui! You make a great police officer:! :thumbsup:

So, I find myself torn. For the next challenge, do I stick with the same song I submitted? Or go with a new one?

:D Decisions, decisions!!
 
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I guess I'll stick with my song :thumbsup: I bet I would never find a better one, even I've got three others in my head who would do as well as the one I have in mind...
 
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Sounds like a plan. I think I'll stick with mine then.
 
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NickyFan said:
Oh I know you didn't wanted her to be you, but you can't change the fact that she somehow is :) You wrote the story and everyone writes something about herself into a story... otherwise stories wouldn't touch us the way they do. So even you're determind to say that she's not you because she does not have your hair or eye colour... somehow she's you anyway ;) Great work by the way :thumbsup:
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True that...somehow you get yourself in a story. I know I had to imagine myself on that couch with Nick. Tough....that was so tough to do. :lol:

Jacqui said:
ETA: That was my 301st post! Woot!! I'm a police officer now!
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Congratulations, Officer Jacqui!! :)
 
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